2018届二轮复习书面表达的审题与行文结构课件（22张）

2018届二轮复习书面表达的审题与行文结构课件（22张）

2018 届 二轮复习书面表达的审题与行文结构 To Perfect the Structure of Our English Writing Learning objectives: By the end of the lesson, the students will be able to have a better command of the whole structure before writing. attach importance to the topic sentence while writing each part. raise the awareness of making the topic sentence and the supporting sentences cohere. 题型 Part 1 Part 2 Part 3 现象解释型 描述现象 说明现象产生的原因 表明个人观点态度或阐述个人做法 对比选择型 表明一方或双方的观点 表明另一方的观点及理由，或指出双方观点的不足之处及理由 表明个人观点态度或阐述个人做法 问题解决型 提出问题 分析问题，给出解决方案 表明个人观点态度或阐述个人做法 观点论证型 提出论点 例证论点 得出结论或表明个人看法与做法 应用文 描述事实 阐述原因 表明观点或提出建议 常见的作文结构可以参看下表： Step1 lead-in 1. 落实段落结构 Step2 How to polish up our writing? Part1 ： 30 个词的材料概括 Part2 ：各种分析 ( 原因；影响；感受等 ) Part3 ：结合个人经验，谈具体做法 全文 Part1 材料概括可以用这种结构： Note: The adverbial can refer to time, reason, condition, purpose or concession( 让步 ) , and the attributive clause introduced by which can be used to present a result. 状语 ( 非谓语 / 从句 ) 主句 非限制性定从 范例 1 ： Although most people have a dream, only the minority of them can make it a reality like the little boy, who keeps his dream regardless of the negative comments. （省联盟大联考） 范例 2 ： In a bid/ gesture to encourage people to take action to protect the environment, a man is driving a truck releasing waste gas, from which the trees along the road suffer a lot. （ 1.8 模） 范例 3 ： Dissatisfied with the current schooling system, a father in Luzhou had his daughter quit school and taught her personally for 11 years, which has received both support and opposition. （扬泰通淮宿徐 2017 届高三 3 月联考） 1. 越来越多的学生选择休学一年获取技能和生活经验而不是直接上大学，这给了他们在找工作方面的优势 。 ______________________________ , an increasing number of students are choosing to take a gap year to gain skills and life experience , ________________________________________ . Instead of going straight to university which gives them an edge over others in job hunting Practice: 2 . 自从超女在 2004 年一炮走红以来，各种各样的 才艺表演 深受大众欢迎，可这也引起了社会广泛争议。 _________________________________ , various talent shows are well received by the public, ______________________________________________________ . Since Super Girl became an instant hit in 2004 which, at the same time, brings about social extensive controversy Practice: 3 . 担心孩子的吵闹声给他人带来不便，一些母亲分发纸袋，附上以孩子的名义写的歉意信，对此人们的反应不一。 ____________________________________________________________, some mothers hand out bags with notes to express apologies in the name of their babies, _______________ _____________________________. Worried that their babies ' noises may bring inconvenience to other people's reaction to which was mixed Practice: 4 . 多亏了他妈妈的鼓励，作者在若干次失败之后成功找到了工作，这表明在陷入困境时我们要采取一种积极的生活态度。 _____________________________________ , the author succeeded in landing a job after several failures, ________________ _______________________________________________ . Thanks to his mother's encouragement which indicates that we should adopt a positive attitude towards life when in trouble Practice: 5 . 不管负面的言论和他人的失败，这只小聋青蛙成功地到达了高塔顶部，这表明坚持是通往成功的唯一道路。 _________________________________________________ , the tiny deaf frog succeeded in reaching the top of a tall tower, _____________ _____________________________________ . Despite the negative comments and others ' failure which indicates that perseverance is the only road to success Practice: 6 . 父亲曾经在工厂工作 8 年，之后上了师范，做了十年老师。现在他在家安度晚年。 Having worked in a factory for 8 yeas, my father was admitted to a teachers' college and served as a teacher for a decade, who is now enjoying the rest of his life at home. 7 . 为了重视中国的传统节日，浙江温州的学校禁止过圣诞节。圣诞节在中国青少年中已经流行了几十年。 _________________________________ ______ , schools of Wenzhou in Zhejiang province are banned from celebrating Christmas, _____________________________ _________________________________ . To attatch importance to Chinese traditional festivals which has already been popular among teenagers in China for decades Practice: Part2/Part3 的段落结构 : Part2 主题句 支撑句 1/ 拓展句 1 支撑句 2/ 拓展句 2 Part3 主题句 支撑句 1/ 拓展句 1 支撑句 2/ 拓展句 2 结论句 主题句的好句式： 1) 材料分析 As can be learnt from the passage, … It can be learnt from the passage that … What we can learn from the picture / cartoon is that … 2 ）结合自身经历，举例表达： The story sets me thinking of one such occasion, when … I ’ d like to take myself as an example to show you .... When it comes to the relationship between parents and children, I ’ m reminded of my parents, who once quarreled with each other the moment they met. 3) 表达支持 / 反对： The reasons why I support/oppose the practice can be listed as follows. To begin with, … . In addition, … Most importantly, … Everything considered, such practice does more good than harm to us. In the long run, it will have a negative/positive influence on constructing a harmonious society. 4 ）结论表达 From my point of view, what we have to do is … /something must be done to … Personally/Consequently, it ’ s high time that measures should be taken to ... Therefore, I am firmly convinced that … So vital a role does praise play in our lives that never can we stress the significance of it too much. It ’ s high time that we abandoned the idea of schooling at home, no matter how attractive it seems! Practice ：按题目要求写主题句 Task1 ： 2016 江苏省高三英语联考 b) 以自己或朋友、家人的经历说明“坚持就会成功”或者不坚持导致失败。 The story sets me thinking of one such occasion, when I failed in an important English test. I was so discouraged that I even thought of abandoning English. Fortunately, I realized my mistake and devoted more time and efforts to learning English. Eventually, my efforts paid off and I made great progress in English. Task2 ： 2015 广东高考英语 2. 请以约 120 个词谈谈你对“梦想成就伟人”的看法，包括如下要点： (1) 谈谈梦想的重要性； (2) 谈谈你是如何坚持你的梦想的 Dreams play so vital a role in our lives that never can we give up our dreams no matter what difficulty we may come across. I’d like to take myself as an example to show you how I stick to my dream. When I was young, I dreamt of becoming a scientist, inventing more devices to make our lives more convenient. Whenever I’m discouraged, I’m reminded of my dream, telling myself to keep on going. Thanks to my dream, I’ve reached where I am today . Task3 ：前黄高级中学 2017 届高三一模适应性考试以约 120 个词发表你“对吃苦教育”的看法，内容包括：（ 1 ）你对 “ 吃苦教育 ” 概念的理解； What can be interpreted from the concept of hardship education is that important as it is to receive hardship education, what is equally important is following teenagers’ growth. 人类该怎么采取行动来阻止这类愚蠢的行为呢？（主动句 / 被动句） 表扬的话不要仅仅留给那些成绩好的学生。 How can we humans take measures to stop such foolish behavior? Don‘t save the praise for only those top kids. What measures can be taken to stop such foolish behavior? 包里有一些珍贵的书，当然还有一些钱。 如果你入乡随俗，你在扬州就会享受这里的一切。 In the bag are some valuable books and of course some money. If you “Do as Romans do when in Rome” ， you’ll enjoy more of your stay here in Yangzhou.