上海高考英语作文解析

上海高考英语作文解析

‎2018年01月25日试用3的高中英语组卷 ‎　‎ 一．书面表达（共20小题）‎ ‎1．假设你是中华中学学生姚平，最近参加了一项研究性学习调研，课题为"父母是否以子女为荣"．通过调研你校学生及其父母，结果发现双方对此问题的看法有差异（数据如图所示）．根据图表写一份报告，在报告中，你必须：‎ ‎1．描述调研数据；‎ ‎2．分析可能导致这一结果的原因 ‎2．学校即将举办"读书节"，目前正广泛征集"读书节"宣传册图片．假设你是该校学生潘阳，你已找到以下三幅图片，决定给读书节组委会写一封信，推荐其中一幅，你的信须包括以下内容：‎ ‎1．简单描述你想推荐的那幅图片；‎ ‎2．阐述你用这幅图片宣传"读书节"的理由．‎ ‎3．学校英语报正在酝酿改版，拟从现有的三个栏目（健康、娱乐、文化）中去除一个，并从三个备选栏目（时尚、职业规划、读者反馈）中挑选一个纳入该报．假设你是该校学生程飞，给校报编辑写一封电子邮件，表达你的观点．邮件须包括以下内容：‎ ‎1．你建议去除的栏目及去除的理由；‎ ‎2．你建议增加的栏目及增加的理由．‎ ‎4．请描述如图所示的图片，并谈谈你的感受．‎ ‎5．Directions：Write an English composition in 120﹣150words according to the instructions given below in Chinese．‎ 描写一件你珍藏的物品．文章要具体说明何时、何地、怎样得到这件物品以及为什么珍藏到现在．‎ ‎6．你叫Jenny，你的网友Peter（高一学生）即将面临期末考试，近日，他就是否要请家教来帮他复习迎考向你求教，请给Peter回复一封电子邮件，邮件必须包括以下内容：‎ 结合你自身的学习经历就是否请家教表达你的观点及理由；‎ 就复习迎考给出2条主要建议．‎ ‎　 　．‎ ‎7．以下是三座城市在就业、娱乐、环境方面的满意度．假如你的家庭打算移居到其中的某座城市，请从你和家庭的情况考虑选择一座比较满意的城市，并简要谈谈选择这座城市的理由．‎ 提示：不必对图表中的数据做详细描写． ‎ ‎8．你班将召开一次主题班会，探讨高中生在成长过程中遇到的烦恼．请根据自己实际生活中遇到的学习、交友、代沟、同龄人攀比等现象进行思考，写一篇发言稿．文章需包括：‎ ‎1．你在实际生活中遇到的至少两种烦恼及其简要介绍；‎ ‎2．你应对这些烦恼所采取的举措和建议．‎ ‎　 　．‎ ‎9．Directions：Write an English composition in 120﹣150words according to the instructions given below in Chinese．‎ 假设你班班长打算在寒假组织一次班级活动，有三种方案：‎ 一、慈善义卖帮助家庭有困难的同学；‎ 二、聘请英语专家介绍有效的学习方法；‎ 三、组织一次班级新年派对．作为班级的一员，请你根据你的实际情况，在三项方案中选择其一，提出对该项活动的建议并谈谈理由．你的写作中必须包括：‎ 在三项方案中选择其一；‎ 对该方案提出建议；‎ 谈谈你提出建议的理由．‎ ‎　 　．‎ ‎10．假如你是某中学高三（1）班的学生李明，写一封信给学校图书馆负责老师，因为你校图书馆将选择招募课余学生图书管理员．信必须包括以下内容：‎ ‎•简要介绍个人特长 ‎•表达希望成为课余学生图书管理员的愿望 ‎•谈谈你作为课余学生图书管理员，对学校图书馆管理提出一些建议 注意：文中请勿提及真实学校 Dear Sir/Madam．‎ ‎11．Directions：Writing an English composition in 120﹣150words according to the instructions given below in Chinese．‎ 请根据下面的图片，结合你个人的经历，谈谈你的想法．‎ ‎12．某英文网站正举办征文活动，题目是The Most Useful Skill I Have Ever Learned，请以此写一篇征文．你的文章比须包括：‎ ‎•这项技能是什么？你是通过什么方式学会的？‎ ‎•举例说明为什么你觉得它最有用．‎ ‎（注：文中不得出现真实的姓名及学校名称）‎ ‎　 　．‎ ‎13．假设你是李华，学校有四个社团正招募新人（如图所示），你希望加入其中一个．请你写一篇日记，谈谈你的想法．内容必须包括：‎ ‎•你希望加入的社团 ‎•选择该社团的原因 ‎•你可以为该社团做些什么 注意：请勿透露本人真实姓名和学校名称．‎ ‎14．如图反映了一种常见的现象：拖延症（procrastination）．请写一篇作文，内容包括：‎ ‎1．给procrastination下定义；‎ ‎2．用生活中的例子谈谈你对此现象的看法．‎ ‎15．最近，网络上针对学习有两种不同的观点，一种是"兴趣是最好的老师"，另一种是"兴趣不是最好的老师"．请你结合自己的体会，选择你支持的观点，表达自己的看法，并阐述理由．‎ 注意：作文中不得出现你本人的姓名、班级及学校等真实信息．‎ ‎16．现有一个中学生志愿者服务的网络平台，这是该平台上显示学生参与活动的流程图：‎ 请你据此写一篇短文，你的文章必须包括：‎ ‎•简要介绍参与活动的流程．‎ ‎•谈谈你对通过网络平台参与志愿者服务活动的看法．‎ ‎　 　．‎ ‎17．学生会正在评选新一届学生会主席，假设你是该校的学生李青，有意参加竞选．写一份自荐材料，材料必须包括以下内容：‎ 简述个人信息及你所具备的竞选条件（能力、性格、爱好等）．‎ 如果当选，请你用具体事例阐述你将会为本校学生做些什么？‎ 注意：自荐材料中不得使用你所在学校和你的真实名字．‎ ‎18．Directions：Write an English composition in 120﹣150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese．‎ 下面两幅图反映的是部分城乡孩子所面临的窘境．请就此图谈谈你的想法，你的文章应包括：‎ ‎●具体描述两幅图；‎ ‎●简要分析造成这两种现象的原因；‎ ‎●提出解决问题的建议．‎ ‎（注：请勿出现真实姓名和学校）‎ ‎19．Directions：Write an English composition in 120﹣150words according to the instructions．