2020中考英语试题解析汇编（第02期）专题13 书面表达

2020中考英语试题解析汇编（第02期）专题13 书面表达

专题13 书面表达 ‎1.【2018年山东省青岛市】中央电视台《经典咏流传》节目的播出，再次激发了人们对经典文学作品的阅读热情。读书可以成就更美好的自己，让读书伴随我们成长。请根据以下要点提示，以“Growing up with Reading”为题写一篇英语短文介绍你曾经读过的一本书或—首诗，并建议大家多读书，读好书。‎ 要点提示：‎ 读书的重要性 ‎1. 获取知识，开阔眼界；‎ ‎2. 提升自我，增强自信……‎ 读过的一本书或 一首诗 ‎1. 作品内容简介；‎ ‎2. 读书感悟及对自己的影响。‎ 多读书，读好书 ‎1. 利用闲暇时间多读书，养成读书的好习惯；‎ ‎2. 多读经典文学作品……‎ 注意：‎ ‎1. 短文应包括以上要点，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯。‎ ‎2. 文中不得出现自己的真实姓名、学校及地名。‎ ‎3. 词数：80-100（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）。‎ 参考词汇：classic 经典作品； open up one’s eyes 开阔眼界；improve oneself 提升自我； be more 12‎ ‎ confident 更自信；responsibility 责任；cooperation 合作。‎ Growing up with Reading Have you watched the program Everlasting Classics on CCTV? This program makes us more interested in reading books, especially classics. ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎【答案】Growing up with Reading Have you watched the program Everlasting Classics on CCTV? This program makes us more interested in reading books, especially classics. Reading is very important. We can get knowledge through reading. It can not only open our minds, but also make us cleverer and more confident . Our study can be improved if we read more good books.‎ These days I am reading a book whose title is Jane Eyre, which attracts me a lot. The book's writer is called Charlotte Bronte, who was born in England in 1816.She had two sisters and one brother, but unfortunately their mother died when they were very young. Actually Jane Eyre is a book whose theme is of love. In the story. Jane Eyre lived a hard life, but she was self-confident and perseverant. In her heart, there is always a mind that if you hold a belief and stick to it, you will eventually achieve your dream.‎ ‎2.【2018年安徽省中考】某英文杂志社正面向九年级毕业生征文,请从以下要点中选择一至两个方面,并结合具体事例,用英语写一篇题为"Thank you, my teacher!"的短文参加此次活动。要点如下:‎ ‎1.严格要求;‎ ‎2.耐心指导;‎ ‎3.热情鼓励;， .....‎ 注意: 1. 词数80~ 100 ;‎ 12‎ ‎2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;‎ ‎3.文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称。‎ ‎【答案】I’d like to say thanks to my English teacher, Miss Li, because she's helped me a lot. Once, I failed my English exam. When she found I was very worried, she encouraged me to studyharder and promised to help me. After that, I turned to her for help every time I had questions. She was always patient to make me understand every single question. With her help, lve had enough courage to face difficulties and made much progress in English.‎ Thank you, my dear teacher! The love and support from you will be with me forever.‎ ‎3.【2018年贵州省安顺】每年 6 月 8 日为“世界海洋日(World Oceans Day)”，今年世界海洋日的主题为“清洁我们的海洋（Cleaning Our Oceans）”。据 2018 年 6 月 7 日 CCTV 晚间新闻报道，每年流入大海的微塑料达 1300 万吨，导致大量鱼类死亡。科学家预测，如果不采取措施限塑，2050 年海洋里的塑料重量比鱼类还重。作为中学生的你，应该减少塑料制品的使用。请以“Saying No to Plastics”为题，写一篇 80-100 词的英语短文。‎ A.请根据自己的想法，用完整的英语句子或简略的英语答语回答下面五个问题。‎ ‎81. Can you see plastics (塑料)everywhere ?‎ ‎82. Do you often use plastics in your daily life?‎ ‎83. Is using plastics too much good or bad for our environment?‎ ‎84. What can you do to reduce(减少) the use of plastics?‎ ‎85. What advice can you possibly give to others when they are using plastics?‎ ‎【答案】81. Yes./No. ‎ 12‎ ‎82. Yes./No. ‎ ‎83. 答题内容合理, 均可给分。 ‎ ‎84. 答题内容合理, 均可给分。 ‎ ‎85. 答题内容合理, 均可给分。‎ ‎【解析】‎ ‎81. 问题：你能看到到处都是塑料制品吗？根据自己的实际情况，用Yes/No来回答。 ‎ ‎82. 问题：你在日常生活中经常使用塑料吗？根据自己的实际情况，用Yes/No来回答。‎ ‎83. 问题：塑料对环境的影响是好还是坏？答题内容合理即可。参考答案：I think it’s bad for our environment. ‎ ‎84. 问题：你能做些什么来减少塑料的使用？答题内容合理即可。