专题36+书面表达——提示议论类+仿真测试-2019年高考英语高频考点名师揭秘与仿真测试

专题36+书面表达——提示议论类+仿真测试-2019年高考英语高频考点名师揭秘与仿真测试

‎1.【河南省开封市2019届高三10月定位考试英语试题】‎ ‎52.假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Emily打算参加她所在的中文俱乐部举办的中文诗歌朗诵比赛，向你寻求参赛建议，请你用英语给她写一封邮件。内容包括：‎ ‎1．充分理解所要背诵的诗歌；‎ ‎2．纠正发音；‎ ‎3．多交中国朋友。‎ 注意：1．词数100左右（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数）；‎ ‎2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ Dear Emily，‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎ Yours，‎ ‎ Li Hua ‎【审题】‎ 本文是一篇提纲类作文。要求以李华的名义给英国笔友Emily写一封电子邮件。‎ ‎ ‎ 需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文章思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。‎ ‎【答案】Dear Emily,‎ I'm delighted to know you are going to take part in a Chinese poetry reciting contest. The fact that you are so interested in Chinese culture makes me happy. Now I'd like to offer you some practical advice.‎ ‎ ‎ I hope that my opinions are of help to you, and wish you good luck and success!‎ ‎ Yours,‎ ‎ Li Hua ‎【点拨】‎ 本篇书面表达要点全面，结构紧凑，是一篇较好的范文。文章使用了大量的短语，为文章增色不少，如：be delighted to，take part in，have a better understanding of，communicate with。还使用了名词性从句The fact that you are so interested in Chinese culture makes me happy. 倒装句Only by doing this can you appreciate its beauty.和定语从句What's more, it is a good idea to make some Chinese friends and communicate with them as often as possible, which can improve your spoken Chinese.等多种句式结构 ，增加了文章的可读性。‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎2.【湖北省宜昌市第一中学2018届高三11月月考（含听力）英语试题】‎ ‎72.假如你是李华。得知你的外国笔友Jimmy将在今年除夕前到你所在的城市旅游，你写信告诉他：‎ ‎1.欢迎他到你家过年；‎ ‎2.说一说你有什么样的计划安排。‎ 注意：‎ ‎1.词数100左右；‎ ‎2.可以适当添加细节，使行文连贯；‎ ‎3.已给出的部分不算词数。‎ ‎ ‎ Dear Jimmy,‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎ Yours’ ‎ ‎ Li Hua ‎【审题】‎ ‎ ‎ ‎【答案】‎ Dear Jimmy,‎ I’m more than thrilled on knowing that you’re planning to spend Chinese New Year in our city. I sincerely invite you to stay with my family during your stay.‎ As is known to us, the Spring Festival is the most important festival to us Chinese, which is meant to be an occasion when we enjoy the family reunion and have fun together. I hope you can have a dinner with us on CHUXI, which falls on the Lunar New Year’s Eve. And watching the Spring Festival Gala is also what we prefer to do on that night. On the following days, I’m available to be your guide and show you around our city. There are many activities typical for the festival. We can watch the dragon dance and attend the temple fair at that time, which are rarely seen even in China, not to mention the delicious snacks we may taste in streets. I bet you’ll enjoy yourself here!‎ I can’t wait to see you in our city. Please contact me if you have any ideas.‎ ‎ Yours,‎ ‎ Li Hua ‎【点拨】‎ 本文内容充实而丰富，词汇准确而生动，句式复杂多变。既运用了复杂句，又有简单句。定语从句形式多变，名词从句也有多种，同时还运用了状语从句和非谓语形式。‎ 本文一开始就用一个复合句（I’m more than thrilled on knowing that you’re planning to spend you Chinese New Year in our city.），表示自己对Jimmy在年前来中国旅游表示欢迎。用词诚恳而热情。 ‎ ‎ ‎ 最后一段再次表达对朋友到来的期待。在本段中运用了祈使句和if引导的状语从句（Please contact me if you have any ideas.）‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎3.【四川省威远中学2019届高三上学期第一次月考英语试题】‎ ‎52.假定你是李明，你所在的武术社正在招收新队员，请给你的留学生朋友 Eric 写封邮件邀请他加入，内容包括：‎ ‎1. 练武术的好处；‎ ‎2. 武术社的活动；‎ ‎3. 报名方式截止日期。‎ 注意：1. 词数 100 左右。2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ 参考词汇：武术 martial arts Dear Eric,‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎___________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎ Yours，‎ ‎ Li Ming ‎【审题】‎ 本书面表达是一篇提纲类作文。文章要求假定你是李华，你所在的武术社正在招收新队员，请给你的留学生朋友Eric 写封邮件邀请他加入。‎ ‎ ‎ ‎【答案】‎ Dear Eric,‎ Learning that you are fond of martial arts, I am writing to sincerely invite you to join the martial arts club which is recruiting new members.