2020届高考英语二轮专题复习冲刺训练：写作部分专题一第2讲高分亮点塑造

2020届高考英语二轮专题复习冲刺训练：写作部分专题一第2讲高分亮点塑造

第2讲　高分亮点塑造 一 吸引眼球的亮点词汇 要想写出一篇水平比较高的书面表达，高级词汇的使用必不可少，它会大大提升文章的档次，从而帮助考生获得高分。要做到准确使用高级词汇，应该注意以下几个方面：‎ ‎ ——　　(一)使用亮点词汇的四种方法　　——‎ ‎1．标新立异　“语”众不同 在写作时，恰当地使用一些别人可能想不到的词汇或表达，会体现出自己的高水平。‎ ‎①Our team, besides regular training, will join in a variety of activities.‎ ‎→Our team, apart/aside from regular training, will join in a variety of activities.‎ ‎②Several days later, when the video was played at the graduation ceremony, it was very popular.‎ ‎→Several days later, when the video was played at the graduation ceremony, it was wellreceived.‎ ‎2．多样表达　避免重复 在写作时应尽量避免重复使用相同的单词或短语，要尽量用贴切多样的词语来展示自己的水平。用词不同、表达方式迥异，也是高级用法。‎ ‎③We may have different opinions in organizing class activities. We may have different ways to deal with such a situation.‎ ‎→We may have different opinions in organizing class activities. We may have various ways to deal with such a situation.‎ ‎④We've built a new experiment building and we've also built a library where the old playground used to be.‎ ‎→We've built a new experiment building and we've also set up a library where the old playground used to be.‎ ‎3．单词短语　短语优先 在单词和短语表示同一个意思时，优先使用短语。恰当使用短语，一方面能使文章更加生动，另一方面也能展示出学生扎实的语言功底。‎ ‎⑤There is no doubt that you should know about the history of the Tang Dynasty in advance.‎ ‎→There is no doubt that you are supposed to know about the history of the Tang Dynasty in advance.‎ ‎⑥Firstly, the final exam of this term is coming so I am busy preparing for it.‎ ‎→To begin with, the final exam of this term is around the corner so I am busy preparing for it.‎ ‎⑦I hear that he is ill, and I decide to visit him this Sunday.‎ ‎→I hear that he is ill, and I decide to pay a visit to him this Sunday.‎ ‎4．用高级词汇取代简单词汇 为了表现自己的语言功底，显示出自己的写作水平，应尽量避免反复使用低年级学过的简单词汇，尽量用高中阶段学到的词汇来代替。‎ ‎⑧I should say sorry for being unable to go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon.‎ ‎→I should make an apology for being unable to go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon.‎ ‎⑨So long as we hold fast to our ideals and never give up, we are sure to achieve success.‎ ‎→So long as we hold fast to our ideals and never give up, we are bound to achieve success.‎ ‎　　　　　　　　　　　　　‎ 即时练1‎ 用高级词汇完成句子 ‎①Of the two, I think the latter is better.‎ ‎→Of the two, the latter ________________.‎ ‎②Quite a few things caused the traffic problem.‎ ‎→Quite a few things ________________ the traffic problem.‎ ‎③We can look at this problem in many ways.‎ ‎→We can ________ this problem in many ways.‎ 答案：①wins my favor　②resulted in/led to/gave rise to　③view ‎ ——　　(二)必备升级词汇　　——‎ ‎1．动词：have→possess; develop→promote; replace→substitute; bear→put up with/tolerate; consider→take into account/consideration; understand→make sense of/figure out ‎①I sincerely hope that you will take my suggestions into account.‎ 我真诚地希望你能考虑我的建议。‎ ‎2．名词：chance→opportunity; choice→alternative; course→curriculum; people→individuals; result→consequence; shortcoming→drawback ‎②Different individuals have different opinions about the safety of food.‎ 不同的人对食品安全问题有着不同的看法。‎ ‎3．形容词：enough→adequate/plentiful; useful→advantageous; ‎ difficult→challenging; proper→appropriate/suitable; important→vital/significant; interesting→absorbing/striking/appealing/attractive ‎③In the coming three years, our school life will be challenging.‎ 在随后的三年里，我们的学校生活将会是具有挑战性的。‎ ‎4．副词：finally→eventually; hardly→barely/scarcely/hardly ever; ‎ immediately→in a flash/in no time; nowadays→currently ‎④Eventually your child will leave home to lead her own life as a fully ‎ independent adult.‎ 最终，你的孩子会离开家，作为一个完全独立的成年人过她自己的生活。‎ ‎5．连词：so→therefore; and→as well as/together with ‎⑤Therefore, its box office receipts/takings will probably enjoy a slight increase.‎ 因此票房收入极可能略有增长。‎ ‎　　　　　　　　　　　　　‎ 即时练2‎ 同义句改写 ‎①We will try our best to develop the traditional friendship between us.‎ ‎→We'll try our best to ________ the traditional friendship between us.