2019届高三英语二轮复习书面表达专项练习（15）短文续写一

2019届高三英语二轮复习书面表达专项练习（15）短文续写一

短文续写一1、阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。   Weallcouldsaythatwehavebaddaystoendureaswegothroughlife,butwhatdoesittaketohaveareallygoodday?   Somewouldsuggestthatadaywouldbegreatifeverythingtheydidturnedoutwell,ortheygotexactlywhattheyneeded.Ontheotherhand,haveyoueverthoughtthatwhatyoumaygivesomeoneelsemaybethebestdayyoueverhadespeciallywhenyouputsomeoneelse’swell-beingorhappinessfirstonyourlist?   Thereisspecialwarmthavailabletoyouandthatwarmthcancomefromahelpinghand,doingasmallfavorforatotalstranger,orevenasmile.   IrecalladayrecentlywhenIhadtogotothehospitalforanappointmentbecauseIwasn’tfeelingwellandmydoctorsentmetoaspecialisttotryanddeterminethecause.   AsIdrovetothehospital,Iadmittedlywasfeelinggloomyandcertainlywasn’tontopofmygame.AsIapproachedthehospital,Ibeganmysearchforaparkingspot,aspotthatwashardtocomewitheveryoneelsetryingtodothesamething.Ifinallyfoundaspotnottoofarfromtheentrancetothehospital.   AsIgotoutandbroughtmychangeoutofmypocket,Inoticedamanlookingsomewhatupsetstandinginfrontofaparkingmetertwocarsaway.HeseemedtobesearchinghispocketsforwhatIsupposedwaschangeforthemeter.   Although,Ireallydidn’tfeelthatgreat,IthoughtthatIshouldatleastgoovertohimandfindoutifIcouldhelphim.AsIapproachedhim,heturnedtolookatme,feelingatalossnotknowingwhattodo.IaskedhimifhehadaproblemIcouldhelpwith,andhesaid,withouthesitation,thathehadnochangeatallbecauseheleftitinhishouseonlythinkingaboutvisitinghissickwife.注意:1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3. 续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;n4. 续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1:   Facedwithsuchasituation,Ireachedintomypocket.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:   ThefunnythingwasthatIfeltalotbrighter,andasmallsmilecametomyface.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2、阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。   Haveyoueverhadtoovercomeanextremechallengeinyourlife?   Myteenageyearshadbeeninsane.Fromschoolworktoathletics,Ihadalwaysbeenrunningaround.Everythingwassodifficult.   ThroughoutmyhecticteenageyearsIhavebeenfacedwithmanyextremechallengesthathaverequiredextremefocusandhardworktoovercome.Ifithadn’tbeenforhardwork,noneofthesechallengesthatIfacedwouldhavebeenconquered.   Twoyearsago,whenIwasafreshmaninhighschool,Idealtwithanextremelysignificantinjury.ThistookplaceinmytennistournamentinJanuaty.Intheclimaxofmymatch,Ijoltedmybacktotheleftand soonafterfeltasharp,painfulshockrunthroughmyspine.IknewatthatdifficultmomentIseriouslyinjuredmyback.nIwasrushedoffthecourtandmyparentsmadeanappointmentwithanorthopedist(矫形外科医生)forthenextmorning.   Iwalkedintotheofficeextremelynervousandsufferingfromexcruciatingpain.MytennisseasonforschoolstartedinthreemonthsandIabsolutelyneededtobuildupthestrength.   Afterabouttwentyminutesofwaitingintheoffice,whichfeltlikeaneternity,thedoctorwalkedintoexaminemyX-rays.Withasorrowfulface,thedoctorlookedintomineandmymother'seyesandsaid,Thereisa50/50chancethatLucaswillbeabletoparticipateinthisyearnstennisseason.LucasbrokehisL5vertebraeinhislowerback."MyheartdroppedandIfeltasadnesscomeoverme.ThedoctorsaidthatIwouldbesittingoutofphysicalactivityfortwoandahalftothreemonths.   Thosethreemonthswerethelongestthreemonthsofmylife.Iwassoeagertogetbacktopracticesfortheseason.Everyday,IwouldthinkabouthowitwasgoingtobewhenIwasfullyhealthy.Iaskedmyself,"AmIgoingtobeoutofshape?ShouldIevenplaythisyear?Iprobablywon'thaveasuccessfulseason."   