【英语】福建省三明一中2019-2020学年高二下学期期中阶段考试试题

【英语】福建省三明一中2019-2020学年高二下学期期中阶段考试试题

福建省三明一中2019-2020学年高二下学期期中阶段考试 英语试题 第一部分 听力（共两节，满分 30 分）‎ 第一节 (共 5 小题；每小题 1.5 分，满分 7.5 分) ‎ 听下面 5 段对话。每段对话后有一个小题，从题中所给的 A、B、C 三个选项中选出最佳选项，并标在试卷的相应位置。听完每段对话后，你都有 10 秒钟的时间来回答有关小题和阅读下一小题，每段对话仅读一遍。 ‎ ‎1. What can people do at The 7th Mobile World? ‎ A. Buy new phones. B. Design new apps. C. Try out new apps. ‎ ‎2. What is the speaker’s flight numbers? ‎ A. BA2348. B. BA4328. C. BA4823. ‎ ‎3. How did the woman feel about the competition? ‎ A. Glad. B. Nervous. C. Confident. ‎ ‎4. Why does the woman suggest the shirt with long sleeves? ‎ A. It is lovely. B. It is comfortable. C. It is warm. ‎ ‎5. What is the woman’s book about? ‎ A. Snow. B. A girl. C. Trains. ‎ 第二节 (共 15 小题：每小题 1.5 分，满分 22.5 分) ‎ 听下面 5 段对话。每段对话后有几个小题，从题中所给的 A、B、C 三个选项中选出最佳选项，并标在试卷的相应位置。听每段对话前，你将有时间阅读各个小题，每小题 5秒钟：听完后，各小题给出 5 秒钟的作答时间，每段对话读两遍。 ‎ 听第 6 段材料，回答第 6、7 题。 ‎ ‎6. What are the speakers doing? ‎ A. Making a list. B. Doing shopping. C. Tidying the house. ‎ ‎7. Where is the new comb? ‎ A. On a shelf. B. In a drawer. C. In a cupboard. ‎ 听第 7 段材料，回答第 8、9 题。 ‎ ‎8. Where does the conversation take place? ‎ A. At an office. B. In a gym. C. At home. ‎ ‎9. What do the speakers agree about Jim? ‎ A. He is stressed. B. He is well-paid. C. He is ambitious. ‎ 听第8段材料，回答第 10 至 12 题。 ‎ ‎10. What is the relationship between the speakers? ‎ A. Doctor and nurse. B. Doctor and patient. C. Husband and wife.‎ ‎11. Why does the man need five minutes? ‎ A. He needs to examine an X-ray. ‎ B. He wants to make a phone call. ‎ C. He wishes to speak with Mr. Shaw. ‎ ‎12. Where did the woman go earlier? ‎ A. To the second floor. B. To the fifth floor. C. To the tenth floor. ‎ 听第 9 段材料，回答第 l3 至 l6 题。 ‎ ‎13. What are the speakers mainly talking about? ‎ A. What present Jim will give Granny. ‎ B. How Jim will celebrate Granny’s birthday. ‎ C. Whether Jim will go to Granny’s birthday. ‎ ‎14. At what time does the football match start? ‎ A. 10:00. B. 12:00. C. 12:30. ‎ ‎15. How will Jim’s mum go to Granny’s tomorrow? ‎ B. By bike. B. By car. C. By bus. ‎ ‎16. What will Jim do tomorrow evening? ‎ A. Telephone Granny. B. Stay at home. C. Meet some friends. ‎ 听第 10 段材料，回答第 17 至 20 题。 ‎ l7. Who is the speaker talking to? ‎ A. Visitors. B. Workers. C. Performers. ‎ ‎18. What places do visitors often ask for? ‎ A. Public telephones and the stage. ‎ B. Toilets and public telephones. ‎ C. Toilets and the first aid tent. ‎ ‎19. What is the centre of the main area? ‎ A. Campsite One. ‎ B. The staff meeting point. ‎ C. The visitor’s meeting point. ‎ ‎20. Where is the main security office? ‎ A. Across from the disabled viewing area. ‎ B. Behind the Olde England Pub. ‎ C. Near the entrance. ‎ 第二部分 阅读理解（共两节，满分 30 分） ‎ 第一节（共 10 小题；每小题 2 分，满分 20 分） ‎ 阅读下列短文，从每题所给的四个选项（A、B、C 和 D）中，选出最佳选项， ‎ 并在答题卡上将该项涂黑。 ‎ A Join the discussion ……‎ LakeLander — 2 hours ago ‎ Today, a man talked very loud on his phone on a train between Malvern and Reading, making many passengers upset. I wonder how he would react if I were to read my newspaper out loud on the train, I have never had the courage to do it, though. ‎ Pak50 — 57 minutes ago ‎ Why not give it a try? Perhaps you should take lessons on a musical instrument. The late musician Dennis Brian is said to have asked a fellow train passenger to turn off his radio. When his request was refused, he took out his French horn(号) and started to practice. ‎ Angie O’Edema — 24 minutes ago ‎ I don’t see how musical instruments can help improve manners in public. Don’t do to others what you wouldn’t like to be done to yourself. Once, a