备战2021 中考英语 导练案 考点44 书面表达之观点看法类 (学生版)

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备战2021 中考英语 导练案 考点44 书面表达之观点看法类 (学生版)

考点 44 书面表达之观点看法类 一般来说,观点看法类文章的内在逻辑关系十分清晰,它除了考查考生的英文基础,还考查考生的逻 辑能力。具体来说就是上下文的衔接过渡和文章层次的体现。文章段落之间的逻辑关系主要由过渡性的词 和短语来完成,在修辞中称为"启、承、转、合"。"启"就是开头,"承"就是承接,"转"是转折," 合"是综合或总结。 1. 用于表示"启"的过渡性的词和短语通常用在段落或文章的开头。此类过渡性的词和短语有 first, first of all, at first, in the first place, firstly, to begin with, to start with, recently, now, at present, in recent years, in general, generally speaking, lately 等。 2. 用于表示"承"的过渡性的词和短语通常用在段落中的第一个扩展句中。此类过渡性的词和短语有 second, in addition, besides, then, moreover, what’s more, what’s worse, for example, certainly, obviously, in other words, still, at the same time, no doubt 等。 3. 用于表示"转"的过渡性的词和短语通常用在段落中的第二个扩展句中。此类过渡性的词和短语有 but, however, on the other hand, on the contrary, otherwise, while, despite, in spite of 等。 4. 用于"合"的过渡性的词和短语通常用在段落的结论句或文章的结论段中。过渡性词和短语有 in a word, in short, above all, after all, finally, therefore, as a result, on the whole, in summary 等。 总之,要做好书面表达,需要大家把握以下几个原则:细读提示,抓要点:选择句型,准表达;确定 线索,巧组合;适当发挥,保完整;规范书写,争高分;细查全文,除笔误。 一、写作方法——十句作文法 第一段为开头,包括两句。第一句为主题句,提出问题并通过问题点明全文主题;第二句为扩展句, 进一步说明和支持主题句。另外,也可调整两句的顺序,由第一句说明情况,第二句提出问题。 第二段为正文,共七句。第一句为主题句,提出本段的主题,它应与第一段的主题相一致。第二句至 第七句为扩展句,说明和支持本段的主题。句与句之间要注意运用好过渡词,以使行文流畅。 第三段为结尾,简化为一句,是对全文的总结,并说明作者自己的观点。 三段之间的衔接要灵活运用"启、承、转、合"的过渡手段。 二、应急百宝箱 遇到要点不会表达怎么办?词数不达标怎么办?不要急,"一代,五加,一扩"帮你轻松解决问题。"一 代,五加,一扩"具体说来就是: 1. 以实代虚——写实 2. 增加限定语——定语、状语等 3. 增加例子——for example, such as 4. 增加原因——进一步说明 5. 加套语(词块) 6. 加格言、谚语等——进一步说明 7. 扩充建议——自主发挥,点到即可 三、注意事项 1. 观点鲜明,文章一定有一个明确的中心论点——主题。 2. 层次分明,一个中心论点通常有几个分论点支持,层次要分明,过渡要自然。 3. 最后一段一般要总结全文,得出一个符合逻辑的结论,突出中心思想。 4. 通常采用一般现在时。 5. 语言简洁有力,一般不采用口语。 一、开头句型 As far as is concerned It goes without saying that It can be said with certainty that As the proverb says It has to be noticed that It’s generally recognized that It’s likely that It’s hardly too much to say that What calls for special attention is that 需要特别注意的是 There’s no denying the fact that 毫无疑问,无可否认 Nothing is more important than the fact that What’s far more important is that 二、衔接句型 A case in point is As is often the case As stated in the previous paragraph 如前段所述 But the problem is not so simple. Therefore 然而问题并非如此简单,所以…… But it’s a pity that For all thatIn spite of the fact that Further, we hold opinion that However, the difficulties in Similarly, we should pay attention to not (that)but (that) 不是……而是…… In view of the present station 鉴于目前形势 As has been mentioned above 综上所述 In this respect, we many as well (say) 从这个角度上我们可以说…… However, we have to look at the other side of the coin, that is 然而我们还得看到事物的另一方面,即…… 三、结尾句型 I will conclude by saying Therefore, we have the reason to believe that All things considered 总而言之 It may be safely said that Therefore, in my opinion, it’s more advisable It can be concluded from the discussion that 从中我们可以得出这样的结论 From my point of view, it would be better if 在我看来……也许更好 四、万能句型 Let’s taketo illustrate this. 