2020届二轮复习书面表达专题概要写作精讲（二）课件（11张）

2020届二轮复习书面表达专题概要写作精讲（二）课件（11张）

概要写作精讲 2 2020 届二轮复习 书面表达专题 主要内容 确定文章关键信息的几点策略 具体案例讲解 Topic of the article Part1 Part 2 Part 3 Part4 TS 1 KD 1, 2 … KD 1, 2 … KD 1, 2 … KD 1, 2 … Mi 1, … 如何确定文章的关键信息 TS 2 TS 3 TS 4 Mi 1, … Mi 1, … Mi 1, … How to locate the main ideas and important details? Mind Map ( overall / big picture of a text, the structure of the text) Group words (words or phrases frequently appearing) Signal words (first ， last ， but, however, for example, besides, therefore, 　　　　 in conclusion ， on the contrary, meanwhile, on the one hand, 　　　　 on the other hand, some…others…, consequently, …) 确定文章的关键信息几个策略 Relationship between sentences Mind Map (structure of a text) M4U2: Chemical or Organic Farming Para.1 ： introduction Para.2: problems Para.3: solution Para.4: other solutions problems caused by chemicals (damage the health of people and soil) organic farming (definition, benefits) other methods to keep soil fertile chemical fertilizers (welcomed but harmful) Mind Map (structure of a text ） M3U4: Communication : No Problem? Para.1 background Para.2&3 problem-noticing Para.4 problem-analyzing Para.5 problem-solving Meet international students at the airport (watching them) Some major misunderstandings of their greeting body language Not all cultures greet the same way (examples) １ .not good or bad 2. studying international customs Like any other facility, keeping a school open requires a great deal of money. Keeping school open in the middle of summer requires air conditioning, and that adds significantly to the school's expenses. Besides, teachers must be paid for all the weeks they are working. For example, a high school in Arizona had a cost increase of $157,ooo when they switched to year-round schooling. Some schools may not be able to handle such increases, and other schools that can handle these expenses could be doing better things with the money. Group words can indicate the main idea . Gene technology can help people to give birth to more healthy and clever children. Some families have genetic diseases. This means their children will for sure have the family disease, which is a great trouble for these families. In the past, doctors could do nothing about genetic diseases. But gene technology can solve this problem perfectly. Scientists just need to find the wrong gene and correct it, and a healthy child will be born. Group words can indicate key supporting information. As is known to all, sports stars earn large amounts of money every year. LeBron James, the famous American basketball star, for instance, earns an income of more than 20 million dollars a year. Some people hold the view that these stars do not deserve the high pay that they are getting. Some even argue that sports stars do nothing to society apart from entertaining people. Their contribution to society are much less than those made by doctors, firemen, scientists, professors, etc. But I can never agree with that. Signal words may help to locate main idea. but, however 等后面的信息一般是段落的重要信息 举例后的信息一般属于次要信息 Actually, vacation happiness is based on the following top rules. First, choose your travel companions wisely, because nothing contributes more significantly to a trip than the right companions. Second, don't spend your vacation time in a place where everything is too expensive so as to maintain a positive mood. Third, shop wisely, for meaningful experiences provide more long-term happiness than physical possessions. Signal words may help to locate key details. 3 个 Rules 要作为重要细节写到概要中 The biggest factor in short-sightedness is a lack of time spent outdoors. Exposure to daylight helps the retina (视网膜) to release a chemical that slows down an increase in the eye ' s axial length, which is what most often causes myopia (近视). A combination of not being outdoors and doing lots of work focusing up close (like writing characters or reading) worsens the problem. But if a child has enough time in the open, they can study all they like and their eyesight should not suffer, says Ian Morgan of Australian National University. Topic sentence explanation further information further explanation √ √ × × Relationship between sentences in a paragraph