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【英语】2020届二轮复习书面表达新创层级4第1讲 书信和邮件学案
第1讲 书信和邮件 一、感谢信和道歉信 (一)感谢信 [谋篇布局] [亮点句式] ◎夺人眼球开头句 1.I'm extremely grateful/thankful to you for your unselfish assistance during... 非常感谢您在……期间给予我无私的帮助。 2.I'm writing to convey/express my gratitude for your kind/generous help during... 我写信感谢您在……期间对我友好/慷慨的帮助。 3.I would like to take this opportunity to express my great appreciation for your timely help and assistance. 对您给予我们及时的帮助和支持,我想借此机会表达感谢。 ◎亮点出彩篇中间 4.Many thanks for all the things you have done in helping us to... 非常感谢您为帮助我们……所做的一切。 5.Thanks to your generous/selfless/kind help, without which I wouldn't have made such great progress. 多亏您慷慨的/无私的/友好的帮助,没有您的帮助,我就不会取得这么大的进步。 ◎韵味无穷结尾句 6.It was kind and generous of you to do this for me, and I appreciate it more than I can say. 您对我如此友好和慷慨,我真是感激不尽。 7.I wish there were a better word than “thanks” to express my appreciation for your generous help. 任何语言都不能表达您对我慷慨帮助的真挚谢意。 8.I will be more than pleased if I have the opportunity to repay your kindness by... 如果我有机会通过……报答您的好意,我会非常高兴。 [佳作背诵] (2019·浙江卷)假定你是李华,经常帮助你学习英语的朋友Alex即将返回自己的国家。请给他写一封邮件,内容包括: 1.表示感谢; 2.回顾Alex对你的帮助; 3.临别祝愿。 注意: 1.词数80左右; 2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 Dear Alex, I'm sorry to hear that you are going to return to your country very soon and I'm writing this email to express my gratitude for your help. First of all, thank you for helping me learn English. Without your help, I wouldn't have made so great progress in Englishlearning. Besides, what you told me about your country broadened my horizons and aroused my interest in foreign culture. I wish you all the best in the future and have a good journey. Yours, Li Hua (二)道歉信 [谋篇布局] [亮点句式] ◎夺人眼球开头句 1.I'm writing to express/convey my sincere apology to you. 我写信向你表达我诚挚的歉意。 2.Now, I am writing this letter to show you my deep regret. 现在,我写信向你表达我深切的悔意。 ◎亮点出彩篇中间 3.I apologize sincerely for what I said that day. I didn't mean to hurt you. 我诚挚地为那天我说的话向你道歉。我不是有意伤害你的。 4.Much to my regret, I was unable to... And I wish that you will accept my apology. 非常遗憾我不能够……希望你能接受我的道歉。 ◎韵味无穷结尾句 5.I sincerely hope this doesn't cause you too much inconvenience. 我真诚地希望这不会给你带来太多的不便。 6.I feel sorry indeed to have put you in such great trouble. 给你带来这么大的麻烦真的十分抱歉。 7.Hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation. 希望你能接受我的道歉并理解我的处境。 8.Once again, I'm sorry for any inconvenience caused. 对于造成的任何不便我再次表示歉意。 [佳作背诵] (2016·全国卷Ⅲ)假定你是李华,与留学生朋友Bob约好一起去书店,因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件,内容包括: 1.表示歉意; 2.说明原因; 3.另约时间。 注意: 1.词数100左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 Dear Bob, I am sorry to say that I cannot go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon. I have just found that I have to attend an important class meeting that afternoon. I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble. Shall we go on Saturday morning? We can set out early so that we will have more time to read and select books. If it is convenient for you,let's meet at 8:30 outside the school gate. If not, let me know what time suits you best. I should be available any time after school next week. Yours, Li Hua [语篇演练] A 假定你是一名加拿大籍交换生 David,2018年来到中国华为公司学习,期间好友李华在汉语学习和生活方面给了你很大的帮助。请你给他写信,表示感谢。要点如下: 1.简述你在公司学习期间遇到的困难,如语言、生活等; 2.感谢好友李华给予的帮助; 3.邀请他来加拿大旅游。 注意: 1.词数80左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 Dear Li Hua, I am writing to express my sincere gratitude to you for your generous help given to me.