Fromthatdreadfuldayon,Idecidedthat Iwasgoingtoputintheworktobebackintopformandhaveasuccessfulseason.注意:1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3. 续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4. 续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1:   After Igotthe"allclear"frommyorthopedistlwasgoingtogettowork.n______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:  Myhardworkprovedtobeveryeffective. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3、阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。   IamSadie.Iloveoceans,especiallytheonenearmygrandma'shousewithbeautifulshells.Why?That'swhatIamabouttotellyou.   Itallstartedwhenmyparentsdivorcedafewweeksago.Ihadremainedsilentsincethen.SomymotherdecidedtosendmetoFloridatolivewithmygrandma.   Onthewaytomygrandma’shouse,mymothersaid,“Sadie,IknowwearenotthebestfamilyyoucanhaveandItrulyapologize.Ijustdonotknowhowtobeamother.Butremember,Sadie,whateverhappened,Idoloveyou."Thesewordsmademesadder.   Whenwearrived,Grandmatoldmetogoupstairsandunpackmythingswhileshespoketomymother.WhenIsawablueandgreenpaintedroomwithahugewindowandacomfortablebed,Ithought,MovingtoFloridamightnotbethatbad."Icomfortedmy-selfasIwalkedtowardsthewindow.Iopenedthecurtainsandsawsky-bluewavesslowlywashingawaythesandonthebeachandseabirdsflyingintheclearsky.Theoceanwasonlyafewhundredmetersawayfromhere.   Aftermymotherleft,Grandmasoftlytouchedmyshoulder,“IwanttotakeyoutotheplaceIcalled 'theBigBlue’.AndIthinkyoumightlikeit."(Iguessyoucouldknowwhereitis.)   BeforeIsteppedonthesandIcouldsmelltheocean.Togetherweenjoyedthesunsetwithawholelotofyellowandorange.SuddenlyshepickedoutthemostnbeautifulshellIhadeverseeninmylife.Itwasalmostgold,shininginthesunlight.Icouldn’tmovemyeyesoffit.注意:1. 所续写短文的同数应为150左右;2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3. 续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你好;4. 续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键短语Paragraph1:"WanttoknowhowIgetthroughmyparents'divorce?"Grandmaasked.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:  "Thebeautifulshellsheregavemethecouragetoliveon,” Grandmasaid. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4、阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。   Jamieranoutofhishousealongthestreettowardhisbuilding.Theabandonedbuildingstherewerehisplayground.   Jamiemovedawoodenboardfromthedoortooneofthebuildings.Hecrawledinside.Therewasbrokenglassonthefloor.Jamiewentdownthestairstothenbasement.Itwasevendarkerdownthere,anddamp.Thebuildingswereneartheriver.Sometimeswaterfloodedin.He'dneverfoundanythingalive untilhefoundSharon.   “Sharon,I’mhere!”Jamiecalled.“Ibroughtacandle,too.I'mgoingtolightitsoIcanseeyoubetter."   Jamietookoutamatchandlitthecandle.Asoftcircleoflightlitupthedarkness.   “ComeoverherewhereIcanseeyou,”Jamiesaid.“Pleasedon’tbeafraid.I’mnotafraid.Itoldyouthat.”   Thecreatureslithered(滑行)intothelight.ItwasaboutJamie’ssize.Itsheadandbodywerecoveredwithdarkgreenscales(鱗片).Inthelightofthecandle,thescalesshonelikediamonds.Thecreature’seyesglowedred,suddenly,likehotcoals.Itsnostrils(鼻孔)flared,givingoffheat.Jamiestared.Hethoughthehadneverseenanythingsobeautiful.That’swhyhe’ddecidedtocallthecreatureSharon.Hewantedtogiveabeautifulnametohisnewpet.   “Gee,Sharon,”hesaid,“Iwishyoucouldtalk.Idon’tknowifyouunderstandmeornot.AndI,dreallylikeyoutotellmehowyougothere.   Thecreaturedidn’tanswer.ItjustlookedatJamie.Itsmouthopenedslightlyandsomethingwhitegleamed.Jamiethoughtitwassmiling.   “Well,”saidJamie,"Ihopeyou’rehungry.Ibroughtyouachickensandwich.”   Thecreaturelookeddownatthesandwich,thinkingaboutsomethingelse,butmadenomovetoeatit.   “I'lljustleavethefoodhereforyou,"Jamiesighed.“IwishIcouldstay.ButIhavetogo.Momisonmycaserightnow.I’dhelpher.I’llcomebacktomorrowafterschool.”注意:1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3. 续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4. 续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。nParagraph1:   Jamieturnedtogo.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:   WhenJamiegothome,hismotherlookedangry.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5、阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。   WhenIwastenIwassuddenlyverysad,forIhadtomovefromtheonlyhomeIhadeverknown.Mywholelifehadbeenspentinthatbigoldhousewhichsawthelaughterandtearsoffourgenerations.   Whenthefinaldaycame,Irantothefrontofthehouseandsatalone,crying.SuddenlyIfeltahandrestonmyshoulder.Ilookeduptoseemygrandfather.“Itisn’teasy,isit,Billy?"hesaidsoftly,sittingdownonthestepsbesideme.   “Grandpa,”IrepliedhowcanIeversaygoodbyetoyouandallmyfriends?”   “Goodbyeissuchasadword,"hesaid."Itseemstoofinal,toocool,whichhasonethingincommon:sadness.”   Hegentlytookmyhandinhis.“Comewithme,myfriend,”hewhispered.   Wewalked,handinhand,tohisfavoriteplaceinthefrontyard,wheretherewasahugeredrosebush—hisbelovedrosebush.   "Whatdoyouseehere,Billy?”heasked.n   Ilookedattheflowers,notknowingwhattosay,"Iseesomethingbeautiful,Grandpa."   “Itisn’tjusttherosesthatarebeautiful,Billy.It’sthatspecialplaceinyourheartthatmakesthemso.”Hiseyesmetmineagain.“Billy,Iplantedtheserosesalongtimeago—beforeyourmotherwasevenadream.Iputthemintothesoilthedaymyfirstsonwasbom.ItwasmywayofsayingthankyoutoGod.Thatboy'snamewasBilly.Iusedtowatchhimpickrosesforhismother.   Isawmygrandfather’stears.Ihadneverseenhimcrybefore.Hisvoicebecamehoarse(嘶哑的).   "Onedayaterriblewarcame,andmyson,likesomanysons,wentawaytofightagreatevil.HeandIwalkedtothetrainstationtogether...Threemonthslateratelegramcame.MysonhaddiedinItaly.AllIcouldthinkofwasthatthelastthingIsaytohiminhislifewasgoodbye."注意:1. 所续写短文的同数应为150左右;2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3. 续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4. 续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1:   Grandpaslowlystoodup.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:   Soonmygrandfatherbecameseriouslyill.n______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________6、阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。   TommyandMicklewalkedalongthebeach,lookingforanadventure.Theyjokedthatsomedaytheywouldfindatalkingfishoramermaidorabottlewithatreasuremapinside.Sofartheyhadonlyfoundshellsandrocksandseaweed.Todaywasdifferentthough.Theboysfeltexcited.   Seacrabsscamperedontherocks,uponesideanddowntheother.Theywerequickandlively.Thetidedidn'tseemtoeverwashthemaway.ThenTommysawafish.Itwastrappedonthebeach,justfloppingaround.   "Canittalk?''Mickleasked.   “Itlookslikeanyotherfish,”Tommysaid.Hepickeditupgentlyandcarriedittothewater.“Doyouthinkitwillgrantusanywishes?"Micklelaughed.   Theboyswatchedasthesilverfishspedoffthroughthewater.“No.Maybenexttime”,Tommygrinned.   