2020届二轮复习书面表达写作技巧之三十：如何使写好申请信

2020届二轮复习书面表达写作技巧之三十：如何使写好申请信

‎2020届二轮复习书面表达写作技巧之三十：如何使写好申请信 ‎[题型技法]‎ 申请信有很多种，比如求职申请、加入某组织或活动的申请、报考申请、留学申请等。写申请信的目的在于让对方了解自己的经验、能力、成就、愿望等，所以个人情况的介绍应该是申请信的核心内容，应尽可能向对方说明本人的长处，以便留下好印象，获得面谈的机会。由于此类题目常有较多的文字提示，写作时除应注意格式上的要求外，也应注意审题全面，不能遗漏要点，并要注意人称和时态的变化，避免出现逻辑混乱。具体写作结构为：‎ ‎ ‎ ‎[典例悟法]‎ ‎(2018•浙江高考应用文写作)假定你是李华，你校英语协会招聘志愿者，接待来访的国外中学生。请你写信应聘，内容包括：‎ ‎1．口语能力；‎ ‎2．相关经验；‎ ‎3．应聘目的。‎ 注意：1．词数80左右；‎ ‎2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ 满分范文 Dear Sir/Madam，‎ I have learned that the English Association of our school is now in need of some volunteers to meet the visiting foreign students and I want to apply for the position. Firstly, I can speak fluent English and I have little difficulty communicating with foreigners. Secondly, I helped receive some visiting foreigners to our school last year. This experience is sure to enable me to do better this year. I also want to improve my spoken English and help them have a better understanding of Chinese culture.‎ I would be grateful if you could give me the chance.‎ Yours，‎ Li Hua 范文赏析 ‎(1)文章开门见山说明自己写信的目的；然后详述自己的优势以及目的，简洁明了，不拖泥带水；最后表达感谢和期盼。‎ ‎(2)运用了firstly ...secondly 等语序标志词，运用了一些较为地道的搭配，in need of, have difficulty doing sth.; enable sb.to do sth....; have a better understanding of ...等，这些都使得这篇短文读起来层次分明、连贯、顺畅。‎ ‎[增分佳句]‎ ‎1．表达申请信写信目的常用语 ‎①I'm writing to apply for the position of ...‎ 我写信申请……的职位。‎ ‎②I am writing this letter to recommend myself as a qualified candidate for ...‎ 我写信推荐自己为……的合格人选。‎ ‎③I am interested in ...and wish to enter this significant program.‎ 我对……感兴趣，希望加入到这个重要项目中。‎ ‎④I learned on your website that ...‎ 我从你们的网站上得知……‎ ‎2．表达个人优势的常用语 ‎①I won the first prize in ...competition.‎ 我获得了……比赛的一等奖。‎ ‎②As an outgoing ...I get along well with my classmates.‎ 作为一名外向的……我和同学们相处得很好。‎ ‎③For one thing, I can help ...For another thing, I can improve ...一方面，我能帮助……另一方面，我能提高……‎ ‎④My main specialty is ...‎ 我的特长是……‎ ‎3．表达感谢，期盼回复的常用语 ‎①If you consider me appropriate for the job, please call me at ...‎ 如果你们认为我适合这份工作，请致电……‎ ‎②I will be grateful/I'd appreciate it if you could ...‎ 如果你能……我将感激不尽。‎ ‎③Thank you for considering my application, and I am looking forward to meeting you.‎ 感谢你考虑我的申请，期待与你见面。‎ ‎[热点押题]‎ 假定你是李华，是一名高三学生。最近，你校将接待一批来自美国的交换生，学校现在征集寄宿家庭。你想申请成为寄宿家庭，请根据下面的写作提纲，写一封申请信。内容包括：‎ ‎1．个人情况(年龄、性别、性格和爱好)；‎ ‎2．英语水平；‎ ‎3．家庭条件；‎ ‎4．相关经历。‎ 注意：1.词数100左右；‎ ‎2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ 参考范文：‎ Dear Sir/Madam，‎ I am Li Hua, an 18yearold girl from Senior Three.I hear some American students are coming to study in our school for two weeks.I am writing to apply for the opportunity to become a host family.‎ The following are my advantages.First, I'm openminded and like ‎ to make new friends.Second, my parents speak English so fluently that they have no difficulty communicating with native speakers.Third, we have a large apartment where there is an extra room for a guest.More importantly, last month we received two American students, through which we gained a lot of experience.‎ I think it is a chance to improve my English and learn about new culture.Please give me a chance.Looking forward to your reply.‎ Yours，‎ Li Hua