__________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ Yours, David 【参考范文】 Dear Li Hua, I am writing to express my sincere gratitude to you for your generous help given to me. Without your encouragement and advice, I wouldn't have benefited so much from the experience. During my stay in Huawei, I came across a lot of difficulties. First of all, Chinese was the major troublemaker for me. Due to a limited vocabulary, I was always afraid of communicating with others in Chinese. It was you who encouraged me to be confident to express myself fluently in Chinese. What's more, whenever I was overwhelmed by homesickness, you were always with me, and were ready to give me help patiently. My appreciation is beyond any words and I will be more than pleased if I can show you around Canada in return for your kindness. Yours, David B 假定你是李华,前天是你的外国朋友Anne的生日。你本答应要参加她的生日聚会, 但你当时正忙着准备期中考试, 忘了赴约。请写封信向Anne表达你的歉意, 说明原因, 并提出补救的方法。 注意: 1.词数80左右; 2.可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯; 3.开头语和结束语已为你写好。 Dear Anne, I am indeed very sorry that________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ Your truly, Li Hua 【参考范文】 Dear Anne, I am indeed very sorry that I didn't attend your birthday party the day before yesterday. I feel awful about it and want to apologize to you. It was nice of you to invite me to your birthday party. I should have come and celebrated the precious moment with you. But the midterm examination is around the corner. I was so busy preparing for the exam that I forgot the appointment. I hope you can understand my situation and forgive me. Is it possible for you and me to have a private meeting after the examination? I do long for a pleasant chat with you. It is much to my regret that I missed the chance of such a happy gettogether. Once again, please accept my sincere apology. Your truly, Li Hua 二、推荐信和申请信 (一)推荐信 [谋篇布局] [亮点句式] ◎夺人眼球开头句 1.Learning that you are coming to visit China, I'd like to recommend several places of interest to you. 得知你将来中国游玩,我向你推荐几处名胜。 2.Having learned that our library is planning to buy new books, I'm willing to recommend some books to you. 得知我们图书馆准备买新书,我愿意向您推荐一些书。 3.I'm more than glad/pleased/delighted to learn that you are going to Beijing, and I'd like to offer my recommendation. 得知你要去北京我很高兴,我想向你提出我的建议。 ◎亮点出彩篇中间 4.It offers you an opportunity to do something interesting and creative. Meanwhile, it provides you a source of pleasure. 它提供给你一个机会来做有趣且富有创意的事情,同时也向你提供了快乐的源泉。 5.I recommend that you sleep in a tent at night so that you can get close to nature. 我建议你晚上在帐篷中睡觉以便你可以亲近大自然。 6.There are all kinds of courses for you to choose from, so you can visit the website for detailed information. 有许多课程可供选择,你可以登录网站了解更多信息。 ◎韵味无穷结尾句 7.I do hope you can take my recommendations into account/consideration and make a final decision. 我真希望你能考虑我的建议并作出最后的决定。 8.I'll be more than happy if you can take my recommendations/ideas into consideration. 如果你能考虑我的建议/想法,我会非常高兴。 [佳作背诵] 假定你是李华。你班的交换生Jim对中国传统文化感兴趣,准备下学期选修一门相关课程,向你征询建议。请给Jim写一封邮件,内容包括: 1.推荐一门选修课; 2.说明推荐的理由; 3.提出学习这门课程的建议。 注意: 1.词数80左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 Dear Jim, I am glad that you are interested in traditional Chinese culture and eager to explore more.I think the Ancient Poetry is your best choice. By learning ancient Chinese poems, you can have an extensive knowledge of history and culture in ancient China. Furthermore, you can feel the charm of the language by reading poems, which helps to improve your Chinese. To follow the course well, you'd better read and recite as many poems as possible. Besides, it is a good idea to search for related background knowledge so that you will fully understand the conception of poetry. What do you think of the course? I am sure you will have a lot of fun from it. Yours, Li Hua (二)申请信 [谋篇布局] [亮点句式] ◎夺人眼球开头句 1.I'm writing in reply to the notice for volunteers, hoping that I may have an opportunity to act as a guide. 我写信以回复招聘志愿者的启事,希望我能有机会担任向导。 2.Learning from the advertisement you have posted that you are in need of...to do...I'm writing for a chance to work as... 