2019届高考英语作文名师指路模板09祝贺信

2019届高考英语作文名师指路模板09祝贺信

‎09 祝贺信 日常生活中，无论是亲朋好友毕业、晋升、获奖、开业，还是订婚、结婚、生日，都需要写上一封信向对方表示祝贺。信中应表示为对方而高兴。祝贺信应当充满真诚和热情，收信人读后会感到喜悦和振奋。祝贺信既可以正式写，也可以随便写，具体视场合而定。对不太熟悉的朋友适合正式写，以表示礼貌和尊重；对熟悉的朋友则可以随便一些。但无论采用哪种方式，祝贺信必须表达由衷的感情，而且写信要及时。 ‎ 模板①‎ Dear_______,‎ ‎(1)I have learned with delight that you______.‎ ‎(2)I would like to extend to you my utmost congratulations on __ __.‎ ‎(3)You must be very proud of your ______.‎ ‎(4)And I feel very happy for you.‎ ‎(5)____ _ is quite exciting news!‎ ‎(6)You are really__ .‎ ‎(7)I know this is surely owing to__ _ .‎ ‎(8)It is a reward you deserve for your __ .‎ ‎(9)With your___ __, I am sure that you will be a success in whatever you undertake.‎ ‎(10)Kindly let me know when you____ .‎ ‎(11) I hope .‎ ‎(12)My best wishes for your further success.‎ Sincerely Yours, ‎ Li Ming ‎(1)获悉值得祝贺的消息，说出祝贺事由 ‎(2)表达祝贺 ‎(3)描述对方的心情 ‎(4)表达自己的心情 ‎(5)被祝贺人所取得的成绩 ‎(6)对对方的赞美 ‎(7)对方取得成绩的原因 ‎(8)对对方取得成绩的肯定，说出被祝贺人的优点 ‎(9) 被祝贺人的优秀品质，表达对对方的祝福 ‎(10)咨询对方的情况和时间 ‎(11)表达愿望 ‎(12)表达自己真诚的祝福 模板②‎ ‎ Dear ______ , ‎ I have learned with delight that you ______（祝贺事由）. I would like to extend to you my utmost congratulations on ______. You must be ______. And I feel very happy for you. ______（所取得的成绩）is quite exciting news! I know this is surely owing to ______（被祝贺人过去的努力）.It is a reward you richly deserve for your ______（被祝贺人的优点）. Kindly let me know when you ______（咨询对方何时有空）.‎ I hope ______（表达自己的愿望）. ‎ My best wishes for your further success. ‎ Yours sincerely, ‎ ‎ Li Ming 模板③‎ Dear_____________, ‎ Congratulations on your _______ . I know how hard you have been working and I am very proud of you for your achievement. I understand for sure that it is your hard work / your excellent ability that leads you to the current success. This new position, on the other hand, adds a new dimension to your life and is bound to ________ . What’s more, I also believe that . ‎ May all goes beautifully in your new post! ‎ Yours sincerely, ‎ ‎ Li Ming ‎ 模板④‎ Dear_____________, ‎ Good news travels fast! It was delightful for me to hear that ______________ . Please accept my sincere congratulations to your ___________. I have been watching your progress with admiration all the years, and I know more than anyone else how much effort you have put in. Now you prove to me a matured and well-rounded________ in every respect. Judging from your current success / achievement, I am confident that in the future ___________ . ‎ May all the years ahead fulfill your dreams! ‎ Yours sincerely, ‎ Li Ming 祝贺信是社交中的一种礼仪性信函。通常包括以下几个方面的内容：说明祝贺事由，表达热烈、诚挚的祝贺；围绕祝贺事件表述贺喜内容；表达美好祝福。‎ 写作三步走 ‎ 说明事由并表达自己衷心的祝贺->展开评论事件、赞扬收信人->再次表达良好祝愿 在写作主要内容的时候，可以重点赞扬一下当事人的优秀能力和取得成就的原因、并展望他将来的美好发展前景等。‎ 开头常用句式 It was exciting news for me to learn of …‎ Please accept my sincere/hearty/warm congratulations on …‎ It was a great pleasure to send you my congratulations on …‎ I was delighted to learn of your success /achievements in …‎ I am really happy to learn that you have been elected…‎ 结尾常用句式 Wish you good luck!‎ We wish to share your honor and joy.‎ I wish you success and fulfillment in the years ahead.‎ May all go wonderfully in your new post!‎ May every happiness be yours!‎ All my best wishes for an even more prosperous future/successful career!‎ May each succeeding year bring you great happiness and prosperity.‎ Every good wish to you for much health, happiness, and prosperity!‎ 典例 ‎ 假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Peter最近在某电视台举办的汉语演讲比赛中获得第一名，他给了你重要的人生启迪。请写信向他表示祝贺与感谢。‎ 注意：‎ ‎1.词数1000左右；‎ ‎2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎【写作指导】‎ 本题要求写一封信，既表示祝贺又表示感谢。人称应以第一人称为主。基本时态应为一般现在时和现在完成时。书信是考生非常熟悉的应用文体，因此下笔会很容易，但应注意词数的限制和内容的呈现方式。写作时可能用到的表达有congratulations to you on..."为……向你表示祝贺"；admire"钦佩"；learn a lesson"学到了一课"；express thanks"表达谢意"；thank you for..."因……感谢你"等。‎ ‎【范文赏析】‎ Dear Peter,‎ Congratulations to you on your winning first place in the Chinese Speech Competition held recently. You deserve the honor. The past years have seen your devotion, persistence and strenuous efforts, eventually your rapid progress in Chinese learning.