参考答案：I can use a cloth bag or a basket instead while shopping.‎ ‎85. 问题：当别人在使用塑料制品时，你能给他们什么建议？答题内容合理即可。参考答案：we should reduce the use of plastics so that we can hopefully protect the earth and make it greener. ‎ ‎4.【2018年黑龙江省绥化市中考】身为中学生，关爱儿童是我们应尽的义务。本周六我班将组织一次去儿童福利院（the children's home)看望儿童的活动。请你为本次活动制定计划，写一篇不少于80词的短文。‎ 内容包括：出发时间，集合地点，出行方式以及在儿童福利院的具体活动安排。‎ 提示词；tell stories, sing and dance, cheer up 要求：1.参考提示内容可适当发挥。‎ ‎2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整。‎ ‎3.文中不得出现任何真实信息。（姓名、校名、地名等）‎ ‎【答案】We are going to the children's home to visit the children there this weekend. We’ll meet at the school gate at eight on Saturday morning. Then we’ll go there on our school bus. What should we do at the children's home? Here are our plans.‎ First, we'll take some gifts to them, such as colored pencils, books and some toys. Second at the children's home, we'll draw pictures with them, read stories to them and help with their lessons. Last, we'll have a party. We can sing and dance together. We can also play games with them and tell jokes to cheer them up.‎ I'm sure they'll enjoy the time with us.‎ 12‎ 点睛：这篇短文使用了大量的固定短语，为文章增色不少，如such as ，have a party ， play games，tell stories, sing and dance, cheer up等；First, Second，Last等的运用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理；同时语言流畅，内容完整，是一篇不错的范文。‎ ‎5.【2018年湖北省恩施州中考】2009年3月至今,北京八达岭野生动物园发生了多起游客违反入园规则而导致的人员伤亡事件,这些悲剧发人深省。俗话说“没有规矩,不成方圆”,作为中学生,我们应该遵守哪些规则,请结合下图和要点提示,写一篇英语短文。‎ 要点提示：‎ ‎1.遵守交通规则;‎ ‎2.不插队;‎ ‎3.遵守入园规则;‎ ‎4.补充两点其他的规则。‎ 要求：‎ ‎1.文中必须包含所有提示要点,可适当发挥使行文连贯;‎ ‎2.条理清晰,字迹工整,词数不少于80；‎ ‎3.文中不得出现真实人名和校名等相关信息。‎ 提示词汇: jump the queue (插队); fence (围栏)‎ ‎【答案】As students, what can we do to keep our daily life m order. In my opinion, we should behave as follows:‎ 12‎ First, while walking or driving on the road, we should obey the traffic rules. Besides, do remember not to carve or draw anywhere during visiting places of interest. What's more, making a loud noise in public is also a kind of pollution. It is as harmful as littering and spitting everywhere. Last but not least, when we go to the zoo or other public places, we should do as we are required, for example, "Don't jump the queue".‎ Only when we behave well, can we live in a well-ordered society.‎ 写作亮点：首先，可以用一两句话陈述清楚写作的目的（keep our daily life in order），然后可以逐条写出需要遵守的规则。在一条一条罗列的 时候，可以恰当地借助一下词来表达逻辑关系，比如first，besides，what’s more，last but not least等，具体在写规则的时候要注意短语运用准确，例如obey the traffic rules 遵守交通规则，visiting places of interest 参观名胜古迹，making a loud noise in public 在公共场合大声喧哗。此外，句式的灵活运用也是亮点，例如用到了as…as..同级比较的结构，在末段用到了only+从句，主句倒装的结构，这些结构的使用使得文章语言更加鲜活。最后，文章用一句话结尾，总结了全文，完成了写作任务。‎ ‎6.【2018年湖南省常德市】假设你是Amy，根据第二节（回答问题）材料，请用英文向市图书馆经理写一封80词以上的邮件，告诉他你丢失手机的事，如果他找到手机的话请他归还给你。‎ 注意：1. 内容包括第二节问题答案的所有信息（顺序可调整）；2.不得出现校名和人名等真实信息。‎ ‎【答案】Dear manager,‎ I am Amy.I lost my phone at the City Library on the afternoon of May 16.It is red.I attached my name on the phone.I want to get it back because I want to call my friends..If you find it ,you can call me at 0736-7891180.I will thank you a lot.‎ Yours,‎ Amy 12‎ ‎7.【2018年江苏省连云港市】积极锻炼是非常重要的，为此，某英文报开展了一次关于初中生段炼情况的调查活动。请你根据下列图表和相关文字提示,以“Exercising is important!”为题，用英语写一篇短文。‎ 要点 具体内容 调查数据 每天锻炼的时间 不经常锻炼的原因 锻炼的意义 有益身体健康;保持思维敏锐;变得自信快乐。‎ 你的建议 就如何更好地开展锻炼，提出你的建议(至少两点)。‎ 注意：(1)短文应包括所给内容要点,可适当发挥,使文章连贯;‎ ‎(2)词数90左右,短文开头已给出,不计入总词数;‎ ‎(3)短文中不得提及考生所在学校及自己的姓名等信息。‎ ‎(4)参考词汇:敏锐的sharp Exercising is important!‎ Recently, we have done a survey about students’ exercising. According to the survey, ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎【答案】Exercising is important!