‎ 你是李华，为解决你所在的学校公益社团（public welfare society）的资金短缺问题，请给全校学生写一封募捐信，募集5000元善款．信中必须包括：‎ ‎1．向全校的捐款号召．‎ ‎2．你发起这一活动的理由．‎ ‎3．你准备怎样使用善款的计划．‎ ‎（文中不得出现考生姓名，学校等任何真实信息）‎ ‎20．下面两幅图反映的是部分城乡孩子所面临的窘境．请就此图谈谈你的想法，你的文章应包括：‎ 具体描述两幅图；‎ 简要分析造成这两种现象的原因；‎ 提出解决问题的建议．‎ ‎（注：请勿出现真实姓名和学校）‎ ‎　‎ ‎2018年01月25日试用3的高中英语组卷 参考答案与试题解析 ‎　‎ 一．书面表达（共20小题）‎ ‎1．假设你是中华中学学生姚平，最近参加了一项研究性学习调研，课题为"父母是否以子女为荣"．通过调研你校学生及其父母，结果发现双方对此问题的看法有差异（数据如图所示）．根据图表写一份报告，在报告中，你必须：‎ ‎1．描述调研数据；‎ ‎2．分析可能导致这一结果的原因 ‎【分析】本文为图表作文，考生需要根据数据进行分析，从数据分析原因，得出结论．‎ 时态主要为一般现在时．人称为第一人称和第三人称为主．‎ 写作要点为：‎ ‎1．描述调研数据；‎ ‎2．分析可能导致这一结果的原因．‎ 重要的词汇及短语：‎ make a survey 做调查 hold the same opinion 持相同的观点 according to…根据…‎ approve 同意，认可 cause 起因，原因 figure out 找出 lead to 导致 subtle 细微的 conservative 保守的 accustom to 习惯于 convey 传递（信息）‎ tendency 趋势 conceal 隐藏 the current education system 常规的教育体系 bias 偏爱，偏见 excessively 过分地 高分句型：‎ 句型一：‎ There seems to be①two causes as②we tried to figure out what③led to this subtle difference．‎ there seems to be 句型，表示"看上去似乎有"；‎ as 引导时间状语从句，表示伴随，主句和从句的两个动作同时发生；‎ what 引导宾语从句．‎ 句型二：‎ The current education system excessively emphasizes the value of academic performance，thus forcing children to extensively believe that only by achieving excellent scores can they make their parents proud．‎ 常规的教育体系过分强调学业表现/价值，导致孩子们过度认为只有取得优异的成绩，才能让父母为自己骄傲．‎ 句型三：‎ This bias unfairly undermines the significance of talents for art and sports，which easily frustrates children and renders them more likely to underestimate themselves．‎ 这种偏见不公正地低估了艺术和体育特长的意义，很容易打击到孩子（的信心），因而他们更可能降低对自我的认同．‎ ‎【解答】Recently，we made a survey about whether the parents agree that they are proud of their children．The result shows that 80% of parents are proud of their children while only 60% of children hold the same opinion．According to the survey，we can conclude that the number of parents who approved the idea is 20% more than of children．（描述调研数据）‎ There seems to be two causes as we tried to figure out what led to this subtle difference．【高分句型一】First，conservative Chinese parents are never accustomed to conveying directly how much they are proud of their children．This tendency to conceal feelings hardly helps children develop a strong sense of self﹣confidence．（原因一）Second，the current education system excessively emphasizes the value of academic performance，thus forcing children to extensively believe that only by achieving excellent scores can they make their parents proud．【高分句型二】This bias unfairly undermines the significance of talents for art and sports，which easily frustrates children and renders them more likely to underestimate themselves．【高分句型三】（原因二）‎ Without the genuine encouragement from parents and the reversal of exam﹣oriented educational methods，a kid would never end up with a positive grown﹣up．（结论）‎ ‎【点评】数据分析类的作文，需要考生认真观察数据，透过现象看本质，从数据中分析原因，得出结论．‎ ‎　‎ ‎2．