‎ ‎②This phenomenon may lead to important changes towards environmental protection.‎ ‎→This phenomenon may lead to ________ changes towards environmental protection.‎ 答案：①promote　②significant ‎ ——　　(三)必备加分词汇　　——‎ ‎1．表达关注的名词：attention, focus, concern ‎①Meanwhile, owing to my great interest in sports, I pay close attention to the 32nd Olympic Games to be held in Tokyo in 2020.‎ 与此同时，由于我对体育运动很感兴趣，我密切关注2020年将在东京举办的第三十二届奥运会。‎ ‎2．表达争论的名词：discussion, debate, argument ‎②Faced with such an argument, different individuals may have different opinions.‎ 面对这样的争论，不同的人可能有不同的观点。‎ ‎3．表达现象的名词：phenomenon ‎③The sentence suggests a common phenomenon: many teenagers care more ‎ about their phones than their friends nowadays.‎ 这个句子表明了一种常见现象：当今许多青少年关注他们的手机胜过关注他们的朋友。‎ ‎4．表达优缺点的名词：advantage, disadvantage, strength, weakness ‎④Besides, every student may have different weak and strong subjects, so they should learn from each other so that they can have more advantages than disadvantages.‎ 此外，每个学生可能有不同的弱科和强科，因此他们应该互相学习以便比起劣势来他们拥有更多的优势。‎ ‎5．表达增长或下降的动词：increase, accumulate, decrease, decline ‎⑤Long hours of surfing the Internet would lead to declining health.‎ 长时间上网将导致健康状况下降。‎ ‎6．表达导致后果的动词短语：result in, lead to, bring about, contribute to, give rise to ‎⑥Computers have brought about many changes in our daily life.‎ 电脑给我们的日常生活带来了很多变化。‎ ‎7．表达支持、反对的动词短语：approve of, be in favor of, object to ‎⑦The majority of the senior citizens don't approve of the proposal of celebrating Western festivals in China.‎ 大多数老年人不赞同在中国庆祝西方节日的提议。‎ ‎8．表达可能性的形容词：likely ‎⑧If you come to our school, you are likely to meet some difficult problems in your life.‎ 如果你来我们学校，很可能会在生活中遇到一些难题。‎ ‎9．表达有好处的形容词：beneficial ‎⑨From my point of view, our library should buy some popular science books and literary books because they are beneficial to us.‎ 按照我的观点，我们的图书馆应该买一些科谱书和文学类图书，因为这些书对我们有益处。‎ ‎10．表达强调的副词：particularly, especially ‎⑩The more people earn, the more they seem to want, particularly when others earn more than they do.‎ 人们赚得越多，似乎想要的也越多，尤其是当其他人赚得比他们多的时候。‎ ‎　　　　　　　　　　　　　‎ 即时练3‎ 同义句改写 ‎①The new teaching method will do good to every student.‎ ‎→The new teaching method will ________________ every student.‎ ‎②It was his carelessness that caused his failure this time.‎ ‎→It was his carelessness that ________________ his failure this time.‎ ‎③Most of us were against his plan, which made him angry.‎ ‎→Most of us ________________ his plan, which made him angry.‎ 答案：①be beneficial to　②resulted in　③objected to 二 夺人耳目的开头和结尾 ‎ ——　　(一)引人入胜的开头　　——‎ 开头一般来说要做到开门见山，使读者了解要谈什么，最好能立刻吸引读者的兴趣。下面介绍几种开头的常见写法：‎ ‎1．书信的常用开头法——开门见山法 ‎①I'm writing to invite you to see the Chinese papercutting exhibition.‎ 我写信邀请你来观看中国剪纸艺术展。‎ ‎②I am writing to tell you some good news.‎ 我写信告诉你一些好消息。‎ ‎2．记叙文的常用开头法 ‎(1)故事背景法——交代人物、事件、时间、地点、背景等 ‎③A week before Earth Day, posters were put up around our school, calling upon us to join in the actions for a greener earth.‎ 地球日前的一周，我们学校贴了很多海报，号召我们加入到让地球更绿色环保的行动中。‎ ‎(2)往事追忆法——回忆过去发生的某件事 ‎④I still remember how nervous I was on my first day in the new school three years ago, when I found it difficult to follow my teacher in the first English class.‎ 我仍旧记得三年前我进入这所学校的第一天，在第一节英语课上我听不懂老师讲课，我是多么紧张。‎ ‎3．说明文的常用开头法 ‎(1)点明中心法——开门见山点明所要介绍的事物 ‎⑤The mouse is a most effective device used by people to communicate with a computer.‎ 鼠标是人们借以使用电脑的一种非常有效的设备。‎ ‎(2)引入数据法——运用数据引出所要论证的主题 ‎⑥A recent survey shows that more than 40% of the school kids don't have ‎ breakfast.‎ 最近的调查表明，有超过40%的学生不吃早饭。‎ ‎4．议论文的常用开头法 ‎(1)点明主题法——提出一个观点，作为文章要阐明或论述的主题 ‎⑦Years of school life has taught me a lot of things, of which teamwork is the most important to me.‎ 多年的学校生活教会我很多东西，其中团队协作对于我来说最为重要。‎ ‎(2)引用名言法——摘录或引用某些名人的名言或常见的习语、谚语作为文章的开头 ‎⑧When it comes to how to succeed, many people may think of the proverb “Where there is a will, there is a way.”‎ 当谈及如何成功时，很多人或许会想起了谚语“有志者，事竟成”。‎ ‎(3)列举事例法——通过一个事例或现象引出话题 ‎⑨Three years ago I failed an important exam in my life and became a student in an ordinary school.