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河北专版2020中考英语复习方案第一篇教材考点梳理话题写作04计划愿望课件人教新目标版
话题写作 (四) 计划愿望 第一篇 教材考点梳理 【 话题点睛 】 该话题主要涉及假期计划、活动计划、人生目标等。 主要涉及的要点 : 1. 读书、旅游、度假等活动的安排 ; 2. 课外活动、学校郊游、运动会等活动的时间、地点、人物、活动内容与形式等 ; 3. 职业规划以及实现人生目标的具体措施等。 学校将举办英语写作比赛。请根据所给提示 , 以“ My Life in 20 Years ”为题 , 写一篇参赛短文 , 分享你对未来的憧憬。 典例分析 [ 注意 ] ( 1 )词数 :80 左右(开头已给出 , 不计入总词数) ; ( 2 )文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息 ; ( 3 )文章必须包含所提供的主要信息 , 并作适当发挥。 My Life in 20 Years I'm always working hard for a bright future. I imagine 【 思路点拨 】 1 . 要点提炼 : 主题是对未来生活的畅想 , 包括以下要点 : ( 1 )自己 20 年后的家庭以及为家庭所做的事情 ; ( 2 )自己 20 年后的工作及理由 ; ( 3 )自己 20 年后会和朋友们在一起做的事情 ; ( 4 )概括自己对未来生活的看法。 2. 确定时态 : 一般现在时和一般将来时。 3. 确定人称 : 第一人称单数和复数。 【写作架构】 【 基础写作 】 Ⅰ. 写主干句(根据所给提示补全下列各句。) 1. 我会拥有比现在更好的生活。( better life ) I will have a now. 2. 不管我多么忙 , 我都会精心照顾父母。( take care of ) I will my parents how busy I will be. 3. 我们会谈论过去的学校生活并且分享想法和快乐。( talk about ) We will the past school life and . better life than take good care of no matter talk about share our ideas and happiness 4. 运动能够让我们保持健康。( keep sb.+ adj . ) Sports can us . 5. 我准备接受新的挑战。( be ready to ) I take on new . keep healthy and fit am ready to challenges Ⅱ. 句子升格(按括号中的要求改写句子。) 1.I like meeting interesting things and people. I will get a higher salary. (用 not only … but also …合并为一句) 2.I will have a group of workmates. They are easy to work with. (改为含有定语从句的句子) 3.I will meet my friends. They are just like a good memory book for me. (用 because 连接两个句子) Not only do I like meeting interesting things and people but also I will get a higher salary. I will have a group of workmates who are easy to work with. I will meet my friends because they are just like a good memory book for me. 【连句成文】 My Life in 20 Years I'm always working hard for a bright future. I imagine I will have a better life than now. In 20 years, I will have a better family. I will take good care of my parents no matter how busy I will be. And I will have two children and they are cute and lovely. Of course, I will have a big house, and my family will live together at my house.The best job for me will be a TV reporter. That's because I must work hard and I am ready to take on new challenges. I will have a group of workmates who are easy to work with. Whenever I am free, I will meet my friends because they are just like a good memory book for me. We will talk about the past school life and share our ideas and happiness. We will often go abroad for vacation. I believe I will have a great time during the vacation. Every day after work, I will usually take some exercise with my friends. After all, sports can keep us healthy and fit. I think my life in 20 years will be exciting and wonderful. And I am working hard to make it come true. 【参考谚语】 1.Time and tide wait for no man. 岁月不待人。 2.Never do things by halves. 做事不要半途而废。 3.A good beginning is half done. 良好的开端是成功的一半。 4.Never give up! 永不放弃 ! 拓展积累 【相关短语】 give away 赠送 , 分发 ; make new friends 结交新朋友 ; share … with …与……分享…… look forward to 期盼 , 期待 ; have a better future 有一个更美好的未来 ; be friendly to 对……友好 ; take up/on the challenge 接受挑战 【亮点句型】 导入主题句 1.We are glad to tell you that we are going to visit … 2.Today is Earth Day. We are going to plant some trees in the park. 3.We are going to have a three-day holiday. Why don't we go to … ? 文章发展、过渡句 1.First of all, we must obey the rules of the museum/gallery. 2.There will be a lot of art works/exhibitions. We'll see them first. 3.Then, we'll … in the morning. 4.After that/In the afternoon,/At last we'll … together. 文章结尾句 1.Please wear comfortable shoes or you will feel tired/uncomfortable during the trip. 2.Don't forget to take … 3.We hope you will have a nice day/you will enjoy the trip. A [2018 ·唐山古冶区一模 ] 假如你是李华 , 你们学校将要组织丰富多彩的课外活动。你打算邀请来你校进行友好访问的英国朋友 Tom 参加。请用英语写一封电子邮件 , 告诉他活动的时间和地点 , 要做什么 , 以及需要准备什么。 [ 参考词汇 ] Chinese cooking, basketball team, English corner, knife, practice, speak [ 提示 ] ( 1 ) When and where are you going to have the party? ( 2 ) What are you going to do? ( 3 ) What do you advise Tom to prepare? 实战演练 [ 要求 ] ( 1 )短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名 ; ( 2 )词数 :80 左右(开头和结尾已给出 , 不计入总词数)。 Dear Tom, How is it going? I'm looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua One possible version : Dear Tom, How is it going? I'm writing to invite you to take part in the after-class activities. There are a lot of colorful activities, such as Chinese cooking, basketball team, English corner and so on. I like English very much, so I joined in the English corner. We are going to speak English and sing English songs. We can also tell stories in English. I think it's good for me to improve my English. We are going to have the activity at four o'clock every Friday afternoon in the library of our school. Perhaps you need to prepare some English books and songs for us. I'm looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua B [2020 ·原创 ] 每个人对于自己未来的生活都有一定的设想。假如你是李华 , 请你根据以下提示和要求 , 用英语写一篇短文 , 描述你心目中未来的生活。 [ 提示 ] ( 1 ) Introduce the future life in your heart. ( 2 ) Express your hope about the future life. [ 要求 ] ( 1 )短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名 ; ( 2 )词数 :80 词左右(开头已给出 , 不计入总词数)。 What will the life in the future be like? As far as I can imagine, One possible version : What will the life in the future be like? As far as I can imagine, there will be a robot in each family. It will be very smart and can do everything for the house owner. As for transportation, we will have a kind of environmentally friendly car. It will be powered by some clean energy instead of gas, and won't need driving by a driver. What's more, in the future, the moon will become one of the best places that we will visit. What an enjoyable life! I hope the day will come soon!查看更多