passenger next to me talked out loud on his mobile phone. I left my seat quietly, giving him some privacy to finish his conversation. He realized this and apologized to me. When his phone rang again later, he left his seat to answer it. You see, a bit of respect and cooperation can do the job better. ‎ Taodas — 19 minutes ago ‎ I did read my newspaper out loud on a train, and it turned out well. The guy took it in good part, and we chatted happily all the way to Edinbergh. ‎ Sophie 76 — 8 minutes ago ‎ I have not tried reading my newspaper out loud on a train, but, several years ago, I read some chapters from Harry Porter to my bored and noisy children. Several passengers seemed to appreciate what I did. ‎ ‎21. Who once read a newspaper out loud on a train? ‎ A. Pak50. B. Angie O’Edema. C. Taodas. D. Sophie76. ‎ ‎22. What is the discussion mainly about? ‎ A. How to react to bad behavior. ‎ B. How to kill time on a train. ‎ C. How to chat with strangers. ‎ D. How to make a phone call. ‎ ‎23. Where is the passage most probably taken from? ‎ A. A webpage. B. A newspaper. C. A novel. D. A report. ‎ B A warm drink of milk before bed has long been the best choice for those wanting a good night’s sleep. But now a study has found it really does help people nod off — if it is milked from a cow at night. ‎ Researchers have discovered that “night milk” contains more melatonin (褪黑激素), which has been proven to help people feel sleepy and reduce anxiety. ‎ The study, by researchers from Seoul, South Korea, involved mice being fed with dried milk powder made from cows milked both during the day and at night. ‎ Those given night milk, which contained 10 times the amount of melatonin, were less active and less anxious than those fed with the milk collected during daytime, according to the study published in The Journal of Medicinal Food. ‎ Night milk quickened the start of sleep and caused the mice to sleep longer. ‎ While the effect of cows milk harvested at different time has not been tested on humans up to now, taking melatonin drugs has been suggested to those who are struggling to fall asleep at night. ‎ Previous studies have also indicated that milk can be excellent for helping sleep because of the calcium content, which helps people to relax. ‎ Milk is also sugar-free and additive-free with nutritionists recommending skimmed milk as ‎ the best choice before bed as it is the least fattening. The more fat you take in before bedtime, the greater burden you will put on your body at night. ‎ ‎24. Which of the following is true of melatonin according to the text? ‎ A. It’s been tested on mice for ten times. ‎ B. It can make people more energetic. ‎ C. It exists in milk in great amount. ‎ D. It’s used in sleeping drugs. ‎ ‎25. What can be a suitable title for the text? ‎ A. Night Milk and Sleep B. Fat, Sugar and Health ‎ C. An Experiment on Mice D. Milk Drinking and Health ‎ ‎26. How does the author support the theme of the text? ‎ A. By giving examples. B. By stating arguments. ‎ C. By explaining statistical data. D. By providing research results.