‎ 三年前我在人生的一次重要考试中失利，成为普通学校的一名学生。‎ ‎5．图画作文的常用开头法 描述图画法——描写图画内容，为下文做好铺垫 ‎⑩In the picture, we can see a boy in worn clothes, sitting at a shabby wooden table with a pile of books on it.‎ 在图画中我们可以看到一个穿着破衣服的男孩，坐在破旧的木头桌子旁，桌子上是一摞书。‎ 常见开头句式：‎ As everybody knows/As is known to all 众所周知 As the proverb says 正如谚语所说 As the saying goes 俗话说 As we can see from the table 正如表中所看到的 When it comes to ... 当提到……‎ It is said that ... 据说……‎ It is generally agreed that ... 人们通常认为……‎ It is believed/thought that ... 人们认为……‎ It is reported that ... 据报道……‎ It is well known that ... 众所周知……‎ It goes without saying that ... 不言而喻/不用说……‎ There is no denying that ... 不可否认的是……‎ There is no doubt that ... 毫无疑问……‎ ‎　　　　　　　　　　　　　‎ 即时练1‎ 根据提示翻译句子 ‎①我想请你给我们学校的英语报纸写一篇文章。(开门见山法)‎ ‎__________________________________________________________________‎ ‎②上周日，我和同学们去了香山公园。(故事背景法)‎ ‎__________________________________________________________________‎ ‎③俗话说，“没有努力，就没有收获。”(引用名言法)‎ ‎__________________________________________________________________‎ ‎④人们普遍认为阅读能增长我们的知识，拓展我们的视野。(点明主题法)‎ ‎__________________________________________________________________‎ ‎⑤每当我想到我家附近那一条清澈的小溪，就忍不住感到悲伤。(往事追忆法)‎ ‎__________________________________________________________________‎ 答案：①I'd like to ask you to write an article for our school's English newspaper.　②Last Sunday, my classmates and I went to Fragrant Hills Park.　③As the saying goes, “No pain, no gain.”　④It is universally acknowledged that reading increases our knowledge and broadens our horizons.　⑤Whenever I think of the clean stream near my home, I cannot help feeling sad.‎ ‎ ——　　(二)回味无穷的结尾　　——‎ 结尾有概括全文内容，进一步强调中心思想、升华主题的作用。主要有以下写法：‎ ‎1．书信的常用结尾法 ‎(1)表示感谢法 ‎①I'd appreciate it if you could reply to my letter at your earliest convenience.‎ 如果您尽早给我回信，我会非常感谢。‎ ‎②I'd appreciate it if you could do me a favor.‎ 如果你能帮助我，我将非常感激。‎ ‎③I must thank you again for your generous help.‎ 我必须对你慷慨的帮助再次表示感谢。‎ ‎(2)表示期待法 ‎④Hope you'll have a good time in China.‎ 希望你在中国玩得开心。‎ ‎⑤Looking forward to your reply.‎ 期待着您的回复。‎ ‎⑥I hope we'll get together again next year.‎ 希望我们明年再聚。‎ ‎2．记叙文的常用结尾法 ‎(1)主题升华法 ‎⑦My experience tells me that it is not what you are given but how you make use of it that determines who you are.‎ 我的经历告诉我：决定你成为什么样的人，不是你被给予了什么，而是你怎样利用它。‎ ‎(2)问题设问法——通过问答形式总结全文 ‎⑧Isn't it a pleasure to have great calm in mind while you are reading?‎ 你在阅读时，内心非常平静不是一种快乐吗？‎ ‎3．说明文的常用结尾法 总结全文法——总结说明的事物，进一步说明其特征 ‎⑨In a word, changes in our life in the past twenty years have brought us convenience and comfort.‎ 总之，过去20年里我们生活中的变化给我们带来了便利和舒适。‎ ‎4．议论文的常用结尾法 ‎(1)得出结论法——结尾总结全文，得出结论 ‎⑩Therefore, the film industry should make greater efforts to attract more viewers.‎ 所以，电影业应该做出更大努力来吸引更多观众。‎ ‎(2)深化中心法——结尾进一步深化主题 ‎⑪In reality, we should learn from the black pencil: not to mind what others say so long as we are confident in what we have done.‎ 事实上，我们应该向这支黑色铅笔学习：只要我们对自己做过的事情有信心，就不要去介意别人说什么。‎ ‎(3)提出建议法——结尾提出建议以及应对措施 ‎⑫I think all of us should mind our behavior in public places. Only in this way can we live in more comfortable and beautiful surroundings.‎ 我认为，我们都应该注意自己在公共场合的行为。只有这样我们才能生活在更舒服和美丽的环境中。‎ ‎(4)引用名言法——结尾用名言总结全文 ‎⑬Anyhow, different cultures, different customs. If you “Do as the Romans do when in Rome”， you will enjoy more your stay here.‎ 不管怎么说，不同的文化就有不同的习俗。如果你“入乡随俗”‎ ‎，你就会更好地享受这里的生活。‎ ‎(5)照应开头法——结尾对开头进行照应 ‎⑭Different ways of traveling can make people happy, but I like traveling by train most.‎ 不同的旅行方式都能让人愉快，但是我最喜欢乘火车旅行。‎ 常见结尾句式：‎ I'd appreciate it if ... 如果……我将不胜感激 It is high time that ... 确实到了……的时候了 In this way, I believe that ... 用这种办法，我相信……‎ Only with combined efforts can we ... ‎ 唯有通力合作我们才能……‎ We can, therefore, come to the conclusion that ... ‎ 因此，我们可以得出结论：……‎ Therefore, we have the reason to believe that ... ‎ 因此，我们有理由相信……‎ Therefore, we should realize that ... ‎ 因此，我们应当意识到……‎ If we can do as mentioned above, there can be no doubt that ... ‎ 如果我们能做到如上所述，毫无疑问……‎ We, therefore, can make it clear from the above discussion that ... ‎ 因此，从上面的讨论中我们可以明白……‎ ‎　　　　　　　　　　　　　‎ 即时练2‎ 根据提示翻译句子 ‎①我希望你会在中学过丰富多彩的生活。