学校即将举办"读书节"，目前正广泛征集"读书节"宣传册图片．假设你是该校学生潘阳，你已找到以下三幅图片，决定给读书节组委会写一封信，推荐其中一幅，你的信须包括以下内容：‎ ‎1．简单描述你想推荐的那幅图片；‎ ‎2．阐述你用这幅图片宣传"读书节"的理由．‎ ‎【分析】本文采用了"图表+提纲类"形式，根据文章所给提示信息给读书节组委会写一封信，推荐其中一幅图片，描述图片同时阐述推荐理由，既是提纲作文又是图画类作文．时态应该用一般现在时．人称用第二和第三人称．重要短语：around the corner（即将到来），recommend sth to…．（推荐什么给），remind sb of sth （提醒某人…．），as far as I'm concerned （就我所知道的而言），turn out to be（结果是），not only…．，but also…．（不仅，而且），enhance …．understanding of…..（增强…..的理解），take sth into consideration…．（把…..考虑在内）．‎ ‎【解答】Dear Sir/Madam，‎ Since the Reading Festival is around the corner，I'm writing to recommend a picture which can be used in the brochure to remind the students of the pleasure of reading．‎ In the picture，three students are sitting at the table，discussing heatedly what they have just read．【高分句型】It seems that they have had a lot of fun through the discussion．（描述图片）Though it is admitted that reading is mostly a personal activity which needs quietness and concentration，as far as I'm concerned，it can also be a sharing experience when the same book is being appreciated．Just imagine that you have read a terrific detective story with fascinating and intricate plots．You are so amazed by the genius of the writer and you can't help sharing it with your ‎ classmates or best friends，who turn out to have been deeply impressed as well．【高分句型】The moment you mention the book，the passion and enthusiasm about the story will explode which can never be gained on your own．【高分句型】My ideal atmosphere of reading is just like that，through which you can not only appreciate the content by yourself，but also have the pleasure of sharing the plots or opinions with your peers，which will ultimately enhance your understanding of the book．【高分句型】To sum up，the reason of my recommendation is quite simple and apparent that reading，instead of being dull and isolating，can be full of participation and common interest．（阐述推荐该图片的理由）I sincerely hope that you will take my suggestion into consideration and I'm looking forward to your early reply．‎ Yours sincerely，‎ Pan Yang ‎【点评】写好这类图片及提纲式作文的关键是认真分析所给提示信息，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将要点完整地表述出来，并认真看图，围绕主题，提炼要点，发挥想象，语言力求准确、简洁．选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等．‎ ‎　‎ ‎3．学校英语报正在酝酿改版，拟从现有的三个栏目（健康、娱乐、文化）中去除一个，并从三个备选栏目（时尚、职业规划、读者反馈）中挑选一个纳入该报．假设你是该校学生程飞，给校报编辑写一封电子邮件，表达你的观点．邮件须包括以下内容：‎ ‎1．你建议去除的栏目及去除的理由；‎ ‎2．你建议增加的栏目及增加的理由．‎ ‎【分析】本文是一篇提纲作文．根据所提供的材料信息，给校报编辑写一封电子邮件，就学校英语报改版，拟从现有的三个栏目（健康、娱乐、文化）中去除一个，并从三个备选栏目（时尚、职业规划、读者反馈）中挑选一个纳入该报事宜发表自己的观点．‎ 写作时人称以第一和第三人称为主，时态以一般现在时为主．‎ 写作要点：1．表示对客人的欢迎；2．介绍此项活动（如活动目的、内容等）3．表达对客人的祝愿；‎ 重要短语：reform sth（代表），be replaced by（被代替），share sth with sb（与某人分享某物），needless to say （更不用说），according to （根据），have positive effects on（对…有影响），be of great significance（非常有意义），loss of （损失），keep fit（保持健康），contributes to（促成），broaden one's horizons（拓宽某人的视野），in turn （反过来又），be beneficial to （对…有益）．