2020届二轮复习书面表达中如何构建完整的篇章课件（25张）

2020届二轮复习书面表达中如何构建完整的篇章课件（25张）

2020 届二轮复习书面表达中如何构建完整的 篇章 层级十一　生动清晰的 “ 时、语态 ” 一篇文章的时态语态可以让文章要点表述清晰，语言生动，段落有条理，能烘托语境，创设情境，使文章的语言活起来，亮起来。 一、时态一定要正确 1 . 一般时态 一般现在时、一般过去时和一般将来时。 There is going to be a paper-cutting exhibition in the Folk Art Museum on Sunday. (2017· 全国卷 Ⅱ · 书面表达 ) 星期日，在民间美术馆将有一个剪纸展览。 2 . 进行时态 现在进行时、过去进行时和将来进行时。 I am writing to invite you to join a paper-cutting show to be held this Sunday. (2017· 全国卷 Ⅱ · 书面表达 ) 我写信是想邀请你参加本星期日举行的剪纸展。 3 . 完成时态 现在完成时、过去完成时。 I’m sure that it will interest you ， for you have been enthusiastic about ping-pong . (2017· 全国卷 Ⅲ · 书面表达 ) 我肯定这会使你感兴趣，因为你一直热衷于乒乓球运动。 二、用英语的被动语态 写作时可以多用被动语态，以使表达更生动。 1 . be ＋过去分词 ( be 可使用各种时态 ) 或 get ＋过去分词 The exhibition will be held from 9 : 00 am to 5 : 00 pm the day after tomorrow in Folk Custom Museum. (2017· 全国卷 Ⅱ · 书面表达 ) 展览将于后天上午 9 时至下午 5 时在民俗博物馆举行。 2 . 情态动词＋ be ＋过去分词 Internet voting is unfair ， and can’t be trusted . (2016· 江苏卷 · 书面表达 ) 网络投票不公平，不能被信任。 补全句子 1.That weekend ， we ______________________________________________ to the people there. (2016· 北京卷 · 写作 ) 那个周末，我们去了附近的小区把它们送给那里的人们。 2.________________ to bring you the Chinese painting ______________________. 我已请他带给你所要的油画。 3.________________ to tell you something about donating books to your class. 我正写信告诉你向你班赠书的情况。 went to a nearby neighborhood and gave them away I’ve asked him you’ve asked for before I’m writing 4.The entrance to the parking place was too small and often ____________. 通往停车场的入口太小了，经常堵车。 5.________________________________ ， and thousands of copies have been sold out now. 这本书在我们省很好卖，现在已经卖出数千本了。 6.________________________________ ________ in the past two years. 我们的学校近两年发生了巨大的变化。 7.I didn’t catch what our teacher said ， because ________________________________. 我没有听懂我们的老师说的什么，因为我刚才在考虑别的事情。 got blocked This book sells well in our province Great changes have taken place in our school I was thinking about something else 利用恰当的时态语态，结合中文提示补全短文并背诵 1.________________________________ ( 一场可怕的暴雨袭击了我们城市 ) last night and caused huge mudslides around West Village.In this disaster ， nearly 2.________________________ ( 十所房子被毁 ) and an office building was ruined.What’s worse ， 3.____________________________ ( 暴雨已造成一人死亡 ) ， leaving five persons missing. A very terrible rainstorm hit our city ten houses were destroyed it has already caused one death 4.____________________ ( 当困难发生 ) at a place ， help comes from all sides.Soldiers were sent to help out.And 5.________________________________ ( 许多村民努力帮助 ) search for the missing persons.It is said that the direct economic loss caused by this heavy rainstorm 6.__________________________________ ( 总计一千多万元 ).Through everyone’s efforts ， 7.____________________________________ ( 一切进展顺利 ). When trouble happens a lot of villagers tried their best to help adds up to more than ten million yuan everything went on very well/smoothly 层级十二　句顺意畅的 “ 过渡语 ” 能使书面表达的整篇文章浑然一体的就是一些过渡性词语的使用。这些衔接过渡性词语在句与句之间、段与段之间起承上启下、使文章前后连贯、结构紧凑、过渡自然的作用，从而提升了表达的层次，成为增分的亮点。 1 . 表示起始关系的过渡性词语 above all ， to begin/start with ， today ， now ， nowadays ， at present ， currently ， recently ， generally speaking ， according to ， with the development of... 等。 According to our tradition ， you are supposed to arrive early ， so that you can help the family prepare the dinner ， which is not only meaningful but also interesting. (2018· 全国卷 Ⅰ · 书面表达 ) 根据我们的传统，你应该早点到达，这样你就可以帮助家人准备晚餐，这不仅有意义，而且很有趣。 2 . 表示时间顺序的过渡性词语 firstly ， first of all ， to begin/start with ， then ， later ， in the end ， finally ， at last ， after that ， afterwards ， since then ， immediately ， suddenly ， meanwhile 等。 To begin with ， the name of the movie is Gro w ing Together ， which is about the development of our beloved school. (2018· 全国卷 Ⅱ · 书面表达 ) 首先，电影的名字是《一起成长》，这是关于我们亲爱的学校的发展的一部电影。 3 . 表示并列关系的过渡性词语 and ， or ， also ， as well as ， neither...nor... ， not only...but also... ， either...or... ， not...but... 等。 It is believed that the movie will be not only meaningful but also interesting. (2018· 全国卷 Ⅱ · 书面表达 ) 相信这部电影不仅有意义，而且很有趣。 4 . 表示转折关系的过渡性词语 but ， yet ， however ， while ， otherwise ， on the contrary ， though ， although ， even if/though ， despite ， in spite of ， regardless of 等。 Though/Although the foreign students have studied in our school for a long time ， they don’t know how to make tea. (2018· 北京卷 · 书面表达第二节 ) 虽然外国学生在我们学校学习了很长时间，但他们不知道如何沏茶。 5 . 表示因果关系的过渡性词语 because ， as ， since ， for ， thanks to ， due to ， as a result of ， so ， therefore ， as a result/consequence 等。 