(表示期待法)‎ ‎__________________________________________________________________‎ ‎②如果你能到机场接我，我将不胜感激。(表示感谢法)‎ ‎__________________________________________________________________‎ ‎③找一个伙伴和我们一起去如何？如果这样，我们可以相互帮助并且乐享旅游。(问题设问法)‎ ‎__________________________________________________________________‎ ‎④因此，我们得出结论：世界上没有什么东西和自由一样珍贵。(得出结论法)‎ ‎__________________________________________________________________‎ ‎⑤总之，成功是重要的，失败也是重要的，因为它是成功之母。(引用名言法)‎ ‎__________________________________________________________________‎ 答案：①I hope you will live a rich and colorful life in middle school.　②I'd ‎ appreciate it if you could meet me at the airport.　③How about finding a companion to be with us? If so, we can help each other and be happy during the trip.　④We, therefore, come to the conclusion that nothing is so precious as freedom in the world.　⑤In a word, success is important, and so is failure, because it's the mother of success.‎ 三 词顺句畅的过渡和衔接 衔接与过渡性词语的使用是语言连贯性得以实现的最常用手段。在句与句之间、段与段之间恰当地使用一些承上启下的连接(过渡)性词语是非常必要的。高中阶段应该掌握的连接(过渡)性词语归纳如下：‎ ‎ ——　　(一)表示顺序的过渡性词语　　——‎ firstly， first of all， to begin/start with， then， later， in the end， ‎ finally， at last， after that， afterwards， since then， meanwhile等。‎ ‎①Firstly, I have always been interested in reading books. Secondly, I'd like to share my books with others as well.‎ 首先，我一直对读书感兴趣；其次，我也喜欢与别人分享我的书籍。‎ ‎②First of all, we'll try to find a place to live.‎ 首先，我们得设法找个住的地方。‎ ‎　　　　　　　　　　　　　‎ 即时练1‎ 用过渡性词语完成句子 首先，我把所有的书籍、报纸和其他的散落在屋子里的东西收集起来放好，然后我扫去所有家具上的灰尘，之后我扫地、拖地。‎ ‎①________， I collected all the books, newspapers and other things scattered in the rooms and put them in place. ②________ I wiped the dust off all the furniture. ③____________， I swept and mopped the floors.‎ 答案：①Firstly　②Then　③After that ‎ ——　　(二)表示并列转折关系的过渡性词语　　——‎ and， or， but， yet， however， while， otherwise， on the ‎ contrary， despite， in spite of， instead of等。‎ Otherwise we'll have to answer for our selfishness sooner or later.‎ 否则的话，我们迟早会为我们的自私付出代价。‎ ‎　　　　　　　　　　　　　即时练2‎ 用过渡性词语完成句子 相反，智能手机不仅占用我们宝贵的时间，而且对我们的健康造成极大的危害。‎ ‎__________________， smartphones not only take up our valuable time, but also do great harm to our health.‎ 答案：On the contrary ‎ ——　　(三)表示因果关系的过渡性词语　　——‎ thus， because， thanks to， due to， for one reason， so， ‎ as a result/consequence， therefore等。‎ Therefore, I am writing to ask for your help as well as professional advice.‎ 因此，我写信向你寻求帮助和专业建议。‎ ‎　　　　　　　　　　　　　即时练3‎ 用过渡性词语完成句子 ‎①因此，我们没有理由轻视普通的工作。‎ ‎__________________， we have no reason to look down upon ordinary jobs.‎ ‎②多亏当地媒体的协助，他在13个国家找到了32对同年同月同日出生的人。‎ ‎__________________ the assistance of the local media, he has found 32 time twins across 13 countries.‎ 答案：①As a result/consequence　②Thanks to ‎ ——　　(四)表示递进关系的过渡性词语　　——‎ besides， what's more， furthermore， moreover， what's worse， to make matters worse， still， even， in addition等。‎ ‎①The weather was cold and wet. Still, we had a great time.‎ 天气又冷又潮，不过我们仍旧玩得很开心。‎ ‎②Moreover, the scenery along the river is amazing, with many wellknown sightseeing spots.‎ 而且，沿河的风景很美，有很多著名景点。‎ ‎　　　　　　　　　　　　　‎ 即时练4‎ 用过渡性词语完成句子 ‎①另外，我可以看到不同种类的美丽的鸟。‎ ‎________________， I can see different kinds of beautiful birds.‎ ‎②更糟的是，如果我们在电话上花费过多的时间，我们会失去将来所需要的交际技能。‎ ‎______________________________， if we spend too much time on phones, we will lose the communication skills we need in the future.‎ 答案：①In addition　②To make matters worse/Worse still/What's worse ‎ ——　　(五)表示观点的过渡性词语　　——‎ as far as I am concerned， as for sb./sth.， in my opinion， in my view， from my point of view， personally等。‎ ‎①As far as I'm concerned, all our classmates have learned a lot from our communication and the various activities.‎ 就我而言，我们都从彼此的交流和各种各样的活动中学到了很多东西。‎ ‎②As for my favorite figure in Chinese history it must be Wei Yuan, a great thinker in the late Qing Dynasty.‎ 至于中国历史上我最喜欢的人物，一定是魏源，一位晚清的伟大思想家。‎ ‎　　　　　　　　　　　　　‎ 即时练5‎ 用过渡性词语完成句子 ‎①在我看来，这里的每个人都是我们大家庭的一员，我们从对方身上学到很多东西。