全国高考英语满分作文赏析本人整理

全国高考英语满分作文赏析本人整理

高考满分作文 一. 用词准确;表达地道 ‎1.【北京卷】　　【试题回放】　　第一节情景作文(20分)‎ ‎　　美国中学生Jeff将要来你所在的红星中学学习中文，经协商安排住在你家。假设你是李华，请给Jeff写一封信，按照下图顺序介绍他来中国后的生活安排。注意：1.信的开头已写2.词数不少于60。‎ ‎　　Dear Jeff,‎ ‎　　I’m Hua from Beijing‎ Hongxing ‎Middle School. I’m very happy to learn that you’re going to stay with my family while you’re in Beijing.‎ ‎　　While you are here, we’ll provide you with a room of your own with a bed, a desk, a couple of chairs and a TV. You’ll also have your own bathroom. Our school is quite close to our home, so we could go to school together by bike. At noon we’ll eat at the school dining hall. I’m sure you’ll like the delicious Chinese food there, and enjoy talking with friends over lunch. Classes in our school usually finish at ‎4 in the afternoon. You can then join other students in playing ball games or swimming. It’ll be a lot of fun.‎ ‎　　If you have any questions or requests, please let me know. We’ll try our best to make your stay here in Beijing a pleasant experience.‎ ‎　　Best wishes, ‎ ‎　　[名师点评]这篇文章的特点还是比较清晰的，第一，作者根据图画将文章的要点概括完整，内容充实而丰富，结构紧凑，有层次感;第二，本文没有采用华丽的辞藻，但用词十分恰当，段落过渡自然，令人耳目一新。 ‎ ‎2.【安徽卷】【试题回放】‎ 假如你是李华，美国一所友好学校准备与你们学校共同创办一份中学生英文刊物，该校格林先生来信询问有关情况。请你给她写封回信，假如你是李华，美国一所友好学校准备与你们学校共同创办一份中学生英文刊物，该校格林先生来信询问有关情况。请你给她写封回信，主要内容如下：l 表示赞成。l 提出你喜欢的栏目。 l 简要说明理由。注意：1. 词数100左右。2.参考：栏目—column ‎　　Dear Mr. Green,‎ ‎　　I am very excited to learn that we are going to start a magazine together. That sounds great! And I definitely agree with you on that.‎ ‎　　Some of the columns which you mentioned in the letter are really my cup of tea. Say, “culture express” gives us a better understanding of the world. Since people from different parts of the world have different values, it’s necessary to learn from each other. This will offer a wonderful chance. Apart from that, “blurt out” is pretty good for Chinese students to learn English idioms and improve oral English. Last but not least, “entertainment” is so cool! The popular singers, actors and celebrities are so catchy and attractive that you absolutely can’t miss it! Teenagers are just fond of the trendy things.‎ ‎　　Well, I can’t list more. I really can’t wait to read that magazine!‎ ‎　　 Yours faithfully ‎　　【名师点评】这是一篇满分作文。由于这篇作文的出现，导致了安徽省该年的英语作文分数普遍偏低。仔细分析了这篇文章，写的的确是好，很地道的美式英语，一些词语的大胆使用，让人不得不猜测此人或者是家人可能有过国外生活的经历，否则这么地道标准的英语，可不是一朝一夕所能写出来的。比如说：my cup of tea, apart from that, oral English, last but not least, celebrities, catchy和trendy的大胆运用，list, can't wait to 简直是perfect! 况且文章中没有一个错误，不管是书写还是语法。英语能够学到这种程度，不可谓不让人佩服。‎ 二. 非谓语动词为作文添彩 ‎3.【北京卷】　　【试题回放】情景作文 ‎　　假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华，为响应绿化祖国的号召，你班四月十二日去郊区植树，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，介绍植树活动的全过程，给某英文杂志的“绿色行动”专栏写一篇以“Green Action in Our Class”为题的英文稿件。注意：词数不少于60 提示词：郊区 suburbs ‎　　April 12 is memorable because our class had a meaningful experience on that day. In the morning, we bicycled to the suburbs to plant trees, talking and laughing all the way. Upon arrival, we began to work immediately. Some were digging holes. Some were carrying and planting young trees. Others were watering . After getting the work done, we put up a board reminding people to protect the trees. Before leaving we took some photos to record our green action. Seeing the lines of trees, we all had a sense of achievement. We feel it’s our duty to protect and beautify our environment.