【英语】2020届二轮复习书面表达分类写作指导学案之十六：日记

【英语】2020届二轮复习书面表达分类写作指导学案之十六：日记

‎2020届二轮复习书面表达分类写作指导学案之十六：日记 模板一 ‎(月、日、年、星期、天气)‎ ‎　　(标题)‎ ‎　　Today/Yesterday, I/we .(事件)‎ ‎　　In the morning, we ______________; then ______________; after that______________ . By the time we had a good time. Finally . I’ll never forget the memorable day! ______________________________________ (事件经过)‎ ‎　　From this activity, I have learned that/I think . ______________ (事件意义和自己的感想)‎ 模板二 Date Day of the week ‎ ‎ Today is ______________. This afternoon I went to ______________. Then I______________. Sitting on the train, I thought ______________. At the next station, ______________. She looked ______________. I hesitated ______________. The old lady ______________. Seeing her smile, I _______________. I will ______________. ‎ 日记是用来记录一天中所发生的有意义的、值得记录的事件。在日记中，人们会对事件发表议论，阐述一下自己的态度或体会。日记中所 记录的事情可以是自己的直接经历也可以是描述他人的事情。日记的种类有很多种，从体裁角度，可以分为记事型日记和议论型日记。记事型日记是以某种顺序描述某一件事情发生发展的过程。而议论型日记是针对当天的某一事件或某一现象表明自己的看法或态度。‎ ‎ 日记的篇章结构可以从以下几个角度入手：首先要对所发生的事件或现象进行描述。按照事件发展的先后顺序进行，适当添加对天气或景物或心情的描述。其次要发表感想或议论，针对事件进行感悟或议论性的描述，以使文章有所立意。最后要对未来提出展望或推测，或表示决心、态度、观点、意图、希冀等。‎ 写好英文日记要注意以下几点：‎ ‎1. 日记的格式 ‎ 英文日记通常由书端和正文两个部分组成。日记常以第一人称记下当天生活中的所见、所闻、所做或所想的事情。中、英文的日记三格式大致一样。英语日记的书端是专门写日记的日期、星期和天气的。左上角是日期(年、月、日)、星期。右上角写上当天的天气情况，如：Sunny，Fine，Rainy，Windy，Snowy，Cloudy等。 ‎ ‎（1）日期表达有多种形式。年、月、日都写时，通常以月、日、年为顺序，月份可以缩写，日和年用逗号隔开。例如： ‎ ‎ A)September 1，2017或September 1st，2017也可省略写成Sept. 1，2017或Sept. 1st，2017;the 1st of September in 2004(月份不可以缩写) ‎ ‎ B)只有月、日：September 1或September 1st(月份可以缩写) ‎ ‎ C)只有年、月：September 2004或the September of 2004(月份不可以缩写) ‎ ‎ 以上的1或1st都应读作the first. ‎ ‎（2）星期也可以省略不写，可将其放在日期前或后，星期和日期之间不用标点，但要空一格，星期也可缩写。如： ‎ ‎ Saturday，October 22nd，2004;October 22nd，2004 Saturday ‎ ‎（3）天气情况必不可少。天气一般用一个形容词如：Sunny，Fine，Rainy，Snowy 等表示。写在日期之后，用逗号隔开，位于日记的右上角。如： ‎ ‎ Saturday，March 4，2017，Windy;1st January，2017，Fine ‎2. 日记的时态：由于日记是对当天所发生事情的回顾，故常用一般过去时。在发表议论或感想时，也可使用现在完成时或一般将来时。‎ ‎3. 日记的人称：因为日记是记载自己的亲身经历，故应用第一人称，语言尽量口语化，按照事情发生的先后顺序，清楚、准确、连贯地把事情表达出来。‎ ‎ 经典试题训练 Writing1‎ 假定你是李华，昨天你参加了你校举办的以"我最喜欢的一本书"为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你写一篇英语日记，要点如下：‎ ‎1.描述当时比赛的情况；‎ ‎2.你的表现和感受。‎ 注意：‎ ‎1.词数120左右(开头已经给出，但不计入总词数)；‎ ‎2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ Friday 2nd May 2014 Fine Yesterday afternoon I attended the English speech contest held by my school. The topic of it is "The book I like best".‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎【范文】‎ Friday 2nd May 2014 Fine Yesterday afternoon I attended the English speech contest held by my school. The topic of it is "The book I like best". ‎ When I knew that the first five candidates performed very well, I felt a little worried. At the thought of the words "I can do it", I became calm a ‎ lot. Soon it was my turn, when I said "The book I like best is Three Days to See written by Helen Keller. From the book, I realize that it would be an excellent rule to live happily each day as if we should die tomorrow." my teachers and classmates cheered for me. I gained much confidence and went on to do my best. Finally I won first prize.