2019届二轮复习书面表达第四讲层级十二句顺意畅的“过渡语”课件（17张）

2019届二轮复习书面表达第四讲层级十二句顺意畅的“过渡语”课件（17张）

第四 讲 用 篇章技巧 助力 01 03 美句输入 完美文章 02 佳句输出 层级十二 句顺意畅的“过渡语” 美句输入 美句输入 表示 起始关系的过渡性 词语 above all ， to begin/start with ， today ， now ， nowadays ， at present ， currently ， recently ， generally speaking ， according to ， with the development of... 等。 1 To start with ， I have been learning and speaking Mandarin for about 17 years. 首先，我学说普通话已经 17 年了。 (2015· 四川卷 · 满分作文 ) 美句输入 表示 时间顺序的过渡性 词语 firstly ， first of all ， to begin/start with ， then ， later ， in the end ， finally ， at last ， after that ， afterwards ， since then ， immediately ， suddenly ， meanwhile 等。 2 Firstly ， I have always been interested in reading books . Secondly ， I'd like to share my books with others as well.(2015· 重庆卷 · 满分作文 ) 首先，我一直对读书感兴趣；其次，我也喜欢与别人分享我的书籍。 美句输入 表示 并列关系的过渡性 词语 and ， or ， also ， as well as ， neither...nor... ， not only...but also... ， either...or... ， not...but... 等。 3 She finally earned respect of them ， who eventually became confident as well as wellbehaved . ( 2015· 广东卷 · 满分作文 ) 她最后赢得了他们的尊重，他们最终变得自信，表现也不错。 美句输入 表示 转折关系的过渡性 词语 but ， yet ， however ， while ， otherwise ， on the contrary ， though ， although ， even if/though ， despite ， in spite of ， regardless of 等。 4 Some compromises were unavoidable ， but the video turned out perfect. 有些妥协是不可避免的，但视频结果是完美的。 (2017· 北京卷 · 书面表达 ) 美句输入 表示 因果关系的过渡性词语 because ， as ， since ， for ， thanks to ， due to ， as a result of ， so ， therefore ， as a result/consequence 等。 5 Thanks to the assistance of the local media ， he has found 32 time twins across 13 countries ， with 17 males and 15 females . ( 广东卷 · 满分作文 ) 多亏当地媒体的协助，他在 13 个国家找到了 32 对同年同月同日出生的人，其中 17 对男性， 15 对女性。 美句输入 表示递进关系的过渡性 词语 what's more ， furthermore ， moreover ， besides ， what's worse ， still less ， to make matters worse ， worse still ， on (the) one hand...on the other hand... ， for one thing...for another (thing ) 等 。 6 What's worse ， I don't communicate a lot with my parents and my friends. 更糟糕的是，我不经常和父母和朋友交流。 (2017· 天津卷 · 书面表达 ) 美句输入 表示列举事实的过渡性 词语 such as ， for example/instance ， take...for example ， that is to say ， as follows ， in other words 等。 7 The plan for the day is as follows ： Firstly ， it's a custom to have dumplings on that day ， so we'll make delicious dumplings with our own hands rather than buy some for them . ( 2015· 全国卷 Ⅱ· 满分作文 ) 这天的计划如下：首先，在那天吃饺子是一项风俗，因此我们会亲手为他们做美味的饺子而不是去买。 美句输入 表示观点的过渡性 词语 in my opinion ， in my view ， from my point of view ， as far as I am concerned ， as for me ， personally 等。 8 As far as I'm concerned ， all our classmates have learned a lot from our communication and the various activities.(2016· 天津卷 · 书面表达 ) 就我个人而言，我的所有同学从交流和各种各样的活动中学到很多东西。 美句输入 表示总结的过渡性 词语 in short ， in brief ， in conclusion ， in a/one word ， to sum up ， all in all ， on the whole ， in general ， actually 等。 9 In short ， playing basketball enriches my life and makes me more confident. 总之，打篮球丰富我的生活，使我更加自信。 用过渡词汇补全句子 1 ． _______________________________ ( 首先 ) ， the most significant thing is to set a goal ， work out a plan and carry out your plan step by step. 2 ． ______________________________________ ( 况且 ) ， listening to some soft music does relax your mood and give you a new start. 3 ． I lost my way in the forest and __________________________________ ( 更糟的是 ) ， it became dark. 4 ． ______________ ( 因此 ) ， I suggest we be given more time for sports and sleep . 5 ． _________________________________________ ( 总之 ) ， we should take effective measures to protect our environment. First of all/To begin with Besides/In addition/What's more/Moreover to make matters worse/worse still Therefore In a word/In conclusion/In short/In brief 补全句子 6 ． ________________ ( 否则 ) we'll have to answer for our selfishness sooner or later. 7 ． Swimming ______________ ( 不但 ) benefits our health ， ______________ ( 而且 ) helps us have a strong will. 8 ． _____________________ ( 正相反 ) ， smart phones not only take up our valuable time ， but also do great harm to our health. 9 ． _____________________________ ( 在我看来 ) ， only by studying hard at ordinary time can you succeed eventually. 10 ． ______________ ( 因此 ) ， I suggest we get up early to catch the bus. Otherwise not only but also On the contrary As far as I am concerned Therefore 补全句子 11 ． ______________ ( 事实上 ), we can't succeed in everything we try . What's important is that we should stick at it. 12 ． In my free time, I will continue to take regular exercise, ______________ ( 例如 ) swimming, running and various ball games. 13 ． I noticed the entrance was small and almost blocked . ______________ ( 所以 ) my classmates and I had a discussion and wrote a report. 14 ． ___________________ ( 除了 · ····· 之外 ) reading for knowledge, we read for fun and inspiration. 15 ． ______________ ( 最后 ), we should take part in sports and outdoors activities frequently . They really helpful to build up my body and enrich my school life. Actually such as So In addition to Finally 选用适当的过渡性词语补全短文（观点对比类） Dear editor ， I'm writing to tell you something about the discussion on whether it is necessary for senior one students to take the one week military training . Views vary from person to person. Some hold that it is necessary . 1. ______________ ， it can improve students' teamwork spirit ， which will play an important part in their life and study . 2. _____________________ ， there is no doubt that they become stronger physically and mentally through the training . 3 ． ___________ ， others have opposite views . They think it is a waste of time . 4 ． ______________________ ， students get burnt easily without any protection in the sun. 5 ． __________________________________ ， though we may feel tired during the training ， it goes without saying that the one week military training is meaningful. Yours ， Li Hua On one hand however ， besides ， meanwhile ， personally ， additionally ， on one hand ， on the other hand ， as far as I'm concerned On the other hand However Besides / Additionally Personally/As far as I'm concerned