‎ ‎　　【名师点评】本文是设计巧妙的提纲要点式作文，与环保结合，立意较好。文章思路清晰，要点连贯，在语言的表达上选词新颖，同时运用了分词短语作状语等较好的句式表达。‎ 三. 复合句为写作增色 ‎4.【全国卷】假定你是李华，从小喜爱大熊猫(panda),一直通过有关网站(website)关注三年前在美国圣迭哥动物园出生的大熊猫“苏琳”和她的母亲“白云”。现在苏琳即将三岁。请根据以下要点给动物园工作人员写一封信1、自我介绍;2、祝贺苏琳生日;3、感谢工作人员;4、索取苏琳三岁生日照。‎ ‎　　注意：1、词数100左右;2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;3、开头语已为你写好。‎ ‎　　Dear Sir/Madam,‎ ‎　　Greetings from China!‎ ‎　　I’m Li Hua, a student in Sichuan. I’ve been a panda lover since I was a child. About three years ago I was delighted to learn that Baiyun gave birth to her daughter Sulin and I’ve been watching her grow on your website,. Now she’s going to be three. I’d like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work, because of which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the US.‎ ‎　　By the way, could I have a photo of Sulin taken on her third birthday? Thank you very much in advance.‎ ‎　　 Yours truly,‎ ‎　　【名师点评】这封信格式正确，行文规范，描述有条不紊，称呼、正文中的开头及结尾、结束语均表达到位。文章行文活泼，感情真挚，语言表述准确，洋溢着作者因大熊猫得到精心照顾而对美方人员的感激之情，以及希望自己愿望成真，得到照片的希冀之情。长短句运用合理，结合了简单句和复合句，流畅自然，不露痕迹，的确是一篇佳作。‎ ‎5.【全国卷II】一家宾馆新开业，为吸引外国宾客，希望在互联网上进行宣传。请你用英语为其 写一篇文字介绍。主要内容包括：1.地点：距白山入口处‎500米; 2.房间及价格：单人间(共20间)，100元/天;双人间(共15间)，150元/天;热水淋浴; 3.餐饮：餐厅(中、西餐)，咖啡厅(茶、咖啡); 4.游泳池：全天免费开放; 5.欢迎预定。注意1. 100词左右，开头已写好;2.可适当增加细节。‎ ‎　　 Welcome to Baishan Mountain Hotel!‎ ‎　　Baishan Mountain Hotel is now open for business. 500 meters far from the entrance of Baishan Mountain, it provides single person room, of which the price is RMB100 yuan per day and the number is 20, and 15 double person rooms, with a price of RMB 150 yuan per day. It also provides hot water bath service. You can enjoy both Chinese and western food in the restaurant and drink coffee and tea in the cafe. The swimming pool is open for free the whole day. All these services can bring great convenience to you and are very enjoyable. So come to enjoy yourself!‎ ‎　　Welcome to book rooms in Baishan‎ ‎Mountain.‎ ‎　　【名师点评】本文开门见山，首先点明了主旨。本文最大的特点是应用了很多比较复杂的句式，使文章比较出彩。开头使用了独立结构交代宾馆位置。which引导的非限制性定语从句的使用也很正确。总地来说，文章句式精炼，是篇不错的满分作文。‎ ‎6.【重庆卷】据报道，7岁的美国女孩Amy Bruce得知自己身患肺癌(lung cancer)后处于极度的痛苦之中，美国抗癌协会(ACS)决定，每当Amy收到一封慰问信，就给她增加3美分的治疗款。‎ ‎　　假如你是新华中学的学生李华，请你用英文给Amy写一封慰问信，主要内容包括：‎ ‎　　自我介绍; 得知的情况,表示鼓励,打算为她做什么; 祝她早日康复 ‎　　注意：1. 信的格式已为你写好2. 信中不得出现你的真实情况。3. 词数100左右。‎ ‎　　Dear Amy,‎ ‎　　I’m Li Hua from Xinhua Middle School of China. I’m sorry to hear that you got the lung cancer which brought you great pain. But you should realize that you are young and have a promising great future. So, stand up and fight against the disease! I’m sure you will win. It is reported that the America anti-cancer association will donate three cents upon every comfort letter you receive. So I will tell your situation to all my friends and ask them to write to you. In that way, you will get enough money for you to be cured. Hope you can be well soon.‎ ‎　 [名师点评]本文依照要求，涵盖了所有要点。文章使用了高中常见的句式，如I’m sorry to hear that..., It is reported that...等，都比较好。作者对定语从句的使用恰到好处地修饰了文章，行文自然而通顺，值得学习。 ‎ 四. 结构清晰,句式准确 ‎7.【江苏卷】　　【试题回放】‎ ‎2007年4月29日上午10点到11点，全国亿万学生阳光体育活动在各地大中小学校同时进行，江苏省1100万学生积极参与了这项活动。(教育部倡导学生：每天锻炼一小时,健康工作五十年,幸福生活一辈子). 请你根据以上提示，用英语准备一份发言稿，向同学们讲述一下阳光体育活动的有关情况，并就高三学生是否需要每天花一小时锻炼，谈谈你的看法及理由。