‎ Be happy every day and try my best to do everything. I’ll keep it in my mind and make it come true.‎ ‎ ‎ Writing2‎ 请以日记的形式，写一件2017年你最想为社会做的事情。内容必须包括：‎ ‎1）做什么？ 2）怎么做？ 3）为什么要做？‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎ ‎ Writing3‎ 作为一名高一新生，你在学习和生活中都遇到一些困难，为此你有时会感到很沮丧。请你以日记的形式写下遇到的烦恼以及克服困难的方法，同时也表达你对未来的学习生活的信心。写作要点：‎ ‎1．学习或生活中遇到的困难；‎ ‎2．如何解决；‎ ‎3．对未来充满信心。‎ 注意：‎ ‎1.词数100左右；‎ ‎2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ ‎___________________________________________________________‎ ‎_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎【范文】‎ September 22nd Thursday Cloudy It has been almost two months since I came to this school. I can well remember when I knew I would study in this amazing high school, how excited I was. But now sometimes I feel a little upset, because I meet with some difficulties in my life and study as well. As a fresh student in senior 1, this is the first time that I have left my parents to live in a boarding school， so sometimes I feel homesick and unhappy. Besides, ‎ as there are so many excellent students around me, I feel extremely stressed.‎ However, I know it’s no use feeling sad and worried, so I decide to do something to change the situation. First of all, in order to make good use of my time, I should make a schedule. Only in this way can I study all the subjects efficiently. In addition, I should be active in making new friends and getting along well with my classmates and roommates, which will free me from loneliness and homesickness.‎ Writing4‎ 今天是七月八日，下午班级召开了以“我的梦想”为主题的班会活动，每位同学都畅所欲言，特别是介绍了自己的职业方面的梦想。请写一篇日记，记述班会情况及自己的感受。‎ 内容要点：‎ ‎1. 谈谈自己职业方面的梦想；‎ ‎2. 介绍有这个梦想的原因；‎ ‎3. 阐述如何实现自己的梦想。‎ 注意：‎ ‎1. 词数100左右；‎ ‎2. 文章开头已经给出，不计入总词数。‎ July 8th Sunny All the students talked about their own dreamed jobs in the future in ‎ this class-meeting.‎ ‎_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎【范文】‎ July 8th Sunny All the students talked about their own dreamed jobs in the future in this class-meeting. We all believe that our dreams will come true sooner or later.‎ I also talked about my own dream: to be a doctor. And the reasons are as follows. When I was in Grade Seven, I was sick and often went to see doctors. The doctors were very friendly and they often cheered me up. With the help of them, I was getting better. Now I’m very healthy. Since ‎ then I have hoped to become a doctor. How will I make my dream come true? I will study hard to get good grades. I’ll read more books about medicine. I believe I’ll be a good doctor in the future.‎ Anyhow, this class-meeting was indeed meaningful, meanwhile, I know that the dream I have calls for my efforts. Helpfully, I can make it.‎ Writing5‎ 假设你是红星中学高二(1)班的学生李华。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，用英语写一篇日记，描述周日你在西山公园踏青过程中发生的事。‎ 注意：词数100左右。‎ Sunday, May 4 Fine ‎______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