试举例以兹证明 Let’s take the above chart as an example to illustrate this. It remains to be further studied There’s question is how 观点看法类作文的整体结构有一定的模式可循,可以先写对比的一方面,再写另外一方 面;也可以将对比的两个方面的不同点——比较着写。 对比观点看法类作文的写作摸板 The topic of 主题 is becoming more and more popular recently. There are two sides of opinions about it. Some people say A is their favourite. They hold their view for the reason of 理由一 . What’s more, 理由二 . Moreover, 理由三 . While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons. First, 理由一 . Second(Besides), 理由二 . Third(Finally), 理由三 . From my point of view, I think 我的观点 . The reason is that 原因 . As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice. For me, the former (later) is surely a wise choice. A 在本学期居家学习期间,你是如何开展学习的?有什么收获?请结合你的学习经历和体验谈一谈。(除 诗歌外文体不限。) Expressions for references: take online courses, watch video lectures, organize Wechat groups, share the experience follow the advice, the self-learning ability ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ B 学校英文校刊就音乐和美术是否应该纳入初中毕业学业考试展开了调研,同学们各抒己见。请你根据 下表内容,用英文写一篇作文,讨论调研结果,并谈谈你的看法。 赞成的人 1、更多学习音乐和美术的机会 2、提高我们的技能 反对的人 更多,更大压力 你的观点 要求:1、短文应包含上述信息。开头已给出。 2、短文应结构完整,语句通顺,衔接自然。 3、文中不能出现个人真实信息。 4、词数:80 词左右。 Last week, we made a survey about whether music and art should be included in the entrance examination for the high school. Students have different opinions. ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________ C 假如你是李华,你的英国笔友 Henry 想了解你们"停课不停学"期间在线学习(e-learming)的情况。请你根 据表格内容提示,用英语给他写一封电子邮件,谈谈自己的感受与看法。词数 80 左右。 Advantages ◆save time ◆comfortable Disadvantages ◆sore eyes ◆… Your opinion … 参考词汇:self-disciplined adj.自律的 注意事项: 1、必须包含所提示的信息,可适当发挥,开头已给出,不计入总词数; 2、意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范; 3、请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及提示信息以外的地名。 Dear Henry, I'm glad that you are ineresed in our e-learning. ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua D 2020 年的新型冠状病毒(Novel coronavirus)为人类带来了灾难。因为疫情的原因,开学推迟了很长一 段时间,学生只能在网上学习。请你以 Online learning 为题,用英文写一篇短文,谈谈网络学习的利与弊。 要点如下: 1. 网络学习的好处: 1) 方便,不用去学校。2)不懂可以看录像重新学习。3)养成良好的学习习惯。 2. 网络学习的弊处: 1) 对眼睛不好。2)不容易集中注意力。3)不能小组学习,有问题不能及时解决… 3. 个人观点:……. 要求: 1. 词数 110 词左右(短文的首句已给出,不计入总词数); 2. 要点提示均须涉及,可适当增加内容; 3. 字迹工整,卷面整洁,文意连贯,语言流畅; 4. 不用真实姓名、校名、地名。 参考词语:advantage; convenient; video; develop; pay attention to; group; solve… Online learning Nowadays we have to study online because of the NCP.________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ E Nick 的班级上周在英语课上举行了关于是否缩短寒暑假并增加春秋假的讨论,假如你是 Nick,请你根 据下表中的讨论记录,结合你对此事的看法,用英语写一篇短文。 赞成 1.目前学期长而枯燥,学生无法充分休息;(或自拟内容) 2.春秋两季风景优美,可以感受自然之美。(或自拟内容) 反对 1.一年分成四个学期,影响学习效果;(或自拟内容) 2.作业可能因此变多,加重学习压力。(或自拟内容) 你的观点 ……(请自拟至少一点内容) 注意:1.词数 90 左右,文章的开头已经写好,不计入总词数; 2.文章必须包含所给要点,具体内容可以适当发挥,不要简单翻译; 3.文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。 We held a discussion about whether to shorten( 缩短) the summer and winter holidays and add the spring and autumn holidays last week. Opinions are different. Some students think________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________ A【2020 •甘肃武威市 】 IX. 