【英语】2020届二轮复习书面表达新创层级2第1讲　不落俗套的亮点词汇学案

【英语】2020届二轮复习书面表达新创层级2第1讲　不落俗套的亮点词汇学案

第1讲　不落俗套的亮点词汇 请用亮点词汇替换下列句子中的黑体部分 ‎1．As high school students, we should be neatly dressed when at school. are supposed to ‎2．The teacher directed the gifted students towards the more difficult courses. challenging ‎3．I sincerely hope that you will consider my suggestions. take my suggestions into account ‎4．Our class thought of the idea to make better use of used materials. came up with ‎5．We should try to improve ourselves through learning and prepare for the future. take pains; get prepared ‎6．I want to tell you something about my plan for the summer vacation and I'd like you to help me. do me a favor/lend me a hand ‎7．Cinemas have gradually given way to the rise of the Internet and cellphones, and the ticket price is decreasing. on the decrease ‎8．When you are bored with the people sometimes, you'd better find a quiet place, listening to some classical music. fed up with 在高考阅卷时，一篇英语作文往往在1分钟内就被判定优劣。大众化的词汇、平庸的表达已使长时间工作的阅卷老师产生了视觉疲劳。如果一篇作文中突然出现几个与众不同、让人眼前一亮的词汇，老师的给分也绝不会吝啬！‎ 一、使用亮点词汇的4种方法 ‎1．“语”众不同，避免人云亦云 写作时恰当得体地使用别人可能想不到的词汇或表达，会给阅卷人耳目一新的感觉。‎ ‎①(2019·全国卷Ⅰ·书面表达)I am Li Hua，a student studying in London, who is very glad to be informed of the message that there will be a Chinese painting exhibition in your local art gallery.‎ ‎→I am Li Hua，a student studying in London, who is more than thrilled to be informed of the message that there will be a Chinese painting exhibition in your local art gallery.‎ ‎②(2019·全国卷Ⅱ·书面表达)In order to provide the students with a wonderful match, we need to have enough training.‎ ‎→In order to provide the students with a fantastic match, we need to have enough training.‎ ‎③(2018·江苏卷·书面表达)Obviously, blindly following others' advice will affect our own judgment. ‎ ‎→Apparently, blindly following others' advice will affect our own judgment.‎ ‎2．更新换代，避免重复 写作时应尽量避免重复使用相同的词语，要用贴切多样的词语来展示自己的水平。用词不同、表达方式迥异，也会使作文出彩。‎ ‎①(2019·北京卷·书面表达)Summer in these cities is hot and rainy, so take summer wear with an umbrella with you.‎ ‎→Summer in these cities is hot and rainy, so take summer wear plus an umbrella with you.‎ ‎②(2018·全国卷Ⅰ·书面表达)First of all, you should arrive on time because it is good manners to be on time in China. ‎ ‎→First of all, you should arrive on time because it is good manners to be punctual in China. ‎ ‎3．单词与短语巧妙互用 一般情况下短语优先，应多使用词组、习语来代替一些单词，以增加文采。但有时单词比短语更生动，可以“一词传神”。‎ ‎①(2019·全国卷Ⅱ·书面表达)This is a friendly game, so we should remember the principle of friendship first. ‎ ‎→This is a friendly game, so we should keep in mind the principle of friendship first. ‎ ‎②We can look at this problem in many ways.‎ ‎→We can view this problem in many ways.(view比look at更有内涵)‎ ‎4．用高年级学到的词汇替代低年级学到的词汇 ‎①(2019·江苏卷·书面表达)Firstly, this is exactly what the British visitors are expecting.‎ ‎→Firstly, this is precisely what the British visitors are expecting.‎ ‎②Second, I am trying my best to get the important knowledge and skills concerning my position.‎ ‎→Second, I am sparing no effort to acquire the essential knowledge and skills concerning my position.‎ 二、高分必备的24个亮点词汇 普通词汇 高级词汇 普通词汇 高级词汇 名词 chance opportunity choice alternative idea opinion people individuals result consequence effect influence 动词 have possess develop promote replace substitute bear put up with consider take into ‎ account understand make ‎ sense of 形容词 enough adequate rich abundant difficult challenging proper appropriate important vital/‎ significant interesting absorbing/‎ appealing 副词 finally eventually hardly barely immediately in a flash nowadays currently 连词 so therefore and as well as ‎①We will try our best to develop the traditional friendship between us.‎ ‎→We will try our best to promote the traditional friendship between us.‎ ‎②Finally your child will leave home to lead her own life as a fully independent ‎ adult.‎ ‎→Eventually your child will leave home to lead her own life as a fully independent adult.‎ 请用亮点词汇替换下面学生作文中加黑的部分并背诵 Dear Jason，‎ I'm very happy to hear from you and know about your beautiful home city London. Now I'd like to tell you something about my hometown Quanzhou.‎ Quanzhou is a beautiful place for people to live in. Its economy has been developing fast during the past ten years. New bridges and roads have been built, highrise buildings standing in many parts of the city. More and more schools and hospitals are useful for the native people. It is developing into a modern and beautiful city. But there are still some problems, such as heavy traffic in rush hours and serious air pollution, which have a bad effect on people's daily life. I think Quanzhou should develop healthily and scientifically, so that we could have a better hometown in future. ‎ Yours，‎ Li Ming ‎【答案】　1.very→more than　2.fast→rapidly　3.built→set up　4.More and more→An increasing number of 5．useful→available　6.beautiful→charming　7.But→However　8.serious→severe　9.effect→influence/impact　10.I think→In my opinion/As far as I am concerned