‎ ‎　　注意：1、 发言稿应包括以上所有信息，要有适当发挥。‎ ‎　　2、 词数：120左右。发言稿的开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。‎ ‎　　3、 参考词汇：阳光体育活动——a national student sports program;‎ ‎　　 教育部——the Ministry of Education ‎　　Good afternoon, everyone,‎ ‎　　The national student sports program, waged by the Ministry of Education and aimed at improving students health, was held from 10：‎00a.m.~11:‎00a.m.on April 29，‎2007 in many primary and middle schools all over China. Almost 11 million students in Jiangsu province participated in this program.‎ ‎　　The Ministry of Education advocates that we do exercises for one hour a day and can work healthily for 50 years. Our whole life will be very enjoyable.‎ ‎　　In my opinion, we senior high school students should do exercises for one hour a day even though our spare time is limited. Health is a basic condition for our study. If we did not do exercises, we wouldn’t be able to get good study records. So every one of you, join the program now!‎ ‎　　Thank you!‎ ‎　　【名师点评】本文的结构十分明晰，同时句式使用得熟练而准确。本文分为三段，前两段叙述，后一段发表观点，典型的作文结构。在句式使用上，作者用法多样，使用了独立结构和虚拟语气，十分出彩。复杂的句式是本文的特点之一。‎ ‎8. 假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Bob 将于九月到你所在城市的建新华文学校学中文，来信请 你在学校附近为他找一套住房。请根据图画提供的信息，写信介绍住房的情况，并告知住房 面积为‎25 平方米，月租500 元。注意：1．词数：100 左右：2．参考词汇：房租—rent(n.).‎ I’m very happy to receive your letter, and I’m glad to hear that you will go to China to learn Chinese here. I have already found a flat for you. It is on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxin‎ Chinese ‎School. Bus No.11 can take you there, and it is one stop before the Chinese‎ ‎School. The flat is on the third floor with 3 rooms, one of which is bedroom, the other two are bathroom and kitchen. There are a bed, a sofa, a desk and some chairs in this 25 square-metres small fiat, and the rent is 500 yuan per month. Maybe this fiat is not as good as your wish, but I’ll try my best to meet your needs. If it is not suitable enough, write to me and I will look for another better place.‎ Hope you will come here soon!‎ All the best!‎ 满分理由: 本文格式正确，意思表述完整，行文流畅自然。作者在写作过程中注意长短句并用，还使用了以‘which，’引导的非限定性定语从句，从而使文章层次分明，富于变化，不愧为考场佳作。‎ ‎9. 假如你是李华,你的澳大利亚朋友Dick听说中国的中小学正在减轻学生的学习负担，来信询问有关情况。请你根据下表提供的信息，写一封回信，谈一谈减负给你的学习和生活带来的变化。‎ Dear ***， How nice to hear from you again! You want to know what is going on in schools in China. OK, I will explain it to you. A lot of changes have taken place in our schools because of the reduced learning load. In the past we used to be very busy even at weekends since we had lots of home work to do. We didn’t go to bed until 11:30. Now everything is improved. We can do all kinds of things that we like. In the daytime, we can read books and visit museums, take computer lessons. In the evenings we can watch news on TV and we sleep earlier than we used to. Best wishes!‎ ‎10.  最近，你校同学正在参加某英文报组织的一场讨论。讨论的主题是：公园要不要收门票?请你根据下表所提供信息，给报社写一封信客观地介绍讨论情况。开头已写好，词数100，参考词汇：门票---entrance fee ‎ ‎    60％的同学认为 ‎  40％的同学认为 ‎1．不应该收门票 ‎2公园是公众休闲的地方 ‎3如收门票，需建大门、围墙，会影响城市形象 ‎1．应收门票，但票价不要太高 ‎2．支付园林工人工资 ‎3．购新花木 Dear editor,       I'm writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks.  Those against charging entrance fee for parks take up 60%.  They are of one mind that parks are a  ‎ place for the public’s enjoyment.  