‎ ‎__________________， everyone here is a member of our big family and we learn a lot from each other.‎ ‎②至于考试作弊，我会告诉他们诚实的重要性。‎ ‎__________________ cheating in the exams, I will tell them the importance of honesty.‎ 答案：①In my opinion/view/From my point of view/Personally　②As for ‎ ——　　(六)表示总结的过渡性词语　　——‎ all in all， on the whole， in short， in brief， in conclusion， in a word， to sum up， in general等。‎ ‎①In conclusion, I like being praised, but I know sometimes it's not always good.‎ 总之，我喜欢被表扬，但是我知道有时候表扬并不总是好的。‎ ‎②All in all, traveling is the best choice to recharge ourselves and get ready for the new challenges.‎ 总的来说，旅游是充实自己、准备迎接新挑战的最佳选择。‎ ‎　　　　　　　　　　　　　‎ 即时练6‎ 用过渡性词语完成句子 ‎①总之，如果我们有这么一块有魔力的手表，我们的生活将会变得更加方便。‎ ‎__________________， if we had such a magic watch, our life would become more convenient.‎ ‎②总的来说，我发现自行车比摩托车更令人喜欢。‎ ‎__________________， I find a bike more enjoyable than a motorcycle.‎ 答案：①In a word/In short/In brief　②On the whole/In general/All in all 过关检测(限时：50分钟)‎ Ⅰ.请用高级词汇提升下面的考生作文 假如你是中学生李明，家住泉州。你的英国笔友Jason来信谈到了他的故乡London，并希望了解你家乡泉州的情况。请你用英文写一封回信。‎ 回信必须包括以下内容：‎ ‎1.自然情况：地理位置优越、气候风景宜人等；‎ ‎2.发展成就：经济发展迅速、城市高楼林立等；‎ ‎3.存在问题：交通拥堵现象、空气污染问题等；‎ ‎4.对泉州发展的看法：内容由考生自己拟定。‎ 注意：1.请勿提及与考生相关的真实信息；‎ ‎2.可以适当增加细节，以使内容充实、行文连贯；‎ ‎3.词数100左右。‎ 参考词汇：高层建筑highrise building ‎ 　‎ ‎ 　‎ ‎ 　‎ ‎ 　‎ ‎　‎ ‎　‎ ‎　‎ ‎[考生作文]‎ Dear Jason，‎ I'm 1.very happy to hear from you and know about your beautiful home city London. Now I'd like to tell you something about my hometown Quanzhou.‎ Quanzhou is a beautiful place for people to live. Its economy has been developing 2.fast during the past ten years. New bridges and roads have been 3.built,_highrise buildings standing in many parts of the city. There are 4.more_and_more schools and hospitals for the native people. It is developing into a modern and 5.beautiful city. 6.But ‎ there are still some problems, 7.such_as heavy traffic in rush hours and 8.serious air pollution, which have a bad 9.effect on people's daily life. 10.I_think Quanzhou should strive to develop and build an environmentally friendly, healthy and attractive city, so that we could have a better hometown in future.‎ Yours，‎ Li Ming ‎[升格作文]‎ Dear Jason，‎ I'm 1.______________ happy to hear from you and know about your beautiful home city London. Now I'd like to tell you something about my hometown Quanzhou.‎ Quanzhou is a beautiful place for people to live. Its economy has been developing 2.______________ during the past ten years. New bridges and roads have been 3.______________， highrise buildings standing in many parts of the city. 4.______________ schools and hospitals are available for the native people. It is developing into a modern and 5.______________ city. 6.______________， there are still some problems, 7.______________ heavy traffic in rush hours and 8.______________ air pollution, which have a bad 9.______________ on people's daily life. 10.______________， Quanzhou should strive to develop and build an environmentally friendly, healthy and attractive city, so that we could have a better hometown in future.‎ Yours，‎ Li Ming 答案：1.more than/pretty　2.rapidly/swiftly　3.set up　4.An increasing number of　5.attractive/charming ‎6．However　7.for example　8.severe　9.influence/impact　10.In my opinion/As far as I am concerned Ⅱ.根据要求，为下面的话题写作设计一个开头段 假设你是李华，你的学校校报新开设的栏目My Favorite Traditional Chinese Festival正在向全校师生征集稿件。‎ 请你用英语写一篇短文并投稿。‎ ‎1．开门见山式：‎ ‎ 　‎ ‎ 　‎ ‎2．概括式：‎ ‎ 　‎ ‎ 　‎ 答案：1.Of all the traditional Chinese festivals, I like Mid－Autumn Festival best./There are a lot of traditional festivals in China, of which I like MidAutumn Festival best.‎ ‎2．Chinese people have been celebrating MidAutumn Festival for centuries and I like it best.‎ Ⅲ.根据要求及首段内容，为下面的话题设计一个结尾段 假如你是李华，你有一种超能力，那么你将用它来做什么呢？请用英语写一篇短文，畅谈一下你的打算。‎ I have been dreaming of having a superpower since my childhood. 　‎ ‎ 　‎ ‎1．首尾呼应式：‎ ‎ 　‎ ‎ 　‎ ‎2．画龙点睛式：‎ ‎ 　‎ ‎ 　‎ 答案：1.How I wish I would really have such a superpower.‎ ‎2．