书面表达 71.父母是我们最亲的人,但我们有时会在与父母沟通时遇到困难。请根据所给思维导图的提示,以"How to Communicate with Our Parents"为题用英语写一篇短文,谈谈与父母沟通的技巧和做法。 要求: 1.文中需包含思维导图中的主要内容; 2.句子及篇章结构准确、连贯、书写规范; 3.需做适量拓展; 4.词数:80 词左右。(标题和第一段已给出,不计入总词数;无需抄写在答题卡对应作答区域) How to Communicate with Our Parents Communication with parents is one of the first things we have done since we were born. As we grow older, we'll find it's not easy to communicate with our parents openly and effectively. So what should we do when communicating with them? Here are some of my ideas. ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ B【2020 •江苏省淮安市】 VII. 书面表达 76.2020 年 6 月 23 日上午,淮安市首届以 “龙舟竞渡迎端午” 为主题的大运河龙舟公开赛在淮安清江浦 区隆重开幕。这项活动的开展不仅弘扬了中国传统文化,也给人们带来了生活的乐趣。 请围绕 “端午节” 这话题写一篇短文,内容包括以下要点: 1. 叙述你今年如何度过端午小长假(包括时间、地点、人物、经过); 2. 你对这些活动的感悟(活动的意义,……); 3. 今后,你将如何弘扬祖国传统文化(经常参加有关传统文化的活动,……) 参考词汇: 聚餐 have big dinner; 看龙舟赛 watch the dragon boat race; 包粽子 make rice dumplings;讲屈原的故事 tell the story of Qu Yuan. 注意: 1. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名; 2. 词数在 80-100 之间, 已给出的文字不计入总词数。 The Dragon Boat Festival is a traditional festival in our country.______________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ C【2020 •镇江市】 七、书面表达 66.技术进步带来学习方式的变化。假如你是李华,参与某英语报组织的关于两种学习方式的讨论。请 根据报纸上提供的信息,谈谈你喜欢的其中一种学习方式及理由,并对这种学习方式提出你认为的不足。 Traditional learning in a classroom ● fixed timetable a plan made by a school ● face-to-face communication ● colorful class activities ● team spirit Modern learning on the Internet ● flexible(灵活的) timetable a plan made by oneself ● online communication ● rich learning resources ● any place with the Internet 要求: 1. 所写内容必须包括一种学习方式的所有信息; 2. 对你喜欢的学习方式说明理由,并提出你认为的不足; 3. 文章不少于 90 词,开头已给出,不计入总词数; 4. 语意通顺,意思连贯,条理清楚,书写规范; 5. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。 With the development of modern technology, the way of leaning is changing. I think________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ D【2020 •潍坊市】 五、写作 46.Teens Around the World 是一个国际青少年网站,近日有人发帖,询问有关网课的事情。假设你是李 华,请结合自己上网课的体会,用英语回帖。 注意: 1.不要出现考生本人信息; 2.80 词左右。 Teens Around the World Hey, guys! You've had online learning for some time. What do you think of this new way? Any advantages or disadvantages? Looking forward to your replies. Leo, Italy Hi Leo, ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ Li Hua, China E【2020 •山西省】 十、书面表达 请将短文写在答题卡相应的位置上。 60. 教育就是善意的干预。在我们的成长过程中时常会面对来自父母或老师的提醒与批评,有的同学不理 解,有的甚至会有过激的反应。如何客观、冷静地对待这种问题,需要我们认真、理性地思考,并做出合 理应对,这正是教育要达到的目的。 请针对以上现象,结合生活中的经历,写一篇短文。 内容包括: 1. Your opinion about this phenomenon (现象) 2. An experience you had/heard/saw 3. What you have learned from it 要求: 1. 词数不少于 80 词; 2. 参考词汇仅供参考; 3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。 remind v.提醒 criticize v.批评 objective adj.客观的 calm adj.冷静的 reasonable adj.理性的 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ F【2020 •黑龙江省牡丹江市】 87. (B)2020 年是不同寻常的一年。“新冠疫情”的爆发使我们的学习和生活发生了很大的变化,同 时也引发了人们的思考。