【英语】2018届二轮复习短文改错句法错误行文逻辑错误典题9篇训练（含有解析）学案（20页word版）

【英语】2018届二轮复习短文改错句法错误行文逻辑错误典题9篇训练（含有解析）学案（20页word版）

‎2018届二轮复习短文改错句法错误行文逻辑错误典题9篇训练 ‎【一】‎ When I look at this picture of myself，I realize of how fast time flies.I had grown not only physically，and also mentally in the past few years.About one month after this photo was took，I entered my second year of high school and become a new member of the school music club.Around me in picture are the things they were very important in my life at that time：car magazines and musical instruments.I enjoyed studying difference kinds of cars and planes，playing pop music，and collecting the late music albums.This picture often brings back to me many happy memories of your high school days.‎ 答案：‎ When I look at this picture of myself，I realize how fast time flies.I grown not only physically， also mentally in the past few years.About one month after this photo was ，I entered my second year of high school and a new member of the school music club.Around me in picture are the things were very important in my life at that time：car magazines and musical instruments.I enjoyed studying kinds ‎ of cars and planes，playing pop music，and collecting the music albums.This picture often brings back to me many happy memories of high school days.‎ ‎【语篇解读】　本文是一篇记叙文。文章讲述了由一张照片引发的作者对高中时光的回忆。‎ ‎71．解析：词法错误。realize“认识到，意识到”，是及物动词，后面直接跟宾语。‎ 答案：去掉of ‎72．解析：句法错误。由in the past few years可知句子要用现在完成时。‎ 答案：had改为have ‎73．解析：行文逻辑错误。not only...but also...“不仅……而且……”，连接并列成分。‎ 答案：and改为but ‎74．解析：句法错误。被动语态的结构为“be＋及物动词的过去分词”，take的过去分词是taken。‎ 答案：took改为taken ‎75．解析：句法错误。句子用了过去时，and连接并列谓语entered和became。‎ 答案：become改为became ‎76．解析：词法错误。picture在文中第一句已经出现过，故此处可以加the表示特指；也可加this，表示“在这张照片中”。‎ 答案：in后加this/the[来源:学科网ZXXK]‎ ‎77．解析：句法错误。things是先行词，后面是定语从句，从句中缺少主语，故引导词用that或which。‎ 答案：they改为that/which ‎78．解析：词法错误。形容词修饰名词kinds。‎ 答案：difference改为different ‎79．解析：词法错误。the latest music albums“最新的音乐专辑”。latest“最近的，最新的”。‎ 答案：late改为latest ‎80．解析：行文逻辑错误。句意：这张照片常常让我想起我高中时的快乐时光。此处是以作者的口吻写的“我的高中时光”。‎ 答案：your改为my ‎【二】‎ My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that I live.Though not very big, but the restaurant is popular in our area.It is always crowded with customers at meal times.Some people even had to wait outside.My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest.Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking.My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of time.Instead, he hopes that our business will grow steady.‎ 答案：‎ My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to I live.Though not very big， the restaurant is popular in our area.It is always crowded with customers at meal times.Some people even to wait outside.My uncle tells me that the key to his success is .Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables high quality oil are for cooking.My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in short period of time.Instead，he hopes that business will grow .‎ ‎【语篇解读】　本文主要讲述了作者的叔叔经营餐馆的成功之道。‎ ‎71．解析：句法错误。close to后接宾语从句。I live缺少地点状语，故用where引导宾语从句。‎ 答案：that→where ‎72．解析：行文逻辑错误。though与but不能用在同一个句子中。‎ 答案：去掉but ‎73．解析：句法错误。文章通篇用一般现在时，故将had改为have。‎ 答案：had→have ‎74．解析：词法错误。主语是the key，与表语构成同位关系，并非对主语的描述，故用名词。‎ 答案：honest→honesty ‎75．解析：行文逻辑错误。fresh vegetables和high quality oil是并列关系，不是选择关系，故将or改为and。‎ 答案：or→and ‎76．解析：句法错误。