‎ ‎【高分句型一】‎ ‎1．①Compared to the entertainment，I hold the view ②that the value of the columns concerning health and culture is more important．‎ ‎①此处是过去分词作状语，主句为"I hold the view that the value of the columns concerning health and culture is more important"，主句的主语为"I"与所给动词存在逻辑上的被动关系．‎ ‎②此处是由连接词"that"引导的同位语从句，"that"引导的同位语从句解释说明"view"的具体内容．‎ ‎【高分句型二】‎ ‎2．The main factor is that it is of great significance to keep healthy while loss of health means kissing goodbye to life．‎ 此处是由连接词"that"引导的表语从句，主语为"The main factor"，谓语动词为"is"．‎ ‎【高分句型三】‎ ‎3．the progress in acquiring cultures contributes to broadening one's horizons，which in turn is beneficial to one's study and the establishment of philosophy of life．‎ 此处是由关系代词"which"引导的非限制性定语从句，"which"在从句中作主语，指代前面整个主句的内容．‎ ‎【高分句型四】‎ ‎4．Here I am in the hope that my advice will add a brilliant touch to the improved version of our school English Post．‎ 此处是由连接词"that"引导的同位语从句，连接词"that"解释说明名词"hope"的具体内容．‎ ‎【解答】Dear Editor，‎ I've learned that our English Post is being reformed and one of the three columns is to be replaced by a new one．I'm writing this e﹣mail to share with you my opinions．Needless to say，the columns will definitely be designed according to students'interest and have positive effects on their study and life．（写信的目的）‎ Compared to the entertainment，I hold the view that the value of the columns concerning health and culture is more important．【高分句型一】The main factor is that it is of great significance to keep healthy while loss of health means kissing goodbye to life．【高分句型二】Consequently，more knowledge of how to keep fit can improve the quality of life．In addition，the progress in acquiring cultures contributes to broadening one's horizons，which in turn is beneficial to one's study and the establishment of philosophy of life．【高分句型三】（建议去除的栏目及去除的理由）‎ Furthermore，the career planning should be taken into account in the school English Post．On the one hand，it covers one's career development a great deal．On the other hand，it makes a great difference to one's career success in the future．（建议增加的栏目及去除的理由）‎ What has been mentioned above is my personal ideas．Here I am in the hope that my advice will add a brilliant touch to the improved version of our school English Post．【高分句型四】（希望）‎ Yours sincerely，‎ Cheng Fei ‎【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型．‎ ‎　‎ ‎4．请描述如图所示的图片，并谈谈你的感受．‎ ‎【分析】本文为看图作文，主题是"要用积极乐观的心态面对生活"．写作时可按"三段式"来写，首先描述图片点明主题，然后分析概述其含义，发表感想．基本时态为一般现在时，人称以第三人称为主．重要短语：do some actions （做一些动作…），look like…（看上去像…），be faced with （面临，面对），manage to do （成功地做某事），have a positive attitude toward…（对…有积极的态度），have great influence on（有很大影响），keep peace（保持平静）．