‎ C ‎“You can use me as a last resort(选择), and if nobody else volunteers, then I will do it.” This was an actual reply from a parent after I put out a request for volunteers for my kids’ lacrosse(长曲棍球) club. ‎ I guess that there’s probably some demanding work schedule, or social anxiety around stepping up to help for an unknown sport. She may just need a little persuading. So I try again and tug at the heartstrings. I mention the single parent with four kids running the show and I talk about the dad coaching a team that his kids aren’t even on … At this point the unwilling parent speaks up, “Alright. Yes, I’ll do it.” ‎ I’m secretly relieved because I know there’s real power in sharing volunteer responsibilities among many. The unwilling parent organizes the meal schedule, sends out emails, and collects money for end-of-season gifts. Somewhere along the way, the same parent ends up becoming an invaluable member of the team. The coach is able to focus on the kids while the other parents are relieved to be off the hook for another season. Handing out sliced oranges to bloodthirsty kids can be as exciting as watching your own kid score a goal. ‎ Still, most of us volunteers breathe a sigh of relief when the season comes to a close. That relief is coupled with a deep understanding of why the same people keep coming back for more:‎ ‎ Connecting to the community(社区) as you freely give your time, money, skills, or services provides a real joy. Volunteering just feels so good. ‎ In that sense, I’m pretty sure volunteering is more of a selfish act than I’d freely like to admit. However, if others benefit in the process, and I get some reward too, does it really matter where my motivation lies? ‎ ‎27. What can we infer about the parent from her reply in paragraph l？ ‎ A. She knows little about the club. ‎ B. She isn’t good at sports. ‎ C. She just doesn’t want to volunteer. ‎ D. She’s unable to meet her schedule. ‎ ‎28. What does the underlined phrase “tug at the heartstrings” in paragraph 2 mean? ‎ A. Encourage teamwork. B. Appeal to feelings. ‎ C. Promote good deeds. D. Provide advice. ‎ ‎29. What can we learn about the parent from paragraph 3? ‎ A. She gets interested in lacrosse. ‎ B. She is proud of her kids. ‎ C. She’ll work for another season. ‎ D. She becomes a good helper. ‎ ‎30. Why does the author like doing volunteer work? ‎ A. It gives her a sense of duty. ‎ B. It makes her very happy. ‎ C. It enables her to work hard. ‎ D. It brings her material rewards.‎ 第二节（共 5 小题；每小题 2 分，满分 10 分） ‎ 根据短文内容，从短文后的选项中选出能填入空白处的最佳选项。选项中有两项为多余选项。 ‎ Imagine a child standing on a diving board four feet high and asking himself the question: “Should I jump?” This is what motivation or the lack of it can do. Motivation and goal setting are the two sides of same coin. 31 Like the child on the diving board, you will stay undecided. ‎ ‎32 More than that, how should you stay motivated to achieve the goal? ‎ First, you need to evaluate yourself, your values, your strengths, your weaknesses, your achievements, your desires, etc. Only then should you set your goals. ‎ You also need to judge the quality and depth of your motivation. This is quite important, because it is directly related to your commitment. There are times when your heart is not in your work. 33 So, slow down and think what you really want to do at that moment. Clarity(清晰) of thoughts can help you move forward. ‎ Another way of setting realistic goals is to analyze your short and long term objectives, keeping in mind your beliefs, values and strengths. Remember that goals are flexible. 34 They also need to be measurable. You must keep these points in mind while setting your goals. ‎ Your personal circumstances are equally important. For example, you may want to be a pilot but can’t become one because your eyesight is not good enough. 