通用版2021高考英语一轮复习考点二十九图表类练习含解析

通用版2021高考英语一轮复习考点二十九图表类练习含解析

专题五/考点二十九　图表类 考点二十九　图表类 Writing 1‎ 限时20分钟 假如你校最近就“家长应该如何对待孩子”的问题进行了调查，结果如下。请根据图表1中提供的信息描述调查结果，并针对图表2中的一个数据所反映的情况表达你的看法。‎ ‎　‎ ‎　‎ ‎　‎ ‎　‎ ‎【写作指导】　这是一篇典型的图表类作文。要求准确地表述调查结果并表达自己的看法。在写作时应注意：(1)正确使用分数的表达法；(2)时态应以一般现在时为主；(3)分层次叙述，分为喜欢和不喜欢两个方面；(4)句式要复杂多样，可使用各类从句来表达。‎ ‎[精彩范文]‎ Recently our school has conducted a survey among the students about how parents should treat their children.‎ According to Chart 1, three kinds of behavior from parents are considered the most welcome by the students. 33.5% of the students feel happy that their parents trust them, laying a solid foundation for family communication. 31.7% are content to be in the equal position with their parents when they are talking with each other. What's more, 22.7% feel happy to receive constant praise or encouragement from their parents.‎ As is shown in Chart 2, 32% of the students think their parents expect too much of them, especially in their studies, putting great pressure on them. Although all parents love their children and give the best to them, they put too much pressure on their children. Some students think they will disappoint their parents if they are not admitted into a top school or university.‎ I think parents should have practical expectations of their children. This way,‎ - 25 -‎ ‎ the children will feel more confident about themselves and really make a difference in the future.‎ Writing 2‎ 限时20分钟 假定你是李华，你美国的笔友Tom来信说他要一份有关中国留学生回国情况的调查报告，向你询问有关情况。请你根据下面图表的内容给他写封回信，说明相关情况，并分析其原因。‎ 注意：1.词数100左右；‎ ‎2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；‎ ‎3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。‎ 参考词汇：人才回流reversal of the brain drain；海归人员returnee Dear Tom，‎ How are you doing? In your last letter, you asked me about the reversal of the brain drain in China, 　‎ ‎　‎ ‎　‎ ‎　‎ Best wishes!‎ Yours，‎ Li Hua ‎【写作指导】　本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封回信。首先，根据提示可知，本文是一篇书信：你美国的笔友Tom来信说他要一个有关中国留学生回国情况的调查报告，向你询问有关情况。请你根据图表的内容给他写封回信，说明相关情况，并分析其原因。其次，根据写作要求确定关键词，如relevant information, witness a boom等。另外，根据图表提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态语态问题。最后，连句成文，注意使用恰当的连接词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。‎ ‎[精彩范文]‎ Dear_Tom，‎ How_are_you_doing?_In_your_last_letter,_you_asked_me_about_the_reversal_of_the_brain_drain_in_China,_so I'm writing to introduce some relevant information to you.‎ There has been an increasing number of returnees since 2014. In 2014 alone, about 6.93 million returnees returned to China. Between 2015 and 2016, there were about - 25 -‎ ‎ 24.33 million coming back home. On top of that, the year 2017 witnessed a boom with a total of 18.62 million returnees.‎ This trend results from three reasons. Firstly, our government values returnees and has carried out a series of preferential policies, offering them opportunities to achieve success in their career. Secondly, they can enjoy ideal living and working conditions here in China. Most importantly, their roots are here in China.‎ I hope my introduction above can be of some help to your survey.‎ Best_wishes!‎ Yours，‎ Li_Hua Writing 3‎ 限时20分钟 ‎2022年北京—张家口冬奥会将在北京和张家口举行，为了确保冬奥会圆满成功，组委会发起了志愿者招募活动。假如你是北京某中学学生李华，希望能成为一名志愿者。请按要求用英文给组委会写一封申请信，内容如下：‎ 基本情况 年龄、性别、学历 个人条件 英语好、爱好体育、善于交往、乐于助人、熟悉本地情况 我的承诺 提供最佳服务 注意：1.词数100左右；‎ ‎2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；‎ ‎3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。‎ Dear Sir/Madam，‎ My name is Li Hua.　‎ ‎　‎ ‎　‎ ‎　‎ ‎　‎ Yours faithfully，‎ Li Hua ‎【写作指导】　本文是一篇申请信，你是北京某中学学生李华，希望能成为一名志愿者。请按要求用英文给组委会写一封申请信。认真阅读提示，列出要点，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来。写作时注意时态、语态的合理运用，主次分明，详略得当，语言力求准确、简洁。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ ‎[精彩范文]‎ Dear_Sir/Madam，‎ My_name_is_Li_Hua. I would like to work as a volunteer for the 2022 Beijing－Zhangjiakou Winter Olympic Games. I'm a girl of eighteen years old from a high school ‎ - 25 -‎ in Beijing, where the Games will be held. My spoken English is good and I can communicate with foreigners fluently. What's more, I have other virtues—I'm especially fond of sports, familiar with Beijing, good at communication and always glad to help others. I am willing to provide the best service for every athlete in the Winter Olympic Games. Therefore, I think I'm qualified for a volunteer.