Asthetwofriendswalkedfartherdownthebeachtheycameuponabottle.Itwasgreenwithacorkinthemouth.   “Ourluckwillchange.Doesithaveamaporagenieinside?”Micklejoked.   Micklereacheddownandpickedupthebottle.Herubbedit.Nothinghappened.Hepulledonthecork.Nothinghappened.Heshookit.Nothinghappened.   “Trythecorkagain.Ibetthegenieiswaitingforustoreleasehim.Orwe'llfindatreasuremapandhavearealadventure,Tommyexclaimed.   Mickletuggedagainonthecork.Hewiggleditbackandforth.Hetwisteditaroundandaround.Finallyitpoppedoutwithoutbreaking.Mickleshookthebottle.Nothingcameout.Lookinginsidehecouldn,tseeanything.Tommylookedtooandshookhishead.Empty.n   “It’sjustanoldwinebottle,”Tommycomplained.Hegrabbedthebottleandtosseditbackontothesand.注意:1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3. 续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4. 续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1:   Thebottlehitarockandshatteredintomanypieces.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:   Thetwoboysranafterit.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________7、阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。   Everyyearonmybirthday,fromthetime1turned12,awhitegardeniawasdeliveredtomyhouseinBethesda,Maryland.Nocardornotecamewithit.Callstothefloristwerealwaysinvain—itwasacashpurchase.AfterawhileIstoppedtryingtodiscoverthesendersidentityandwasjustdelightedinthebeautyandfragranceofthatmagical,perfectwhiteflowerplacedinsoftpinktissuepaper.n   However,Ineverstoppedimaginingwhotheanonymousgivermightbe.Mymothercontributedtotheseimaginings.Andatthattime,she’daskmeiftherewassomeoneforwhomIhaddoneaspecialkindnessshowingappreciation.Asateenager,IhadmorefunimaginingthatitmightbeaboyIfellinloveoronewhohiidnoticedmeeventhoughIdidn’tknowhim.   WhenIwas17,aboybrokemyheart.Thenighthecalledforthelasttime,Icriedmyselftosleep.WhenIawokeinthemorning,therewasalineofwordsonmymirrorinredlipstick.IthoughtaboutthatquotationfromEmersonforalongtime,anduntilmyhearthealedandwenttogettheglasscleaned,mymotherkneweverythingwasallrightagain.Onemonthbeforemyhighschoolgraduation,myfatherdiedofaheartattack.Myfeelingsrangedfromgrieftoabandonment,fearandoverwhelminganger;mydadwasmissingsomeofthemostimportanteventsinmylife.Ibecamecompletelyuninterestedinmycominggraduation,theplayandtheprom.Butmymother,inthemidstofherowngrief,wouldnothearofmyskippinganyofthosethings.   Thedaybeforemyfatherdied,mymotherandIhadgoneshoppingforapromdress.We'dfoundaspectacular,andimpressiveone,withyardsandyardsofdottedSwissinred,whiteandblue.注意: 1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右; 2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语; 3. 续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好; 4. 续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。 Paragraph1: Itmademefeellikeafilmstar,butitwasthewrongsize. n______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2: Shealwayslovedherchildrenalltheway. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________8、阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。   Alexstaredthroughthecabinwindowatthedarkness.Soonhisdadwouldcallhim.“We’reready,”Dadsaidashecameinfromtheporch.“Grabyourrod.”Alexturnedawayfromthewindowandslowlypickeduphisfishingrod.   “Weshouldhavedonethisbefore,’’Dadsaid.‘‘Let’sgocatchingabigone!Maybewecanseesomerareinsectsandanimals,suchasfirefliesandwhippoorwills!’’Dadpickeduphistacklebox,rod,andbaitcanfromtheporch.   