35 You should reassess your goals, and motivate yourself to set a fresh goal. ‎ You will surely need to overcome some difficulties, some planned, but most unplanned. You cannot overcome them without ample motivation. Make sure that you plan for these difficulties at the time of setting your goals. ‎ A. This can affect your work. ‎ B. So how should you motivate yourself? ‎ C. However, this should not discourage you. ‎ D. So why should we try to set specific goals? ‎ E. They can change according to circumstances. ‎ F. Motivation is what you need most to do a good job. ‎ G. Without motivation, you can neither set a goal nor reach it. ‎ 第三部分 英语知识运用（共两节，满分 45 分） ‎ 第一节 完形填空（共 20 小题；每小题 1.5 分，满分 30 分） ‎ 阅读下面短文，掌握其大意，从短文后所给的四个选项（A、B、C 和 D）中，选出可以填入空白处的最佳选项，并在答题卡上将该项涂黑。 ‎ That holiday morning I didn’t have to attend school. Usually, on holidays, Mother 36 me to sleep in. And I would certainly take full advantage of it. On this particular morning, 37 , I felt like getting up early. ‎ I stood by my window overlooking the 38 , having nothing better to do. But as it turned out, I ‎ was soon to learn about something 39 in life. As I watched several people go by, get into their cars and go off, I 40 an old man on a bicycle with a bucket on its 41 and a basket of rags and bottles on its back-carriage. He 42 from one car to another, washing and cleaning them. From the water on the ground, it seemed that he had already 43 washing and cleaning about a dozen or more cars. He must have begun to work quite early in the morning. ‎ Several thoughts 44 my mind as I watched him work. He wasn’t well-dressed. He had on a pair of shorts and a(n) 45 T-shirt. The bicycle he rode was not by any means the kind modern 46 would want to be seen riding on. But he seemed 47 with life. There he was, working hard at his small business, 48 at passers-by and stopping to chat now and then 49 elderly men and women on their way to the market nearby. ‎ There was a noticeable touch of 50 in the way he seemed to be doing things 51 the windscreen (挡风玻璃), then standing back to admire it; scrubbing (擦净) the wheels and 52 , standing back to see what they look like after the scrub. ‎ It was a 53 to learn, I felt. At no age need one have to beg for a 54 if one has good health and is willing to work hard. For a while I felt 55 of myself. Young as I am — just sixteen, and there was this old man who must have been usefully engaged perhaps before the sun appeared above the horizon. ‎ ‎36. A. forces B. allows C. causes D. forbids ‎ ‎37. A. otherwise B. therefore C. however D. besides ‎ ‎38. A. parking lot B. bus stop C. school D. market ‎ ‎39. A. interesting B. surprising C. awful D. useful ‎ ‎40. A. noticed B. recognized C. called D. assisted ‎ ‎41. A. back B. handle C. wheel D. seat ‎ ‎42. A. searched B. left C. moved D. wandered ‎ ‎43. A. stopped B. started C. intended D. finished ‎ ‎44. A. crossed B. slipped C. disturbed D. inspired ‎ ‎45. A. attractive B. shiny C. simple D. expensive ‎ ‎46. A. repairmen B. businessmen C. drivers D. cyclists ‎ ‎47. A. busy B. content C. careful D. bored ‎ ‎48. A. waving B. looking C. laughing D. pointing ‎ ‎49. A. about B. for C. with D. like ‎ ‎50. A. worry B. respect C. sympathy D. pride ‎ ‎51. A. fixing B. cleaning C. replacing D. covering ‎ ‎52. A. still B. yet C. again D. soon ‎ ‎53. A. lesson B. subject C. skill D. fact ‎ ‎54. A. business B. living C. success D. right ‎ ‎55. A. tired B. doubtful C. fearful D. ashamed ‎ 第二节 完成句子（共 6 小题，20 空，每空一词；每空 0.5 分，满分 10 分） ‎ ‎1、他忽然想到那栋楼的电梯有故障。 ‎ It __________ to him that the lift in that building was __________ _______ __________. ‎ ‎2、总统宣布新的政策后，他们很失望。 ‎ They were much __________ __________ after the president announced the new policy. ‎ ‎3、我是去年在巴黎认识他的。 ‎ I ____________ ____________ ______________in Paris last year. ‎ ‎4、只有在那时我才意识到我们的力气都白费了。 ‎ Only then _________ ________ ____________ our efforts were _________ _________. ‎ ‎5、被那个奇怪的声音吸引，他挂断了电话。 ‎ ‎__________ by the strange sound, he __________ ___________. ‎ ‎6、我们需要大量的援助。 ‎ We are ___________ __________ ____________ large amounts of aid. ‎ 第三节 语法填空（共 10 小题，每小题 1 分，满分 10 分）‎ 阅读下面材料，在空白处填入适当的内容（1个单词）或括号内单词的正确形式。 ‎ Young people 1 (bear) in 1995 or later have another name in English — Generation Z. ‎ Now entering adulthood and soon to join the workforce, Generation Z grew up in a special period of time when technology developed fast and the Internet became 2 (universe). ‎ It 3 (believe) that Generation Z is the generation that is going to shape our future, 4 is why policy makers are trying 5 (they) best to understand these young people. Most people agree that the biggest difference between Generation Z and other generations is how connected they are. This is a group of people who have been familiar 6 ‎ ‎ social media as soon as they came to the world. It may be true that Generation Z-ers have a shorter attention span（持续时间） 7 a goldfish does, but since they grew up among social changes, they are more active in 8 (political). ‎ Generation Z-ers are also culture creators. 9 (grow) up with the Internet has freed this generation from traditional cultural expression. These young people never 10 (willing) let their creativity be limited by their parents or traditional rules. ‎ 第四部分 写作（共三节，满分 40 分） ‎ 第一节 短文改错（共 10 小题；每小题 1 分，满分 10 分） ‎ 假定英语课上老师要求同桌中间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 ‎ 增加：把缺词处加个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。 ‎ 删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。 ‎ 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 ‎ 注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； ‎ ‎2. 只允许修改 10 处，多者（从第 11 处起）不计分。 ‎ Dear Ben, ‎ As graduation is draw near, I’d like to express my sincere gratitude to you for your kind. ‎ In the last three years, you had shared my joys and sorrows, making my school life unforgettable. I remember very much that you sent me to hospital when I had my left leg break. During the days when I had to stay in the bed, you comforted me and helped me my lessons. It is your friendship which fills my life with sunshine. I hope my friendship will last forever and I also hope all your dreams will come truly in the future. ‎ Best wishes. ‎ Yours, ‎ Li Hua ‎ 第二节 应用文写作（满分 10 分） ‎ 假定你是校排球队队长李华。请写封邮件告知你的队友 Chris 球队近期将参加比赛，内容包括: 1. 比赛信息； 2. 赛前准备； 3. 表达期待。 ‎ 注意: 1. 词数 80 左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________ ‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________ ‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________ ‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________ ‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________ ‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________ ‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________ ‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________ ‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________ ‎ 第三节 读后续写（满分 20 分） ‎ 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。 ‎ On a bright, warm July afternoon, Mac Hollan, a primary school teacher, was cycling from his home to Alaska with his friends. One of his friends had stopped to make a bicycle repair, but they had encouraged Mac to carry on, and they would catch up with him soon. As Mac pedaled (骑行) along alone, he thought fondly of his wife and two young daughters at home. He hoped to show them this beautiful place someday. ‎ Then Mac heard quick and loud breathing behind him. “Man, that's a big dog!" he thought. But when he looked to the side, he saw