‎ I would appreciate it if you could offer me the chance to be a volunteer.‎ Yours_faithfully，‎ Li_Hua Writing 4‎ 限时22分钟 请认真阅读下面的文字和图表，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。‎ Beijing‎, April 12, 2016 (Xinhua)—Chinese President Xi Jinping has urged the government to strike a balance between the conservation of cultural relics and economic development.‎ Meanwhile, President Xi stressed the utilization (利用) of cultural relics, saying they are a valuable legacy from our ancestors and carry with them history and culture. It's time to “bring cultural relics back to life”， which will greatly benefit future generations.‎ Beijing‎, January 02, 2018 (China Daily)—National Treasures, a TV show about 27 cultural relics from nine Chinese museums—is popular.‎ People are invited to tell the “previous and present life stories” of the relics and their own stories in relation to the relics.‎ The producer said, “Our original purpose is just to bring life to the relics and encourage more people to go to the museums and take a look at the country's most precious and shining treasures.” A show like this boosts our cultural selfconfidence and fuels pride in our heritage.‎ ‎2014～2017全国博物馆数量 ‎【写作内容】‎ ‎1．用约30个单词概述文字和图表的主要内容；‎ ‎2．用约120个单词阐述你的观点，内容包括：‎ ‎(1)“让文物活起来”的意义(至少两点)；‎ ‎(2)结合自身实际，谈谈你如何让文物活起来。‎ - 25 -‎ ‎【写作要求】‎ ‎1．写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；‎ ‎2．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；‎ ‎3．不必写标题。‎ ‎【评分标准】‎ 内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。‎ ‎　‎ ‎　‎ ‎　‎ ‎　‎ ‎　‎ ‎　‎ ‎【写作指导】　文章要求根据文字说明和2014～2017全国博物馆数量图表，用约30个单词概述文字和图表的主要内容。然后再用约120个单词阐述你的观点，内容包括：(1)“让文物活起来”的意义(至少两点)；(2)结合自身实际，谈谈你如何让文物活起来。‎ ‎[精彩范文]‎ President Xi demanded the government preserve cultural relics and “bring them back to life”， stressing their social and cultural functions. Accordingly, an increasing number of museums have been established and high quality relevant programs have been produced.‎ Obviously, bringing cultural relics back to life is of critical significance to the current society. Each relic is a unique cultural expression. By fully understanding their history and stories behind, we can acquire our ancestors' wisdom, which we can apply to our daily life. Furthermore, relics coming alive will definitely help strengthen our cultural confidence and pride.‎ As a teenager, I intend to do my best to make cultural relics alive. Firstly, I will visit museums more often and dig into the stories behind each exhibit. Additionally, I will work as a cultural ambassador, serving as a volunteer guide in museums or shooting videos of the exhibits introducing their glorious past to the public.‎ In short, if everyone does his or her bit, we will see a rosy future for our cultural treasures. ‎ Writing 5‎ 限时22分钟 网络游戏使许多中学生沉溺其中，这种现象引发了人们不同的看法。请你按照下面图表中的内容写一篇英文短文。‎ - 25 -‎ 注意：1.词数120左右；‎ ‎2.内容充实，结构完整，行文连贯。‎ ‎　‎ ‎　‎ ‎　‎ ‎　‎ ‎【写作指导】　本文属于半开放性议论文，要求依据图表信息谈谈不同人群对网络游戏的看法，并陈述自己的观点和理由。‎ ‎1．首先要仔细读图并审题，确定文章要点：(1)好多中学生认为网络游戏给他们带来了乐趣；(2)家长认为长时间沉迷网络既浪费时间，又损害健康；(3)教师认为有的学生因此分散了精力，甚至逃学；(4)专家认为游戏不利于学生形成正确的价值观；(5)你的看法和理由。‎ ‎2．确定文章要使用的词汇和句型，并灵活运用复杂句式。‎ ‎3．使用正确的时态和语态：本文根据现象阐述看法，时态以一般现在时为主。‎ ‎4．恰当使用过渡词，使文章语意连贯，层次分明。‎ ‎5．合理布局：本文可分为三部分：首段根据文字提示进行客观描述，然后引出要点(1)；第二段陈述要点(2)(3)(4)；第三段提出自己的看法和理由。‎ ‎[精彩范文]‎ As you know, online games are popular with students. Some even play games on their cell phones in the classroom, which they think bring them much pleasure.‎ However, others don't think so. Parents believe that much time has been wasted playing games and it does great harm to their children's health. Besides, teachers find out some children addicted to these games can't devote themselves to their study and even truant. Meanwhile, some experts are afraid that playing online games will be unfavourable for the personality development of students and the formation of values.‎ Personally speaking, I think games can help us relax. But the most important thing is that we should concentrate on our study.‎ Writing 6‎ 限时20分钟 最近，你班学生就暑假上辅导班的问题进行了讨论。结果如下：‎ 赞成52%‎ 培养学习兴趣，增长知识，提高成绩 反对48%‎ 增加学习负担，减少娱乐和放松的时间 - 25 -‎ 请你根据以上表格的内容，写一篇100词左右的英语短文，反映讨论结果，并谈谈你对上暑假辅导班的看法。‎ 注意：开头已经为你写好，不计入总词数。‎ 参考词汇：辅导班auxiliary classes Recently our class have had a discussion about whether the students should attend auxiliary classes during the summer vacation.‎ ‎　‎ ‎　‎ ‎　‎ ‎　‎ ‎　‎ ‎【写作指导】　本篇书面表达要求根据图表内容写英语短文，反映相关问题。