【英语】2018届二轮复习短文改错设题技巧分析之一：行文逻辑六方面学案（7页word版）

【英语】2018届二轮复习短文改错设题技巧分析之一：行文逻辑六方面学案（7页word版）

‎2018届二轮复习短文改错设题技巧分析之一：行文逻辑六方面 一 有些错误在一个句子中就可以找到，但是有的句子中的错误需要通过上下文中的信息才可以找到。‎ ‎1冠词 使用定冠词有多种规则，其中一条是：特指或第二次提到某个名词时要用定冠词。‎ 例：【2014四川】 I am going to talk about what you should do when a fire alarm goes off... Soon the firefighters will come and put out a fire.‎ 答案与分析：a改为the。此处特指上文提到的火灾。‎ ‎2名词的单复数一致 有时候在一个单一的句子里，名词应该用单数还是复数，不容易看出来，但是通过上下文，就可以很容易看出文中名词的单复数形式是否正确。‎ 例1：【2015课标II】 One day, little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent. It was very crowded. Tony saw a toy in a shop window. He liked it so much that he quickly walked into the shop. After looking at the toy for some time, he turned around and found his parents were missing.‎ 答案与分析：parent改为parents。错误在第一句中的parent，但是如果你不看后面的parents，第一句话也是没有错的。‎ 例2：【2014浙江】 No one in the carriage had previously spoken to or even noticed the ticket-owner before. Yet they had so quickly offered the strangers their help.‎ 答案与分析：strangers改为stranger。这里的陌生人指的是上文中的ticket-owner，因此用单数形式。‎ ‎3代词 填写代词时，需要清楚代词的所指，替代的是什么样的名词，用什么样的代词形式，有没有多用或少用的情况。‎ 例1：【2014辽宁】 Although we’ve been delighted to have you as neighbors, we’re hoping to settle something that bothers us. In a word, your dog—Cleo... That is too much for us, considering how close the ‎ houses are. We appreciate our apologies and goodwill, but we hope that you can figure out a good way of settling the matter.‎ 答案与分析：our改为your。该句意为：我们很感激你的道歉与友好，但我们希望你能想出一个好办法来解决这个问题。‎ 例2：【2014四川】 I am going to talk about what you should do when a fire alarm goes off. If you hear the alarm, stand in line at the door and wait for your teacher to lead you outside... If it's a false alarm and there is no fire, your teacher will lead us back to the classroom.‎ 答案与分析：us改为you。句子的结构并没有错，但是从上下文的意思可知，是老师带“你们”回教室。‎ ‎4时态的一致 短文改错题还会考查学生对文章的整体理解能力。一般来说，文章中时态基本上是一致的，条理清楚，主线明确，不能乱用。‎ 例：【2014课标II】 My dream school starts at 8:30 a.m. and ends at 3:30 p.m. There are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon. We didn’t need to do much homework.‎ 答案与分析：didn’t改为don’t。上文都用的是一般现在时，可以确定 didn’t是时态误用。‎ ‎5并列一致 例：【2015课标II】Tony was scared and begun to cry.‎ 答案与分析： begun改为began。根据句意可知，was scared和后面的动词是并列关系，因此用动词的过去式began。‎ ‎6上下文意思一致 例：【2015浙江】The view from the back of the classroom was also splendid. Close to the school there was a beautiful park with many trees around it. Farther in the distance, I could not enjoy the view of snowy mountains.‎ 答案与分析：去掉not。根据上下文，作者在谈本人所看到的近景和远景。‎ 总之，要想完全做对短文改错题，除了掌握词法、句法外，还要能透彻理解全文，并能通过上下文来判断句子中存在的各种行文逻辑方面的错误，以达到得满分的目 典题演练 ‎ 【一】‎ It was warm and sunny, so we decide to go for a swim. When I reached to the beach, my friends were already there. The sea was perfect, appearing as smoothly as a mirror. I felt quite pleased with it, and my friends were a little disappointing as they liked huge waves. When we got hungry and thirsty, we bought some hotdog and drinks from a nearby shop. After that, we became energetic enough for a football game. It surprised all was that my team won game. Then we relaxed for a while, sleep on the beach. At about half past four, we packed up my things and went home. We really had fun.‎ It was warm and sunny, so we decide to go for a swim. When I reached to the beach, my friends were already there. ‎ ‎ decided 删除the The sea was perfect, appearing as smoothly as a mirror. I felt quite pleased with it, and my friends were a little ‎ ‎ Smooth but disappointing as they liked huge waves. When we got hungry and thirsty, we bought some hotdog and drinks from a ‎ disappointed ‎ ‎ hotdogs nearby shop. After that, we became energetic enough for a football game. It surprised all was that my team won ‎ ‎ What ‎^game. Then we relaxed for a while, sleep on the beach. At about half past four, we packed up my things and went the sleeping our home. We really had fun.‎ ‎【二】‎ Last Monday, well preparing for a business trip, my father said goodbye to my mother and me. He would be away for three days. Just on the next morning, I found my mother out of conditions. She had cold. I immediately went to get her some medicine, or cooked some noodles for her. Under my specially care, my mother recovered quickly. When my father come back home, my mother told him that had happened. He praised me for my take good care of my mother.‎ I feel very happy that I have done everything for my mother. ‎ 答案：Last Monday, well preparing for a business trip, my father ‎ said goodbye to my ‎ prepared ‎ mother and me. He would be away for three days. Just on the next morning, I ‎ found my mother out of conditions. She had∧ cold. I immediately went to get her ‎ ‎ condition a ‎ some medicine, or cooked some noodles for her. Under my specially care, my ‎ and special ‎ mother recovered quickly. When my father come back home, my mother told ‎ ‎ came him that had happened. He praised me for my take good care of my mother.‎ ‎ what taking ‎ I feel very happy that I have done everything for my mother.‎ ‎ something ‎