2020届二轮复习特训书面表达审题谋篇课件

2020届二轮复习特训书面表达审题谋篇课件

书 面 表 达 之 审题谋篇 What is a good writing？ A good composition 1.neat writing 书写 2. content 内容 3. structure 结构 4. language 语言 Good first impression Everything required included Well organized and smoothly developed No Chinglish NoGrammatical mistakes 无遗漏信息点，即要点全面 篇章条理清晰：分段和过渡词 句式复杂多样 地道的高级词汇和恰当的词组 structure 1. 称呼 :Dear Sir or Madam, 2. 开头语 the beginning （空四个字母的距离） ( 自我介绍或问候，写信的目的 ) sentence) 3. 正文 body 具体问题 + 具体分析 4. 结束语 客套话（ complimentary   close ） 5. 签名 （ signature ） ( 右下角 ) 口诀：开门见山说意图 咨询建议 123 　　感谢客气不可少 期待回信成老套 I.【 审题谋篇 】 How to design a composition 1. 文体（ 书信或邮件 ）。 2. 人称： 第一人称 first person 3. 时态： 一般现在时 present tense 4. 写作要点 （ 列提纲 ） 1. 认真审题 2. 词汇准备 —— 定关键词，短语， 关联词 3. 定句式 ，多种句式，如强调句、倒装句、各种名词性从句、 定语从句 、状语从句和固定句型， 非谓语动词 4. 三段式 1. 写信目的 2. 要点（ 1 ， 2 ， 3 ） 3. 总述 / 客套用语（期望 / 请求 / 感激） Styles of passage narration 1 argumentation 2 exposition 3 …….. 4 How to summarize a narration: Skill: 要素串联法 What Who When Where why how How to summarize an argumentation 论点 — 观点 主题句 论据 — （事例） 结论 Skill: 议论三步法 7 评论某一事物利与弊的套用格式 提出要评论的事物或观点 . 分别陈述利与弊 ( 或不同的观点 ) 归纳得出作者的结论 . a. 有定论的 , 作者可明确表态 ( 赞成或反对 ) b. 争议较大的或尚无定论的 , 可不明确表态 , 提出扬长避短的方法 , 也可以平衡其利弊 , 提出某种期望和设想 . 典型模板 8 Just as a coin has two sides, ______ also has some side effects. However, ______ has also a lot of problems. For one thing, ____________; For another thing, ___________. ___ has brought a number of benefits to us. —— is a beneficial activity, in which we can obtain many advantages. First of all, ________. Also, ____________. Most importantly, ____________________. We are all aware that everything has its two sides. ______ is no exception. 开头 : 优点 ： 缺点 ： 9 How to write based on cartoons? 1. 读图 (topics) 3. 谋篇 (organization) 2. 解意 (theme) Ⅰ . 读图： Topics of cartoons Topics of cartoons Environmental problems Attitudes towards life Social phenomenon Ⅱ. 解意 (Theme)-----to the point Attention: 文字说明部分往往含有重要信息 (clues), 切记要认真阅读！！！ 1. 辨明褒贬，找准角度 (angle) ２ . 联系生活，明晰主旨 (theme) People lack communication. Picture1 Protect animals. No buying, no killing. Picture2 People can’t afford heavy medical fees. Picture 3 One false move may lose the game. Think twice before we do anything. Picture 4 Money can’t buy everything. Health is the best wealth. Picutre5 Picture6 Children suffer from too heavy burden. Ⅲ . 谋篇 ---Organization Step1. Description Describe what you have seen in the picture briefly. Step2. Analysis Figure out the inner meaning of the picture. Step3. Solutions Give your ideas about the picture. 发现问题 解决问题 分析问题 How to write a letter of invitation (2019 全国 II 卷 ) 书面表达（满分 25 分） 假定你是校排球队队长李华。请写封邮件告知你的队友 Chris 球队近期将参加比赛，内容包括： 1. 比赛信息； 2. 赛前准备； 3. 表达期待。 注意： 1. 词数 100 左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 排球队队长 captain of the school volleyball team. 。 Para.1 (beginning) Para.3 (ending) Para.2 (body) structure of an invitation intention what, when, where expectation gratitude Dear Chris, I’m Li Hua, captain of the school volleyball team. I’m writing to inform you of the upcoming tournament that you should prepare for. The three-week tournament is scheduled to be held in the newly built stadium early next month . You being a member of the team, proper preparation on your part would be appreciated. For starters, please come up with a workout schedule and stick to it so that you can get in shape soon . Secondly, you should attend team training sessions and meetings to study our opponents together with the teammates. Since the school attaches great importance to this tournament , I hope we can devote ourselves to becoming a stronger team and a qualified champion . Sincerely, Li Hua intention expectation What, when, where Practice Makes Perfect May you succeed In writing