2021高考英语一轮复习第三部分写作导练第4讲博人眼球的定语从句课件外研版

2021高考英语一轮复习第三部分写作导练第4讲博人眼球的定语从句课件外研版

第4讲　博人眼球的定语从句 魔法导航 　　在英语写作中使用复杂的句式是提高表达档次、增加语言亮点的主要 途径之一,而定语从句就是复杂结构中的重要一项。因此,在写作中巧妙地运 用定语从句可为我们的文章“增光添彩”。书面表达中定语从句的常用形 式如下: 1.使用关系代词that、which、who、whom、whose或as引导的定语从句 典句引领 It is those who have brought happiness to the people that will feel the happiness themselves. 只有那些给别人带来幸福的人,他们自己才感到幸福。 雕词琢句 (1)用定语从句将下列句子整合为主从复合句 ①You are particularly welcome to show up on stage and it will definitely add color and fun to our festival.(2019课标全国Ⅲ) → 　You are particularly welcome to show up on stage, which will definitely add color and fun to our festival.     ②For instance, never speak with your mouth full of food;it may be similar to your own custom. → 　For instance, never speak with your mouth full of food, which may be simi-lar to your own custom.     ③Team members are often offered opportunities to watch table tennis competi- tions. It will benefit them a lot. → 　Team members are often offered opportunities to watch table tennis compe- titions, which will benefit them a lot.     ④Material collecting took us a whole week. During it we interviewed our teach- ers and took pictures of every aspect of our school life. → 　Material collecting took us a whole week, during which we interviewed our teachers and took pictures of every aspect of our school life.     ⑤I am grateful to Mr. White. Without his help I couldn't have made so much progress in my English study. → 　I am grateful to Mr. White, without whose help I couldn't have made so much progress in my English study.     (2)用定语从句完成或翻译下列句子 ①I am Li Hua, a student from China 　who is studying in London     (正在伦敦 学习) this summer vacation. (2019课标全国Ⅰ) ② 　As is known to all/As we all know     (众所周知), music can influence our emotions, thoughts and behavior.(2019天津) ③I am writing to apply to be a volunteer for the Chinese Painting Exhibition     which will be held in your art gallery     (它将在你们的艺术馆举行).(2019课标 全国Ⅰ) ④I would like to interview Zhang Haidi, 　whose experience has inspired me deeply     (她的经历深深地鼓舞了我). ⑤This summer I intend to take up a part-time job in a foreign company,     through which I would like to broaden my horizons     (借助它我想开阔我的视 野)and gain some working experience. ⑥我建议你游览泰山,它的风光令人惊奇。 　I recommend you to visit Mount Tai whose sights are amazing.     ⑦任何感兴趣的学生都欢迎参加。 　Any student who is interested is welcome to participate.     ⑧我非常珍惜你给我提供的那个和英国学生交流的机会。 　I cherish the opportunity very much that you offered me to communicate with British students.     ⑨去年我参加了在北京举行的夏令营,这不仅开阔了我的视野,也提高了我的 英语口语水平。 Last year, I joined the summer camp held in Beijing, which not only broadened my horizons but also improved my oral English.     2.使用关系副词where、why和when引导的定语从句 典句引领 The picture shows us a touching moment when a little girl comes to greet her mom. 这张图片向我们展示了一个感人的时刻,一个小女孩过来迎接她的妈妈。 雕词琢句 (1)After that, you can go to Shanghai, 　where you can stay for a week     (在那 儿你可以待一周).(2019北京) (2)今天早上我及时向老师说明了我缺课的原因。 　I explained to my teacher the reason in time why I was absent from class this morning.     学以致用 1.完美文章 结合括号中的提示,用定语从句完成下面的文章。 Hi! Tom, Nice to read your e-mail today.I notice you've begun to use Chinese idioms and used most of them correctly. However,I'm afraid there is (1) 　one mistake (that/which)I'd like to point out     (我想指出来的一个错误).It is the idiom “无所不为”, (2) 　which means “do all kinds of bad things”     (它的意思是“做各种各样的坏事”). Are you doing all kinds of bad things at home? I guess (3) 　the idea that you were really trying to say     (你真正试图表达的想法)is that you ’ ve got nothing to do these days.In that case,you should use “无所事事”.We usually use “无所不为” to express the idea that people dare to do anything bad,and “无所事事” to de- scribe (4) 　the situation where/in which people have got nothing meaningful to do     (人们没有有意义的事情可做的情形).Have I made myself clear? Anyway,I'm amazed at (5) 　the progress (that/which)you've made     (你已经取 得的进步). Hope you'll find a job soon. Yours, Li Hua 2.话题写作 【本期话题】　学校生活 【美句必备】　1.There are various out-of-class activities in our school, of which playing football is my favorite. 我们学校有各种各样的课外活动,其中踢 足球是我的最爱。 2.Students had better participate in some after-class activities, where they can not only promote understanding, but also improve their ability to get along with oth- ers. 学生最好参与一些课外活动 , 在这些活动中 , 他们不仅可以增进理解 , 而且 还能提高他们与他人相处的能力。 【 写作微练 】 　根据下面的汉语提示 , 写一篇英语短文。 1.众所周知,课外活动对学生的健康成长非常重要。 2.我们学校的课外活动丰富多彩,我最喜欢踢足球。 3.它不仅锻炼了我的身体,而且塑造了我的性格。 4.此外,我还结交了很多兴趣相同的朋友。 5.我认为,学生应该积极参加他们喜欢的课外活动。 注意:至少运用三个定语从句。          答案     One possible version: As we all know , out-of-class activities are of great importance to the healthy growth of the students. There are various out-of-class activities in our school, and playing football is my favorite, which has not only built up my body but also shaped my character . In addition, I have made some friends who have the same interest as me . All in all, I think students should take an active part in out-of- class activities that they like .