【英语】2019届二轮复习书面表达技法指导三丰富充实的细节信息（5页）

【英语】2019届二轮复习书面表达技法指导三丰富充实的细节信息（5页）

‎2019届二轮复习书面表达技法指导三丰富充实的细节信息 ‎[技法综述]‎ 近几年书面表达的开放性越来越大，题目要求中的提示内容越来越少。如果只是对文字提示部分简单地进行翻译，词数肯定不够，因此在写作时需要适当地充实细节内容。充实内容时一定要合乎逻辑，其最高境界应是“情理之中、意料之外”，最忌讳的就是脱离情景和要求自行立意，天马行空，随意发挥。‎ ‎1. 追加成分 在要点基础上适当增加合乎逻辑的附加成分，如定语(从句)，状语(从句)，非谓语动词，独立主格结构等。不仅增加了词数，而且使表达更清晰、准确，主题更突出。‎ ‎[典例1]　我将参加一些社会活动 I will take part in some social activities.‎ ‎→If possible, I will take part in some social activities so that I can know more about the society.‎ ‎[典例2]　我建议老师多选择英语电影 I suggest that the teacher should choose more English films.‎ ‎→As a young student, I suggest that the teacher should choose more English films that appeal to us teenagers, thus making English learning more interesting.‎ ‎2. 补加语句 根据行文走向，适当增加一些与主题相关的语句，或由要点衍生的句子，既能起到前引后联的作用，又能补充一些相关信息，帮助读者理解所写内容。‎ ‎[典例1]　我们青少年应尽我们的所能保护环境、拯救地球 We teenagers should do what we can to protect the environment and save the earth.‎ ‎→We teenagers should do what we can to protect the environment and save the earth. For example, we can use recyclable bags instead of plastic bags, refuse to use singleuse products, plant more trees and save water and energy.‎ ‎[典例2]　募捐得来的钱将送给急需的人 The money collected in the charity sale will be sent to those in great need. ‎ ‎→The money collected in the charity sale will be sent to those in great need. This will not only help them through difficulties, but also give them warmness and happiness.‎ ‎3. 添加过渡 根据行文或段落需要，在句与句或段与段之间适当增加过渡词语，甚至过渡句，可以使文章浑然一体。‎ ‎[典例]　话题：是否禁止广场舞 I don't think square dancing should be forbidden. The reasons are as follows. First of all/To begin with, dancing is a good way to take exercise, which can help people to build themselves up. It also provides a chance for people to communicate with each other. What's more, the square is a good place for people to work out.‎ ‎[阅卷现场]‎ ‎　　(2016·全国卷Ⅰ)假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外资公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历(resume)。给外教Ms Jenkins写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式(format)。‎ 注意：1.词数100左右；‎ ‎2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ ‎[随堂训练]‎ Ⅰ.请按要求扩充句子 ‎1．Besides, remember to speak slowly and clearly.(补充so that引导的目的状语从句) ‎ ‎→Besides, remember to speak slowly and clearly so that you can leave a good impression on the audience and judges．‎ ‎2．Be sure to enter the examination room on time.(补充一个句子说明迟到的后果)‎ ‎→Be sure to enter the examination room on time.Whoever is late won't be allowed to enter．‎ ‎3．Soon after, there are two entrances to the parking places.(补充分词短语作结果状语说明有何好处)‎ ‎→Soon after, there are two entrances to the parking places, making it easier for us to enter it now．‎ ‎4．Secondly, we must study hard because knowledge is power.(补充一个含有条件状语从句的复合句说明储备知识会使生活有所不同)‎ Secondly, we must study hard because knowledge is power.If we are equipped with knowledge, it can help us make a difference in our life．‎ ‎5．The language ability is essential.(前面补充过渡语说明是“我”的观点；后面补充which引导的定语从句说明重要性的具体体现)‎ ‎→As far as I know, the language ability is essential，which helps you communicate with others and makes it easier for you to understand ‎ the courses ．‎ Ⅱ.书面表达(申请信)‎ ‎(2017·山东省部分重点中学调研联考)假如你是李华，是新华中学的一名学生，得知可向世界儿童基金会(World Childhood Foundation)申请一个经费为2 000元的扶贫项目(povertyrelief program)，以帮助贫困地区的儿童。你感兴趣，准备申请。请根据以下要点写一封信：‎ ‎1．个人的基本情况和申请理由；‎ ‎2．你对申请项目的具体设想和项目经费的使用计划；‎ ‎3．你的愿望；‎ ‎4．联系方式为2016hope@icf.org。‎ 注意：1.词数100左右；‎ ‎2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；‎ ‎3．开头语和结尾语已为你写好。‎ Dear Sir or Madam，‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ Yours sincerely，‎ Li Hua ‎【参考范文】‎ Dear Sir or Madam，‎ I'm Li Hua, studying at Xin Hua Middle School. I am writing to apply for the 2，000 yuan from the World Childhood Foundation to start a povertyrelief program aimed at helping those children who are financially disadvantaged.‎ Compared with us, our less fortunate peers are struggling, and 2，000 yuan means a lot to them. I've intended to spend 1，500 yuan purchasing ‎ some stationery for the needy students in a povertystricken area. And the remaining 500 yuan will be used to invite a motivational speaker to improve their life by making right academic and professional decisions. I believe with your help, their life will change for the better.‎ I'd appreciate it if you reply to my letter at your earliest convenience. My email address is 2016hope@ icf.org.‎ Yours sincerely，‎ Li Hua