instantly that it wasn’t a dog at all, but a wolf, quickly catching up with him. ‎ Mac’s heart jumped. He found out his can of bear spray(防熊喷雾剂). With one hand on the bars, he fired the spray at the wolf. A bright red cloud enveloped the animal, and to Mac's relief, it fell back, shaking its head. But a minute later, it was by his side again. Then it attacked the back of Mac's bike, tearing open his tent bag. He fired at the wolf a second time, and again, it fell back only to quickly restart the chase(追赶). ‎ Mac was pedaling hard now. He waved and yelled at passing cars but was careful not to show down. He saw a steep uphill climb before him. He knew that once he hit the hill, he’d be easily caught up and the wolf’s teeth would be tearing into his flesh. ‎ At this moment, Paul and Becky were driving their car on their way to Alaska. They didn’t think much of it when they saw two cyclists repairing their bike on the side of the road. A bit later, they spotted what they, too, assumed was a dog running alongside a man on a bike. As they got closer, they realized that the dog was a wolf. Mac heard a large vehicle behind him. He pulled in ‎ front of it as the wolf was catching up fast, just a dozen yards away now. ‎ 注意： 1. 所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右； ‎ ‎2. 至少使用 5 个短文中标有下划线的关键词语！！！ ‎ ‎3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好； ‎ ‎4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语！！！ ‎ Paragraph 1: ‎ The car abruptly stopped in front of him. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ‎ Paragraph 2: ‎ A few minutes later, the two other cyclists arrived. __________________________________‎ ‎______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎【参考答案】‎ 第一部分 听力（30 分，每小题 1.5 分） ‎ ‎1-5 CABCB 6-10 ABACA 11-15 BACAB ‎ ‎16-20 CBBCA ‎ 第二部分 阅读理解（30 分，每小题 2 分） ‎ 第一节 ‎ A 篇：21-23 CAA B 篇：24-26 DAD C 篇：27-30 CBDB ‎ 第二节 ‎ ‎31-35 GBAEC ‎ 第三部分 语言知识运用（共三节，满分 50 分） ‎ 第一节 完形填空（30 分，每小题 1.5 分） ‎ ‎36-40 BCADA 41-45 BCDAC ‎ ‎46-50 DBACD 51-55 BCABD ‎ 第二节 完成句子（共 7 小题，20 空；每空 0.5 分，满分 10 分） ‎ ‎1. occurred; out of order 2. cast down 3. made his acquaintance 4. did I realize; in vain 5. Attracted; rang off/ hung up 6. in need of ‎ 第三节 语法填空（每空一词；每空 1 分，满分 10 分） ‎ ‎1.born 2. universal 3. is believed 4. which 5. their 6. with 7. than 8. politics 9. Growing 10. willingly ‎ 第四部分 写作（共三节，满分 40 分） ‎ 第一节 短文改错（共 10 小题；每小题 1 分，满分 10 分） ‎ Dear Ben, ‎ As graduation is draw near, I’d like to express my sincere gratitude to you for your kind. ‎ ‎ drawing kindness In the last three years, you had shared my joys and sorrows, making my school life ‎ ‎ have unforgettable. I remember very much that you sent me to hospital when I had my left leg ‎ ‎ well ‎ break. During the days when I had to stay in the bed, you comforted me and helped me∧my ‎ broken with ‎ lessons. It is your friendship which fills my life with sunshine. I hope my ‎ ‎ that our friendship will last forever and I also hope all your dreams will come truly in the future. ‎ ‎ true ‎ Best wishes. ‎ Yours, ‎ Li Hua ‎ 第二节 书面表达（满分 10 分） ‎ One possible version: ‎ Dear Chris, ‎ I’m writing to let you know that we will have a volleyball match next month. The match will take place in our school gym on the afternoon of July 4th. We will play against the team from HongXing High School. In order to win the match, we should get fully prepared and practice hard. So from tomorrow, we need to train for two hours after school ‎ every day. Please come to the school gym at 6:30 pm from Monday to Friday. ‎ You’re an excellent player. With you on the team, we are confident that we can win the