2020届二轮复习书面表达写作技巧之二十九：如何使写好建议信

2020届二轮复习书面表达写作技巧之二十九：如何使写好建议信

‎2020届二轮复习书面表达写作技巧之二十九：如何使写好建议信 ‎[题型技法]‎ 建议信是作者就有关问题进行分析并针对这些问题提出自己的看法和建议，以便让对方接受自己的想法、主张并解决有关问题。建议信可以写给个人，就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法或观点；也可以写给某个组织或者机构，就改进其服务等提出建议或忠告。具体写作结构为：‎ ‎ ‎ ‎[典例悟法]‎ ‎(2018•北京高考书面表达)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国文化感兴趣，计划明年来北京上大学。他向你咨询相关信息。请给他回邮件，内容包括：‎ ‎1．表示欢迎；‎ ‎2．推荐他上哪所大学；‎ ‎3．建议他做哪些准备工作。‎ 注意：1.词数不少于50；‎ ‎2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。‎ Dear Jim，‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ 　‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ 　‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ 　‎ Yours，‎ Li Hua 满分范文 Dear Jim，‎ I'm so glad to hear your future education plan in Beijing in your last letter. First I would like to express my warmest welcome to you and I am sure you will have the most unforgettable experience during your college in Beijing.‎ Learning your keen interest in Chinese culture, I suggest you apply for Peking University, one of the best universities in China. Its Chinese Literature major is perfect for you where you can be completely soaked in Chinese profound history and rich culture. As for preparation, some reading in advance is needed like A Dream of Red Mansions while some online courses of spoken Chinese can be helpful for you to adapt to the Chinese language environment.‎ I sincerely hope your dream will come true and it's my pleasure ‎ to show you around Beijing when that day comes. If you have further questions, please feel free to let me know.‎ Yours，‎ Li Hua 范文赏析 ‎(1)范文首段交代写信目的并表示欢迎；第二段阐述建议他上北京大学的原因及需要做的准备工作；最后一段表达了自己的愿望。整篇文章一气呵成、要点齐全且衔接流畅自然。‎ ‎(2)文中运用了如“unforgettable, be soaked in, profound, as for”等高级词汇；句式方面的高级表达有：I would like to express my warmest welcome ...恰当运用了不定式作宾语；Learning your keen interest in Chinese culture恰当运用了现在分词作状语；one of the best universities in China作同位语；where you can be completely soaked in恰当运用了定语从句； it's my pleasure to show ...中it用作形式主语。‎ ‎[增分佳句]‎ ‎1．表达建议信写信目的常用语 ‎①I am writing to give you some suggestions/offer you some advice.‎ 我写信给你一些建议/忠告。‎ ‎②I am writing to express my views concerning ...‎ 我写信是要表达我关于……的看法。‎ ‎③You have asked for my advice about ... and I will try to make some useful suggestions here.‎ 关于……你向我征求意见，在此我尽力提出一些有用的建议。‎ ‎2．表达建议常用语 ‎①I think the most suitable ...for you is ...‎ 我认为对你来说最适合的……是……‎ ‎②I would like to suggest that ...‎ 我想建议……‎ ‎③You'd better .../It's better to ...‎ 你最好……/最好是……‎ ‎④As far as I am concerned/In my opinion, it would be wise to take the following action.‎ 在我看来，采取如下行动是明智的。‎ ‎⑤For one thing ...; for another ...‎ 一方面……，另一方面……‎ ‎⑥If I were you, I would ...‎ 如果我是你，我会……‎ ‎⑦I think it would be more beneficial if you could ...‎ 我认为如果你能……将会更有益。‎ ‎3．表达希望常用语 ‎①I hope you will take my advice into account/consideration seriously.‎ 我希望你会认真考虑我的建议。‎ ‎②I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions practical/useful/helpful.‎ 我希望你会发现这些建议实用/有用/有帮助。‎ ‎③I will be more than happy to see improvements in this regard.看到你在这一方面取得进步我会非常高兴。‎ ‎[热点押题]‎ ‎(2019•长沙模拟)假定你是李华，你的好友王芳喜欢打排球，但老师和家长都极力劝她放弃打排球，全身心投入高考。为此，她非常纠结和郁闷。请你给她写一封建议信，帮她解决这个困扰。‎ 注意：1.词数100左右；‎ ‎2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ 参考范文：‎ Dear Wang Fang，‎ I am sorry to hear that you are troubled by something. As you said in your letter, your teachers and parents suggest you give up playing volleyball because of the College Entrance Examination. But you don't want to do that. I think you don't need to worry a lot for this. Here are my suggestions.‎ First of all, you should understand your teachers and parents，who just want the best for you.Second，I think you ‎ should reduce the time spent playing volleyball instead of giving it up.Third，you should arrange your time properly.As long as you can make a balance between your study and hobby，your teachers and parents will surely not object to it.‎ I hope my suggestions are helpful to you. Best wishes!‎ Yours，‎ Li Hua