fresh vegetables and high quality oil与use是被动关系，故用被动语态。be used for被用于。‎ 答案：using→used ‎77．解析：词法错误。dream of doing sth.“梦想做某事”，是固定搭配。‎ 答案：dreams后加of ‎78．解析：词法错误。in a short period of time“在短时间内”，是固定短语。‎ 答案：short前面的the改为a ‎79．解析：行文逻辑错误。由“My uncle is the owner of a restaurant...”可知，餐馆是“我”叔叔的，故将our改为his。‎ 答案：our→his ‎80．解析：词法错误。grow在此是实义动词并非连系动词，故用副词修饰。‎ 答案：steady→steadily ‎【三】‎ The teenage year from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me.They were also the best and worse years in my life.At the first, I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by yourself.However, my parents didn't seem to think such.They always tell me what to do and how to do it.At one time, I even felt my parents couldn't understand me so I hoped I could be freely from them.I showed them I was independent by wear strange clothes.Now I am leaving home to college.At last，I will be on my own，but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever need help.‎ 答案：‎ The teenage from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me.They were also the best and years in my life.At first，I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by .However，my parents didn't seem to think .They always me what to do and how to do it.At one time，I even felt my parents couldn't understand me so I hoped I could be from them.I showed them I was independent by strange clothes.Now I am leaving home college.At last，I will be on my own，but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever need help.‎ ‎【语篇解读】　本文中作者回忆了他的青少年时代。‎ ‎71．解析：词法错误。13至19岁那几年，year当然要用复数形式。‎ 答案：year→years ‎72．解析：词法错误。and前用了最高级best，此处也应用最高级。比较级worse应改为最高级worst。‎ 答案：worse→worst ‎73．解析：词法错误。at first“起初”。‎ 答案：去掉first前面的the ‎74．解析：行文逻辑错误。此处谈论的都是“我”的事情。‎ 答案：yourself→myself ‎75．解析：词法错误。think so“这样认为，认为如此”。‎ 答案：such→so ‎76．解析：句法错误。由前句的didn't和后句的felt可判断用一般过去时。‎ 答案：tell→told ‎77．解析：词法错误。be free from“摆脱”。‎ 答案：freely→free ‎78．解析：词法错误。by doing sth.“通过做某事”。‎ 答案：wear→wearing ‎79．解析：词法错误。leave...for...“离开某地到另外一个地方”。‎ 答案：college前面的to改为for ‎80．解析：句法错误。句意：最终，我还是要一个人，但我仍然想在我需要帮助的任何时候有父母可以求助。‎ 答案：need前加I ‎【四】‎ A few months after returning the US from Germany，I took a college course in the French.Since I have learned to speak German good in Germany，I thought that it might be interested to begin studying another language.‎ In the first class，the teacher asked me to do a pronunciation exercise，in which he would say a word or two in French，and each student would do his best to copy.When he got me，he kept having me said more words，but I finally asked him why.“I find it great funs.It's the first time I've heard the American speak French with a German accent.” he explained.‎ 答案：‎ A few months after returning the US from Germany，I took a college course in French.Since I learned to speak German in Germany，I thought that it might be to begin ‎ studying another language.‎ In the first class，the teacher asked to do a pronunciation exercise，in which he would say a word or two in French，and each student would do his best to copy.When he got me，he kept having me more words， I finally asked him why.“I find it great .It's the first time I've heard American speak French with a German accent.” he explained.‎ ‎【语篇解读】　本文中作者回忆了他有趣的法语课。‎ ‎1．解析：考查短语。return to sp.“回到某地”，所以这里需在return后加to。‎ 答案：return后加to ‎2．解析：考查介词。in French“用法语”，为固定搭配，所以这里需去掉冠词the。