‎ ‎【解答】As is vividly shown in the picture，an old granny who looks ugly in a wheelchair does some actions．The actions reflect on the wall，which makes her look like a young beautiful girl．（描述图片）【高分句型】‎ The picture conveys that some people are positive when they are faced with life．They are always so energetic and enterprising that they manage to finish most of tasks well．Life returns color to those people who have positive and optimistic attitudes toward life．（联系实际，反映问题）【高分句型】‎ Now that a positive attitude can lead us a better life，how can we develop a positive attitude？For one thing，we should hold a dream about future to provide our life a clear direction．For another，it is necessary for us to be confident which is the energy of life，perhaps the beauty of life．【高分句型】Whether we can find it have a great influence on our attitude towards life，so we should keep peace in our heart to find the beauty of life．In my opinion，if we can do like that mentioned above，better life will hug us tightly．（观点）‎ ‎【点评】写作看图作文时，首先认真看图，结合图片和文字，确定所要表达的主题是什么，然后围绕主题，提炼要点，合理想象，对译出的要点通过合理的组合，加上必要的连接词使表达连贯．同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型．‎ ‎　‎ ‎5．Directions：Write an English composition in 120﹣150words according to the instructions given below in Chinese．‎ 描写一件你珍藏的物品．文章要具体说明何时、何地、怎样得到这件物品以及为什么珍藏到现在．‎ ‎【分析】高分句型：句型一：①The reason why I still keep it in my memory is ②that it reminds me of an old saying：there must be a use for one's talent．The reason why…是以reason为先行词，关系副词why引导的定语从句．在that引导的表语从句中含有短语remind sb．of sth．使某人想起某物．句型二：①When I was ten years old，there was an old man ②living in my neighborhood．when引导时间状语从句，在从句中作状语．living是现在分词作后置定语，与其逻辑主语man是主动关系．‎ ‎【解答】In my drawer，there is a deliberate wooden toy horse．（开门见山，指出珍藏的物品）It was a gift from an old man in my neighborhood when I was still veryyoung．The reason why I still keep it in my memory is that it reminds me of anold saying：there must be a use for one's talent．【高分句型一】When I was ten years old，therewas an old man living in my neighborhood．【高分句型一】He didn't have theopportunity to study in school，but he learned how to make wood furniture．Everytime people went to ask him to solve some problems of furniture，he waswilling to help them．To my surprise，in his spare time，he would make some toys with small piece s of wood．Some ofthem were sold to the toy store and others were given to us．（具体说明何时、何地、怎样得到这件物品）The moment I see the lovely toy horse made by this old man，I wouldremember the happy childhood．The old man impressed me deeply with his talent andkindness．From the little horse toy，we can see whatever kind of talent you have，you canfind your own method to display your talent and bring love to others．（这件物品为什么珍藏到现在的原因）‎ ‎【点评】‎ 本文要求描写一件你珍藏的物品，要具体说明何时、何地、怎样得到这件物品以及为什么珍藏到现在．所以在写作时必须审好题，不能遗漏任何一条．