【英语】2019届二轮复习书面表达建议信(一)写作指导例析（3页word版）

【英语】2019届二轮复习书面表达建议信(一)写作指导例析（3页word版）

‎2019届二轮复习书面表达建议信(一)写作指导例析 假设你是李华，最近你校根据学生的爱好和兴趣，开展了许多课外活动。请你用英语给校报写一封建议信，内容应包括：‎ ‎1．列举你们学校开展的三项课外活动；‎ ‎2．介绍你感兴趣的活动，说明原因及这些活动带给你的益处；‎ ‎3．请你就如何选择课外活动提出两条建议。‎ 注意：1.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；‎ ‎2．词数100左右，信的格式已给出，不计入总词数；‎ ‎3．文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。‎ Dear editor，‎ ‎　 ‎ ‎　 ‎ ‎　 ‎ ‎　 ‎ Yours，‎ Li Hua ‎[四步写作]‎ 一、定人称、定时态，审题快而不偏 人称以第一人称为主，主要时态用一般现在时 二、列提纲、准写词，要点全而不漏 ‎1．学校开展的课外活动 ‎①课外活动 afterclass_activities ‎②例如 such_as ‎2．你感兴趣的活动，说明原因及这些活动带给你的益处 ‎①对……感兴趣 be_interested_in ‎②提高英语口语 improve_one’s_spoken_English ‎③吸引某人 appeal_to_sb.‎ ‎3．给别的同学提建议 ‎①最好做某事 had_better_do_sth.‎ ‎②充分利用 make_the_best_of 三、由词汇、组成句，表达亮而不俗 ‎1．如今，课外活动在高中正变得越来越受欢迎。‎ Nowadays, afterclass activities are becoming increasingly popular in senior high school.‎ ‎2．我们学校有各种各样的课外活动，如英语角、阳光电台、快乐阅读俱乐部等。‎ We have many kinds of afterclass activities in our school, such as the English Corner, Sunshine Radio Station, Happy Reading Club and so on.‎ ‎3．我对英语角感兴趣，因为它不仅可以帮助我交一些新朋友，也可以提高我的英语口语。‎ I’m interested in the English Corner, because it can not only help me make some new friends but also improve my spoken English.‎ ‎4．如果你想参加课外活动，我有一些建议。‎ If you want to take part in afterclass activities, I have some suggestions.‎ 四、衔接词、巧串联，佳作顺而不乱 用in addition, first, second等衔接词串句成文 Dear editor，‎ Nowadays, afterclass activities are becoming increasingly popular in senior high school.We also have many kinds of afterclass activities in our school, such as the English Corner, Sunshine Radio Station, Happy Reading Club and so on.‎ I’m interested in the English Corner, because it can not only help me make some new friends but also improve my spoken English.In addition, the Sunshine Radio also appeals to me a lot.There I can have an unforgettable experience and I hope my dream of being a host may come true one day. These afterclass activities make me feel more confident.‎ If you want to take part in afterclass activities, I have some ‎ suggestions. First, you had better choose the activity which you like best. Second, try to make the best of your interest.‎ Yours，‎ Li Hua ‎[写改两用]‎ 这是根据本题目学生完成的一篇习作，文中有10处错误，请改正。‎ Dear editor，‎ To make our life rich and colour, our school organizes many afterclass activity such as playing basketball, playing football, dancing and so on.‎ I participate actively in playing basketball, that is my favourite. I benefit a great deal of it, because it not only builds up my body but also helps me make many friends who has the same interest. Besides, comparing with those who spend more time on our studies and little time in taking part in activities, I perform much better in class.‎ As for choice of afterclass activities, this is your interest that matters. Furthermore, to make good use of your interest.‎ Yours，‎ Li Hua 答案：第一句：colour→colourful; activity→activities 第二句：that→which 第三句：of→from; has→have 第四句：comparing→compared; our→their 第五句：for后加the; this→it 第六句：去掉to