‎ 答案：the去掉 ‎3．解析：考查过去完成时。这里需用过去完成时，表示我在德国时德语已经学的很好，所以这里需将have改为had。‎ 答案：have→had ‎4．解析：考查副词。修饰动词speak，这里需用副词well。‎ 答案：good→well ‎5．解析：考查现在分词。形容词的-ing形式修饰物，-‎ ed形式修饰人。这里表示的是物，所以需用现在分词。‎ 答案：interested→interesting ‎6．解析：考查宾语。根据语境可知是老师告诉我们，所以这里需将me改为us。‎ 答案：me→us ‎7．解析：考查动词。have sb.do sth.“让某人做某事”，所以这里需将said改为say。‎ 答案：said→say ‎8．解析：考查连词。前句是：他让我说更多的话，后句是：我最终问他，两句之间是并列关系，所以这里需用连词and。‎ 答案：but→and ‎9．解析：考查形容词。find it后需加形容词作宾补，所以这里需将funs改为fun。‎ 答案：funs→fun ‎10．解析：考查冠词。这里指的是一个美国人，所以需用冠词an，表示泛指。‎ 答案：the→an ‎【五】‎ When I first started working in the High Mobility Pool，the biggest challenge I take up was working complete in German.However，thanks ‎ for the training and daily activities，I've already had no difficulty.Right now，for my current project，I constantly need to travel to a company，that is located in Germany，to attend meetings.I can see that this effort have brought good results to my work.There has been almost a year since I started working in the High Mobility Pool.Now，I'm still exciting about the new experiences my next projects will bring from.I will value the opportunities meet more people from different country and cultures.‎ 答案：‎ When I first started working in the High Mobility Pool，the biggest challenge I up was working in German.However，thanks the training and daily activities，I've already had no difficulty.Right now，for my current project，I constantly need to travel to a company， is located in Germany，to attend meetings.I can see that this effort brought good results to my work. has been almost a year since I started working in the High Mobility Pool.Now，I'm still about the new experiences my next projects will bring ．I will value the opportunities meet more people from different and cultures.‎ ‎【语篇解读】　本文讲述了作者首次在the High Mobility ‎ Pool工作所遇到的最大挑战——语言障碍。‎ ‎1．解析：根据句意可知用一般过去时态，故把take改为took。‎ 答案：take→took[来源:学科网ZXXK]‎ ‎2．解析：副词修饰动词。故把complete改为completely。‎ 答案：complete→completely ‎3．解析：句意：多亏了训练和日常活动。thanks to“幸亏，多亏”，故把for改为to。‎ 答案：for→to ‎4．解析：此处a company是先行词，后面是非限制性定语从句，故把that改为which。‎ 答案：that→which ‎5．解析：此处this effort是句子主语，单数第三人称形式，故把have改为has。‎ 答案：have→has ‎6．解析：固定句式：It＋is/has been＋一段时间＋since...“自从……多长时间了”。故把There改为It。‎ 答案：There→It ‎7．解析：固定词组：be excited about“对……感到兴奋”。故把exciting改为excited。‎ 答案：exciting→excited ‎8．解析：此处bring是及物动词，后面直接跟宾语，故去掉from。‎ 答案：去掉from ‎9．解析：此处是动词不定式作后置定语，故在meet前加to。‎ 答案：meet前加to ‎10．解析：根据前面的different可知后面的名词用复数形式，故把country改为countries。‎ 答案：country改为countries ‎【六】‎ My parents decided try a new Western restaurant last weekend，so I went with them.The evening started well and the menu looks good.I had soup with my starter but the waiter didn't bring a spoon so it was getting a bit cold after I could eat it.Then，for our main course，I had a piece of beef.Besides，I couldn't cut the beef because of my knife wasn't very good.For my dessert I had a apple pie but I didn't have a fork or a spoon so I ate them with my fingers! What a terribly experience!‎ 答案：‎ My parents decided try a new Western restaurant last weekend，so I went with them.The evening started well and the menu good.I had soup my starter but the waiter didn't bring a spoon so ‎ it was getting a bit cold I could eat it.Then，for main course，I had a piece of beef. ，I couldn't cut the beef because my knife wasn't very good.For my dessert I had apple pie but I didn't have a fork or a spoon so I ate with my fingers! What a experience!