If tickets are demanded on the visitors of a park, a gate has to be set up and so have the walls on the four sides. If so, city will not look as beautiful as it would.  Otherwise, those in favor of charging entrance fee for parks take up 40%.  They all think that ticket price should be controlled properly, and that entrance fee can be used to pay the gardeners and buy new sorts of flowers and trees.   The truth lies in the hands of the majority. Does my argument stand to reason, dear editor? ‎ ‎11.假设你是李华，你在报上看到北京电视台今年七月将举办外国人“学中文，唱中文歌”才艺大赛。你的美国朋友Peter正在北京一所大学学中文，你觉得他应去试一试。请按以下要点给他写信告知此事，并表示可以提供帮助。比赛时间：7月18，报名时间：截止到‎6月30日。报名地点：北京电视台。注意：1.词数100左右 2.可适当增加细节，3.参考词汇：才艺大赛—talent show Dear Peter,‎ I read in a newspaper today that a “Learn Chinese, Sing Chinese Songs” Foreigners’ Talent Show will be held in Beijing Television Station on July 18. I know you like singing, and you are in Beijing during that period. I think this is a good chance for you to show your singing talent, and how well you’ve learned Chinese. If you would like to try, you' U have to go to the TV station to sign up before the end of June. If there is anything I can do for you, I would be more than glad to help.‎ ‎12.【试题回放】假设你是李华，最近国内一家英文报纸正在讨论北京动物园是否应迁出市区。以下是你所在班级讨论的情况。请你给该报写一封信，反映讨论结果。‎ 赞成迁出：1.游客多，交通堵塞2.郊区环境好 反对迁出：1.建于1906年，中外闻名2.搬迁易造成动物死亡 ‎　　注意：1. 100字左右，信的开头已为你写好。2.可适当增加细节，3.参考词汇： 郊区—suburb Dear Editor ,‎ ‎　　Recently ,in our class there has been a heated discussion about whether the Beijing Zoo should be moved out of the city . Some of my classmates are in favor of the move .They say large crowds of tourists to the zoo will result in traffic jams .They also say that once moved ,animals will have more space and better living conditions in the suburbs .However ,other students are against the idea ,saying that the Beijing Zoo, built in 1906 ,has a history of 100 years ,and is well –known at home and abroad .So it should remain where it is .What’s more ,moving may cause the death of some animals .To move or not ,this is a big decision which has to be made by people in Beijing.‎ ‎13.假定你是李华，亚洲冬季运动会将在你居住的地方举办，现正在招募志愿者，你希望成为其中一员。请按要求用英文给组委会写一封信。内容应包括：1.个人情况：年龄，性别，学历 2.个人条件：英语好，爱好体育，善于交际，乐于助人，熟悉本地情况 3.承诺：提供最佳服务. 注意：词数100左右，开头语已为你写好;可适当增加细节，提示词：申请—apply (v. ), application (n.)，志愿者—volunteer Dear Sir / Madam:‎ ‎　　I was quite excited when I heard the Asian Winter Games will be held in the city I live. My name is Li Hua. I am an 18-year-old boy student in a senior middle school. And I want to be a volunteer for the games. I like English and sports very much. I like making friends and I am ready to help others. I can be a good interpreter in every sports during the time. Hope the games will be a great success. Hope I will be chosen to be one.‎ ‎　　[名师点评]这篇文章写得非常流畅，把握了所有要点，同时以“我”为中心，详细说明了自己对志愿者工作的结合，以此来表达自己的决心。由于用词恰当，这种表现就比较充分，具备一定的说服力。词汇和语句的运用也不错。‎ ‎14　[全国卷II]假定你是李华。应英国朋友Bob的要求， 写一封短信介绍你校图书馆的基本情况。内容须包括下面两幅图中的相关信息。注意：1、字数100左右2、可以适当增减细节，以使行文连贯3、开头语已为你写好 ‎　　Dear Bob,‎ ‎　　Thank you for your last letter asking about our library. Our library locates between the teaching building and our garden. The shape of it seems to be a book to welcome our students. it’s open from Monday to Friday ,and we can borrow the books from 9:‎00a.m. to 7:00p.m.