从您登出的广告中得知您需要……做……我写信以求一个做……(工作)的机会。 ◎亮点出彩篇中间 3.I am easygoing and outgoing and able to get on well with others. 我很随和、外向,能够和别人友好相处。 4.Not only am I outgoing and energetic but also I am optimistic and enthusiastic. 我不仅开朗活泼,而且乐观热情。 5.I have the education and the experience that fit me for your advertised position. 我受的教育和拥有的经验符合您登出的招聘职位(的要求)。 6.I think I am qualified for the job, because I have a good knowledge of ... 我认为我能胜任这项工作,因为我精通…… ◎韵味无穷结尾句 7.I would appreciate it if I could be offered the chance. I am sure I can be of great help for you. 如果我能得到这个机会,我将不胜感激。我确信我能对您有很大帮助。 8.Should you treat my application favorably, I would spare no effort to offer my best service. 如果您看中我的申请,我将不遗余力地提供最佳服务。 [佳作背诵] (2019·全国卷Ⅰ)假定你是李华,暑假在伦敦学习,得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展览。请写一封信申请做志愿者,内容包括: 1.写信目的; 2.个人优势; 3.能做的事情。 注意: 1.词数100左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3.结束语已为你写好。 _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【参考范文】 Dear Sir/Madam, My name is Li Hua. I'm a Chinese student who is taking a summer course in London now. I'm glad to learn that your gallery will hold a Chinese painting exhibition. I would like to do some voluntary work for the exhibition. So I am writing this letter asking to be a volunteer. I am good at English and familiar with Chinese paintings. I would like to volunteer to help visitors, introduce Chinese paintings, spread Chinese culture, and strengthen world cultural exchanges. My aim is to let China go to the world and let the world understand China. I would appreciate it if you could agree to my request. Yours, Li Hua [语篇演练] A 假定你是李华,在你校学习的英国交换生Kavin计划寒假回国看望父母和朋友。他发电子邮件给你希望你给他推荐几件有中国特色的礼物带回国。请根据提示给他写一封电子邮件,主要内容包括: 1.推荐的礼物(中国结、剪纸、丝巾等); 2.推荐的理由; 3.希望和祝愿。 注意: 1.词数80左右; 2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 参考词汇:中国结 Chinese knot _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 Dear Kavin, Glad to receive your email. You asked me to recommend some Chinese traditional gifts that you will buy for your family and friends. Here I'd like to make some recommendations. The first one is the Chinese knot, which stands for friendship, love and good luck. The second one is the Chinese paper cutting, for it is a world cultural heritage. Papercuts vary in form and style and they are attractive. Chinese silk is one of the most popular handcrafts representing China so I think the silk scarf is a very good choice for you. In addition, it is convenient to take along. Hoping my suggestions can help you. Have a good vacation! Yours, Li Hua B 假设你是李华。你在网上看到了杜甫草堂招聘志愿者的启事,对此很感兴趣,请根据如下招聘信息写一封申请邮件。 Volunteers Wanted A group of middle school students from Australia are going to visit the Du Fu's Thatched Cottage on January 2nd, 2020. We are looking for three senior high school students as voluntary guides. The main responsibilities are to introduce Du Fu to the visitors and show them around the Cottage. If interested, please send an application email at your earliest convenience to Mr. Zhang at zhanghua@ 163. com before December 27. 注意: 1.词数80左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3.开头语和结束语已为你写好。 Dear Sir, _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【参考范文】 Dear Sir, Knowing that you want voluntary guides for Australian middle school students on the Internet, I'd like to apply for it. First, allow me to introduce myself. I'm a high school student who is very interested in English and can speak English fluently. And I won the city's English speech contest last year, so it's no problem for me to communicate with foreign friends, especially with my peers. In addition, as a native, I have a good understanding of Du Fu's Thatched Cottage and visit it on a regular basis with my friends to learn more about our great traditional poems. I'll appreciate it if I am given this valuable opportunity. Yours, Li Hua 三、邀请信和建议信 (一)邀请信 [谋篇布局] [亮点句式] ◎夺人眼球开头句 1.It's my pleasure/a great honour for me to invite you to join us. 