Thanks to the assistance of the local media ， he has found 32 time twins across 13 countries ， with 17 males and 15 females. ( 广东卷 · 满分作文 ) 多亏当地媒体的协助，他在 13 个国家找到了 32 对同年同月同日出生的人，其中 17 对男性， 15 对女性。 6 . 表示递进关系的过渡性词语 what’s more ， furthermore ， moreover ， besides ， what’s worse ， still less ， to make matters worse ， worse still ， on (the) one hand...on the other hand... ， for one thing...for another (thing)... 等。 Moreover ， with the stadium set up ， all the students are accessible to the facilities. (2018· 全国卷 Ⅲ · 书面表达 ) 此外，由于体育场的建立，所有的学生都可以使用这些设施。 7 . 表示列举事实的过渡性词语 such as ， for example/instance ， take...for example ， that is to say ， as follows ， in other words 等。 The plan for the day is as follows ： Firstly ， it’s a custom to have dumplings on that day ， so we’ll make delicious dumplings with our own hands rather than buy some for them. ( 全国卷 Ⅱ · 满分作文 ) 这天的计划如下：首先，在那天吃饺子是一项风俗，因此我们会亲手为他们做美味的饺子而不是去买。 8 . 表示观点的过渡性词语 in my opinion ， in my view ， from my point of view ， as far as I am concerned ， as for me ， personally 等。 In a/one word ， I do hope your dream will come true and it’s my pleasure to show you around in Beijing when that day comes. (2018· 北京卷 · 书面表达第一节 ) 总之，我真希望你梦想成真，我很高兴在那一天带你参观北京。 9 . 表示总结的过渡性词语 in short ， in brief ， in conclusion ， in a/one word ， to sum up ， all in all ， on the whole ， in general ， actually 等。 As far as I’m concerned ， I think the outstanding movie Gro w ing Together is interesting to watch. (2018· 全国卷 Ⅱ · 书面表达 ) 就我个人而言，我认为这部优秀的电影《一起成长》看起来很有趣。 用过渡词汇补全句子 1.______________________ ( 首先 ) ， the most significant thing is to set a goal ， work out a plan and carry out your plan step by step. 2.____________________________________ ( 况且 ) ， listening to some soft music does relax your mood and give you a new start. 3.I lost my way in the forest and ____________________________ ( 更糟的是 ) ， it became dark. 4.__________ ( 因此 ) ， I suggest we be given more time for sports and sleep. First of all/To begin with Besides/In addition/What’s more/Moreover to make matters worse/worse still Therefore 5.__________________________________ ( 总之 ) ， we should take effective measures to protect our environment. 6.__________ ( 否则 ) we’ll have to answer for our selfishness sooner or later. 7.Swimming ____________ ( 不但 ) benefits our health ， ____________ ( 而且 ) helps us have a strong will. 8.________________ ( 正相反 ) ， smart phones not only take up our valuable time ， but also do great harm to our health. In a word/In conclusion/In short/In brief Otherwise not only but also On the contrary 9.______________________ ( 在我看来 ) ， only by studying hard at ordinary time can you succeed eventually. 10.___________ ( 因此 ) ， I suggest we get up early to catch the bus. 11.________( 事实上 ), we can’t succeed in everything we try.What’s important is that we should stick at it. 12.In my free time, I will continue to take regular exercise, ____________ ( 例如 ) swimming, running and various ball games. As far as I am concerned Therefore Actually such as 13.I noticed the entrance was small and almost blocked.________ ( 所以 ) my classmates and I had a discussion and wrote a report. 14.____________ ( 除了 …… 之外 ) reading for knowledge, we read for fun and inspiration. 15.________ ( 最后 ), we should take part in sports and outdoors activities frequently.They are really helpful to build up my body and enrich my school life. So In addition to Finally 选用适当的过渡性词语补全短文 however ， besides ， meanwhile ， personally ， additionally ， on one hand ， on the other hand ， as far as I’m concerned Dear editor ， I’m writing to tell you something about the discussion on whether it is necessary for senior one students to take the one - week military training.Views vary from person to person. Some hold that it is necessary.1.____________ ， it can improve students’ teamwork spirit ， which will play an important part in their life and study.2.________________ ， there is no doubt that they become stronger physically and mentally through the training. 3.____________ ， others have opposite views.They think it is a waste of time. 4.__________________ ， students get burnt easily without any protection in the sun. 5.______________________________ ， though we may feel tired during the training ， it goes without saying that the one - week military training is meaningful. Yours ， Li Hua On one hand On the other hand 　 However Besides/Additionally Personally/As far as I’m concerned