game. Let’s try hard together! ‎ Yours, ‎ Li Hua ‎ 第三节 读后续写（满分 20 分） ‎ 范文一 The car abruptly stopped in front of him. A woman hurriedly opened the door and stretched out her hand, shouting, “Get in!” Mac grabbed her hand without hesitation, leaving his bicycle lying on the road and jumped into the car. The moment he shut the door, he caught a glimpse of (瞥见) the fierce eyes and hungry look of the wolf by the door. A cold feeling crept(爬行；蔓延) over his heart and made him shiver(寒颤；哆嗦). However, the car had left the wolf far behind, which made him sigh with relief. Mac thanked Paul and Becky and afterwards they pulled over by the road to wait for Mac’s friends. ‎ A few minutes later, the two other cyclists arrived. As soon as they met, his friends’ worried ‎ look faded away. “Where have you been? We saw your bicycle on the road. ”His friends asked and these words like a penetrate of sunshine warmed his heart. After Mac explained to them, they said farewell(辞别) to Paul and Becky in sincerely indebtedness(债务；受恩惠). On the way home, night breeze(微风) made him at ease and he couldn’t wait to share his experience with his wife and children and show the kindness of the world. ‎ ‎〖点评〗 ‎ 这篇文章语言上最大的特色是无灵主语的使用，即用无生命特征的名词做句子的主语。整篇 11 个句子，其中无灵主语就有 5 句，占了 42%。（1）A cold feeling crept over his heart and made him shiver.（2）However, the car had left the wolf far behind, which made him sigh with relief.（3）As soon as they met, his friends’ worried look faded away.（4）these words like a penetrate of sunshine warmed his heart.（5）On the way home, night breeze made him at ease.这样，同样含义的句子就由平淡变得生动有力了。如：Feeling indeed had smothered(使窒息；抑制) her judgment that day.（选自英国著名作家 Thomas Hardy 的小说 Tess of the D’Urbervilles）‎ 语言上的第二大特色就是这篇文章词汇的使用，如 indebtedness 等于 gratitude 感激，pull over表达路边停车，这些都体现了较为深厚的语言功底。 ‎ 但是，文章还是有些瑕疵。Mac grabbed her hand without hesitation，leaving his bicycle lying on the road and jumped into the car.这一句中应将 leaving 改为 left，使其与前面的 grabbed 及后面的jumped 成为连贯动作，也可把 jumped 改为 jumping 同 leaving 平行成为 grabbed 的伴随状语； His friend asked and these words like a penetrate of sunshine warmed his heart.此句中的 penetrate 是个动词被错误地当做名词使用，可以改为 His friend asked and these words like a ray of sunshine warmed his heart；After Mac explained to them, they said farewell to Paul and Becky in sincerely indebtedness.此句中的 sincerely 应该改为形容词修饰名词 indebtedness。 ‎ 范文二 The car abruptly stopped in front of him. Mac’s heart jumped wildly, and he dashed towards the car without the slightest hesitation for he knew it was his only chance. It was a real race against time to make it! Thank god, Mac successfully made the door open and that fierce wolf was just around the corner. The instant Mac settled him on the seat, Paul started the car in a flash. The wolf had to give up and find another goal. What a narrow escape! Mac collapsed(倒塌；倒下) into ‎ the seat and smiled bitterly(苦地). The other two guys decided to stop at the gas station to have a rest. ‎ A few minutes later, the two other cyclists arrived. Seeing his friends, Mac felt a great weight taken off his mind. His friends were amazed at Mac’s experience, for it was a miracle to escape from a hungry wolf! Mac thanked Paul and Becky again and again, but his appreciation was beyond words. He said sincerely: “You can’t imagine how grateful I was, for I have been given a second life!” Tears gathered up in Mac’s eyes when he waved them goodbye. It was obviously an unforgettable experience, and Mac would have a lot to share with his family after he got home. It was his courage and other people’s kindness that saved him. ‎ ‎〖点评〗 ‎ 从语言角度出发，这篇文章特征明显。