非常荣幸地邀请你加入我们当中来。 2.I wonder if I/we have the honour to invite you to the party. 我想知道我/我们是否能有幸邀请你参加派对。 3.I'd like to invite you to join us for a visit to the nearby nursing home next Saturday for the Double Ninth Festival. 我想邀请您下周六重阳节与我们一起去附近的养老院。 ◎亮点出彩篇中间 4.We are having/planning...on...(date) and we feel it would be a great idea if you can join us. 我们定于……(日期)……(活动),如果你能来参加就太好了。 5.The following are some details about.../Here are some details about.../Some details about...are as follows. ……的细节如下。 6.To begin with, we will... Besides, there will be a number of/various activities such as...which will... 首先,我们将……。此外,将会有许多活动,例如…… 这将…… ◎韵味无穷结尾句 7.I do hope you will accept our/my invitation if it is convenient to you. 我真心希望你方便的话能接受我们/我的邀请。 8.We/I would appreciate it if you could confirm your participation at your early/earliest convenience. 如果你能尽早在你方便时确认参加,我们/我将不胜感激。 [佳作背诵] (2019·全国卷Ⅲ)假定你是李华, 你校将举办音乐节。请写封邮件邀请你的英国朋友Allen参加,内容包括: 1.时间; 2.活动安排; 3.欢迎他表演节目。 注意: 1.词数100左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 Dear Allen, I'm Li Hua, your Chinese friend. I'm glad to tell you that a Chinese classical music concert will be held in the music hall of our school on November 8th. According to the concert poster, many music masterpieces will be played by a famous band. Knowing that you are fond of classical music, I'd like to invite you to join me and welcome you to show your performance. I'm sure it is a good chance to perform your favorite music. If it is convenient for you, I'll meet you at the entrance of the music hall at 7: 00 that evening. Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua (二)建议信 [谋篇布局] [亮点句式] ◎夺人眼球开头句 1.Since/Now that you are worried about the cultural differences, I'm writing to/I'd like to offer some suggestions about how to... 因为你担心文化差异,我写信/我想就如何……提些建议。 2.I am sorry to learn/know that you are now having trouble/difficulty communicating with others, and you may often feel lonely. 得知你在与他人交流方面有些困难,你也可能经常感到孤独,我很难过。 ◎亮点出彩篇中间 3.In addition, it would be a good idea/a wise choice if you read a book or listen to music.By doing this, you will calm yourself down. 另外,如果你看书或听音乐将会是个不错的主意/明智的选择。通过这样做,会使你自己平静下来。 4.I'd like to suggest/advise that you should make use of time to master the present subjects. 我建议你利用时间掌握现在的课程。 5.Only in this way will you deepen your understanding of Chinese and adapt to the life here more easily. 只有用这种方式,你才能加深对汉语的理解并更容易适应这里的生活。 6.As to how to get along well with your classmates, you should remember that kindness is very important. 至于如何与同学相处,记住,友善最重要。 ◎韵味无穷结尾句 7.I hope you will find these ideas useful/practical/helpful. 我希望你会发现这些办法有用/实用/有帮助。 8.I am convinced that with your effort, you can manage to get over/overcome these difficulties. 我相信,有了你的努力,你会成功克服这些困难的。 [佳作背诵] (2017·北京卷)你的英国朋友Jim所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅行,有两条线路可以选择:“长江之行”或者“泰山之旅”。Jim来信希望你能给些建议。请你给他回信,内容包括: 1.你建议的线路; 2.你的理由; 3.你的祝愿。 注意: 1.词数不少于50; 2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【参考范文】 Dear Jim, I'm happy to receive your letter and know you're coming to China. Of the two trips to the Yangtze River and Mount Tai, both are highly recommended. Personally, I prefer the tour along the Yangtze River, the longest river and one of the mother rivers of Chinese civilization. You can learn a lot about the history of China and Chinese people. Moreover, the scenery along the river is amazing, with many wellknown sightseeing spots. That's why I think the trip along the Yangtze River is a better choice. Hope you'll have a good time in China. Yours, Li Hua [语篇演练] A 假定你是李华,正在你班学习汉语的英国留学生Bill对中国的建筑很感兴趣,周末你想带他到苏州园林游玩。