在叙述时要点必须全面，不能遗漏，要使用过渡性词语和连接词，以使文章更加通顺；另外，句式要尽量多样化，避免单一句式。‎ ‎[精彩范文]‎ Recently_our_class_have_had_a_discussion_about_whether_the_students_should_attend_auxiliary_classes_during_the_summer_vacation.‎ ‎52% of the students agree to it because they can follow their interests and learn more about their favorite subjects. Besides, they gain more knowledge by receiving instructions from their tutors so that they are able to improve their academic performance.‎ However, 48% of the students are strongly against it. They think it places heavier learning burdens on students, which in turn reduces their time to have fun and relax.‎ In my opinion, the summer vacation is a good time for us to rest and to do what we like. You can make your own decision based on your interests.‎ Writing 7‎ 限时22分钟 生活中冲突时有发生。假设你班同学苏华和李江打篮球时发生争执，导致关系紧张。请你结合此事，并根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文，向学校英文报“Happy Teens”专栏投稿。‎ 简要描述事情的经过 打篮球、碰撞、争执，等等 分析发生冲突的原因 ‎1.遇事不够冷静 ‎2.……‎ 谈谈避免冲突的做法 ‎(根据自己的经历或感想，提出至少两种做法)‎ 注意：1.对所有要点逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译；‎ ‎2．词数150左右。开头已经写好，不计入总词数。‎ Conflicts with others are common in everyday life.　‎ ‎　‎ ‎　‎ - 25 -‎ ‎　‎ ‎　‎ ‎【写作指导】　1.本文属于文字引导类题型。应该注意其中时态的变化。描述事情的经过和分析发生冲突的原因应该采用一般过去时，避免冲突的做法可用一般现在时或者一般将来时。‎ ‎2．内容要点：(1)描述事情的经过。打篮球、碰撞、争执，等等。建议编写一个情节连贯的小故事，注意时间、地点、人物、起因、经过和结果。‎ ‎(2)分析发生冲突的原因。遇事不够冷静；缺乏相互之间的交流；过于关注球赛的胜负等。‎ ‎(3)避免冲突的做法。根据自己的经历或感想，提出至少两点如何避免冲突的建议，如：待人友善，学会宽容，充分交流，避免以自我为中心等。‎ ‎[精彩范文]‎ Conflicts_with_others_are_common_in_everyday_life. During the basketball game yesterday afternoon, Su Hua and Li Jiang bumped into each other, trying to catch the ball. Then they started shouting and yelling, and it turned into a horrible quarrel.‎ To be honest, it was Su's fault, but Li was also to blame—they were not calm enough and both said some really mean things. They cared too much about winning and losing. As a matter of fact, blocking, pushing and bumping are just part of a tough game.‎ To avoid such conflicts, we should be kind to one another, which is essential to enjoying a harmonious life. It is also a virtue to forgive and forget, especially in such a competitive and stressful society. Instead of blaming each other, we should communicate more and put ourselves in others' shoes.‎ Don't be selfcentered. Try to be considerate. We must learn to handle conflicts calmly and wisely.‎ Writing 8‎ 限时20分钟 音乐丰富了人们的生活，不同的人喜欢不同风格的音乐。假如你最近对班上的同学进行了主题为“影响你选择音乐的因素”的调查，其结果如图表所示。请用英语为班级黑板报写一篇短文。‎ 要求：1.简要说明调查结果；‎ ‎2．指出影响你选择的因素是哪一个，并加以说明。‎ 注意：1.词数100左右；‎ - 25 -‎ ‎2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；‎ ‎3．文章的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。‎ Recently I have carried out a survey among the students in our class. The survey was conducted to find out what influences the music we listen to.‎ ‎　‎ ‎　‎ ‎　‎ ‎　‎ ‎　‎ ‎【写作指导】　本篇写作是典型的图表类作文。审题时，要注意文章内容表达上的层次和结构。如本题先写调查的内容，后写调查对象和人数，即“影响因素和比例”，这样层次感就有了。最后再给出作者自己的观点。‎ 特别要明确要点：在Friends, Radio, TV/Film, Parents等四个因素中，最具影响力的因素是哪一个。注意图表上百分率的正确表达；思路应清晰、简洁和准确。‎ ‎[精彩范文]‎ Recently_I_have_carried_out_a_survey_among_the_students_in_our_class._The_survey_was_conducted_to_find_out_what_influences_the_music_we_listen_to.‎ According to the survey, TV and films have the strongest effect on our choice of music, 50 percent of the students sharing the opinion. 30 percent of the students say they are influenced by friends when deciding what music to listen to. Radio comes third, with 20 percent of the students choosing it. Parents seem to have very little influence. Only 10 percent of the students say they listen to what their parents recommend.‎ As far as I am concerned, what influences me most is TV and films. The reason is that the music on TV or in the films usually goes with beautiful pictures, or expresses certain feelings of my favorite heroes. Good TV or film music, as is often the case, can accompany a person's entire life.‎ Writing 9‎ 限时20分钟 假设你是李华，今年将要参加高考。你想在大学里学习外语专业，但是你的老师和父母都对你的选择提出了不同看法，对此你很苦恼。请你根据下表提示，用英语给你的英国笔友David发一封邮件，谈谈你在专业选择上所面临的问题。‎ 建议 ‎ 专业 ‎ 理由 父母的建议 ‎ 金融 ‎ 为将来从商做准备 老师的建议 ‎ 法律 ‎ 就业前景好 你的想法 ‎ 外语 ‎ 充分发挥自己的语言天赋 注意：1.词数100左右；‎ ‎2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；‎ - 25 -‎ ‎3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。‎ Dear David，‎ I am at a loss nowadays.　‎ ‎　‎ ‎　‎ ‎　‎ ‎　‎ I am looking forward to your advice.