首先是语言地道，表现在三处 for 的使用，（1）for he knew it was his only chance.（2）for it was a miracle to escape from a hungry wolf!（3） for I have been given a second life!句子中使用 for 更加符合英语的思维习惯，尽管前后是并列关系，但是前面提 供了主要的信息，然后进行补充说明。如：因为李越出色的表现，校长授予他“本周学生之星”荣誉称号。在这句话中，汉语的思维是先说原因，而英语的翻译则是先说结果：The president awarded Li Yue the title of “Star Student of the Week” for what she did for our class. 原因和结果的位置是有很大差异的。再者，此文章比较娴熟地使用了写作的各种技巧，如强调句的使用 It was his courage and other people’s kindness that saved him. 感叹句的使用：（1）You can’t imagine how grateful I was，（2） What a narrow escape! 等等。 ‎ 但是，这篇文章也存在一些不足。The instant Mac settled him on the seat, Paul started the car in a flash.此句中的 him 应该改为 himself。第一段尾句 The other two guys decided to stop at the gas station to have a rest.这句话与上下文脱节，起不到承上启下的作用，出现了情节逻辑的问题。 ‎ 总的说来，该文章比较好地完成了读后续写的任务，既读懂了原文，又有比较好的语言功底将故事续写下去。 ‎ 范文三 The car abruptly stopped in front of him. Seeing Paul wave at him kindly and open the car door for him, Mac immediately jumped out of his bicycle and rushed into the car. No sooner than the poor man had got in did Paul close the door. The wolf walked around the car and howled furiously(激烈的；狂怒的) at them, but just in vain. Realizing it couldn’t catch Mac any more, the ‎ wolf ultimately(最终) gave up and walked away gloomily(沮丧地). Watching the wolf was swallowed by the road, Mac, bathed in perspiration(汗水), sighed with relief and sank down to the back seat. Paul handed him a bottle of water and he managed a weak smile, murmuring(低声说；咕哝) something like “Thank you very much”.‎ A few minutes later, the other two cyclists arrived. Knowing that Mac had been chased by a wolf, they were stumped(被…难住) for words and paralyzed with fear. Fortunately, at that moment appeared Paul who lent a helping hand to Mac. The two friends extended(表达) their earnest(诚挚的) gratitude to Paul for rescuing Mac and then took Mac back home. After such a terrible experience, the splendid landscape of Alaska seemed no longer to be a temptation(诱惑) to them. On the way back home, feeling the light breeze through his hair, Mac felt what happened just now was like a bad dream, but a warm glow(微弱而稳定的光) flooded in as he thought of Paul’s unselfish help. The most precious part of humans is their care for each other. ‎ ‎〖点评〗 ‎ 这是一篇非常优秀的文章。特别靓丽的地方就是 doing 的使用，具体有：（1）Seeing Paul wave at him kindly and open the car door for him，Mac immediately jumped out of his bicycle and rushed into the car.（2）Realizing it couldn’t catch Mac any more, the wolf ultimately gave up and walked away gloomily.（3）Watching the wolf was swallowed by the road, Mac, bathed in perspiration, sighed with relief and sank down to the back seat.（4）Paul handed him a bottle of water and he managed a weak smile, murmuring something like “ Thank you very much”.（5）Knowing that Mac had been chased by a wolf, they were stumped for words and paralyzed with fear.（6）On the way back home, feeling the light breeze through his hair, Mac felt what happened just now was like a bad dream, but a warm glow flooded in as he thought of Paul’s unselfish help. The most precious part of humans is their care for each other.共占了 12 句话中的 50%，却不让人感到单调，非谓语动词的使用可以比较地道地表现语言的美。 ‎ 其次，文章大量使用了高级词汇，howled furiously at them, ultimately, gloomily, perspiration, splendid landscape, murmuring, stumped, extended their earnest gratitude 等等，特别是不同场合不同动作的动词的适当使用。 ‎ 语言描写贴切地表达了情节发展的逻辑，采用动作描写大大重于对话描写，读来有很强的身 临其境的感觉。 ‎ 美中不足的是考生在试图使用高级表达的时候出现了些瑕疵，如 No sooner than the ‎ poor man had got in did Paul close the door. 这句话在结构上是错误的，必须改为 No sooner had the poor man got in than Paul closed the door. 另外，Mac immediately jumped out of his bicycle and rushed into the car.此句中的 out of 必须改为 off。 ‎