请你给Bill写一封电子邮件,邀请他一同前往。 注意: 1.词数80左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 3.开头语和结束语已写好,不计入总词数。 Dear Bill, How are you doing?_______________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【参考范文】 Dear Bill, How are you doing? I'm writing to invite you to visit Suzhou Gardens with me. As the weather is excellent this weekend, I will pay a visit to Suzhou Gardens, a beautiful tourist attraction. As far as I know, you are deeply interested in Chinese history and culture, especially Chinese buildings of fancy designs. In Suzhou Gardens, I'm convinced that you are sure to be attracted by varieties of buildings. If free, would it be possible for you to meet me at the railway station at 6 a.m. on Saturday morning? We will go there by train and return on Sunday afternoon. I would be delighted if you could be with me. Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua B 假定你是李华,你的美国朋友Jamie来信说他对中国传统文学非常感兴趣,但在阅读时遇到了困难,比如很多汉字不认识,读不懂文章的意思等,希望得到你的帮助。请你给他回信,内容包括: 1.表示理解并给予安慰; 2.提出建议。 注意: 1.词数80左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3.开头语和结束语已写好,不计入总词数。 参考词汇:中国传统文学traditional Chinese literature;汉字Chinese character Dear Jamie, _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua 【参考范文】 Dear Jamie, I am more than glad to know that you are interested in the traditional Chinese literature. It's never easy to learn Chinese characters and essays. Even native Chinese speakers may find it hard to learn them well, so you don't have to feel upset. Here are some useful tips. First, turn to the Internet for help when you have a problem, where you can learn how to read and write the characters. Second, you can learn from Chinese people around and I'm always here to help. But the most important is to keep on learning and practicing. You are sure to make progress! Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua 四、介绍信和祝贺信 (一)介绍信 [谋篇布局] [亮点句式] ◎夺人眼球开头句 1.Delighted to know you show great interest in...(某文化习俗/活动), I am writing to inform you of some relevant details. 很高兴得知你对……兴趣浓厚,我写信告诉你相关细节。 2.Having heard that you are interested in ... I would like to introduce something about it. 得知你对……感兴趣,我想介绍一些相关情况。 3.As for your last letter asking about..., I'm delighted to tell you something in detail. 对于你在上封信中问及的……,我很高兴地告诉你一些详细的情况。 ◎亮点出彩篇中间 4.The dumpling is a traditional food in China, which has a long history. 饺子是中国的传统食物,历史悠久。 5.It is the activity that adds to our understanding of the history and development of our city. 就是这次活动使我们更好地了解我市的历史和发展。 6.Not only did it get us close to nature and give us relaxation from heavy school work, but also it promoted the friendship among us. 它不仅让我们亲近大自然,从繁重的学习中得到放松,而且也促进了我们之间的友谊。 ◎韵味无穷结尾句 7.I sincerely hope all my introductions will be of help. 真诚地希望我的介绍能对你有所帮助。 8.Do came to China and experience the traditions and customs in person. 务必来中国亲自体验这些传统风俗。 [佳作背诵] (2018·全国卷Ⅰ)假定你是李华,你的新西兰朋友Terry将去中国朋友家做客,发邮件向你询问有关习俗。请你回复邮件,内容包括: 1.到达时间; 2.合适的礼物; 3.餐桌礼仪。 注意: 1.词数100左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 Dear Terry, Nice to hear from you.I learn that you're coming to visit one of your Chinese friends.I'm now writing to tell you some relevant details. Generally speaking,your arrival shouldn't be later than the fixed time.A few minutes earlier is the best.Besides,you'd better bring some little gifts,such as a special food or drink from your country.Speaking of table manners,keep your voice low and pleasant during the meal.The host will like it if you have learned to use chopsticks. I hope these suggestions would be helpful to you.I'm sure you will have a great time. Yours, Li Hua (二)祝贺信 [谋篇布局] [亮点句式] ◎夺人眼球开头句 1.I am so pleased/delighted/happy/excited to hear/learn/know that you have won first prize in the contest, so I'm writing to express/convey my congratulations. 