‎ Yours，‎ Li Hua ‎【写作指导】　本文要求写一封邮件，首先，要看清要求：(1)自己想学外语专业；(2)老师和父母有不同的建议；(3)自己的看法。要增加相应的细节以使内容丰富，行文连贯；时态应使用一般现在时和一般将来时。‎ ‎[精彩范文]‎ Dear_David，‎ I_am_at_a_loss_nowadays. My teacher and parents have different opinions about choosing my major in college. My parents think I should major in finance because they feel that it will prepare me for a career in the world of business. However, my teacher says I should choose law, who thinks that our society is in great need of skilled workers and experts in law and I will find a good job after graduation. Despite their opinions, I want to learn a foreign language because language is what I am interested in and good at. I think it is advisable to make full use of my talent for language. What should I do?‎ ‎_I_am_looking_forward_to_your_advice.‎ Yours，‎ Li_Hua Writing 10‎ 限时20分钟 假定你是李华，你的澳大利亚笔友Nancy要来你所在的城市沈阳学习，在上一封邮件中她请你帮她在学校附近租一套房子。下面是你找到的适合她的出租房信息。请给她回复邮件，把相关信息告诉她。‎ 面积 ‎50平方米 位置 位于青年大街，3楼，距学校10分钟车程 特征 一室一厅，独立厨房和卫生间；整洁，明亮；周围环境好 租金 按日算，每天60元；按月算，每月1,500元 注意：1.包括所有要点；‎ ‎2．词数100左右；‎ - 25 -‎ ‎3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。‎ Dear Nancy，‎ ‎　‎ ‎　‎ ‎　‎ ‎　‎ Looking forward to meeting you soon.‎ Yours，‎ Li Hua ‎【写作指导】　本文要求根据图表内容给笔友回信。在时态上应以一般现在时为主。要用过渡性词语和连接词把要点连接起来，句式要多样化，切忌自始至终只用一种句型。此外要注意含有数字的表达方式，准确地表达出租房信息。‎ ‎[精彩范文]‎ Dear_Nancy，‎ After learning that you're going to study in my hometown, I'm very happy and have been looking for an apartment for you as you hoped. Now, I've found one that may satisfy you. It is an apartment with an area of 50 square meters, which has one living room, one bedroom, one separated kitchen and one bathroom. It is on the second floor, which guarantees enough sunlight during the day. Located on the Youth Street and surrounded by green trees and beautiful flowers, it is only 10 minutes' bus ride from your school. What interests me most is the clean and nice surroundings. You can rent it by the day at 60 yuan or by the month with the cost of 1,500 yuan per month. I'm sure you will like it when you see it for yourself.‎ Looking_forward_to_meeting_you_soon.‎ Yours，‎ Li_Hua 书面表达策略探究(三)‎ 图表/图画类作文主要以图画或图表为载体，附带少量文字提示或说明，要求考生通过对图画和图表内容的理解，发挥个人的想象，根据所提供的信息写一篇短文，以描述某一事物或事情，或揭示某个道理、说明某个问题。另外，考生还需要阐述自己的观点。需要说明的是，观点的提炼最为重要，考生阐述的观点应建立在个人视角与社会视角相结合的基础上，这样才能贴近考题的立意，达到命题者的要求。‎ 写作指导：‎ ‎①仔细审题，确定体裁、时态、人称 要审清题意，看懂图画或图表所表达的意思，防止因对图画或图表的错误理解而出现跑题的情况。有些图画或图表上附有提示，注意仔细参阅。此外，这类文章一般以记叙文、说明文和议论文为主。在人称方面，如果以日记等形式来写，一般采用第一人称；如果是以讲故事的形式来写，则一般采用第三人称。‎ - 25 -‎ ‎②分析要点，写出关键词 分析要点时，要注意进行合理、适度的联想，以便使上下文能更好地连贯起来。‎ ‎③确定句型，组词成句 在构思成句的过程中，要注意虚实结合、详略得当。比如图画或图表中的时间、数字或言论需写清楚，而有些过程或原因则可适当简略。‎ ‎④合理安排，串句成文 ‎⑤认真检查，注意修改 此外，看图议论文通常采用三段式的结构，即第一段描述图画内容以及图画所反映的问题；第二段分析问题或现象产生的原因；第三段阐述自己的观点，谈一下解决问题的措施。‎ 常用句式：‎ As is described in the picture above ... ‎ This cartoon tells/warns us that ... ‎ The purpose of the picture is to ... ‎ This picture brings ... back to me.‎ The picture reminds me of ... ‎ The cartoon vividly illustrates ... ‎ The purpose of the drawing is to show us that ... ‎ Such an image draws our attention to the fact that ... ‎ As can be seen from the drawing ... ‎ Looking at the picture, I can't help thinking of the phenomenon of ..., which is becoming more and more serious.‎ The bar chart illustrates that ... ‎ The data/statistics/figures lead us to the conclusion that ... ‎ Writing 1‎ 限时22分钟 ‎(2019·福建省厦门市高三年级第一次质量检查)假定你是李华，你校英国交流生Jacob有意参加汉语水平口语考试，向你咨询有关信息。请你通过邮件向他推荐以下网站，并简要介绍网站上的相关信息，如考试方式、考试时间等。‎ 注意：1.词数100左右；‎ ‎2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ 参考词汇：纸笔考试 paperbased test；网络考试 Internetbased test ‎　‎ - 25 -‎ ‎　‎ ‎　‎ ‎　‎ ‎【写作指导】　本文要求写一封电子邮件，向国际交流生推荐汉语水平口语考试网站以及网站上的主要信息。写作时，首先要提取出写作要点：网站介绍，考试方式，考试时间，同时还要根据图片上的信息进行细节上的补充，以使文章内容丰富。最后注意语言简练，用词准确。‎ ‎[精彩范文]‎ Dear Jacob，‎ Knowing that you intend to assess your spoken Chinese, I'm writing to recommend you a website and I hope it can be of some help.‎ www.chinesetest.cn is a website for HSK—an official test for oral Chinese. It offers testrelated information including date, registration and regulation. You can decide on the test date based on it. To take the test, you need to register both paperbased and Internetbased tests beforehand. Do remember not to miss the deadline, for they are different. ‎ To get a good result, keep on practicing. It'll help develop fluency of your Chinese. If you need any help, I'd love to provide further support. Wish you success!