2020届二轮复习书面表达写作技巧之三十六：如何使写好演讲稿

2020届二轮复习书面表达写作技巧之三十六：如何使写好演讲稿

‎2020届二轮复习书面表达写作技巧之三十六：如何使写好演讲稿 ‎[题型技法]‎ 演讲稿包括发言稿、致辞、竞选稿等，是人们在工作和学习生活中经常使用的一种文体，该文体语言通常极富感染力。演讲稿写作首先要明确发言的对象，对不同听众的发言，内容自然就不一样。演讲稿的句子要求短小精悍，铿锵有力。立场要明确，观点要鲜明。赞成什么、反对什么要旗帜鲜明，不能模棱两可。具体写作结构如下：‎ ‎ ‎ ‎[典例悟法]‎ ‎(2016•天津高考书面表达)假设你是晨光中学的学生会主席李津。一批来自英国的高中生与你校学生开展了为期两周的交流活动。现在，他们即将回国，你将在欢送会上致辞。请根据以下提示写一篇发言稿。‎ ‎1．回顾双方的交流活动(如学习、生活、体育、文艺等方面)；‎ ‎2．谈谈收获或感想；‎ ‎3．表达祝愿与期望。‎ 注意：1.词数不少于100；‎ ‎2．可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；‎ ‎3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。‎ Dear friends，‎ How time flies！　‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ 　‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ 　‎ Thank you.‎ 满分范文 Dear friends，‎ How time flies！I am Li Jin, president of the Students' Union of Chenguang Middle School.It's my great privilege to be here, sharing this moment with our fellow friends from the Great Britain.During the twoweek activities, we surely exchanged our ideas on learning, ways of life, PE and cultures.One of the highlights was the sports meeting where we competed with each other in the basketball match.‎ The past two weeks witnessed our growth and friendship. It is not only your enthusiasm but also your teamwork and good spirits that impress us.After the twoweek exchange activities，we now have a better understanding of each other on a whole new level.And I sincerely hope our friendship lasts forever.Wish you all the best!‎ Thank you.‎ 范文赏析 ‎(1)文章开篇自我介绍并引入话题。随后表述演讲具体内容(回顾双方的交流活动；谈谈收获或感想)。最后感谢倾听并表达希望。‎ ‎(2)范文中使用了大量亮点句型，如sharing this moment with ...是现在分词作状语； where we competed with each other ...是where引导的定语从句； The past two weeks witnessed ...运用了无灵主语句； It is not only ... but also ...运用了not only ... but also ...并列结构等。这些都是提升文章档次的句子，也显示了作者较强的语言运用能力，增加了文章的采分点。‎ ‎[增分佳句]‎ ‎1．开头部分常用语 ‎①My name is ...Today I am very glad to have the opportunity to make this presentation.I shall be speaking about ...‎ 我是……今天很高兴能有机会做这个演讲。我演讲的内容是……‎ ‎②Good morning, everyone! It is my great honor to share with you my opinions on ...‎ 大家上午好！很荣幸能和你们分享一下关于……我的看法。‎ ‎③It's my great honor to be here/to have the opportunity to say something about ...‎ 很荣幸能在这里/能有机会谈论一下关于……‎ ‎2．主体部分常用语 ‎①The topic of my speech is ...‎ 我演讲的主题是……‎ ‎②I'll divide this topic into five main aspects.‎ 我将分五个主要方面谈论这个主题。‎ ‎③I would like to concentrate on the problem of ...‎ 我想把重点集中在……问题上。‎ ‎3．结尾部分常用语 ‎①I hope I have made myself understood.‎ 希望我说的大家都能理解。‎ ‎②That's all I want to say about this point.‎ 关于这一点，我就讲这些。‎ ‎③By way of conclusion, I'd like to quote what Newton once said.‎ 我想借用牛顿曾经说过的话来结束我今天的发言。‎ ‎④Thank you from the bottom of my heart for giving me this chance to speak to you today.‎ 我从心底感谢你们今天给了我这个演讲的机会。‎ ‎[热点押题]‎ 假定你是星光中学的高中毕业生李华，你的母校将为高一新生举办主题为“What to learn in senior high school？”的英语沙龙活动，特邀请你结合自身经历谈谈自己的体会。请根据以下提示准备一份英语演讲稿。‎ ‎1．学会学习：方法、习惯等；‎ ‎2．学会做人：真诚、友善等；‎ ‎3．其他方面：考生自拟。‎ 注意：1.词数100左右；‎ ‎2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。‎ Good morning，everyone! It is my honor to be here to share with you my opinions on what to learn in senior high school.‎ ‎ 　‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ 　‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ 　‎ Thank you!‎ 参考范文：‎ Good morning，everyone! It is my honor to be here to share with you my opinions on what to learn in senior high school.‎ In the coming three years, our school life will be challenging.Firstly, we should learn to learn efficiently.Developing a good habit is of great importance.It really benefited me a lot to preview lessons, get actively involved in class, and review what had been taught after class.‎ In addition, we should learn how to get along well with others.In school, I respected teachers and was friendly with classmates.It was with sincerity and faithfulness that we created a harmonious atmosphere.‎ Finally, we should take part in sports and outdoors activities frequently.They are really helpful to build up my body and enrich my school life.‎ No pains, no gains. I am sure that with great efforts, you will enjoy a ‎ colorful and fruitful life here.‎ Thank you!‎