得知你在比赛中获得一等奖我真的非常高兴/兴奋,因此我写信祝贺。 2.I'd like to congratulate you on your success/achievements in organizing the activity in your school. 我写信祝贺你成功地在你校组织了这次活动。 ◎亮点出彩篇中间 3.A person of your ability and intelligence is certain to be a success/successful. 像你这样有能力和智慧的人一定会成功。 4.It comes no surprise to me because I know how talented you are and how hard you have worked to reach the goal. 我一点也不吃惊,因为我知道你的天赋和为实现目标而付出的努力。 5.In my view/As far as I am concerned, it is your talent and efforts that contributed/leads to your brilliant achievement. 依我看,是你的天赋和努力使你取得了巨大的成就。 6.I take pride in you as your efforts/hard work have finally paid off. 我为你骄傲,因为你的努力最终获得了回报。 ◎韵味无穷结尾句 7.Please accept our sincere congratulations and best wishes for all the good future in the world. 谨向你表示祝贺和最好的祝福。 8.Congratulations to you again and I am looking forward to your further achievements. 再次表示祝贺,我盼望着你取得更大的成就。 [佳作背诵] 假定你是李华,你刚获悉你的英国朋友Lucy在当地的一所孔子学院(Confucius Institute)举办的中文诗词(poetry)比赛中荣获一等奖。请你用英语给她写一封电子邮件表示祝贺,并希望她有机会来中国深造。 注意:1.词数80左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 Dear Lucy, I'm pleased to learn you've just won first prize in the Chinese poetry competition held in your institute. I'm writing to offer my sincere congratulations to you. It came as no surprise to me because I know you love Chinese culture, especially Chinese poetry, and you've been studying in a local Confucius Institute for years. I'm so proud to see all your efforts have paid off. I hope you can have a chance to come to China for further study in the near future and have a better understanding of my country. Wish you greater progress in the study of Chinese poetry. Yours, Li Hua [语篇演练] A 假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Jack来信询问中国新农村建设的发展状况。请你根据下列要点并结合美丽乡村建设写一封回信介绍中国农村的一些新变化。内容包括: 1.居住环境方面的改善; 2.文化生活水平的提高; 3.邀请他来参观体验。 注意: 1.词数80左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 参考词汇:新农村建设Rural Reconstruction Dear Jack, I'm delighted that you are interested in the changes of our countryside. _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ I sincerely hope you will pay a visit soon. Yours, Li Hua 【参考范文】 Dear Jack, I'm delighted that you are interested in the changes of our countryside. With the promotion of the policy, Rural Reconstruction, great changes have taken place in the countryside. Old houses have been replaced with new and tall ones full of good facilities, and the roads become wider and wider with various trees and flowers on both sides. Moreover, the local government has made great efforts to control the environment pollution. Around us are fresher air, clearer sky and cleaner water. What's more, it is convenient for the villagers to travel around because many families have bought their own cars. In their spare time, they can enjoy different kinds of activities to relax themselves such as sports, singing, dancing and reading. I sincerely hope you will pay a visit soon. Yours, Li Hua B 假定你是李华,你的好友Peter在你校上周举办的“美丽校园”摄影比赛中获奖了。请根据以下要点给他写一封邮件: 1.表示祝贺; 2.你对获奖作品的看法; 3.希望与他分享摄影经验。 注意: 1.词数80左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 Dear Peter, Congratulations on your winning the prize in the photo taking competition with the title of Charming School which was held last week. Your work stands out in the competition, which is quite representative of all works and close to the theme reflecting our school culture. Besides, skills of taking photos are also in the prior position. In a word, you've done well in all the required aspects. So you've got the prize and I feel proud of you. Congratulations to you again from the bottom of my heart! I hope you can share your skills of taking pictures with me. Yours, Li Hua查看更多