Theywalkeddownthehilltowardthelake.TheonlythingAlexcouldseewasthecircleofweedsandrocksattheirfeet.   Insectvoicesfilledhisears.Hundredsofbugswaitedinthedarktoattack.“Mosquitoes,’’Dadsaid.“ Ibroughtsomespraytokeepthemoff.”   SuddenlysomethingrushedpastAlex’shead.Hegasped.“Whatwasthat?”   “Probablyabat,”Dadsaid.   “Willbatsbeflyingaroundourheadsthewholetime?”“Thisistheirtimetobeoutcatchinginsects,’’Dadexplained.“Theywon’thurtyou."Hepushedtheboatoffthegravelandjumpedin.   Dadrowedtothemiddleofthelakeandstopped.“We’lljustlettheboatdriftforawhile.Keeptheflashlightinthebottomoftheboat.Thefishwon'tbiteiftheyseelightflashingaround.WhenweVedonebaitingourhooks,we'llturnthelightoff.”n   Leaningdowntogetclosertothelight,Alextriedtothreadawormonhishook,buthecouldn’tseemtoworkhisfingersright.Sowhatifthewormwasonlypartlyonthehook?Hedidn’twanttofishanyway.Hedidn’tevenwanttobehere.   Dadswitchedofftheflashlight,andthenightfelloverthemlikeaheavycape.“Ican’tseeanything,”Alexsaidweakly.   “Themoon’shalffull.Itgivesussomelight,"Dadsaid.   Alexlookedup.Surelyenough,therewasthemoon.Andhecouldseetheshorelineandthedarkformsoftrees.注意:1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3. 续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4. 续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1:   Lookingintothetreesontheshore,Alexnoticedtinypointsoflighttwinklingthere.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2: Dadtooka sandwichfromhisjacketpocketandhandedittoAlex. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________n答案1答案：Paragraph1:   Facedwithsuchasituation,Ireachedintomypocket.SoonIpulledoutsomechangeandgaveittohim,withouthesitationandsavingasingleword,Iwentontowardscompletingmyownbusiness.Asyouknow,Ihadanappointment,foraresponse,IturnedonmvheelandsaidtohimasIwaswalkingaway,"Haveagoodday."Paragraph2:   ThefunnythingwasthatIfeltalotbrighter,andasmallsmilecametomyface.AndIseemedtowalkjustalittlequicker.Iwaswalkingawaywhenhecalledout "thankyousomuch"farbehind.Honestly,Ididn’tevenexpecthimtosayanything.ItwassatisfyingenoughtoknowthatIhadmadeasimplegesturetohelpsomeoneelsewhoneededalittlehand,alittlehelp.However,itbroughttomyfaceasmile.Itdoesn'ttakemuchtolendthoseinneedahelpinghand;abigpayoffiswhatyougetinreturn.Moreimportantly,withsuchwarmthcatchingon,oursocietywillbecomemoreandmoreharmoniousandcomfortable. (164words)2答案：Paragraph1:   AfterIgotthe "allclear''frommyorthopedistIwasgoingtogettowork.PracticesweregoingtostartintwoweeksandIwasdeterminedtogetbackonthecourt.Myhungerforsuccessmademeplayandworkoutfortwohoursevendaybeforetheseason.Throughpractices, IwouldhitthegymandtrytobuildupthestrengththatIhadbeforetheinjury.Paragraph2:   Myhardworkprovedtobeveryeffective.Ihadthemostsuccessfulseasonofmycareer.Imadeittothefinals.AlthoughItrulywantedtowin,Iknewthatitwasagreataccomplishmentformetobeinthatpositionevennotinthefirstplace.TheinjurywasalmostagoodthingbecauseIprovedtomyselfthatIamcapableofachievinggoalsthatIstrivefor,throughhardworkofcourse.Thatseasonwasnbyfarthemostrewardingseasonofmycareer.Ifeltsoaccomplishedattheendoftheseason.Hardworkalwayspaysoff. (154words)3答案：Paragraph1:   “WanttoknowhowIgetthroughmyparents’divorce?”Grandmaasked.Shesmiledtomeandcontinued,"Inthosedays,Ifeltverysorrowfulbecauseneitherofmyparentscaredaboutme,whichmademewanttoendmylife.Butfinally,Ididn'tdolikethat.Inordertokilltime,Ialwayswenttothebeach(Icalledit'theBigBlue’).Muchtomysurprise,Ifoundthatthereweresuchbeautifulshellsonthebeach”.Paragraph2:   "Thebeaulifulshellsheregavemethecouragetoliveon,"Grandmasaid."Honey,youarestillhappy.Althoughyourparentsdivorced,thevbothloveyou.Yourmotherrangmethismorning,tellingmethatyouloveoceans.Therefore,Ibroughtyouhere.AlsoIhopeyoucangetinspirationandcourage."HearingthisIlookedupattheblueskyandthevastsea.Suddenly,Ifeltalittlerelaxedandnatural,andheldthefirmbeliefthatImustcheerup,justlikethemostbeautifulshell,fullofcolor.