‎ Yours, ‎ Li Hua Writing 2‎ 限时22分钟 ‎(2019·湖北名校冲刺二模)假如你是某中学学生李华。最近，你班同学正在参加21世纪英文报“大家谈”栏目的一个讨论。本次话题为：“父母有没有必要陪读？” 请你根据下表所列情况给报社写一封信，客观地介绍讨论的情况，并表达自己的观点。‎ ‎70%的同学认为 ‎30%的同学认为 你的观点 父母不应该陪读； ‎ ‎1．会让我们养成依赖的习惯，不利于我们将来自控能力的培养；‎ ‎2．影响了父母的工作、学习和休息。‎ 父母应该陪读； ‎ ‎1．能使我们腾出更多的时间专心学习；‎ ‎2．能帮助我们确立学习目标，督促我们完成学习任务。 ‎ ‎……‎ 注意：1.信的开头和结尾已经为你写好，不计入总词数；‎ ‎2．词数120～140左右。‎ 参考词汇：陪读accompany sb. studying at school；督促urge Dear editor，‎ I'm writing to tell you about the discussion we have recently had about whether our parents should accompany us studying at school. 　‎ ‎　‎ - 25 -‎ ‎　‎ ‎　‎ Yours truly，‎ Li Hua ‎【写作指导】　本文是一篇表格式的提纲作文，要求准确地表述讨论结果并表达自己的看法。在写作时应注意：(1)时态应以一般现在时为主；(2)分层次叙述，两方观点表述清楚并表达自己观点；(3)注意写作过程中要使用较高级的短语和句型，注意行文的连贯和逻辑性。‎ ‎[精彩范文]‎ Dear_editor，‎ I'm_writing_to_tell_you_about_the_discussion_we_have_recently_had_about_whether_our_parents_should_accompany_us_studying_at_school. We do have different opinions on this matter.‎ ‎70% of us think our parents should not accompany us studying at school. First of all, it makes us fall into the habit of dependence, so that we won't form the good habit of studying. What's more, it is harmful for us to form the habit of controlling ourselves. At the same time, accompanying us studying at school affects our parents' work, studies and rest.‎ However, about 30% of my classmates think it necessary for our parents to accompany us studying at school. Firstly, accompanying us studying at school can let us have more time to spare for our studies. Secondly, our parents can help us set up our aim, urge us to finish our task, encourage us to overcome difficulties and get us into the good habit of studying.‎ As far as I am concerned, it is unnecessary for parents to keep their children company in school. On one hand, living alone is a basic skill everyone should master. On the other hand, it can create room for children's growth and ensure their overall development.‎ Yours_truly，‎ Li_Hua Writing 3‎ 限时20分钟 ‎(2019·宁夏银川一中第一次模拟考试)近期，某校组织高三学生进行了一场讨论。主题是：高三年级要不要集中进行晚自习。假如你是李华，请你根据下图提供的信息，写一篇英语短文，客观地介绍一下讨论的情况，注意要涵盖所有要点。‎ - 25 -‎ 注意：1.词数不少于100(开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数)；‎ ‎2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ 参考词汇：晚自习evening selfstudy Recently there was a heated discussion among Senior 3 students in our school. ‎ ‎　‎ ‎　‎ ‎　‎ ‎　‎ Yours sincerely，‎ Li Hua ‎【写作指导】　本篇写作是叙述一项讨论结果。本文可分为两段来写，第一段引入话题，总述某项讨论或调查的情况；第二段分层叙述不同方的结果和原因；本题没有要求发表个人看法。在此类写作中，时态通常以一般现在时为主，同时还要注意使用连接词和过渡词以使文章连贯，不要只是逐条罗列各项内容。‎ ‎[精彩范文]‎ Recently_there_was_a_heated_discussion_among_Senior_3_students_in_our_school. The students were questioned whether they were willing to have the evening selfstudy at school or not. Here is the result according to the survey.‎ ‎60 percent of the students think it's a good idea to have the evening selfstudy at school. They think they can do better in their study with the help of the teachers. Also, they can concentrate on their lessons better in the classroom in company with their fellow classmates. There are 25 percent of the students who prefer to study at home. They suppose that they may get disturbed by others and there are possible dangers on their way home alone. At the same time, still 15 percent of the students don't have a clear answer to the question. They say they will go to school to have evening selfstudy if they are asked to, but they promise they can also do well at home.‎ Yours_sincerely，‎ Li_Hua Writing 4‎ 限时20分钟 - 25 -‎ ‎(2019·宁夏吴忠中学第二学期高三年级第一次模拟)假如你是高三学生李华，三月初你在网上买了一件夹克(jacket)，打算送给妈妈作为“三八妇女节”的礼物。但到货后发现了下列一些问题，请给该网站写一封投诉信，投诉信内容如下表：‎ 订购情况 实际情况 颜色 紫色 红色 尺寸 ‎170/‎‎88A ‎175/92B 其他问题 拉链(zipper)拉不上 要点：‎ ‎1．介绍购物情况； ‎ ‎2．反映存在问题； ‎ ‎3．提出解决方案。‎ 注意：1.书信内容包括以上要点；‎ ‎2．词数100左右(书信格式已给出，不计入总词数)；‎ ‎3．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ Dear Sir or Madam，‎ I'm writing to complain about the jacket which I bought from your website. This morning I received the jacket on time, but 　‎ ‎　‎ ‎　‎ ‎　‎ I am looking forward to your early reply.‎ Yours sincerely，‎ Li Hua ‎【写作指导】　本篇书面表达要求根据图表内容写一封投诉信。投诉信写作一般也是三段式结构：首段表明写作目的，告知商品有问题。第二段则写具体出现了哪些问题，自己原来的要求的和收到的分别是什么。根据图表可知，本文内一共有3个问题，颜色，尺寸，拉链。最后提出可能的解决方案，期待回复。写作时，注意主谓一致和时态语态问题；以及使用恰当的连接词进行句子之间的衔接和过渡。‎ ‎[精彩范文]‎ Dear_Sir_or_Madam，‎ I'm_writing_to_complain_about_the_jacket_which_I_bought_from_your_website._This_morning_I_received_the_jacket_on_time,_but I regret to say that there's something wrong with it.