‎ Martial arts, as the most important part of Chinese traditional culture, benefit us a lot. Not only can they help build up our bodies but also they can help us realize the value of determination and perseverance. As for the activities, the club provides regular training courses which are of high level and conducted by a professional coach every Friday. Meanwhile, the members are to be divided into several groups to compete every two weeks.‎ If you are interested in w hat I have stated above, sign up on our school website before September 1st. I’m looking forward to your reply.‎ Yours,‎ ‎ Liming ‎【点拨】‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎4.【云南省曲靖市第一中学2019届高三高考复习质量监测卷三英语试题】‎ ‎52.假设你是李华，进人高三后，学习压力大，月考频繁，你的好友David感到无比的焦虑和紧张。请你结合以下要点，给他写一封信，给出缓解压力的建议并鼓励他。‎ ‎1.调整心态，对自己充满信心;‎ ‎2.缓解压力的方法:多听音乐、进行体育锻炼以及和家人老师或朋友多交流;‎ ‎3.用一顺平常心对待考试。‎ 注意：1.词数100左右;‎ ‎2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;‎ ‎3.开头已给出，不计人总词数。‎ Dear David,‎ I am sorry to hear that you are suffering from heavy pressure and anxieties from the constant monthly exam after entering Senior Grade 3.____________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ Best wishes Yours sincerely,‎ Li Hua ‎【审题】‎ 本书面表达是一篇提纲类作文。要求以李华的名义给朋友William写一封电子邮件，帮助他放松身心，提高学习效率。‎ ‎ ‎ ‎【答案】‎ Dear David，‎ I am sorry to hear that you are suffering from heavy pressure and anxieties from the constant monthly exam after entering Senior Grade 3．I am writing to you，intending to offer you some beneficial proposals to help you reduce pressure and relieve anxieties．‎ First of all，it is of vital importance for you to remain a good state of mind．In other words，it is exceedingly necessary for you to have confidence in yourself．Additionally，appreciating music along with taking exercise is conducive to your getting rid of pressure．There is one more point that interaction with your family members，teachers or friends also plays a critical role in improving your mood．Last but not least，I desire to make it clear that it does not make much difference whether you win or lose in an exam．What really matters is to keep trying and never give up.‎ In a nutshell，it would be a great pleasure if my advice could help you.‎ Best wishes！‎ ‎ Yours sincerely，‎ ‎ Li Hua ‎【点拨】‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎5.【重庆巴蜀中学2019届高三高考适应性月考卷（三）英语试题】‎ ‎52.假如你是高三学生李华,你在渝都中学读书的朋友张磊不重视英语,为此你很担忧。月考将至,你想给他用英语写封邮件。‎ 内容:1.表达关心担忧之情;‎ ‎2.分析不重视英语的原因(至少两点);‎ ‎3.提出帮助的方法。‎ 注意：1.词数，100左右。‎ ‎2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎ Faithfully Yours,‎ ‎ Li Hua ‎【审题】‎ 本文是一篇开放类书面表达，要求考生把自己当成李华，在渝都中学读书的朋友张磊不重视英语,月考将至，你给他用英语写封邮件，表示担忧、分析不重视英语的原因并提出解决问题的方法。‎ 第1步：审题。根据文字提示可知本文是一封电子邮件，要求考生用英语给张磊写信一份邮件，表示对月考的担忧、分析不重视英语的原因并提出解决问题的方法。全文以一般现在时和第三人称为主。‎ ‎ ‎ ‎【答案】‎ Dear Zhang Lei,‎ How is everything going? I am concerned about you because I find you attach little importance to English and you mainly stay focused on science subjects.‎ Personally, I think there may be two factors contributing to your reluctance to learn English, one of which is that you have no interest in learning it. The other one is that you find it impossible to make up for what you have missed.‎ Trust me, my friend, I believe I will be of some help. At weekends, I’d like to spare one or two hours to help you learn vocabulary and grammar. Besides, I will buy some interesting English books for you. You can combine English learning with entertainment.‎ Don’t lose heart! Nothing is difficult for a tough guy, Right?‎ ‎ Faithfully Yours,‎ ‎ Li Hua ‎【点拨】‎ 本篇范文结构完美，条理清晰。范文时态和人称运用准确，涵盖了文字提示要求的所有要点，且有适当的个人发挥。考生运用了多样式的句型结构，整篇文章富有变化，并不死板。使用了较多的高级词汇，如attach little importance to、contributing to、combine with 等；尽量运用了丰富的句式，如非限制性定语从句…one of which is that you have no interest in ‎ learning it；表语从句和宾语从句. The other one is that you find it impossible to make up for what you have missed；同时文章还运用了一些串联成分，如personally、besides等，这些串联词让各个要点更为紧密地结合在一起。以上写作技巧的运用提升了文章的层次，显示了考生具有很强的驾驭语言的能力。‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