2019届高考英语考前培训：写作素能培养第7讲实现作文的完美衔接与过渡

2019届高考英语考前培训：写作素能培养第7讲实现作文的完美衔接与过渡

写作素能培养 第三部分 第七讲　实现作文的完美衔接与过渡 衔接与过渡性词语的使用是语言连贯性得以实现的最常用手段。在句与句之间，段与段之间恰当地使用一些承上启下的连接 ( 过渡 ) 性词语是非常必要的。高中阶段应该掌握的连接 ( 过渡 ) 性词语归纳如下： 一、表示起始关系的过渡性词语 above all ， to begin/start with ， today ， now ， nowadays ， at present ， currently ， recently ， generally speaking ， according to ， with the development of... 等。　　 ①Now I'll tell you the next learning programme. (2017 · 全国卷 Ⅰ 书面表达 ) 现在我来告诉你下一个学习计划。 ② To start with, I have been learning and speaking Mandarin for about 17 years. (2015 · 四川高分满分作文 ) 首先，我学说普通话已经 17 年了。 完成句子 1 ．随着因特网的发展，计算机在人们的生活中起着重要作用。 ___________________________the Internet, computers play an important role in people's life. 2 ．总的来说，你练习越多，用英语写作就越熟练。 ________________________the more you practise, the more skillfully you can write in English. With the development of 　 Generally speaking 　 二、表示时间顺序的过渡性词语 ① In the meanwhile, the wolf might feel the people's threats around, so it began to step back slowly. (2017 · 浙江高考书面表达 ) 同时，狼可能会感觉到周围的人对它的威胁，所以它开始慢慢后退。 ② Several days later ， when the video was played on the graduation ceremony, it was well received. (2017 · 北京高考书面表达 ) 几天后，当录像带在毕业典礼上播放时，收到了好评。 firstly ， first of all ， to begin/start with ， then ， later ， in the end ， finally ， at last ， after that ， afterwards ， since then ， immediately ， suddenly ， meanwhile 等。 翻译短文 上周我得了重感冒，首先是流鼻涕，但我并未当回事，然后开始咳嗽，后来感到发烧而且没力气，最后我被送进医院，不得不在床上躺了三天。 I had a bad cold last week.First ， I had a running nose ， but I did not take it seriously. Then I began to cough.After that ， I had a fever and felt weak.Finally ， I was sent to hospital and had to lie in bed for three days. 三、表示并列关系的过渡性词语 ① As you know, playing ping pong can not only build up your body but also shape your character. (2017 · 全国卷 Ⅲ 书面表达 ) 正如你所知道的，打乒乓球不仅可以增强你的身体，还能塑造你的性格。 ② She finally earned respect of them, who eventually became confident as well as well behaved. (2015 · 广东高考满分作文 ) 她最后赢得了他们的尊重，他们最终变得自信，表现也不错。 and ， or ， also ， as well as ， neither...nor... ， not only... but also... ， either...or... ， not... but... 等。 翻译句子 1 ．努力学习，你就会考上重点大学。 Work hard ， and you will be admitted to a key university. 2 ．游泳不但对身体有好处，而且能培养我们的坚强意志。 Swimming not only benefits our health ， but also helps us have a strong will. 四、表示转折关系的过渡性词语 but ， yet ， however ， while ， otherwise ， on the contrary ， though ， although ， even if/though ， despite ， in spite of ， regardless of 等。 ① However, they still approached to the wolf bravely. (2017 · 浙江高考书面表达 ) 然而，他们仍然勇敢地接近狼。 ② Otherwise we'll have to answer for our selfishness sooner or later. 否则的话，我们迟早会为我们的自私付出代价。 翻译句子 1 ．然而在我们学校，情况却大不一样。 In our school ， however ， things are quite different. 2 ．但遗憾的是我只考虑自己的事情，没有考虑父母的想法。 But unfortunately I mind my own business without considering my parents. 五、表示因果关系的过渡性词语 ① Therefore ， before class, you can read some books related to the history of the Tang Dynasty to better appreciate the poems. (2017 · 全国卷 Ⅰ 书面表达 ) 因此，上课前，你可以阅读一些与唐代历史有关的书籍，以更好地欣赏诗歌。 ② So I invite you to attend an exhibition of it. (2017 · 全国卷 Ⅱ 书面表达 ) 所以我请你去参加一个展览。 because ， as ， since ， for ， thanks to ， due to ， as a result of ， so ， therefore ， as a result/consequence 等。 翻译句子 1 ．多亏医生的及时治疗，他获救了。 Thanks to the doctor's timely treatment ， he was saved. 2 ．因此，我建议应该给我们更多的时间用于体育运动和睡眠。 Therefore ， I suggest we be given more time for sports and sleep. 六、表示递进关系的过渡性词语 ① Additionally, it can help you make more friends, which is essentially beneficial to you. (2017 · 全国卷 Ⅲ 书面表达 ) 此外，它可以帮助你结交更多的朋友，这对你来说是有益的。 ② Moreover, the scenery along the river is amazing, with many well known sightseeing spots. (2017 · 北京高考书面表达 ) 此外，沿江的风景是惊人的，有很多著名的观光景点。 what's more ， furthermore ， moreover ， besides ， additionally ， what's worse ， still less ， to make matters worse ， worse still ， on the one hand...on the other hand ... ， for one thing... for another ( thing ) ... 等。 翻译句子 1 ．我在森林里迷了路，更糟糕的是，天开始变黑了。 I lost my way in the forest and to make matters worse ， it became dark. 2 ．一方面，周末他们需要好好休息；另一方面，他们需要尽一切努力复习功课。 On (the) one hand ， they should have a good rest on weekends.On the other (hand) ， they should make every effort to review what they have learned. 七、表示列举事实的过渡性词语 such as ， for example/instance ， take...for example ， that is to say ， as follows ， in other words 等。 ①For example, once most of my classmates made a suggestion that we go outing at the weekend, but I thought helping the old at the nursing home would be more meaningful. (2015 · 浙江高考满分作文 ) 例如，曾经有一次我的大部分同学都建议周末去郊游，但是我认为去敬老院帮助老年人会更有意义。 ②In my free time, I'll continue to take regular exercise, such as swimming, running and various ball games. 在我的业余时间，我将继续做常规训练，诸如游泳、跑步和各种各样的球类活动。 翻译句子 1 ．就拿北京来说吧，它是世界上最古老的都市之一。 Take Beijing for example ， it is one of the oldest cities in the world. 2 ．也就是说，如果你想成功，必须相信自己。 That is to say ， if you want to succeed ， you have to believe in yourself. 八、表示观点的过渡性词语 in my opinion ， in my view ， from my point of view ， as far as I am concerned ， as for me ， personally 等。 ①Personally ， I prefer the tour along the Yangtze, the longest river and one of the mother rivers of Chinese civilization. (2017 · 北京高考书面表达 ) 就个人而言，我更喜欢沿着长江，最长的河流和中国文明的母亲河之一旅游。 ② In my opinion, on line voting is an inseparable part of modern life and should be welcomed. (2016 · 江苏高考书面表达 ) 在我看来，网上投票是现代生活中不可分割的一部分，应该受到欢迎。 翻译句子 1 ．就我而言，我喜欢财富，但我更看重健康。 As far as I am concerned ， I love wealth ， but I value health more. 2 ．按照我的观点，人们不应该在公共场所抽烟。 In my opinion ， people shall not smoke in public places. 九、表示总结的过渡性词语 ① In short, internet voting, to some extent, is unfair, if not immoral, and cannot be trusted. (2016 · 江苏高考书面表达 ) 总之，即使符合道德标准网上投票在一定程度上也是不公平的，不应该被相信。 ② In a word, if we had such a magic watch, our life would become more convenient. 总之，如果我们能有这么一块有魔力的手表，我们的生活将会更加方便。 in short ， in brief ， in conclusion ， in a/one word ， to sum up ， all in all ， on the whole ， in general 等。 1 ．总之，好公民应该遵守交通规则。 In conclusion ， a good citizen should observe traffic regulations. 2 ．总之，过去 30 年里我们生活的变化给我们带来了便利和舒适。 In a word ， changes in our life in the past thirty years have brought us convenience and comfort. ______________________ ， online shopping has many advantages.First ， online shopping makes it easier for us to buy things.Instead of searching a crowded store ， we just need to watch the computer screen and choose the things we like. __________ ， it is much faster for us to do shopping.We don't have to spend a lot of time going to shops.Third ， we can see a lot of goods shown on the computer screen at the same time. On (the) one hand 　 Second 　 _____________________ ， online shopping also has many disadvantages.The pictures of goods shown on the computer screen are not always what they are. _______________ ， we can be cheated easily. ________________we cannot see the things in detail. _____________ ， ___________the disadvantages of online shopping ， I think it is an advanced way to do shopping.So we should develop it. On the other hand 　 As a result 　 What's worse 　 In a word 　 despite