‎ Firstly, I'm pretty sure I asked you to send me a purple one. The moment the mail box arrived, I couldn't wait to open it only to find a red one. To make things worse, I need a size 170/‎88A while you sent me a size 175/92B, which is too large for my mother. I was really shocked to see the jacket was not the correct size and even the zipper doesn't work at all.‎ This was not the quality that I was expecting. My concern is whether you will refund my money or have the jacket replaced and I wonder who will pay the postage.‎ - 25 -‎ I_am_looking_forward_to_your_early_reply.‎ Yours_sincerely，‎ Li_Hua Writing 5‎ 限时20分钟 ‎(2020·百校联盟TOP20联考)假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Tom给你发了一封email，告知你他将来北京度假并学习中文，希望你帮忙推荐一所学校。请根据下表所提供的广告信息，给Tom回信。‎ LET'S TALK IN CHINESE Course: Chinese for beginners Time: February 19－March 19‎ Place: No.8 Lecture Hall Tuition (学费)：2,800 RMB For more information: www. Littlestar.edu Little Star‎ Language ‎School ‎ 注意：1.词数100左右；‎ ‎2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ ‎　‎ ‎　‎ ‎　‎ ‎　‎ ‎【写作指导】　本文是一篇书信写作。注意在写作时，应该针对原文广告中的内容进行展开和拓展。时态应以一般现在时为主。同时注意段落中各个信息点之间的层次关系，使用过渡词、连词等使文章行文流畅，层次分明。另外，适当使用各种高级句式和词汇，以便更好地完成写作任务。‎ ‎[精彩范文]‎ Dear Tom，‎ I'm very happy to learn that you will be coming to Beijing to enjoy your holiday and learn Chinese in the city.‎ It's my honor to recommend you a famous language school—Little Star Language School. According to the advertisement, the Chinese training course starts on Feb. 19th and lasts a month till Mar. 19th. It's intended for beginners who are learning Chinese just like you. What's more, the tuition of the course is reasonable. It costs only RMB 2,800 (less than $450). There are many famous language experts in the school, and the equipments is also excellent. So I believe that this school will be your best choice.‎ If you have any more questions, please let me know or just visit www.littlestar.edu.‎ Looking forward to meeting you in Beijing soon.‎ - 25 -‎ Yours，‎ Li Hua Writing 6‎ 限时20分钟 ‎(2019·上海虹口区第一学期期末质控)假设你是启光中学的学生李跃华，你在学校公众号(public platform)上看到一则志愿者招募启事。请根据该启事的要求，写一封邮件(邮件中不得提到自己的真实姓名和学校)，就启事中的三个活动任选其一，申请一份志愿者工作。‎ ‎【写作指导】　本文是根据一则志愿者招募启示写一封电子邮件，实质上是写一封申请信。首先选择一个志愿活动，这个可以根据自己对话题的熟悉度和难易度决定。另外，题干中只给出了写作要点，但没有具体的细节内容，因此需要合理地展开和扩充内容。注意在陈述自己选择的理由时要有理有力，确实能够感染收信人接受你做志愿者。这样也能打动阅卷老师，提高得分档次。‎ ‎[精彩范文]‎ Dear Organizing Committee of the activity，‎ I'm Li Yuehua, a student from Qiguang middle school. I saw a volunteer recruitment notice on the public platform of the school. I would like to be a volunteer of the activity of sharing learning experience. I am a 17yearold girl, 1.67 metres in height. I'm good at all the subjects. I'm enthusiastic and helpful. As a volunteer, I'll share my experience with other students and make a learning plan for them. What's more, I'll help them solve some difficult problems. We must get along well with each other.‎ As we all know, learning to turn our interest into action is important and demanding. Learning will be relatively easy and effective. Interest is vital to the success of one's career. Interest is of great importance for a successful career. If there is no interest in learning, there will be no motivation. Some people's interest is born, others are made, and sometimes they are triggered by chance.‎ My telephone number is 021－58831211. I hope you can contact me soon.‎ - 25 -‎ Yours sincerely，‎ Li Yuehua Writing 7‎ 限时20分钟 ‎(2019·河北蠡县中学月考) 假如你是李华，今年暑假去打工，参加了社会实践活动。请你根据下面的提示用英语写一篇短文“An Unforgettable Experience”，并发表在校刊上。‎ 工作地点 一家必胜客(Pizza hut)快餐店 工作时间 四个星期，每天7小时 工作情况 当保洁员(cleaner)，工作辛苦且枯燥， 每天要起早贪黑地工作，差点中途放弃 你的体会 遇到了一些没预料到的困难，体会到了劳动(labor)的意义……‎ 注意：1.必须使用第一人称；‎ ‎2．不要逐句翻译，可适当扩展，词数100～120左右；‎ ‎3．要求字迹工整，卷面整洁。‎ ‎　‎ ‎　‎ ‎　‎ ‎　‎ ‎【写作指导】　 这是一篇表格式的提纲作文，要求根据表格所给的内容要点，写一篇以 “An Unforgettable Experience” 为题的短文。在写作的时候，要注意文章的人称和时态。由于是描述个人的经历，因此文章要以第一人称为主。其次，时态要以一般过去时为主。除此以外，要注意写作过程中使用较高级的短语和句型，注意行文的连贯和逻辑性。‎ ‎[精彩范文]‎ An Unforgettable Experience During the summer holidays this year, I thought I should do something meaningful instead of staying at home, so I got a job at a Pizza fast food restaurant and worked there as a cleaner. I worked seven hours a day for four weeks. The job was hard and boring and seemed endless, which made me so tired that I nearly gave it up halfway. After all, I stuck to it with determination. Every day I started off for work early in the morning and got home late in the evening. Finally I finished the job before the new term began.