‎ ‎　　There are many books available in our library , dealing with almost every subject. Not only the books, but also the magazines can be read here. You may borrow up to five books at a time, and keep them for at most ten days.‎ ‎　　Due to the library , we are offered a place to gain as much knowledge as we can. If you are interested in it, welcome to our school, and I’ll show you around.‎ ‎15. 2009高考英语满分作文【全国卷I海南、宁夏】‎ ‎　　【试题回放】假定你是李华，正在英国接受英语培训，住在一户英国人家里。今天你的房东Mrs. Wilson 不在家，你准备外出，请给Mrs. Wilson 写一留言条，内容包括：1.外出购物2.替房东还书3.Tracy 来电话留言：1)咖啡屋(Bolton Coffee)见面取消2)此事已告知Susan 3) 尽快回电 ‎　　注意：1. 词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ ‎　　Mrs. Wilson,‎ ‎　　I’m going out shopping, and won’t be back until about 5:00 pm. I have taken with me the two books you asked me to return to the City Library. At about 1 o’clock this afternoon, Tracy called, saying that she couldn’t meet you at Bolton Coffee tomorrow morning as she has something important to attend to. She felt very sorry about that, but said that you could set some other time for the meeting. She wanted you to call her back as soon as you are home. She has already told Susan about this change.‎ ‎16. 2010高考英语满分作文 假如你是育才中学学生会主席李华。你校将举办一次英语演讲比赛（speech contest），希望附近某大学的外籍教师Smith女士来做评委。请参照以下比赛通知给她写一封信。注意：词数100左右。‎ 英语演讲比赛主题：人与自然 时间：‎6月15日下午2：00—5：00‎ 地点：501教室 参赛选手：10名学生 联系人：李华（电话44876655）‎ 欢迎大家光临 Dear Mrs. Smith,‎ I’m Li Hua, Chair of the Student Union of YuCai Middle School, which is close to your university. I’m writing to invite you to be a judge at our English speech contest to be held in our school on June 15. It will start at 2；00 pm and last for about three hours. Ten students will deliver their speeches on the given topic “Man and Nature”. We hope that you will accept our invitation if it is convenient for you. Please call me at 44876655 if you have any questions.‎ I am looking forward to your reply.‎ With best wishes ‎ 图表作文写作指导 图表作文是近年来高考常考的题型之一。图表作文的体裁多为议论文、应用文和说明文，内容多涉及前后变化对比、正反观点对比或产品介绍等。要求考生通过数据、文字内容分析，系统准确地表达出图表含义，并得出令人信服的结论。‎ 一、图表作文的命题形式 ‎1．表格式 将统计的数据或被说明的对象直接用表格形式体现出来，即统计表。这类题型一般以说明文和议论文居多，往往是介绍、说明某种情况或辩论某种观点、看法，但有时也可能是记叙文。‎ ‎2．图像式 可分为以曲线形式表示数据变化的线形图、以条形形式表示数据大小或数量之间差异的条形图，以圆内扇形面积的大小表示总体中部分结构变化的圆形图等。这类题型一般以说明文居多，是一些关于生产、销售、发展进程等各种项目统计的示意图。‎ 二、图表作文的应试策略 ‎1．审读图表前的文字说明，弄清图表的性质，做到“四确定”。首先，确定文章的体裁；其次，确定文章的结构；再次，确定文章的时态；最后，确定文章的人称。‎ ‎2．审读图表后的要求，寻找做题规律，要注意以下几个方面：‎ ‎(1)词数：100左右。‎ ‎(2)开头或结尾已给出，这就要求考生首先不能另行开头或结尾；其次，要细读所给语句的人称、时态和语言的表达风格，力求前后一致。‎ ‎(3)内容完整，即要点齐全，写作时要注意详略得当和准确全面。‎ ‎(4)行文连贯。行文必须做到形连和意连。形连要力求自我特色词汇的使用，以增加得分“亮点”。意连要求能涵盖高考书面表达中各种文体常用的一些特色词汇，如however；besides；instead；in the ‎ meanwhile；for instance；on the contrary；worse still；in conclusion；all of a sudden；as a matter of fact等，这样才能写出好文章。‎ ‎(5)注意句式的变化，力求在语言表达正确的基础上追求句式变换，确保语言表达的高级性。常见写作技巧主要包括：简单句与复合句的交替使用；主动语态为主，适度穿插被动语态；大胆使用平行结构；适当调整句中定语、状语的位置，使句子表达多样化；三大从句与三种非谓语动词灵活使用；特殊句式(如强调句、感叹句、疑问句、省略句)点缀其间等。‎ 假设你是李华，正在英国牛津参加短期的语言培训，计划星期天去伦敦旅游。互联网上的一则广告引起了你的注意，但一些具体信息不明确(箭头所指内容)。请给该旅行社发一封电子邮件，询问有关情况。‎ 注意：1.词数100左右，信的格式已为你写好；2．可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； ‎ ‎3．参考词汇：牛津Oxford；费用fee。‎ 案例分析⊙‎ 这是一篇典型的图表式作文，要求写一封电子邮件，询问旅行社有关一则广告的情况。细读图表和文字提示可知本文是一篇应用文，时态以一般现在时为主，人称为第一人称。本文内容要点包括：开头语；学生票价；费用是否包含景点门票、午餐；牛津的时间；是否有购物时间等，并稍加评论。‎ Dear Sir/Madam，‎ I’m writing for more information about the day tour to London.