【英语】2019届二轮复习写作专题导练：学案(三)　词靓赢高分——“营造亮点”不落俗套的亮点词汇（5页word版）

【英语】2019届二轮复习写作专题导练：学案(三)　词靓赢高分——“营造亮点”不落俗套的亮点词汇（5页word版）

‎2019届二轮复习写作专题导练：学案(三)　词靓赢高分——“营造亮点”不落俗套的亮点词汇 阅卷时，一篇高考作文往往在1分钟内就会被判定生死，大众化的词汇、平庸的表达已使长时间工作的阅卷老师产生了视觉疲劳。在词汇方面：如果一篇作文中突然出现几个与众不同、让人眼前一亮的词汇，阅卷老师的给分也绝不会吝啬；在句式方面：如果考生多运用一些并列句和复合句等高级句式，并注意句式的灵活多变，使文章读起来抑扬顿挫，让考生深厚的语言功底得以体现，阅卷老师一定会毫不犹豫地将考生的作文定位于五档线。‎ 学案(一)　不落俗套的亮点词汇 写作最基本的要求是考查考生遣词造句的能力，遣词的原则是表达准确、地道自然、生动形象。如果考生在掌握了最基本词汇的基础上，能够将一些常用词汇进行升华，就将成为高考作文获得高分的亮点之一。‎ 一、使用亮点词汇的4种方法 ‎1．“语”众不同，避免人云亦云 写作时，恰当得体地使用别人可能想不到的词汇或表达，会给阅卷老师耳目一新的感觉。‎ ‎①I'm busy with my lessons now, for the College Entrance Examination, which is very important to me, is near. ‎ ‎→I'm occupied with my lessons now, for the College Entrance Examination, which is of great importance to me, is around the corner.(2017·天津高考书面表达)‎ ‎②So I have to bother you to correct my mistakes in the material I attach to the letter.‎ ‎→Therefore, I have no choice but to put you to trouble by correcting my mistakes in the material I attach to the letter.(2016·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达)‎ ‎2．更新换代，避免重复 写作时应尽量避免重复使用相同的词语，要用贴切多样的词语来展示自己的水平。用词不同、表达方式迥异，也是高级用法。‎ ‎①The team will hold many activities, some of which will appeal to you, including many matches.‎ ‎→The team will hold a range of activities, some of which will appeal to you, including many matches.(2017·全国卷Ⅲ书面表达)‎ ‎②We've built a new experiment building beside the old one and we've also built a library where the old playground used to be.‎ ‎→We've built a new experiment building beside the old one and we've also set up a library where the old playground used to be.‎ ‎3．单词与短语巧妙互用 一般情况下短语优先，应多使用短语、习语来代替一些单词，以增加文采。但有时单词比短语更生动，可以“一词传神”。‎ ‎①I've decided to teach you Tang Poetry in Room 101 Building 1 at 8 am on Wednesday, which will last two hours.‎ ‎→I've made up my mind to teach you Tang Poetry in Room 101 Building 1 at 8 am on Wednesday, which will last two hours.(2017·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达)‎ ‎②We can look at this problem in many ways.‎ ‎→We can view this problem in many ways.(view比look at更有“内涵”)‎ ‎4．用高年级学到的词汇代替低年级学到的词汇 为了表现自己的语言功底，吸引阅卷老师的眼球，应避免反复使用初中或小学阶段学过的词汇，尽量用高中阶段学到的词汇来代替。‎ ‎①I should say sorry for being unable to go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon.‎ ‎→I owe you an apology for being unable to go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon.(2016·全国卷Ⅲ书面表达)‎ ‎②Second, I am trying my best to acquire the essential knowledge and skills concerning my position.‎ ‎→Second, I am sparing no efforts to acquire the essential knowledge and skills concerning my position.(2017·天津高考书面表达)‎ 二、高分必备的24个亮点词汇 名词 普通词汇 高级词汇 普通词汇 高级词汇 chance opportunity choice alternative idea opinion people individuals result consequence effect influence 动词 have possess replace substitute bear put up with understand make ‎ sense of develop promote consider take into account 形容词 enough adequate rich abundant proper appropriate important vital/‎ significant interesting absorbing/ appealing difficult challenging 副词 finally eventually hardly barely immediately in a flash nowadays currently 连词 so therefore and as well as ‎①That's why I think the trip along the Yangtze River will be a better choice.‎ ‎→That's why I think the trip along the Yangtze River will be a better alternative.(2017·北京高考书面表达)‎ 这就是为什么我认为长江之行将是一个更好的选择。