(150words)标准范文Paragraph1:   "WanttoknowhowIgetthroughmyparents'divorce?”Grandmaasked.Seeingmenoddingcuriously,shecontinued,“Ifeltextremelypainfulasyoumightbenow.Idon'tknowwhytheyseparatedfromeachother.Iaskedmymotherthereasonsfordivorceoverandoveragain.Butshewouldn'ttellme,whichmademefeelevenmoredepressed.ThenIthoughtof‘theBigBlue’.AtthatmomentIwantedtoendmylifehere.ButIdidn’t."Paragraph2:   Thebeautifulshellsheregavemethecouragetoliveont"Grandmasaid."Justnow,yourmothertoldmethatyoulikeoceans.SoIbroughtyouhere.AndIhopeyoucanseethecouragetoo."Ilookedcarefullyatthemostbeautifulshellninmygrandma’shand,thenthevastoceanandthebluesky.OnlythendidIunderstandthebeautyandmeaningoflife.MovingtoFloridawasnotbadatall!(156words)4答案：高分范文Paragraph1:   Jamieturnedtoso.Hewalkedbackslowlvalongthebasementfloor.Thecreatureraiseditsheadandwatchedhimcarefully.anditsmouthopenedslightlyandaseriesofbubblescameoutswiftly.Itlookedasifitwastalkingalot.AfterJamiedisappearedinthedistance,thecreatureslitheredbackintoitscorner.Paragraph2:   WhenJamiegothome,hismotherlookedangry.Shegrabbedhim, andasked,“Oh,myGod!Annoyingguy,andvou’reallright. Wherehavevoubeen?Youmademesoworried!Why,justlastweekalittleboydisappearedonhiswayhomefromschool."However,hereallydidn'tlisten,insteadheseemedtobethinkingaboutsomethingelse.“Mommy,whynotbuyapetforme?I'mlonely,soIranout.”Hearingthis,Jamie'smothersmiledbyherself."Okay,okay,I’llthinkaboutitseriously,butyouhavetopromisetotakegoodcareofyourpel.Youdoneedaplaymate.”Jamiehuggedhismotherhappily. "Oh,thanks.Mom.I'lltellSharonthegoodnewsimmediately!"Jamierushedout. (170words)标准范文Paragraph1:   Jamieturnedtogo.Thecreaturewatchedhim,anditsmouthopenedslightly.Itlookedlikesmiling.Thecreatureslitheredbackintoitscomer.Hemadehiswaycarefullyacrosstheslipperybasementfloor.Jamiehurriedalongthestreettowardhisbuilding.Paragraph2:   WhenJamiegothome,hismotherlookedangry."Wherehaveyoubeen,youngman?Now,getintothatroomofyoursandcleanitup.’’ButJamiewasn’treallynlistening.Heseemedtobethinkingaboutsomethingelse."Well,therearenokidsofmyageinthisbuilding.That’swhyIgooutsomuch.IfIhadapettoplaywith,I'dtakecareofit,too.CanIhaveapet,please?”Jamie’smotherlaughedinspiteofherself.‘‘Okay,okay,"shesaidsmiling.“Iguessyoudoneedaplaymate.Ijusthopeitisn’ttoodirty.”Jamiehuggedhismotheraroundthewaist."Oh,thanks,Mom.I'llgogetSharonrightnow.Iknowyou’lllikeher!”Jamiedisappearedagain.(158words)5答案：高分范文Paragraph1:   Grandpaslowlystoodup.Hesaid,"Myfriend,pleaseneversay,goodbyeforever,andnevergiveintovoursadnessandloneliness.Insteadlifeisuncertain,andonlywhenyoufirstsaidhellotoafriendareyourjoyandhappinessofthosetimesworthcherishing.Pleaseleavethatspecial helloinyourheart."Paragraph2:   Soonmygrandfatherbecameseriouslyill.Threemonthslater,doctorsfinallyannouncedthathislifewasabouttoend.4Hischildrentookturnstotakecareofhimandsaygoodbye.Heaskedhiskidsto movehisbednexttothewindow,throughwhichhecouldseehisbelovedrosebush.Eventually,I,ashisoldestgrandchild,wasassignedtosaygoodbyetohim."Hello,Grandpa,"Isniffed.Hiseyesslowlyopened,"Hello,Billy,don'tsob."Hesmiled.ButIwasoutofcontrol,cryingoutside.Anunclecametotellmethatmygrandfatherhadpassedaway.However,hisdeepwordswillnevergoaway.