‎ Although I met with a lot of difficulty in the work, it helped me understand better what labor means. I think it is really an unforgettable experience.‎ Writing 8‎ 限时20分钟 ‎(2017·江苏高考)请认真阅读下面有关我国电影票房收入(boxoffice income)的柱状图及相关文字，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。‎ - 25 -‎ Saturday Afternoon. In a Shopping Centre.‎ Li Jiang：Hi, Su Hua.Which movie shall we see?‎ Su Hua：Whatever. We've got so many choices, Kung Fu Yoga, Journey to the West ... Each sounds great!‎ Li Jiang：Yeah！And some movie stars are fantastic.‎ Su Hua: And the hightech! ... ‎ Li Jiang：Perfect！Let's get some food first.We only have 20 minutes left.‎ Su Hua：No hurry.The cinema is on the same floor.‎ One Day in 2016. At Home.‎ Son：Mum, shall we go and see a film tonight?‎ Mother：Why bother? We can stay at home and watch films online. It's convenient with our new and faster network.‎ Son：But it feels good in a cinema.‎ Mother：And the price ... We have to pay 50 yuan a ticket.‎ Son：Only 10 yuan more than last year.‎ Mother：But still we cannot get the money's worth.Some films are just boring ... ‎ ‎【写作内容】‎ ‎1．用约30个单词概述柱状图信息的主要内容；‎ ‎2．我国电影票房收入变化的原因有哪些，简要谈谈你的看法(上述对话仅供参考，原因不少于两点)；‎ ‎3．谈谈你对我国电影票房收入走向的看法，并简要说明理由。‎ ‎【写作要求】‎ ‎1．写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；‎ ‎2．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；‎ ‎3．不必写标题。‎ ‎【评分标准】‎ 内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。‎ ‎　‎ ‎　‎ ‎　‎ - 25 -‎ ‎　‎ ‎【写作指导】　本文为图表类作文，可采用三段式结构。第一段按题目要求用30个左右单词总结归纳柱状图所含信息：从2012年到2018年的票房收入呈持续增长态势，但从2016年开始，增长明显放缓；第二段陈述理由和原因，并结合所给两段对话提炼要点，也可补充自己的看法；第三段对未来票房趋势作出预测，要做到有理有据。注意时态的运用。‎ ‎[精彩范文]‎ The boxoffice income of Chinese movies witnessed a constant increase from about 17 billion yuan in 2012 to over 40 billion in 2015. However, that increase slowed down in 2016.‎ The reasons behind this are various. The fast economic development before 2016 was probably the most powerful engine driving the constant growth in the boxoffice income. The application of new technologies and the wide appeal of movie stars could also account for the increase. However, China saw a decline in its economic growth rate last year. And the Internet increased options for movie lovers. Consequently, some viewers began to turn away from cinemas, leading to a slower growth.‎ China‎'s economy is expected to grow at a medium speed in the coming years, so an increase is possible in the investment in the movie industry and the number of quality movies. Therefore, its boxoffice income will probably enjoy a slight increase.‎ Writing 9‎ 限时20分钟 ‎(2020·江苏省常州市武进区17校第一学期期中联合调研考试)请阅读下面文字及图表，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。‎ Fortyeight hours after the Brazilian govemment banned the burning of the Amazon rainforest, almost 4,000 new fires were spotted. The burning of the Amazon seemed terrible enough. It is even more painful to learn that most of these fires are deliberately set. They are started by farmers looking to expand farmland, or companies looking to exploit natural resources from the forest. Brazil's government loosened restrictions on forest cleaning in 2012 and now, hundreds of square miles a month are being cleared to make way for cattle production and mining projects.‎ ‎【写作内容】‎ ‎1．用约30个单词概述上述信息的主要内容；‎ - 25 -‎ ‎2．简要阐述保护亚马逊雨林的重要性(不少于两点)；‎ ‎3．就如何平衡经济的发展和亚马逊雨林的保护，谈谈你的看法(不少于两点)。‎ ‎【写作要求】‎ ‎1．写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；‎ ‎2．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；‎ ‎3．不必写标题。‎ ‎【评分标准】‎ 内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适合。‎ ‎　‎ ‎　‎ ‎　‎ ‎　‎ ‎【写作指导】　本篇作文是图文结合的读写说明类作文。写作时，必须要把所有段落的信息都概括完毕，用串线法串联起来，这样才能保证要点不缺失。第一段主要是概括图文信息，从题目中，我们可以概括出以下信息：图表信息：相比2015～2018年，2019年，森林砍伐现象愈演愈烈。文字信息：虽然政府颁布了禁止森林纵火，但是民众或公司视而不见，继续他们的恶行，以获取自然资源，养殖牛羊或采矿。然后综合图文信息，注意要点与要点之间的逻辑关系。需要注意的是，在第二段和第三段写关于亚马逊雨林保护的重要性和措施时，观点一定要言之有物；同时本文对专有名词的积累要求非常高。‎ ‎[精彩范文]‎ Shrugging off the government's prohibition of setting fire to rainforests, farmers and enterprises continue their misdeed to expand territory of raising cattle or grabbing natural resources. Consequently, deforestation peaked in 2019. ‎ Never can the significance of preserving the Amazon rainforest be overemphasized. Firstly, as the main habitat of diverse species and rare animals, the loss of rainforest will deprive them of a physical surrounding to rest and breed, thus threatening biodiversity and tipping the vulnerable ecological balance. Secondly, as the lung of our mother earth, rainforest plays an instrumental in adjusting climates, restoring damage and counterbalancing global warming.