2019届高考英语复习热点题型专练：（13）短文改错（一）

2019届高考英语复习热点题型专练：（13）短文改错（一）

短文改错（一）‎ ‎(一)‎ ‎(2017·保定模拟)‎ Nowadays more and more people would rather to look for a job on the Internet than in the job market. There are many reasons for my preference, one of which is that a job hunter can find job conveniently. He needn't bother to get recommendations from friend. Besides, a job hunter can get one by simple sending resumes by email but the success rate is very high. Even if one failed to make it, he won't feel embarrassing.‎ I believe jobhunting on the Internet will win favour in more and more jobless people for its convenient, efficiency and high success rate.‎ 答案：‎ Nowadays more and more people would rather to look for a job on the Internet than in the job market. There are many reasons for preference, one of which is that a job hunter can find job conveniently. He needn't bother to get recommendations from . Besides, a job hunter can get one by sending resumes by email the success rate is very high. Even if one to make it, he won't feel .‎ I believe jobhunting on the Internet will win favour more and more jobless people for its ， efficiency and high success rate.‎ ‎(二)‎ ‎(2017年宜春二模)‎ Dear Li Ming，‎ The summer holiday is around corner.Do you have any plan for them? I plan to read some English book during the holiday and I needed your recommendations.‎ Firstly, I want to improve my English level, hope one day I can go to abroad for ‎ further study in other countries, such as America and England.Secondly, I also desires to know more history, geography as good as cultures and traditions about these countries.But can you make a list of the books of me to read? Thank you sincerely in advance.‎ I am looking forward to your reply.‎ Li Hua 第一处：around后加the。around the corner即将到来，为固定搭配。‎ 第二处：them→it。这里要代替的是holiday，是单数，用it。‎ 第三处：book→books。book是可数名词，有some修饰要用复数。‎ 第四处：needed→need。全文用一般现在时，故need也用一般现在时。‎ 第五处：hope→hoping。“我希望……”是主动语态，现在分词做伴随状语。‎ 第六处：去掉to。abroad是副词，go abroad不需要介词。‎ 第七处：desires→desire。主语是I，不用第三人称单数形式。‎ 第八处：good→well。as well as是固定搭配，表示“还，也，和”。‎ 第九处：But→So。这里是因果关系，而不是转折关系，要用So。‎ 第十处：第二个of→for。“为我列一个清单”用介词for。‎ ‎(三)‎ China football team beat South Korea football team by 1∶0 in Changsha in March, 23rd.That was Yu Dabao who got a valuably point.Yu Dabao, born in Qingdao City, Shandong Province in 1988, is a professional football player, served in Beijing Guoan Football Club.He began practicing the football at the age of 8.As a pupil, he did very good in his studies.When he is in middle school, he was still one of the top student in his class, though the training was harder.It was amazing that he was chosen be a class representative.I'm pride of him and will follow his example.‎ 答案：第一句：第二个in→on 第二句：That→It; valuably→valuable 第三句：served→serving 第四句：去掉第一个the 第五句：good→well 第六句：is→was; student→students 第七句：chosen后加to 第八句：pride→proud ‎(四)‎ In order to promote participation in outdoors exercise, our school organized an activity to climb Mount Tai on April 10. The majority of my classmates joined ‎ the activity.‎ Early in the morning, having assembled outside the school gate, we head straight to Mount Tai. We set out for the top in high spirits when the moment we arrived at the foot of the mountain. In a course of the climb, we cooperated with each other to pass the rocky and steep areas. Laughing and cheering, we eventually reached the summit, which we were greeted by the bright sunshine and fresh air. Viewing from the top, the city was beautiful. Bathed in the warm sunshine, we entertained us with stories, songs, dances and game.‎ This event was extremely beneficial for not only did we take a break from our heavy school workload, but we also learned how to cooperate. Therefore, we strongly suggest that similar events are held every year!‎ 答案：‎ In order to promote participation in exercise, our school organized an activity to climb Mount Tai on April 10. The majority of my classmates joined the activity.‎ Early in the morning, having assembled outside the school gate, we straight to Mount Tai. We set out for the top in high spirits the moment we arrived at the foot of the mountain. In course of the climb, we cooperated with each other to pass the rocky and steep areas. Laughing and cheering, we eventually reached the summit, we were greeted by the bright sunshine and fresh air. from the top, the city was beautiful. Bathed in the warm sunshine, we entertained with stories, songs, dances and .‎ This event was extremely beneficial for not only did we take a break from our heavy school workload, but we also learned how to cooperate. Therefore, we strongly suggest that similar events held every year!‎ 难项分析：‎ 第一处：outdoors→outdoor　考查形容词。outdoors意为“在露天，在户外”，是副词；outdoor意为“(在)户外的，(在)室外的”，是形容词，此处需要用形容词修饰名词。‎ 第二处：joined后加in　考查介词。join的宾语一般是sb.或组织团体等，表示成为其中的一员。join in等于take part in，它们的宾语都是如比赛/竞赛/考试等各种各样的活动。‎ 第四处：去掉when　考查连词。“the moment＋句子”用来引导状语从句，意为“一……就”，所以去掉when。‎ ‎(五)‎ Dear Robert，‎ How time flies! We haven't seen each other for a year. What are things going at the moment? You once ask me what I would do after the College Entrance Exam. I'd like tell you about that now. Firstly, I'll travel abroad to broaden your horizons. Secondly, I never plan to learn to drive. Thirdly, I want to take the course to improve my oral English. Beside, I want to take part in some social activity. Don't you think it sounds meaningfully? I'm looking forward to hear from you soon.‎ Best wishes!‎ Yours，‎ Li Hua 答案：第三句：What→How 第四句：ask→asked 第五句：like后加to 第六句：your→my 第七句：去掉never 第八句：the→a 第九句：Beside→Besides; activity→activities 第十句：meaningfully→meaningful 第十一句：hear→hearing ‎(六)‎ ‎(2017年河南省六市高三第二次联考)‎ Hello, I'm Li Hua, chairman of Student Union.We're going to organize a bicycle trip to our school farm on this Sunday.It was located in the western suburb, covered an area of about 50 acres.There are different kinds of cattle raised and various vegetable planted, without some harmful things in the feed or the fertilizer.The products are provided for the school canteen, which we enjoy a health diet.On the farm you can combine you have learned with practice to the fullest.‎ You are expected to arrive there at about 9 o'clock.Remember: following the workers and don't try to do anything strange to interest the animals or do damage to the plants during my visit.‎ 第一处：去掉on。习惯用法，this Sunday前不要介词。‎ 第二处：was→is。考查时态。农场的位置是一贯的，用一般现在时。‎ 第三处：covered→covering。考查非谓语动词的用法。农场占地50英亩是主动语态，用现在分词。‎ 第四处：vegetable→vegetables。前面有“different kinds of”强调种类，vegetable 为可数名词，要用复数形式。‎ 第五处：some→any。any和前面的without连用，表示“没有任何有害物质”。“任何”用any。‎ 第六处：which→where或which前加in。在这个非限制性定语从句中，关系词做从句的地点状语，故而要用关系副词where或用in which的结构。‎ 第七处：health→healthy。修饰名词diet要用形容词healthy。‎ 第八处：combine后加what/all。combine后是一个从句，要么加what 引导一个宾语从句，要么加all变成一个省略关系词that的定语从句。‎ 第九处：following→follow。这是一个祈使句，直接用动词原形开头。‎ 第十处：my→your。全文都是用第二人称，在这里也要保持人称的一致，指“在你的参观过程中”。‎