(151words)标准范文Paragraph1:   Grandpaslowlystoodup."Don'teversaygoodbye,Billy.Don'tevergiveintothesadnessandtheloneliness.InsteadIwantyoutorememberthejoyandthenhappinessofthosetimeswhenyoufirstsaidhellotoafriend.Takethatspecialhelloandlockitinyourheart.”Paragraph2:   Soonmygrandfatherbecameseriouslyill.Whenhereturnedfromthehospitalthreemonthslaterhewantedhisbednexttothewindow,fromwherehecouldseehisbelovedrosebush.Thenthefamilywascalledhome.Itwasdecidedthathisgrandchildrenwouldbeallowedtosaytheirgoodbyestohimonebyone."Hello,Grandpa,"Iwhispered.Hiseyesslowlyopened,"Hello,myfriend,”hesaid,withasmile.Eventuallymygrandfatherdied.RememberingGrandpa’swords,Ikeptinmyinnerheartthosespecialfeelingsthathadmadeupourfriendship.Suddenlyandtruly,Iknewwhathehadmeantaboutneversayinggoodbye—justrefusingtogiveintothesadness. (155words)6答案：Paragraph1:   Thebottlehitarockandshatteredintomanypieces.BothTommyandMicklegasped asthey sawalong,silverkeyonthegroundintheglasspieces. Thentheylookedateachother.Whydidn'titmakenoisewhentheyshookthebottle?Whydidn'ttheyseeit? Micklebentovertopickupthekey.Suddenlytheglasspiecescametogethertoformabottleagain.Thekeywasmysteriouslybackinside!Andthebottlebeganrollingslowlytowardthesea.Paragraph2:   Thetwoboysranafterit.Whentheyenteredthesea,astonishinglytheydidn'tsinkintothewaterbutfloatedonthesurfaceofit.Theyfeltexcited.Theyfollowedthebottleandthenitstoppednearanislandwheretherewasmuchtreasurelikediamondsandstones. “ Youcantakeasmuchaspossible,”avoicecamefromthecoastwhereatalkingfishwasswimming.ItwasthetrappedfishthatTommysavedandputbackintothewater.(149words)7答案：nParagraph1:   Itmademefeellikeafilmstar,butitwasthewrongsize.AlthoughIlikeditverymuch,Ifeltquitesorryforitswrongsize.Thenextday,myfatherdied,andIhadnotimetodealwiththedress,soIthrewitatrandom.However,untilthedaybeforetheprom,Ifoundanewdresswashunginthelivingroomitwastherightsize!Mymotherdidit.Reliefandgratitudefilledmyheart.Paragraph2:   Shealwayslovedherchildrenalltheway.Shenotonlywouldcomeupwithavarietyofwaystomeetherchildren'sneeds,butalsowouldbeveryartistictoshowherlovetoherchildren.Forexample,deliveringawhitegardeniatomyhouseeveryyearonmybirthdaywasamagicalandmysteriousincidenttomeallthetime.ButIdidn'tknowthetruthuntilmymotherdiedbecausethegardeniastoppedcoiningafterthatyear.Andatthattime,Icouldnotstopmytearsofgratituderollingdown. (158words)8答案：Paragraph1:   Lookingintothetreesontheshore,Alexnoticedtinypointsoflighttwinklingthere.Thelongerhelooked,themoreflasheshesawinthedark.Theylookedlikestarsthatcamedownfromthesky."Look,Dad,fireflies!”“Perfect!’’Dadnodded.Aloudwhistlingsounderuptedfromthewoods.“Listen!”saidDad.“It’sthewhippoorwill.We’rereallyluckytohearthewhippoorwill!"Alexhadneverheardsuchanodd,excitingcall一sadbutquick.Itblockedouteventhingelse.Indeed,theotherniehtcreaturesseemedtostayquietforawhiletolistentothewhippoorwill.Paragraph2:   DadtookasandwichfromhisjacketpocketandhandedittoAlex."Wemightgethungry."Alexunwrappeditandtookabigbite."Myfavorite!"AfterawhileDadrowedintotheshore.Theydidnotcaughtabigone一onlythreesmallfishandtheyputthembackintothelake.Buttheyhadagoodtime.Theytieduptheboatandwalkedbacktothecabinthroughthelightofthefireflies. (147words)