‎ As a student at Oxford University，I’d like to know if you have any special price for students. As for the money you charge，does it cover the entrance fees for visiting the places listed？What about lunch？Is it included？Or do I need to bring along my own food？How long will the tour last？Since I need to prepare my lessons for the next day，I’d like to know the time to return. Besides，is there any time for shopping? I really want to have a look at the big stores in London.‎ 请根据图表所示，就某城市空气污染的状况写一篇英文报道，并提出一两条改进建议。‎ 注意：1.词数100左右。首句已给出，不计入总词数；2．参考词汇：车辆vehicle。‎ ‎【参考答案】　‎ With the development of industry，air pollution is getting more and more serious. In this city，many people suffer from different kinds of illness because of air pollution.‎ Air pollution is caused by the following reasons. About half of the problem is caused by vehicles. There are more and more cars and buses on the road，which give off poisonous gases.35% of air pollution is caused by factories. Another factor is smoking. Smoking does harm to others’health as well as to that of the smokers. Besides，about 10% of air pollution is caused by other reasons.‎ We should take some measures to fight against pollution. New fuel can be used to take the place of gas. We can plant more trees，grass and flowers. All in all，if everybody realizes the importance of environment and does something to stop pollution，the problem will be solved.‎ 议论文写作指导 ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎1．议论文是以议论为主要表达方式的一种文体，它通过摆事实、讲道理的方式来辨明是非曲直，从而表达出作者的观点。它常由论点、论据和论证三部分构成。‎ ‎2．它要求语言必须简练、准确，要尽可能避免使用口语，多用书面语，可适当使用名言警句；以议论为主，辅之以叙述、说明和描写等手法。‎ ‎3．写作时要围绕中心论点展开议论，即论据和论证要围绕论点展开。根据题目要求，有时需要从正反两方面来论述，可增强论证的力度。最后，可得出结论，照应开头，形成一个有机的整体。‎ ‎4．写作时常以三段式的形式展开议论。 ‎ ‎ ‎ 优点 缺点 呆在家中 花费少、舒适方便 不能亲身了解外界 外出旅游 增长知识、开阔眼界 花费多、旅途不便 暑假即将来临，你班同学就假期计划进行讨论，提出了不同看法，请根据提示写一篇英语短文，并谈谈你的看法。‎ 注意：1.词数：80～120(不含已写好部分)；‎ ‎2．短文必须包括表中所列要点，可根据内容分段表述；‎ ‎3．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；‎ ‎4．参考词汇：眼界horizon (或view)。.‎ 案例分析⊙‎ 这是一篇典型的议论文体的写作，它以表格的形式提出了论点(呆在家中的优点和缺点及外出旅游的优点和缺点)和论据，还以文字提示形式提出了话题(假期计划)及需要考生自由发挥的部分(你的看法)，自己的看法可选择上述中的任何一种，并就此发表个人的见解。本文的重点是表格中两种方式的优、缺点，根据题目的特点，以三段式的形式来写作比较好。‎ 根据内容，尽管讨论已经发生，但它是就一般的暑假假期计划而进行的讨论，没有特定的时间界限，因而考生应以一般现在时和一般将来时为主。相当一部分考生用一般过去时进行论述，这会失掉较多的分数。从题目所给的开头可知应用第一人称来写。‎ The summer holiday is coming. Our class have had a discussion about what to do during the holiday.‎ Some are in favor of staying at home. They think it’s both convenient and comfortable. What’s more，they can save money for other purposes. But they will lose the chance of getting to know the outside world. However，others prefer to go out for traveling since it can increase their knowledge and broaden their horizons. But they will spend more money and meet some difficulties while traveling.‎ In my opinion，it would be much better to stay at home，for I can do what I like，such as reading books，watching TV，and helping my parents with the housework.‎ 近年来，禽流感频发，一些国家在疫区大肆捕杀鸟类。对此，你们班召开了主题班会，讨论结果如下：‎ 赞成捕杀者认为 反对捕杀者认为 你的态度 ‎1.防止病毒扩散、威胁人类健康 ‎1.捕杀鸟类，不公平，太残忍 ‎？‎ ‎2.疫区扩大，不容易控制 ‎2.应尽快找到疫苗 ‎ ‎ 注意：1.为使行文流畅，应适当增加细节，不能逐条翻译；2．词数：120左右；‎ ‎3．参考词汇：禽流感bird flu；家禽poultry；病毒virus；疫苗vaccine。‎ ‎【参考答案】　‎ ‎ In recent years，bird flu has frequently broken out in many countries and some of them have killed birds on a large scale in affected areas. In view of this action，our class have held a meeting to have a discussion about whether to kill them or not.