‎ ‎【语篇解读】　本文主要讲述了作者的一次吃西餐的经历。‎ ‎1．解析：考查不定式。句意：我的父母上周末决定品尝一家新的西餐厅。decide to do“决定做”，故decided和try之间加to。‎ 答案：decided和try之间加to ‎2．解析：考查时态。句意：那天晚上开始很顺利，菜单看起来也很好。根据上下文可知这里要用一般过去式，故looks改为looked。‎ 答案：looks→looked ‎3．解析：考查介词。句意：我开始喝了汤。这里用“for my starter”和下文的“for my main course”和“For my dessert”保持一致。‎ 答案：with→for ‎4．解析：考查连词词意。句意：服务员没有拿勺子，因此在我喝之前汤就已经慢慢变凉。这里根据句意所以把after改为before。‎ 答案：after→before ‎5．解析：‎ 考查代词。从上下文可判断这里说的是我的一次西餐厅吃饭经历，故用our改为my。‎ 答案：our→my ‎6．解析：考查副词。句意：但是我切不了牛肉，因为我的刀不够快。根据句意可知Besides应改为However。‎ 答案：Besides→However ‎7．解析：此句中“my knife wasn't very good”是完整的句子，故用连词because就可以了，故去掉of。‎ 答案：去掉of ‎8．解析：考查冠词。句意：甜点我吃了一个苹果馅饼。apple前用an。‎ 答案：a→an ‎9．解析：考查代词。句意：我没有叉子也没有勺子，因而我用手拿着吃的。这里用it指代上文提到的一个苹果馅饼，故them改为it。‎ 答案：them→it ‎10．解析：句意：多么糟糕的经历！这里用形容词terrible修饰名词experience，故terribly改为terrible。‎ 答案：terribly→terribel ‎【七】‎ Recently I have taken quite a interest in cooking.I suggest that the ‎ school organizes a cooking-learning activity to teach students to prepare any delicious food.It can be really fun and I bet there will be a lot communication going on with students.Besides，it's a good way to build up team spirits.The school can even hold a competition to see whom can cook the most delicious food.Much importantly，I think cooking is a vital skill for the people nowadays.What is known to all，eating-cooked food is a much more healthy and little costly way of life than eating in a restaurant.‎ 答案：‎ Recently I have taken quite interest in cooking.I suggest that the school a cooking-learning activity to teach students to prepare delicious food.It can be really fun and I bet there will be a lot communication going on with students.Besides，it's a good way to build up team .The school can even hold a competition to see can cook the most delicious food. importantly，I think cooking is a vital skill for people nowadays. is known to all，eating-cooked food is a much more healthy and costly way of life than eating in a restaurant. ‎【语篇解读】　本文是关于做饭的相关话题。‎ ‎1．解析：考查冠词。interest是元音开头的单词，前面用不定冠词an，故a改为an。‎ 答案：a→an ‎2．解析：考查虚拟语气。句意：我建议学校组织一个学习煮饭的活动。suggest表示建议，从句用虚拟语气(should动词原形，should可以省略)，故organizes改为organize。‎ 答案：organizes→organize ‎3．解析：句意：我建议学校组织一个学习煮饭的活动来教学生准备一些可口的食物。这里肯定句中应该用some表示一些，故any改为some。‎ 答案：any→some ‎4．解析：考查固定结构。句意：我打赌同学们之间会有很多交流。a lot of“很多”，故a lot后加of。‎ 答案：a lot 后加of ‎5．解析：句意：此外，这是增进团队精神的好方法。这里单纯表述“精神”时用spirit，故spirits改为spirit。‎ 答案：spirits→spirit ‎6．解析：句意：学校甚至能举办一个比赛看看谁能烹饪出最美味的食物。see后接的宾语从句需要用who作主语，故whom改为who。‎ 答案：whom→who ‎7．解析：句意：更重要的是/最重要的是，我认为，烹饪对于今天的人们是很重要的一项技能。根据句意可知Much改为More/Most。‎ 答案：Much→More/Most ‎8．解析：句意：烹饪对于今天的人们是很重要的一项技能。这里的人们是泛指概念，不需要用定冠词，故删去for和people之间的the。‎ 答案：去掉the ‎9．解析：考查定语从句。句意：众所周知，比起在餐馆吃饭，吃在家煮的食物是一种更加健康，更加经济的生活方式。本句为非限制性定语从句，用as指代后面的整个句子，as可放在句首，故what改为as。‎ 答案：What→As ‎10．解析：根据句中的“much more healthy”和下文的“than”可知，此句用比较级结构，故little改为less。‎ 答案：little→less ‎【八】‎ Interest is a kind of power that can drive people learn actively and happily.And it also makes learning more effective and efficiently.‎ I really appreciate the opinion.I begin to be crazy about English when I was a little boy.And I got interested in foreign culture and customs in particular to meet my curiosity.I read English stories，listened to English songs and watched English films on every day，all of that even ‎ seemed to be the “meal” of my daily life.As the result，I always did very well in English exams.