2020届二轮复习书面表达专题(共45张PPT)课件

2020届二轮复习书面表达专题(共45张PPT)课件

书面表达 第 4 讲 书信和电子邮件写作 二轮专题 ❸ 申请信 ► 题型特点 申请信是一种应用文，申请信有很多种，比如求职申请、加入某组织或活动的申请、报考申请、留学申请等，其目的在于让对方了解自己的经验、能力、成就以及愿望等，所以个人情况的介绍应该是申请信的核心内容，应尽可能向对方说明本人的长处，以便留下好印象，获得面谈的机会。 ► 篇章结构 经典考题 (2019· 浙江高考书面表达 ) 假定你是李华，你校英语协会招聘志愿者，接待来访的国外中学生。请你写信应聘，内容包括： 1. 口语能力； 2. 相关经验； 3. 应聘目的。 注意： 1. 词数 80 左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 [ 审题谋篇 ] (1) 体裁： (2) 时态： (3) 人称： (4) 要点： 申请信； 一般现在时； 第一人称 我口语能力好； 我曾接待过外宾，有相关经验； 我想通过为外宾服务，提高自己的口语水平，同时为促进中外文化交流做贡献。 [ 参考范文 ] Dear Sir/Madam ， I have learnt that our English association needs some volunteers to meet the visiting foreign students and I want to apply for the position . Firstly ， I can speak fluent English and I have little difficulty communicating with foreigners . Secondly ， I helped receive some visiting foreigners to our school last year . This experience is sure to enable me to do better this year . I also want to improve my spoken English and help them have a better understanding of Chinese culture. I would be grateful if you could give me the chance. Yours ， Li Hua ► 万能句型 1 . 开头部分常用语 (1)I’m writing to apply for the position of... 我写信申请 …… 的职位。 (2)I learned from sb./the newspaper that your company wanted to hire... 我从某人 / 报纸上得知你们公司想雇用 …… (3)I am interested in...and wish to enter this significant program. 我对 …… 感兴趣，希望加入到这个重要项目中。 2. 表达个人优点常用语 (1)I won the first prize in...competition. 我获得了 …… 比赛的一等奖。 (2)As an outgoing...I get along well with my classmates. 作为一名外向的 …… 我和同学们相处得很好。 (3)For one thing ， I can help...For another thing ， I can improve my English ， make more friends ， and enrich my school life. 一方面，我能帮助 …… 另一方面，我能提高我的英语水平，结交更多的朋友，丰富我的学校生活。 3. 结尾部分常用语 (1)If you consider me appropriate for the job ， please call me at... 如果你们认为我适合这份工作，请致电 …… (2)I will be grateful/I’d appreciate it if you could... 如果你能 …… 我将感激不尽。 (3)Thank you for considering my application ， and I am looking forward to meeting you. 谢谢你考虑我的申请，期待与你见面。 ► 即时训练 假设你是李华，正在英国学习，想成为学校的一个 “ 中西文化交流俱乐部 ” 的成员。请根据下列要点用英文给组织者写一封申请信： 1. 个人情况：姓名、年龄； 2. 个人条件：英语口语流利，对西方文化感兴趣，善于与人交流； 3. 目的：结交朋友，了解更多中西文化之间的差异。 注意： 1. 词数 100 左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 [ 参考范文 ] Dear Sir/Madam ， My name is Li Hua and I’m 17 years old.I am interested in joining the Chinese and Western Cultural Communication Club. I can speak English fluently.What’s more ， I’m very interested in Western culture.In addition ， I’ve read many great works by famous writers ， such as Gone with the Wind and Jane Eyre .To be frank ， I’m good at communicating and expressing myself.By joining the club ， I hope I can make friends with people from all over the world so that we can exchange our cultural experiences.I’d like to know more about the differences between Chinese and Western traditions and history. I hope to be admitted to the club and look forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely ， Li Hua ❹ 道歉信 ► 题型特点 道歉信通常是在因自己的过失或疏忽给别人带来了麻烦或损失并在发觉的情况下，为了向对方表示歉意而写的信件。 ► 篇章结构 经典考题 (2016· 全国卷 Ⅲ ) 假定你是李华，与留学生朋友 Bob 约好一起去书店，因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件，内容包括： 1. 表示歉意； 2. 说明原因； 3. 另约时间。 注意： 1. 