‎ To be honest, what I admire most is your diligence and determination. It’s from you that I have learned a valuable lesson, that is, "No pains, no gains." Therefore, I would like to express my sincere thanks to you for what you have taught me.‎ Wish you greater achievements in your study!‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua Writting1‎ 假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Alice在学校的演讲比赛中得了第一名，给她写封信，词数120—150，包括如下内容：‎ ‎1.祝贺她取得优异成绩；‎ ‎2.告诉她你在高三学习中的苦与乐；‎ ‎3.邀请她方便的时候来中国玩。‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎【范文】‎ Dear Alice,‎ How are you doing these days?‎ From your letter, I know that you won first place in the speech contest of your school. Congratulations! I strongly believe that you have the ability and undoubtedly, your hard work and determination contribute to your success.‎ It is several months since I entered Senior Three. During these days, anxiety ‎ and happiness accompany me. Sometimes when I meet with some difficulties, I feel depressed. But I feel content more often because study occupies most of my time, for I know success lies in hard work. Only by making every effort will I realize my dream of entering Peking University.‎ Welcome to China if it is convenient for you! I promise that I will take you to many places of interest and you can taste delicious dishes. I know you must like it.‎ I’m looking forward to your reply.‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua Writing 2‎ 假定你是李华，你的朋友Jack在第二十六届英语演讲比赛中取得第一名的好成绩，你给他写信祝贺。要点包括：‎ ‎1.得知他取得英语演讲比赛第一名的好成绩，你表示祝贺；‎ ‎2.对他获奖一事的看法和认识；‎ ‎3.希望与他共进晚餐以示庆祝。‎ 注意：‎ ‎1.词数100左右；‎ ‎2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ Dear Jack,‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ Yours sincerely,‎ Li Hua ‎【范文】‎ Dear Jack, ‎ I have learned with great delight that you have won the championship of the 26th English Speech Contest. I would like to extend to you my congratulations on your success. I feel very proud of you. And it’s really good news to your family and teachers.‎ Winning the championship of the English Speech Contest is quite exciting news! You must be very happy and excited at this moment. I know this is surely the result of your diligence and intelligence. It is a reward you richly deserve.‎ With your excellence, I am sure that you will be successful in whatever you undertake. I hope that I can have dinner with you and express my congratulations face to face. Again, please accept my sincere congratulations.‎ Best wishes for your further success!‎ Yours sincerely,  ‎ Li Hua ‎ ‎【写作思路】按题目要求，本文是一封祝贺信，可分三段，第一段说明你听到消息，并表示祝贺；第二段可描述Jack平时付出的努力和向他学习的决心；第三段邀请共进晚餐。另外，你也可根据自己的人生经验和经历适当增加写作内容。写作时注意用比较地道的表示祝贺和邀请的英语表达，并且用适当连接词以使行文流畅。‎ Writing 3‎ 假如你是李华，你的好友李明在中学生英语朗诵比赛中荣获一等奖。请你根据以下内容，给他写一封祝贺信。内容包括：‎ ‎1.向他表示祝贺；‎ ‎2.请他介绍成功的经验；‎ ‎3.希望有一天能像他一样取得成功。‎ 注意：‎ ‎1.词数100左右；‎ ‎2.开头和结尾已为你写好，但不计入总词数；‎ ‎3.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ Dear Li Ming,‎ I hear that you have won first prize ___________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua Writing 4‎ 假如你是高三学生李华，得知你的英国笔友Reed被剑桥大学(University of Cambridge)录取，请你给他写一封电子邮件。要点如下：‎ ‎1.向Reed表示祝贺；‎ ‎2.介绍自己目前的学习情况；‎ ‎3.请教学习方法 注意：‎ ‎1.词数100左右；‎ ‎2.可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯；‎ Dear Reed,‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎【范文】‎ Dear Reed,‎ I am very excited and inspired by the news in your e-mail that you have been admitted to University of Cambridge. First of all, I’d like to give my congratulations to you on your great success. Meanwhile, I also want to enter a famous university just like you.‎ Now I want to tell you something about myself. As you know, I’m busy preparing for the College Entrance Examination right now. I have been working very hard and sometimes have to stay up late doing all sorts of papers. However, I’m always feeling stressed out and wondering whether my efforts will pay off, which makes me frustrated and exhausted. Will you be kind enough to give me some advice?‎ Looking forward to your reply.‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua