【英语】2020届二轮复习书面表达分类写作指导学案之十一：电子邮件

【英语】2020届二轮复习书面表达分类写作指导学案之十一：电子邮件

‎2020届二轮复习书面表达分类写作指导学案之十一：电子邮件 写作模板 Dear_____ ,‎ ‎ I am extremely pleased to hear from you. And I would like to write a letter to tell you that .(寒暄句加主题句)‎ ‎(扩展句一)‎ ‎(扩展句二)‎ ‎(扩展句三)‎ ‎ I will greatly appreciate a response from your earliest convenience./I am looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.(结束主体段落)‎ ‎ Best regards.(结束语)‎ Sincerely yours,‎ ‎________‎ 电子邮件的写法 考试中电子邮件类试题的要求一般都是只写正文，其写法比较简单，开头第一行写称呼，顶格写，称呼后面用逗号；正文部分从称呼下一行开始写起，从左边起空两格。正文后面是署名，署名写在正文下一行或二行处，靠右写(同信件的署名)。学科#网 ‎ ‎ 开头部分 How nice to hear from you again.‎ Let me tell you something about the activity.‎ I'm glad to have received your letter.‎ I'm pleased to hear that you are coming to China for a visit.‎ I'm writing to you for your help during my stay in America.‎ 结尾部分 With best wishes.‎ I'm looking forward to your reply.‎ I'd appreciate it if you could reply earlier.‎ ‎ ‎ 经典试题训练 Writing1‎ 假如你是李夏。你看到美国留学生Sharon 在网上发贴，希望有人能帮助她提高普通话(Mandarin)水平，她可以教英语作为回报。请根据以下提示用英语给她写一封电子邮件。‎ ‎1. 表达给她提供帮助的意愿；‎ ‎2. 说明你能胜任辅导的理由；‎ ‎3. 给出讲好普通话的两点建议；‎ ‎4. 提出你学习英语的具体需求。‎ 注意：‎ ‎1. 词数120左右，开头语已为你写好；‎ ‎2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；‎ ‎3. 文中不得透漏个人姓名和学校名称。‎ Hi Sharon,‎ This is Li Xia. I learned from your post that you want to improve your Mandarm.______________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ Yours,‎ Li Xia ‎【范文】‎ Hi Sharon,‎ This is Li Xia. I learned from your post that you want to improve your Mandarin. I am quite interested in it. I think I’m fit for it. As a student, I have been learning Mandarin for many years. In addition, I am Chinese, which means Mandarin is a must ‎ for me to communicate with others in my daily life. So I’m quite confident that I can help you learn Mandarin.‎ ‎ Learning Mandarin takes time, so if you want to learn it well, you should spend much time practicing Mandarin everyday. As the saying goes, practice makes perfect. Besides, you can also read some books in Chinese, see some Chinese films and listen to some Chinese radio programmes. Speaking and listening are very important for language learning, by which you are sure to make great progress.‎ ‎ In your post, you say you can teach English as a reward. It is just what I want. I’m eager to improve my English. So, if you allow me to help you learn Mandarin, you can also help me improve my English. We can contact each other by video chat every night for half an hour in English and half an hour in Chinese, so that we can improve our oral speaking. ‎ Hope for your early reply!‎ Yours,‎ Li Xia Writing2‎ 假设你是晨光中学学生会主席李津，你校拟向美国友好交流学校的中文班捐赠一批图书。请根据以下提示，写一封邮件与中文班班长Chris 联系，并告知将于今年七月赴对方学校参加夏令营时带去赠书。 ‎ ‎(1)自我介绍；‎ ‎(2)拟捐赠图书的类型、册数、用途等； ‎ ‎(3)询问对方的其他需求。‎ 注意：‎ ‎(1)词数不少于100；‎ ‎(2)请适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯。‎ 参考词汇： ‎ 学生会 the Student Union ‎ Dear Chris, ‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎ Yours,‎ Li Jin ‎【范文】‎ Dear Chris,‎ I am Li Jin, chairman of the Student Union of Chenguang High School. I am writing to inform you of our donation.‎ In order to enhance the friendship between us two schools, our school has appealed to the students to donate books to your Chinese class. The books, which can be used as reading materials or reference books in your Chinese class, include 30 storybooks, 25 magazines and 20 ChineseEnglish dictionaries. We will take the books over to you when we take part in the summer camp to be held in your school in July.‎ Should you need any other things, please do not hesitate to tell us.‎ Yours,‎ Li Jin ‎【试题解析】‎ 本篇书面表达要求写一封电子邮件。写作的时候要注意以下几点：一、动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，更不能跑题偏题。内容要点包括：1.自我介绍及写信目的；2.拟捐赠图书的类型、册数、用途等；3. 询问对方的其他需求；4. 告知将于今年七月赴对方学校参加夏令营时带去赠书。二、写作时注意 准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。