词数 100 左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 [ 审题谋篇 ] (1) 体裁： 道歉信； (2) 时态： 一般现在时为主； (3) 人称： 第一人称为主； (4) 要点： ① 对不能去书店表示歉意； ② 有一个重要会议要参加； ③ 另约时间：周六上午 8 ： 30 学校大门口。 [ 参考范文 ] Dear Bob ， I’m sorry to say that I cannot go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon . I have just found that I have to attend an important meeting that afternoon . I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble. Shall we go on Saturday morning? We can set out early so that we’ll have more time to read and select books . If it’s convenient for you ， let’s meet at 8 ： 30 outside the school gate. If not ， let me know what time suits you best . I should be available any time after school next week. Yours ， Li Hua ► 万能句型 1 . 开头部分常用语 (1)I am writing this letter to apologize to you for... 我写这封信是因 …… 向你道歉。 (2)I would like to express my deepest apology/regret for not being able to/my failing... 因为没能 …… 我向你表达最真诚的歉意 / 悔意。 (3)I must apologize for any inconvenience it may have caused you. 为此事可能给你带来的任何不便，我深表歉意。 (4)I am very sorry for my not being able to...due to the fact that... 我非常抱歉不能 …… 因为这个事实 …… (5)I regret to inform you that I can not/am unable to... 我遗憾地告知你我不能 …… ► 万能句型 2 . 结尾部分常用语 (1)With apologies once again./With many apologies. 再次表示抱歉。 / 十分抱歉。 (2)Please accept my sincere apology for...once more. 请再次为 …… 接受我真诚的道歉。 (3)I sincerely hope that you will kindly accept my apologies. 我衷心希望你能宽容地接受我的道歉。 [ 参考范文 ] Dear Mike ， I’m sorry to tell you that I’ve lost your book that I borrowed from you.Now I’m expressing my deepest apology for my carelessness. Actually ， I put the book in my schoolbag after we met at school yesterday.But to my sorrow ， it was stolen on my way home.I tried to get it back but failed.How angry and guilty I felt ！ This morning ， I went to buy another book in some bookstores but it was very expensive.However ， I promise that I’ll tighten my belt these days to get you a completely new one by the end of this month. Please forgive me again and accept my sincere apology.Best wishes! Yours ， Li Hua ❺ 建议信 ► 题型特点 建议信是写信人向收信人就某事提出的建议和忠告。建议信可能是写给个人，也可能是写给某个组织或机构。信的内容要包括写信的原因，建议的内容，提出建议的理由。建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。 ► 篇章结构 经典考题 (2017· 北京高考 ) 你的英国朋友 Jim 所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅行，有两条线路可以选择： “ 长江之行 ” 或者 “ 泰山之旅 ” 。 Jim 来信希望你能给些建议。请你给他回信，内容包括： 1. 你建议的线路； 2. 你的理由； 3. 你的祝愿。 [ 审题谋篇 ] (1) 体裁： 建议 信； (2) 时态： 一般现在时； (3) 人称： 第一 、二 人称； (4) 要点： ① 建议 ② 理由 ； ③ 祝愿 [ 参考范文 ] Dear Jim ， I’m happy to receive your letter and know you’re coming to China. Of the two trips to the Yangtze River and Mount Tai ， both are highly recommended . Personally ， I prefer the tour along the Yangtze ， the longest river and one of the mother rivers of Chinese civilization . You can learn a lot about the history of China and Chinese people . Moreover ， the scenery along the river is amazing ， with many well － known sightseeing spots . That’s why I think the trip along the Yangtze will be a better choice. Hope you’ll have a good time in China. Yours ， Li Hua ► 万能句型 1 . 开头部分常用语 (1)You have asked for my advice about...and I will try to make some useful suggestions here. 关于 …… 你向我征求意见，在此，我尽量提出一些有用的建议。 (2)I’m sorry to know that you are having trouble with/in doing...at the moment. 得知此刻你遇到 …… 麻烦我深感遗憾。 (3)I’m very glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how... 非常高兴收到你的来信，在信中，关于如何 …… 你向我征求意见。 (1)Here are some tips/advice/suggestions. 这里有一些建议。 (2)You may/might as well do... 你不妨做 …… (3)I would like to suggest that... 我想建议 …… 2. 表达建议常用语 (1)I believe you will take my advice into account/consideration seriously. 我相信你会认真考虑我的建议的。 (2)I hope you will find these suggestions useful/helpful. 我希望这些建议 / 意见对你来说有用 / 有帮助。 (3)In my opinion/Personally/As far as I’m concerned ， it would be wise to take the following action. 在我看来，采取如下行动是明智的。 3. 结尾部分常用语 ► 即时训练 假定你是李华，你的美国朋友 Jack 下学期将作为交换生来你校学习，他想学习传统中国画。请你写封邮件给他建议。内容包括： 1. 选修你校开设的中国画课程； 2. 上课时间和地点； 3. 工具和材料：毛笔、墨和宣纸等； 参考词汇：选修课 optional course 中国画 Chinese Painting 毛笔 Chinese brush 注意： 1. 词数 100 左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 [ 参考范文 ] Hi Jack ， Hope you are getting ready for the exchange program! Last time, you mentioned that you were interested in traditional Chinese Painting.It has occurred to me that my school will offer an optional course on learning to paint in a traditional Chinese style.The class will meet every Friday from 12 ： 00 pm to 2 ： 00 pm in Room 211 at the new Yifu Building. If you are interested, please remember to register.When you arrive, I can take you to buy the appropriate tools such as Chinese brush, ink, and paper.Please let me know, and see you soon! Best ， Li Hua ❻ 感谢信 ► 题型特点 感谢信是对收信人表示感谢的一种信件。感谢信在日常生活中的使用非常频繁，在收到别人的邀请时、受到别人的表扬时、得到别人的帮助时，通常都应该表示感谢。 ► 篇章结构 经典考题 (2019· 青岛模拟 ) 假定你是李华。最近，你刚结束在英国为期一个月的交换学习。学习期间，你和房东 Mr.Wilson 结下了深厚的友谊。请根据下面的写作提纲，给 Mr.Wilson 发一封电子邮件。内容包括： 1. 表示感谢； 2. 回顾他对你的照顾和帮助； 3. 邀请他来中国游览。注意： 1. 词数 100 左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 [ 审题谋篇 ] (1) 体裁： 感谢信； (2) 时态： 一般过去时为主； (3) 人称： 第一人称为主； (4) 要点： ① 表示感谢； ② 回顾他对你的照顾和帮助； ③ 再次表示感谢，邀请到中国来。 [ 参考范文 ] Dear Mr. Wilson ， How is everything going? I’ve been back home now . I’m writing to express my sincere gratitude to you for your kindness. While I was in England ， your help and kindness made my stay special and enjoyable . How I miss the days we spent together ！ Thanks to your help ， I got used to the lifestyle there soon . I still miss the delicious meals you prepared for me . Besides ， I really appreciate your patience while you were talking with me . By practising speaking with you every day ， I gradually improve my spoken English. [ 参考范文 ] I hope we can keep in touch with and communicate with each other in the future . It would be a great honor for me to invite you to come to China so that you can experience Chinese culture. Best wishes. Yours ， Li Hua ► 万能句型 1 . 开头部分常用语 (1)I am writing to express my thanks for... 我写这封信是为了表达我对 …… 的谢意。 (2)I would like to convey in this letter my heartfelt thanks to you for... 在信中我要为 …… 向你表达我诚挚的谢意。 (3)On behalf of my whole family ， I would like to extend my sincere gratitude for... 我谨代表我全家对 …… 表示真诚的感激。 ► 万能句型 2 . 结尾部分常用语 (1)Nothing will be able to erase our wonderful memories; we will remember them forever. 没什么能抹掉我们美好的记忆，我们会永远牢记在心。 (2)Again ， I would like to express my warm thanks to you ！ /Thanks again for your kind help. 我再次对你表示衷心的感谢。 / 对你的热心帮助再次表示感谢。 (3)I appreciate it more than I can say./I can never thank you enough. 感激之情，无以言表。 ❼ 求助信 ► 题型特点 写英文求助信的原因是目前自己遇到了一些困难，需要请求对方帮助，因此整篇文章应用一般现在时表达文意。当描述自己得到帮助后的进步时应用一般将来时。 ► 篇章结构 经典考题 (2019· 河北定州中学模拟 ) 假定你是高中生李华，你们学校要在三月十日举办英语配音比赛 (dubbing contest) ，你想参赛，但是不知道该选什么电影。你给笔友 Peter 写封邮件，请他推荐。 要求： 1. 主题是关于友谊； 2. 时间限定在 4 到 5 分钟； 3. 每个节目最多 6 个角色。 注意： 1. 词数 100 左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 [ 审题谋篇 ] (1) 体裁： 求助信； (2) 时态： 一般现在时为主； (3) 人称： 第一人称为主； (4) 要点： ① 问候对方并交代写信的目的 —— 求助； ② 说明自己遇到的具体困难 —— 想参加配音比赛，但是不知道选择哪部电影合适，所以求推荐； ③ 表示感谢和期盼之情。 [ 参考范文 ] Dear Peter ， How is everything going ？ I am writing to you ， hoping to seek for help. Our school will hold an English dubbing contest on March 10th. I am eager to have a try . However ， I don ’ t know which film is suitable . As a movie fan ， would you be so kind as to give me some recommendations? According to the requirements ， the theme should be about friendship . And each video may last 4 to 5 minutes . What’s more ， there should not be more than six characters in each video. I would really appreciate it if you could do me the favor . Looking forward to your reply. Yours ， Li Hua ► 万能句型 1 . 开头部分常用语 1)My name is...I’m writing to you for some help. 我叫 …… ，写信的目的是向你寻求一些帮助。 (2)I’m writing a letter to you to ask you to do me a favor. 我给你写信想请你帮我一个忙。 ► 万能句型 2 . 寻求帮助常用语 (1)Faced with so much difficulty ， I have to ask you for help. 面对这么多的困难，我不得不向你求助。 (2)In the meanwhile/At the same time ， I beg you to...so that...Also ， I would like you to ... 同时，我恳求你 …… 以便 …… 我也想让你 …… (3)I would like you to introduce some good ways to learn grammar. 我想让你给我介绍一些学习语法的好方法。 ► 万能句型 3 . 结尾部分常用语 (1)I’m sure with your help I can make great progress. 我相信在你的帮助下我会取得很大的进步。 (2)I will appreciate any of your help. 我将非常感谢你的一切帮助。 附：高考真题书面表达写作规律与模式 在信的开头稍作寒暄后点明写信目的。常用句式有： ● How are you doing these days? ● How nice to hear from you again. ● Thank you for your letter asking about the … ● I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on … ● I am glad to learn that … ● I learn from your last letter that … ● I am a student in China and I plan to … ● I’d like to ask you to ...  ● I’d like to invite you to … ● I wonder if you could … ● I’m writing to … ● I’m writing to ask whether you are able to do me a favor. ● I’m writing for more information about … 在信的核心部分提供细节信息，比如请求的具体内容，或所提建议的详细信息。常用的连接上下文的衔接词有： ● As for  … ● First, … ● Besides,  … ● What ’ s more, … ● Additionally, … ● However, … ● In short, … ● As far as I know, … ● First and foremost, … ● Last but not least, … … 在信的结尾表达谢意，或期待回复。常用句式有： ● Thank you for your kindness! ● Thank you very much in advance. ● Hope to hear from you soon! ● I ’ m looking forward to hearing from you. ● I am looking forward to your early reply. ● We are looking forward to your participation. ● I ’ m looking forward very much to meeting you soon. ● Do let me know if you need further information. ● If you are able to come with us, please let us know. ● If there is anything I can do for you, I would be more than glad to help. ● Please let me know if you are interested and if you have any other questions, I ’ d be more than happy to help.   … 谢 谢 观 看