‎ Recenly, we have done a survey about students’ exereising, Aocording to the survey, 32% of the 12‎ ‎ students spend over one hour every day doing exercise, while 68% of them spend less than one hour. The reasons are as follows: Firstly, 46% of them have too much homework, so they have no time to do exercise. Secondly, 29% of them are not good a exercise. Thirdly, 25% of them are not interested in it.‎ As we all know, exercising is god for our health, which keeps our minds sharp and makes us confident and happy.‎ In my opinion, we should keep a balance between our study and exercising, Besids, we should develop a good habit of doing exercise. (104 words)‎ ‎8.【2018年江苏省无锡市中考】假设你名叫张华，是“2018无锡马拉松”组委会的一名工作人员。近日，外联络部转发给你一位牙买加选手的电子邮件，并附上了组委会的处理意见。请根据邮件内容及处理意见给他回复。‎ Dear sir/madam,‎ I'm Alfred from Jamaica. I took part in 2018 Wuxi Marathon on March 25 and I got a silver medal. I didn't realize you had got my name wrong until I showed the medal to my friends. My family name is Morrison, with double 'r'. However, there's only one 'r' on the medal. How could this happen?! :-(‎ Yours sincerely,‎ Alfred MoRRison 处理意见：‎ ‎1.重制奖牌，6月25日前寄出；‎ ‎2.提供一张免费机票作为补偿(compensation),两年内可从世界任意地点飞往上海；‎ ‎3. 旧奖牌须收回。‎ 注意事项：‎ ‎1.邮件内容须根据处理意见自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合情境；‎ 12‎ ‎2.词数在80个左右，邮件的首尾已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数；‎ ‎3. 邮件必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。‎ ‎【答案】Dear Morrison:‎ ‎ It is true that we have got your name wrong. I am sorry for making such a mistake.‎ ‎ We have decided to have made a new model for you after discussing it. It will be sent to you before June 25th. Meanwhile, we will offer you a free air ticket as compensation. You can fly to Shanghai from anywhere over the world within two years. But the old model must be taken back. If you have anything else, please contact with us anytime.‎ Thank you for supporting our work and wish you a good trip!‎ Yours sincerely,‎ Zhang Hua ‎【解析】这是一篇材料作文，以“2018无锡马拉松”组委会工作人员张华的名义给牙买加选手回复一封电子邮件，注意书信的格式。首先要认真阅读所提供的电子邮件，掌握其书信内容：来自牙买加的艾尔弗雷德在2018年无锡马拉松比赛获得了银牌，但奖牌上的名字“Morrison”漏写一个“r”，质疑组委会怎么会出现这种情况。在写作中要结合组委会的处理意见予以回复。首先要对所犯的错误表示道歉，然后结合三点处理意见逐一回复，最后要感谢对方对工作的支持并祝旅行愉快。在写作中，要注意有两处用到被动语态来表达：奖牌于6月25日前寄出（一般将来时的被动语态），旧奖牌须收回（含有情态动词的被动语态）。‎ ‎9.【2018年山东省滨州中考】某校正在开展“走进新时代，争当合格中学生”的演讲比赛，请以“We act, we improve” 为主题，写一篇演讲稿，谈谈中学生除了学习课本知识之外，还应该做些什么？ 演讲稿应包括以下内容：‎ ‎1.学会自立，诚实友善，举止文明；‎ ‎2.培养习惯，发展兴趣，不断创新；‎ ‎3.关心他人，和谐相处，懂得感恩； 4. ……‎ 要求：‎ ‎1.要点齐全，并适当发挥；‎ ‎2.文中不得出现真实的姓名与校名；‎ ‎3.卷面整洁，书写美观，可适当加 2－3 分；‎ ‎4.词数：80 词左右。开头部分已给出，不计入总词数。‎ We act, we improve 12‎ Ladies and gentlemen,‎ We have entered a new era. As students, it’s our duty to study hard. But to be a qualified middle school student, I think we have a lot of things to do.‎ ‎【答案】We act, we improve Ladies and gentlemen,‎ We have entered a new era. As students, it’s our duty to study hard. But to be a qualified middle school student, I think we have a lot of things to do.‎ First, we should learn to be independent and honest. We’re supposed to be friendly to others and behave politely in public. Second, we should have good habits. Habits play an important role in our life. We’d better develop our interests and the ability to create. Third, we should care more about others and be thankful to all the people who have helped us. Value the time we spend with our family and friends in our daily life. Last but not least, I think we should exercise more to keep healthy.