‎ In a word，interesting is the key to success.Anyone who are interested in something will devote himself to them.[来源:Z_xx_k.Com]‎ 答案：‎ Interest is a kind of power that can drive people learn actively and happily.And it also makes learning more effective and .‎ I really appreciate the opinion.I to be crazy about English when I was a little boy.And I got interested in foreign and customs in particular to meet my curiosity.I read English stories，listened to English songs and watched English films every day，all of even seemed to be the “meal” of my daily life.As result，I always did very well in English exams.[来源:Zxxk.Com]‎ In a word， is the key to success.Anyone who interested in something will devote himself to .‎ ‎【语篇解读】　本文主要论述了兴趣是学习的动力，快乐的源泉。‎ ‎1．解析：固定结构：drive sb.to do sth.“驱使某人做某事”，故在learn前加to。‎ 答案：learn前加to ‎2．解析：此处用形容词作宾语补足语，故把efficiently改为efficient。‎ 答案：efficiently→efficient ‎3．解析：根据后面的“when I was a little boy”可知主句用一般过去时态，故把begin改为began。‎ 答案：begin→began ‎4．解析：句意：我对外国文化和风俗习惯变得感兴趣。可知名词用复数形式，故把culture改为cultures。‎ 答案：culture→cultures ‎5．解析：every day本身就是“在每天”的意思，故去掉on every day中的on。‎ 答案：去掉on every day中的on ‎6．解析：前面整个句子作先行词，后面的非限制性定语从句中，引导词作主语，名词或代词＋of＋(which指物；whom指人)，根据句意可知把that改为which。‎ 答案：that→which ‎7．解析：固定词组：as a result“结果”，故把the改为a。‎ 答案：the→a ‎8．解析：句意：兴趣是成功的关键。用名词作主语，故把interesting改为interest。‎ 答案：interesting→interest ‎9．解析：Anyone作先行词，在后面的定语从句中作主语，故把are改为is。‎ 答案：are→is ‎10．解析：something某事，按单数第三人称对待，所以用it代替，故把them改为it。‎ 答案：them→it ‎【九】‎ We are aiming to build a peaceful school.I thought it is every student's duty to work hard to achieve this goal.As high school student，what should we do? First for all，we should love our school.Meanwhile，you should respect our teachers and obeying the rules in our school.Secondly，we should show our respect for our parents and do which we can help them.Besides，we classmates should also try to be kind and friendly.Most important，all of us must believe in each other and been honest in our daily life.And we will study even more harder and try our best to do all.‎ 答案：‎ We are aiming to build a peaceful school.I it is every student's duty to work hard to achieve this goal.As high school ，what should we do? First all，we should love our s chool.Meanwhile， should respect our teachers and the rules in our school.Secondly，we should show our respect for our parents and do we can help them.Besides，we classmates should also try to be kind and friendly.Most ，all of us must believe in each other and honest in our daily life.And we will study even harder and try our best to do all.‎ ‎【语篇解读】　本文讲述了创建和谐校园，学生们应该怎样做。‎ ‎1．解析：考查时态。全文时态是现在时，与全文时态一致表示自己的想法也用现在时，故thought改为think。‎ 答案：thought→think ‎2．解析：考查名词。student是可数名词，此处表示高中生这类人，用复数形式。故student改为students。‎ 答案：student→students ‎3．解析：考查固定短语。first of all“首先”，是固定短语，故for改为of。‎ 答案：for→of ‎4．解析：考查代词。根据语境可知我们应该爱我们的学校，尊重我们的老师。与our一致，故you改为we。‎ 答案：you→we ‎5．解析：考查动词形式。用于情态动词should后与and前的respect并列用动词原形，故obeying改为obey。‎ 答案：obeying→obey ‎6．解析：考查宾语从句。此处作do的宾语，指做我们所能帮助他们。故which改为what。‎ 答案：which→what ‎7．解析：考查不定式。此处是不定式作目的状语，指尽我们所能帮助他们，故help前加to。‎ 答案：help前加to ‎8．解析：考查副词。表示“更重要的是”，在句中作状语用副词，故important改为importantly。‎ 答案：important→importantly ‎9．解析：考查动词形式。用于情态动词must后和and前的believe形式一致，用动词原形，故been改为be。‎ 答案：been→be ‎10．解析：考查比较级。表示更努力学习，harder本身就是比较级不需要再加more。‎ 答案：去掉more