‎ Some think it is necessary to kill all the birds. At present it is a good way to prevent the deadly virus from spreading and harming people’s health. The more the virus spreads to，the more difficult it is to conquer. However，others think it is unfair and awfully cruel to do so just for the benefit of human beings. Finding the vaccine as soon as possible is the most important thing.‎ As far as I’m concerned，catching and killing birds is not necessary. It may cause the birds to die out. After all，birds are friends to us human beings. ‎ ‎2013年高考英语作文八大模版经典解析 高考英语作文模版：对比观点题型 ‎（1） 要求论述两个对立的观点并给出自己的看法。 1． 有一些人认为。。。 2． 另一些人认为。。。 3． 我的看法。。。 The topic of（主题）is becoming more and more popular recently. There are two sides of opinions of it. Some people say A is their favorite. They hold their view for the reason of（支持A的理由一）…What is more, ---理由二). Moreover, -(理由三). While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons. Firstly,--(支持B的理由一). Secondly (besides),（理由二）. Thirdly (finally),(理由三). From my point of view, I think（我的观点）. The reason is that (原因). As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice. For me, the former is surely a wise choice . （2） 给出一个观点，要求考生反对这一观点 Some people believe that（观点一）. For example, they think（举例说明）．And it will bring them(为他们带来的好处). ‎ ‎ In my opinion, I never think this reason can be the point. For one thing,, (我不同意该看法的理由一). For another thing,, (反对的理由之二)． ‎ Form all what I have said, I agree to the thought that, (我对所讨论主题的看法)．‎ ‎ 高考英语作文模板：阐述主题题型 要求从一句话或一个主题出发，按照提纲的要求进行论述． １． 阐述名言或主题所蕴涵的意义． ２． 分析并举例使其更充实． The good old proverb（名言或谚语）reminds us that …(释义). Indeed, we can learn many things form it. First of all, (理由一). For example, …(举例说明). Secondly,…(理由二). Another case is that ---(举例说明). Furthermore , (理由三)． In my opinion, (我的观点). In short, whatever you do, please remember the say----A. If you understand it and apply it to your study or work, you’ll necessarily benefit a lot from it.‎ ‎ 高考英语作文模板：解决方法题型 要求考生列举出解决问题的多种途径 １． 问题现状 ２． 怎样解决(解决方案的优缺点) ‎ In recent days, we have to face the problem----A, which is becoming more and more serious. First, (说明Ａ的现状)．Second, (举例进一步说明现状)‎ Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation. For one thing,, (解决方法一). For another , (解决方法二). Finally, (解决方法三). Personally, I believe that -(我的解决方法). Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because - (带来的好处).‎ ‎ 高考英语作文模板：说明利弊题型 这种题型往往要求先说明一下现状，再对比事物本身的利弊，有时也会单从一个角度（利或弊）出发，最后往往要求考生表明自己的态度（或对事物前景提出预测） ‎ ‎１．说明事物现状 ２事物本身的优缺点（或一方面）３你对现状（或前景）的看法 Nowadays many people prefer A because it has a significant role in our daily life. Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows. First -(Ａ的优点之一). Besides （Ａ的优点之二）. But every coin has two sides. The negative aspects are also apparent. One of the important disadvantages is that -----(Ａ的第一个缺点)．