If I had such a superpower, I would do more to help the people on the earth live happily.‎ Ⅳ.写作练习 假如你是李华，高考后想出国留学，但担心不适应国外生活，请给外籍教师Peter写一封信，告诉他你的担忧，请他介绍美国大学生的学习和生活并给出相关建议。‎ 注意：1.词数100左右；‎ ‎2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；‎ ‎3．信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。‎ Dear Peter，‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ 　‎ ‎ ‎ Yours，‎ Li Hua ‎[精彩范文]‎ Dear_Peter，‎ How is everything going these days? I am Li Hua, one of your students. I'm writing ‎ to you to ask for some advice on how to adapt to the life abroad.‎ On thinking that I will be exposed to a completely unfamiliar environment, I can't help feeling nervous. So now I am eager to know what real American college life is like and what problems foreign students may come across at the beginning. Besides, though I have made a lot of preparations for English language, I am still afraid that I might have difficulties in communicating with others in English. Could you please offer me some advice on it?‎ I hope my silly questions will not bother you too much. Thanks for your time and I am looking forward to your reply.‎ Yours，‎ Li_Hua Ⅴ.用过渡性词语完成句子 ‎1．在我看来，那些得到她的捐赠的人会被鼓励着更努力地学习。‎ ‎______________________________________________， those who have ‎ received her donations will be encouraged to study even harder.‎ 答案：In my opinion/view/From my point of view/Personally/As far as I am concerned ‎2．而且，其他人能得到他们想要的书，他们有更多自由的时间阅读书籍。‎ ‎________________， other persons can get the books they want and they have more free time to read them.‎ 答案：Besides/Furthermore/Moreover/Additionally ‎3．这辆自行车好像很笨重，很难控制。更糟的是，我从车子上掉下来很多次。‎ The bike seemed too heavy and difficult to control. ________________， I took ‎ many falls off the bike.‎ 答案：Worse still/To make matters worse/What's worse ‎4．最后，我想问关于他私人生活的几个问题，那一定很有趣。‎ ‎____________， I would like to ask a few questions about his personal life, ‎ which must be very interesting.‎ 答案：Finally/At last/In the end ‎5．总之，他必须为他缺席会议作出解释。‎ ‎____________________， he must give an explanation for his absence from the conference.‎ 答案：In short/In brief/In a word ‎6．另外，我们应该学会与别人友好相处。‎ ‎____________________， we should learn how to get along well with others.‎ 答案：In addition/Additionally ‎7．一般来说，这个季节去泰山旅游的人是最多的。‎ ‎____________________， the number of people visiting Mount Tai in this ‎ season is the largest.‎ 答案：Generally speaking/In general ‎8．尽管生病了，怀特先生还是来参加了毕业典礼。‎ ‎____________________ illness, Mr White attended the graduation ceremony.‎ 答案：Despite/In spite of Ⅵ.根据下面的提示写一篇短文，注意使用适当的过渡 性词语　　假定你是李华，你的英国网友Anna在她的学校举办的一次作文比赛中荣获一等奖，你写信向她表示祝贺，并在信中谈及自己在英语写作上存在的困难，希望得到她的帮助。‎ 注意：1.词数100左右；‎ ‎2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；‎ ‎3．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ Dear Anna，‎ I am very glad to learn that 　‎ ‎ 　‎ ‎ 　‎ ‎ 　‎ ‎ ‎ Looking forward to your early reply.‎ Yours，‎ Li Hua ‎[精彩范文]‎ Dear_Anna，‎ I_am_very_glad_to_learn_that you have won the first prize in your school's English writing contest. I am writing to offer my warmest congratulations on your excellent performance.‎ Honestly speaking, it's a real encouragement to me to see your efforts rewarded. How I admire your writing skills! I have been learning English for several years and I have little trouble in listening, speaking and reading. However, I find it hard to write a good composition. In spite of so many efforts put into it, I just can't find a way out. I feel stressed out. I would appreciate it if you could give me some specific advice on it.‎ Looking_forward_to_your_early_reply.‎ Yours，‎ Li_Hua 强化特训11　书面表达(二)(限时：50分钟)‎ Ⅰ.请用更高级词汇替换黑体词汇 ‎1．The teacher directed the gifted students towards the more difficult courses.________‎ 答案：difficult→challenging ‎2．We'll try our best to develop the traditional friendship between us.________‎ 答案：develop→promote ‎3．I can no longer bear the way he speaks to us.________‎ 答案：bear→put up with ‎4．I met one of my classmates on my way to school yesterday.