2018届二轮复习写作衔接过渡技法指导课件（23张）

2018届二轮复习写作衔接过渡技法指导课件（23张）

2018 届二轮复习 写作的衔接过渡 高考书面表达评分要求中五档 (21~25) 明确要求有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。 衔接 ( 过渡 ) 性词语的使用是语言连贯性得以实现的最常用手段。在句与句之间，段与段之间恰当地使用一些承上启下的连接 ( 过渡 ) 性词语是非常必要的。 衔接 ( 过渡 ) 性词语可以归纳如下 ： 1. 表示时间顺序的过渡性词语 first of all, first(ly), to begin with, second(ly ), then, later, in the end, finally, at last, after that, since then, immediately, suddenly, soon 等。 [ 例 ] 首先，你应该相信自己。 (1) First of all , you should believe in yourself. (2) To begin with , you are supposed to have confidence in yourself. (3) Firstly , you should trust yourself. 2. 表示递进关系的过渡性词语 in addition, what's more, furthermore, moreover, besides, on top of this, what's worse, to make matters worse, worse still 等。 [ 例 ] 我不喜欢那件衣服，而且它太贵了。 (1) I don't like the dress; besides , it's too expensive. (2) I don't like the dress; moreover , it's too expensive. (3) I don't like the dress; what's more , it's too expensive. 3. 表示并列关系的过渡性词语 and, or, as well as, as well, including, along with, neither ...nor ..., not only ... but also ..., either ...or ..., not ...but ... 等。 [ 例 ] 他不但给我吃的，还给我钱。 (1) He gave me money as well as food. (2) He gave me food, and money as well . (3) He gave me not only food but also money. (4) He gave me money along with food. 4. 表示转折关系的过渡性词语 but, yet, however, while, on the contrary, at the same time 等。 [ 例 ] 他又失败了，然而，他还是决心再 试一下。 (1) He failed again. However , he still determined to try once more. (2) He failed again. But he still determined to try a third time. 5. 表示因果关系的过渡性词语 as a result, because, as, since, for, thanks to, because of, thus, therefore, as a result of, one reason is that ..., another reason is that ... 等。 [ 例 ] 由于天气恶劣，运动会推迟了。 (1) The sports meeting was put off as a result of bad weather. (2) The weather was bad. As a result , the sports meeting was put off. (3) The sports meeting was put off because of bad weather. 6. 表示条件关系的过渡性词语 if, unless, as/so long as, on condition that 等 [ 例 ] 除非你努力学习，否则可能会英语不 及格的。 (1) You will fail your English exam unless you study hard. (2) If you don’t study hard, you will fail your English exam. (3) You will pass your English exam as/so long as you study hard. 7. 表示让步关系的过渡性词语 as, though, even if/though, who (what, when, where) ever/no matter who (what, when, where) 等。 [ 例 ] 不管谁违法都要受到惩罚。 (1) No matter who breaks the law, he will be punished. (2) Whoever breaks the law will be punished. 8. 表示列举事实的过渡性词语 like, such as, for example/instance, take ...for example, that is to say, as follows, in other words 等。 [ 例 ] 她确有几分姿色 , 比如说她的眼睛。 (1) She has certain definite beauties, such as her eyes. (2) She has certain definite beauties. For example , her eyes are very attractive. 9. 表示总结的过渡性词语 in short, in brief, in a word, in conclusion, to conclude, on the whole, in general, generally speaking 等。 [ 例 ] 总的来说 , 我们这次旅行很愉快 。 (1) In general , we enjoyed the trip. (2) Generally speaking , we enjoyed the trip. (3) On the whole , we enjoyed the trip. 常用的过渡句式有 ： 1. I do agree with …                 2. In some way, I agree with … , but …   3. This point sounds right, but …       4. However, I think …   5. I definitely believe …              6. In my opinion/view,  …   7. Personally, I feel that … / Personally, I agree  with …   8. As far as I’m concerned, …   9. I can’t agree more with the father. Such  cases are often seen in our life  10. Attitudes towards … are various.       11. for one thing.  … ..for another  12. last but not the least … .  表达观点   认为 Think/feel/consider/say /hold that/hold the  view that /insist/believe that  依我看 In my opinion/in my view/ in my eyes /as far  as I am concerned  就我所知   As far as I know  我有理由如下   My reasons are as follows  我的观点如下   Here are my opinions  赞成 / 支持 Agree/be for/be in favor of     恐怕   I’m afraid that …   我相信   I’m convinced that …   我反对   I don’t agree with the idea that … 引用  俗话说/常言 道 There goes the old saying …          As the saying goes …        There is a saying …   As a proverb says …      As we all know …   常用句子  1. Different people (students) have different  ideas.  2. Different people look at  … in different ways.  3. 60% of the students hold the view that …        On the other hand, 40% believe that  …   4. Opinions on the question are divided as  follows:  70% of the students think that … ..    On the other hand, 30% don’t like the idea  of … .  5. I’d love to give my opinion about … ..  6. There are many advantages in …  First … . Second, …  Third …    However , there are  some disadvantages as well …… . Besides 写作常用谚语、格言   1. Action speak louder than words. 行动胜于空话。   2. Experience is the father of wisdom. 经验是智慧之父。   3. Health is better than wealth. 健康胜于财富。 4. No pains, no gains. 不劳则无 2013 湖南 Section C (25 marks) Directions: Write an English composition according to the instructions given below. 请以下列词语为关键词写一篇英语短文。 match 　 winner 　 loser 　 result 内容 : 1. 自己或他人的一次经历 ; 2. 你的感受。 注意 : 1. 必须使用所给 4 个关键词 ; 2. 词数不少于 120 个 ; 3. 不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。 Last week, a football match was held between we Class One and Class Two. The players from both sides are all excellent football players, so the match went on fiercely at first. At last the result is: the winner is Class Two, and we were the loser. We didn't win the match, but we didn't lose heart. On the one hand, we think that friendship comes first, and a match comes second. On the other hand, since we all tried our best, we had no regret. In our life we may meet many failures, as long as we try our best, there's no need feeling regretful for these failures. What's more, we should analyze the reasons of the failures to get success for the next time. In a word, success is important, and so is failure, because it's the mother of success.