To make matters worse,---(Ａ的第二个缺点)． Through the above analysis, I believe that the positive aspects overweigh the negative ones. Therefore, I would like to ---(我的看法)． From the comparison between these positive and negative effects of A, we should take it reasonably and do it according to the circumstances we are in. Only by this way, --(对前景的预测 ‎ 高考英语作文模板：议论文的框架 ‎(1)    不同观点列举型（ 选择型 ） 　 There is a widespread concern over the issue that 作文题目__. But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person. A majority of people think that 观点一___. In their views there are 2 factors contributing to this attitude as follows: in the first place, 原因一____.Furthermore, in the second place, 原因二___. So it goes without saying that 观点一___. 　　People,　however,　differ　in　their　opinions　on　this　matter.　Some　people　hold the idea that 观点二___. In their point of view, on the one hand， 原因一_____. On the other hand, 原因二___. Therefore, there　is no　doubt　that 观点二____.　 　 As far as I am concerned, I　firmly　support　the　view　that 观点一或二_.　It　is not only because ___, but also because_____. The more ____, the more ____. （2）利弊型的议论文 Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over (the issue that)作文题目______. In fact, there are both advantages and disadvantages in 题目议题____. Generally speaking, it is widely believed there are several positive aspects as follows. Firstly, 优点一___. And secondly 优点二_____. Just As a popular saying goes, "every coin has two sides", 讨论议题_____ is no exception, and in another word, it still has negative aspects. To begin with, 缺点一____. In addition, 缺点二____. To sum up, we should try to bring the advantages of 讨论议题____ into full play, and reduce the disadvantages to the minimum at the same time. In that case, we will definitely make a better use of the 讨论议题___. ( 3 ) 答题性议论文 Currently, there is a widespread concern over (the issue that)作文题目_____ .It is really an important concern to every one of us. As a result, we must spare no efforts to take some measures to solve this problem. As we know that there are many steps which can be taken to undo this problem. First of all, 途径一_. In addition, another way contributing to success of the solving problem is途径二. Above all, to solve the problem of 作文题目_____, we should find a number of various ways. But as far as I am concerned, I would prefer to solve the problem in this way, that is to say, 方法_____. ( 4 ) 谚语警句性议论文 It is well know to us that the proverb: " 谚语____" has a profound significance and value not only in our job but also in our study. It means 谚语的含义_____. The saying can be illustrated through a series of examples as follows. ( also theoretically ) A case in point is例子一___. Therefore, it is goes without saying that it is of great of importance to practice the proverb 谚语_____. With the rapid development of science and technology in China, an increasing number of people come to realize that it is also of practical use to stick to the saying: 谚语_____. The more we are aware of the significance of this famous saying, the more benefits we will get in our daily study and job..‎ ‎ 高考英语作文模板：图表作文的框架 As is shown/indicated/illustrated by the figure/percentage in the table(graph/picture/pie/chart),作文题目的议题…. has been on rise/ decrease (goes up/increases/drops/decreases), significantly/dramatically/steadily rising/decreasing from____ in ___to __ in ___. From the sharp/marked decline/ rise in the chart, it goes ‎ without saying that _____. 　　There　are　at　least　two　good　reasons accounting for ____. On　the　one　hand,….. On　the　other　hand,　___ is　due　to　the　fact　that _____. In　addition, ….is…　‎