________‎ 答案：met→came across ‎5．He has decided to be a teacher when he grows up.________‎ 答案：decided→determined/made up his mind ‎6．Developing very quickly, the Internet causes the breakdown of face－to－face communication.________‎ 答案：causes→gives rise to ‎7．When you are bored with the people sometimes, you'd better find a quiet place, listening to some classical music.________‎ 答案：bored with→fed up with ‎8．More and more visitors have been attracted to this place.________‎ 答案：More and more→An increasing number of ‎9．He didn't listen to what I said in the class.________‎ 答案：didn't listen to→turned a deaf ear to ‎10．Suddenly I thought of an idea that someone had broken into my house.________‎ 答案：I thought of an idea→an idea occurred to me Ⅱ.按要求改写下列句子 ‎1．My favorite hobbies are reading books and newspapers. They have become a necessary part of my daily life.‎ ‎→_______________________________________________________________‎ ‎_________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_________________________________________________________________ (用定语从句合并句子)‎ 答案：My favorite hobbies are reading books and newspapers, which have become ‎ a necessary part of my daily life.‎ ‎2．That they had had professional training impressed me most.‎ ‎→_______________________________________________________________‎ ‎_________________________________________________________________ (用主语从句和表语从句改写句子)‎ 答案：What impressed me most was that they had had professional training.‎ ‎3．After we had practiced playing basketball for almost two months, we strongly desired to be the winner.‎ ‎→_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_________________________________________________________________ (用分词作状语改写句子)‎ 答案：Having practiced playing basketball for almost two months, we strongly desired to be the winner.‎ ‎4．I didn't know real happiness until I met you.‎ ‎→_______________________________________________________________‎ ‎_________________________________________________________________ (用强调句型改写句子)‎ 答案：It was not until I met you that I knew real happiness.‎ ‎5．The weather was so cold that we had to stay at home.‎ ‎→_______________________________________________________________‎ ‎_________________________________________________________________ (用倒装句改写句子)‎ 答案：So cold was the weather that we had to stay at home.‎ ‎6．The local government didn't realize the problem until the river was seriously polluted.‎ ‎→_______________________________________________________________‎ ‎_________________________________________________________________ (用倒装句改写句子)‎ 答案：Not until the river was seriously polluted did the local government realize the problem.‎ ‎7．It's time for us to take measures to protect endangered animals.‎ ‎→_______________________________________________________________‎ ‎_________________________________________________________________ (用虚拟语气改写句子)‎ 答案：It's time that we took/should take measures to protect endangered animals.‎ ‎8．When we approached the city center, we saw a stone statue of about 10 meters in height.‎ ‎→_______________________________________________________________‎ ‎_________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_________________________________________________________________ (用现在分词短语作时间状语改写句子)‎ 答案：Approaching the city center, we saw a stone statue of about 10 meters in height.‎ ‎9．They are experienced, knowledgeable, patient and understanding.‎ ‎→_______________________________________________________________‎ ‎_________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_________________________________________________________________ (用not only ... but also ... 句型改写句子)‎ 答案：They are not only experienced and knowledgeable, but also patient and understanding.‎ ‎10．We should speak more English. We think it is very important.‎ ‎→_______________________________________________________________‎ ‎_________________________________________________________________ (用it作形式宾语合并句子)‎ 答案：We think it very important to speak more English.