‎ Writing3‎ 你校准备邀请国际STS文化教育机构的专家Mr. Brown到校作国际文化交流报告会。假定你是学校学生会主席李华，请根据以下提示，用英语给Mr. Brown写一封电子邮件，说明报告会的具体安排。‎ ‎1.报告会举行的具体时间和地点；‎ ‎2.报告的大致内容及对象；‎ ‎3.活动安排：分报告和自由问答两部分。‎ 注意：‎ ‎1.词数100左右；‎ ‎2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎ ‎ Writing4‎ 假设你是李华，父母答应你今年高三毕业后去美国进行为期10天的 观光旅游。请你给美国网友Lucy写一封电子邮件，咨询以下事情：‎ ‎1.不随旅游团的食宿、交通等问题；‎ ‎2.必看景点与时间安排；‎ ‎3.邀请她到中国观光。‎ 注意：‎ ‎1.词数120左右；‎ ‎2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎【范文】‎ Dear Lucy,‎ How are you doing? My parents have just promised me to make a 10-day tour of America after my graduation from senior high school this summer, which will be a good chance for me to ‎ experience American culture and practice my oral English.‎ As I don’t like to join a tour group, could you please offer me some advice on where to stay, what to eat and how to travel in such a short time?‎ I would appreciate it if you could tell me the must-see attractions and the time arrangement. Your advice will surely make my visit enjoyable and worthwhile.‎ Welcome to China at your convenience! Looking forward to your early reply.‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua Writing5‎ 假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Mike发来电子邮件，询问你所参加的英语俱乐部的一些情况。请你根据以下要点给Mike回一封邮件。‎ ‎1.时间(周五下午5：00到6：00)与地点(多功能教室)；‎ ‎2.组织者(学校英语俱乐部)与参与者(两名外教和英语爱好者)；‎ ‎3.活动内容(至少列举三条)及目的。‎ 注意：‎ ‎1.词数100左右；‎ ‎2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；‎ ‎3.开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。‎ Dear Mike,‎ Thank you for your e-mail. I am glad that you are interested in the English Club of our school and I’d like to tell you something about it.‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ‎ Can you tell me something about your out-of-class activities?‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎【范文】‎ Dear Mike, ‎ Thank you for your e-mail. I am glad that you are interested in the English Club of our school and I’d like to tell you ‎ something about it. ‎ I am a member of the English Club of our school, which was set up by the Students’ Union last year. Every Friday afternoon, from 5 pm to 6 pm, two foreign teachers and those who have a great interest in English will meet at the multimedia classroom. We usually see English movies, learn to sing English songs, debate on hot topics, or put on some English plays. Through these activities, we broaden our horizons and understand Western culture better. Of course, we have great fun being together. The English Club is of great benefit to me in many ways.‎ ‎ Can you tell me something about your out-of-class activities? ‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎ ‎ ‎ Writing6‎ 假设你是卜曼宜，你购买了一部某外国公司生产的手机，因有质量问题，要求该公司更换。请根据下列要点，用英文写一封电子邮件。‎ 要点：‎ ‎1.问题：（1）手机不响铃，不能发短信；‎ ‎（2）该产品已售完，无法更换；‎ ‎（3）型号新，无配件，无法维修。‎ ‎2.要求：公司应尽快予以更换。‎ 注意：‎ ‎1.词数为100左右；‎ ‎2.参考词汇：配件—spare part；‎ ‎3.电子邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好(不计入你所写词数)；‎ ‎4.已给出的电子邮件的开头和结尾不得抄入答题卡。‎ Dear Sir,‎ I am writing to you for the mobile phone of Dephone-S250 I bought on 20thApr. 2017 at Tele Mall in Wuhan, P.R. China...‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ Thank you for your consideration.‎ Sincerely yours,‎ Bu Manyi ‎【范文】‎ Dear Sir, ‎ I am writing to you for the mobile phone of Dephone-S250 I bought on 20th Apr. 2017 at Tele Mall Wuhan, P.R.China. Ten days after that, it didn't ring and send short messages. Then I took it to the seller, but was told that the model had been sold out and I had to wait at least three months for a new one. Later I went to the repairman. He said since it was a new model in China, it was impossible to fix it without the right spare parts. I was so desperate on hearing that. How can I wait that long? Therefore, I require that you send me a new one of the same model within a month. ‎ Thank you for your consideration. ‎ Sincerely yours, ‎ Bu Manyi