‎ In a word, the more we act, the better we will improve.‎ ‎【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，以“We act，we improve”为主题，写一篇演讲稿，谈谈中学生除了学习课本知识之外，还应该做些什么？结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时，人称为第一人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：I think……，First, we usually learn to……，Second, we should……，We must not……等句式的应用。写作中注意多种句式交替运用，不要漏掉任何一个写作要点，注意叙述顺序符合逻辑关系。 可能用到的词组：learn to do sth., be supposed to do, be friendly to sb., play an important role in, had better, the ability to create, care more about等等。‎ 高分句型： ‎ ‎1. We should care more about others and be thankful to all the people who have helped us. 我们应该更加关心别人，感谢所有帮助过我们的人。‎ care more about更加关心，be thankful to对……感恩，who have helped us.为定语从句，修饰先行词the people。‎ ‎2. In a word, the more we act, the better we will improve. 总之，我们行动越多，我们的提高就越好。‎ 两个比较级的句子叠加，表示“越……越……”。‎ 12‎ ‎10.【2018年山东省枣庄市】Use the following information to write a paragraph about bees.‎ ‎●Be as busy learning all their subjects as bees are busy gathering honey ‎●They have sharp stings(刺) to harm them and protect themselves.‎ ‎●Wise and busy ‎●No gains ‎●Does its own work ‎●Driven from the hive to be stopped from eating the honey before winter comes ‎●Join together to build cells of wax（蜡质房子） for their honey ‎●How busy they are always ‎●Don't work ‎●That have six sides and are all of one shape and size ‎●A house called a hive ‎●One queen Bees live in.. They are... There is,. in each hive. They a.. Each bee.‎ They Bees live in… They are… There is… in each hive. They all… Each bee… They build cells… It’s pleasant to see… But drones… They are… Children shouldn’t touch bees… No pains… Shouldn’t children…‎ ‎【答案】Bees live in a house called a hive. They are wise and busy. There is one queen in each hive. They all join together to build cells of wax(蜡质房子) for their honey. Each bee does its own work. They build cells that have six sides and are all of one shape and size. It's pleasant to see how busy they are always, But drones don't work. They are driven from the hive to be stopped from eating the honey before winter comes. Children shouldn't touch bees because they have sharp stings(刺) to harm them and protect themselves. No pains, no gains. Shouldn't children be as busy learning all their subjects as bees are busy gathering honey?‎ ‎11.【2018年上海市中考】Write at least 60 words on the topic" My 12‎ ‎ progress(以“进步了”为题,写一信不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格)‎ 你在生活或学习中一定取得过不少进步,比如生活技能的获得、学习方法的掌握、良好习慣的养成。请选取其中一个方面,结合自身经历,谈一谈你是如何取得这一进步的。‎ ‎（注意:短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息,否则不予评分。）‎ The following is for reference only(以下表达仅供参考)‎ used to do/be…‎ try my best to do…‎ make progress in( doing.…‎ ‎【答案】I used to write badly, especially in English. It affected my performance every composition. I felt annoyed because I didn’t know how to do it.‎ Several months ago, our English teacher reminded us to pay attention to our English Writing. He prepared a copybook for each student. We were asked to practice every day. I tried my best to copy well. The teacher encouraged me and kept on telling me what to do next. With the help of my English teacher, I made progress in writing.‎ No pains no gains. I will study hard to achieve greater progress and I believe I will do better and better.‎ ‎【解析】作文要求以“My progress”为题，叙述自己一次进步的过程。故取得怎样进步是描述的重点，以前怎样，以后怎样也需要简单叙述。时态以一般过去时为主，人称为第一人陈。可以借鉴所提供的词组，另外，写作时还需注意语句间的衔接，语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。‎ 12‎