‎ How to make a tradeoff between economic development and forest preservation? Firstly, the local government can launch educational programs in schools or communities to impress on farmers and entrepreneurs the importance of proper logging or mining. Say, small trees can be spared and now ones will be planted once the soil is bared. Secondly, environmentalfriendly industries such as ecotourism can be introduced to substitute the existing yet less lucrative cattle raising or mining program.‎ Writing 10‎ 限时22分钟 - 25 -‎ ‎(2019·江苏省南京市高三三模考试)请认真阅读下面短文，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。‎ ‎　　The Palace Museum, as known as the Forbidden City, began selling souvenirs and other peripheral (周边的) products on Alibaba's Taobao in October 2010. The latest statistics show sales reached 1.5 billion yuan in 2017, said Shan Jixiang, the Former museum curator (馆长)．‎ Meanwhile, the number of cultural and creative products available for sale at the Palace‎ ‎Museum increased from ‎195 in 2013 to ‎9,170 in 2016.‎ ‎“The income from the cultural and creative industries made it possible for the Palace Museum to hold 62,000 educational activities in 2018, bringing more visitors to our museum，” Shan added.‎ The Number of Visitors (million per year)‎ ‎【写作内容】‎ ‎1．用约30个单词概括图表及文字的内容；‎ ‎2．用约120个单词发表你的观点，内容包括：‎ ‎(1)故宫推出文化创作产品的意义(不少于两点)；‎ ‎(2)你想为故宫文化创作推出一款什么样的产品(上图仅供参考)并作简要说明。‎ ‎【写作要求】‎ ‎1．表明个人观点，同时提供理由或论据；‎ ‎2．阐述观点或提供论据时，不得直接引用原文中句子；‎ ‎3．文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；‎ ‎4．不必写标题。‎ ‎【评分标准】‎ 内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适合。‎ ‎　‎ ‎　‎ ‎　‎ ‎　‎ - 25 -‎ ‎【写作指导】　根据提示可知，本篇为一篇说明文类作文。写作要点已经给出，具体内容需要合理展开进行写作。首先根据写作要求，我们可以先确定关键词(组)，如：The Palace Museum(故宫)，the number of (总数)，exceed our imagination (超出想象)，inventive art works (别出心裁的艺术作品)；splendid (灿烂的；辉煌的)等。然后根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。最后连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡。‎ ‎[精彩范文]‎ The Palace‎ ‎Museum has witnessed a sharp rise in the sales of its cultural and creative products. Meanwhile, the number of visitors has increased dramatically in the past few years as well. ‎ The benefits we enjoy from promoting cultural products far exceed our imagination. Firstly, these inventive art works function as ambassadors to spread our splendid culture, extending Chinese cultural influence and building up our cultural confidence. In addition, profits gained from the sales of artistic souvenirs can be spent on the restoration of cultural relics and the organization of educational activities which in turn will attract more visitors.‎ To jump on the bandwagon of promoting Chinese culture, I will design a set of bookmarks with images of palaces or emperors on them. It not only is of practical use but also serves as a reminder of sweet memories at the Palace‎ ‎Museum. I hope my design will be a useful addition to those cultural and creative art works.‎ 书面表达策略探究(四)‎ 书面表达常用词语和结构 ‎1．先后次序关系 first, second, at last, next, previously, eventually, last but not least, to begin with, to start with, in the end, finally, since then, first of all, afterwards, following this, originally ‎2．因果关系 because, because of, another important reason for ..., since, as, for, owing to, due to, seeing ..., for the reason that ... , in view of, for this reason, as a result of this, therefore, ... and so ... , consequently, as a result, thus, hence, so, in consequence, as a consequence, accordingly ‎3．转折关系 but, even so, however, though, even though, regardless of, despite, in spite of, yet ... , and yet, but unless, nonetheless ‎4．并列关系 and, also, too, as well as, either ... or ... , both ... and ... ‎ ‎5．(补充)递进关系 furthermore, moreover, still, not only ... but also ..., in addition (to), additionally, more specifically, besides - 25 -‎ ‎6．比较关系 similarly, in comparison with, (when) compared with, like ..., similarly important ‎7．归纳总结 in a word, in sum, in short, in brief, in conclusion, in summary, to sum up, the conclusion can be drawn that - 25 -‎