‎ Ⅲ.用过渡词汇或句式补全句子 ‎1．____________________(首先), the most significant thing is to set a goal, work out a plan and carry out your plan step by step.‎ 答案：First of all/To begin with ‎2．____________________ (就我而言), I love wealth, but I value health more.‎ 答案：As far as I am concerned ‎3．____________________ (事实上), advertisement plays an informative role in our daily life.‎ 答案：As a matter of fact/In fact ‎4．____________________________________(况且), listening to some soft music does relax your mood and give you a new start.‎ 答案：Besides/In addition/What's more/Moreover ‎5．I lost my way in the forest and __________________________ (更糟的是), it got dark.‎ 答案：to make matters worse/worse still ‎6．______________ (因此), I suggest we live in harmony with the nature.‎ 答案：Therefore ‎7．__________________________ (总之), changes in our life in the past twenty years have brought us comfort and convenience.‎ 答案：In a word/In conclusion/In short/In brief ‎8．____________________________ (到了……的时候了) we took some measures to solve the problem.‎ 答案：It's (high) time that ‎9．____________________________ (我们可以得出一个结论) our society is progressing and people are living a better life than ever before.‎ 答案：We can draw a conclusion that ‎10．______________________________________________ (从这次经历中，我了解到) being careful is very important and that we can't be too careful, especially in examinations.‎ 答案：From this experience, I learned that Ⅳ.翻译下列开头和结尾句 ‎1．我代表学生会给您写信请求帮助我们的校友。‎ ‎_________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_________________________________________________________________‎ 答案：I am writing to you, on behalf of Student Union, to ask for help for our schoolmate.‎ ‎2．如果方便的话，我希望您能接受我们的邀请。‎ ‎_________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_________________________________________________________________‎ 答案：We hope that you will accept our invitation if it is convenient for you.‎ ‎3．我写信申请在您的大学里学习。‎ ‎_________________________________________________________________‎ 答案：I'm writing to apply to study in your university.‎ ‎4．我写信告诉您我的问题，这个问题困扰了我很长时间。‎ ‎_________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_________________________________________________________________‎ 答案：I am writing to tell you my problem, which has troubled me for a long time.‎ ‎5．我写信给您是因为我有些确实严肃的问题想要和您交流。‎ ‎_________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_________________________________________________________________‎ 答案：I am writing to you because I have something really serious to communicate with you.‎ ‎6．‎7月25日至‎8月10日在北戴河将有一个英语暑假夏令营。‎ ‎_________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_________________________________________________________________‎ 答案：There is going to be an English summer camp in Beidaihe from July 25 to August 10.‎ ‎7．我的确希望你能考虑我的建议。‎ ‎_________________________________________________________________‎ 答案：I do hope you will consider my suggestion.‎ ‎8．对于您的慷慨帮助，我再次表示感谢。‎ ‎_________________________________________________________________‎ 答案：Thanks again for your generous help.‎ ‎9．我为给你带来这么大的麻烦再次向你道歉。‎ ‎_________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_________________________________________________________________答案：I apologize to you again for having put you in such great trouble.‎ ‎10．我想向你致以最诚挚的祝贺。‎ ‎_________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_________________________________________________________________‎ 答案：I would like to congratulate you with all my heart.‎ ‎11．如果你能认真对待我的投诉，我会非常高兴。‎ ‎_________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_________________________________________________________________‎ 答案：I would be very delighted if you could consider my complaint seriously.‎ ‎12．请一定按时参加。‎ ‎_________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_________________________________________________________________‎ 答案：Be sure to attend it on time.‎