请你根据思维导图谈谈“新冠疫情”带给我们的影响以及我们从中得到的启示。要求: 不少于 90 词,可适当发挥。 The outbreak of COVID-19 has made a big difference to our life. We have to ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ G【2020 •内蒙古通辽市】 41. 英语有句俗语:“Ten thousand lines can pull a boat.”从这句话中我们深刻体会到团队协作 (teamwork)的重要性,请你分享一次团队协作的经历,如:体育运动,小组合作学习,团队游戏等,并谈谈 你对团队协作的看法。 要求: 1.思路清晰,语句通顺,书写规范。 2.文中不得出现与考生本人相关的校名和姓名等真实信息。 3.词数:80 词左右的短文。 Teamwork ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ H【2020•鄂州市】 58.你的偶像是谁?你崇拜谁?下表是腾飞中学一些学生的回答,假如你是该校的一位学生,请根据下 表的文字提示,谈谈你校同学的偶像观,并适当发表自己的观点。写一篇英语短文。 过去的偶像:歌星、影视明 星 1.明星有酷的发型和服饰,他们很时尚; 2.他们有天赋,会表演有趣的节目; 3.他们的表演让人放松,让我们的生活丰富多彩。 如今的偶像:科学家、医护 人员等 1.科学家发明高科技产品来保卫国家安全,提高人们的生活水平; 2.医生和护士拯救人们的生命,帮助人们摆脱痛苦,恢复健康; 3.当国家和人民处于困境时,他们用智慧,勇气、辛勤的工作来帮助人们。 你的观点 那些在危难中帮助我们的人们更值得我们尊重和崇拜,作为学生的我们…… 要求:1.80-100 词。(开头的首句已给出,不计算在词数内) 2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称及其它相关信息,否则,不予评分。 参考词汇:idol 偶像 fashionable 时尚的 wisdom 智慧 respect 尊重 Last week, our school did a survey about “Who is your idol?”. Here are our answers. In the past, we__________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________ A(2020 河北省九年级中考摸底) 某英语论坛发起主题为“How to get on well with classmates”的讨论,呼吁大家关注同学关系,友好相处, 建设和谐校园。假如你是李华,请你就这一主题发表自己的看法。 提示:(1)Do you think it is important to get on well with classmates? Why or why not? (2)Give some advice on getting on well with classmates.(At least 3 pieces) 要求:(1)短文须包括所有提示内容,可适当发挥; (2)文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名; (3)词数 80 个左右。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ B(2020 山东省泰安市泰山区中考一模) 今年春节后肆虐全国的新冠肺炎考验着每一个中国人。面对疫情,英雄的中华儿女 众志成城:除夕夜 “最美的逆行者”…..白衣天使奔赴抗击一线,让我们倍感鼓舞;坚守一线的工作者与志愿者,让我们钦佩不己; 全国人民对湖北及武汉的无私援助,更让我们热血沸腾。在抗击疫情的日子你做了些什么?疫情过后你又 有什么感想和打算呢? 疫情中的我 1. 居家隔离,讲究卫生,坚持锻炼。 2. 帮助做家务,坚持读书与学习。 3. … 我的感想 1. 对医务工作者的感谢。 2. 对钟南山、李兰娟想说… 3. … 我的打算 1. 努力学习,争取考入理想的高中。 2. … 要求: 1. 字数 80—100 2. 文中不要出现真实的校名和人名。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________ C(2020 上海市普陀区中考二模) Write at least 60 words on the topic “My harvest in spring” 【以“春天的收获”为题,写一篇不少于 60 词的 短文,标点符号不占格】 提示:前段时间,大家在家学习,不少同学在这段时间内不仅培养了自主学习能力还学习了不少其他 本领,收获颇丰。请结合具体事例谈谈自己某方面的收获以及从中获得的感悟。 (注意:短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息,否则不予评分。) ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________ D(2020 吉林省长春市宽城区中考一模) 犯错误是我们生活中的一部分。很多时候如果没有犯错,我们就不可能找到合适和正确的方法,然而, 很多人害怕犯错误。请你用英语写一篇文章讲述一件你曾经亲身经历过的犯错误的事情,并表达你对犯错 误的观点。 要求:1.条理清晰,内容完整,语句通顺,书写工整;2. 文中请勿提及你的真实姓名和学校;3.不少于 80 字。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________ E(2020 北京市昌平区中考二模) “只有身体好才能学习好、工作好, 才能均衡地发展”—周恩来。 此次新冠疫情爆发(coronavirus outbreak)虽然限制了我们的活动范围, 但是我们还要坚持日常锻炼的 习惯。请你谈谈在疫情影响下锻炼身体的重要性, 以及我们在家如何进行锻炼。 提示词语: keep healthy, fight against, gymnastics, push-up, sit-up. 提示问题: ●Why do we need to do exercises during the coronavirus outbreak? ●How do we do exercises at home? Without enough exercises, we can't have a happy life. ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________
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