‎ ‎②In the coming three years, our school life will be difficult.‎ ‎→In the coming three years, our school life will be challenging.(2014·江西高考书面表达)‎ 在随后的三年里，我们的学校生活将会非常具有挑战性。‎ ‎[课时提能训练] ‎ Ⅰ.请用高级词汇替换下列句子中的加黑部分 ‎1．(2017·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达) So, please spend some time taking a brief look at the history of the Tang Dynasty, which will help you prepare for your class.Therefore;_make_preparations_for ‎2．(2017·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达)In order to get a better understanding of Tang Poetry, I advise you to learn some brief history of the Tang Dynasty in advance.acquire_‎ ‎3．(2017·全国卷Ⅱ书面表达)The craftsmen will show visitors how to cut paper into different shapes on the spot.various/a_range_of ‎4．(2016·北京高考书面表达)Our class thought of the idea to make better use of used materials.came_up_with ‎5．(2016·四川高考书面表达)The reasons are the following.‎ as_follows ‎6．(2015·湖南高考书面表达)At the same time, I decided to study harder rather than waste precious time on those useless things ...made_up_my_mind ‎7．As high school students, we should be neatly dressed when at school.are_supposed_to ‎8．There's no harm in your staying up late sometimes.occasionally/once_in_a_while ‎9．The teacher directed the gifted students towards the more difficult courses.challenging ‎10．So far as I know, everyone of them wants to be a model student.intends_to Ⅱ.请用高级词汇提升下面的考生作文 假定你是中学生李华，家住泉州。你的英国笔友Jason 来信谈到了他的家乡伦敦，并希望了解你的家乡泉州的情况。请你用英文写一封回信。‎ 回信必须包括以下内容：‎ ‎1．自然情况：地理位置优越、气候风景宜人等；‎ ‎2．发展成就：经济发展迅速、城市高楼林立等；‎ ‎3．存在问题：交通拥堵现象、空气污染问题等；‎ ‎4．对泉州发展的看法：内容由考生自己拟定。‎ 注意：1.词数100左右；‎ ‎2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ 参考词汇：高层建筑 highrise building ‎[考生作文]‎ Dear Jason，‎ I'm ①very happy to hear from you and know about your beautiful home city London. Now I'd like to tell you something about my hometown Quanzhou.‎ Quanzhou is a beautiful place for people to live in. Its economy has been developing ②fast during the past ten years. New bridges and roads have been ③built, highrise buildings standing in many parts of the city. ④More and more schools and hospitals are ⑤useful for the native people. It is developing into a modern and ⑥beautiful city. ⑦But there are still some problems, such as heavy traffic in rush hours and ⑧serious air pollution, which have a bad ⑨effect on people's daily life. ⑩I think Quanzhou should develop healthily and scientifically, so that we could have a better hometown in future. ‎ Yours，‎ Li Hua ‎[升格作文]‎ Dear Jason，‎ I'm ①more_than happy to hear from you and know about your beautiful home city London. Now I'd like to tell you something about my hometown Quanzhou.‎ Quanzhou is a beautiful place for people to live in. Its economy has been developing ②rapidly during the past ten years. New bridges and roads have been ③set_up,_highrise buildings standing in many parts of the city. ④An_increasing_number_of schools and hospitals are ⑤available for the native people. It is developing into a modern and ⑥attractive/charming city. ⑦However,_there are still some problems, such as heavy traffic in rush hours and ⑧severe air pollution, which have a bad ⑨influence/impact on people's daily life. ⑩In_my_opinion/As_far_as_I_am concerned,_Quanzhou should develop healthily and scientifically, so that we could have a better hometown in future. ‎ Yours，‎ Li Hua