在准确表述内容的基础上，争取多用些从句，非谓语和短语使文章生动，上档次．‎ ‎　‎ ‎6．你叫Jenny，你的网友Peter（高一学生）即将面临期末考试，近日，他就是否要请家教来帮他复习迎考向你求教，请给Peter回复一封电子邮件，邮件必须包括以下内容：‎ 结合你自身的学习经历就是否请家教表达你的观点及理由；‎ 就复习迎考给出2条主要建议．‎ ‎　Hearing that you're wondering whether you should invite a tutor to help you prepare for the coming final examination，I'm shocked and I'll give you an exact'No'．‎ A tutor costs high，usually 150 yuan or more per hour，which you may not be able to afford．Besides，having studied that detailed information of tutor classes from my classmates，I find that most of the information is similar to that of school's，which is even with little or no extended materials，so it's absolutely no use if you listen to the teachers with full attention in the school and review what is on your notebook carefully after class．What's more，a tutor may make you depend fully onhim and lose your self﹣motivation on study，which is exactly the truth of study．Without it，you may never learn better．And that's why I say there's no need for you to invite a home tutor．‎ When it comes to preparing for the exam，I'd like to give you two suggestions．First，review the points which you're poor at．You will achieve twice the result with half the effort if reviewing the notes accompanied with several particular exercises．Second，check all the notes and make sure that you've captured all the details．‎ Try hard and I believe you can achieve a good score in the exam．　．‎ ‎【分析】本文是一篇提纲作文．根据所提供的材料信息，写一封电子邮件，就即将面临期末考试的高一学生Peter是否要请家教来帮他来复习迎考表达观点并提供建议．写作要点包括：1．结合自身学习经历表达观点及理由；‎ ‎ 2．就复习迎考提出主要建议．写作时人称以第一人称和第三人称为主，时态以一般现在时为主．重要短语：invitesb to do （邀请某人做某事），prepare for （为…作准备），be able to do（能够做某事），be similar to （与…相似），dependon （取决于，依赖），be of no use （没有用处），When it comes to…（当谈到，涉及到），bepoor at （在…薄弱），be accompanied with（带有，兼有），captureall the details（掌握所有细节），achievea good score（取得好成绩）．‎ ‎【高分句型】‎ ‎1．Hearing that you're wondering whether you should invite a tutor to help you prepare for the coming final examination，I'm shocked and I'll give you an exact'No'．‎ 这里是由现在分词hearing作状语，主句为I'm shocked and I'll give you an exact'No'，主句的主语为I与所给动词hear存在逻辑上的主动关系．‎ ‎2．A tutor costs high，usually 150 yuan or more per hour，which you may not be able to afford．‎ 这里是由which引导的非限制性定语从句，which在从句中作宾语，指代前面的名词150 yuan or more per hour．‎ ‎3．I find that most of the information is similar to ②that of school's，①which is even with little or no extended materials，③so it's absolutely no use if you listen to the teachers with full attention in the school and review what is on your notebook carefully after class．‎ ‎①这里是由which引导的非限制性定语从句，which在从句中作主语，指代前面整个主句的内容．‎ ‎②这里是代词that可指代前面的名词the information，that=the+名词．‎ ‎③这里是由连词so引导的句子，与前面的句子I find that most of the information is similar to that of school's，which is even with little or no extended materials构成因果关系．‎ ‎【解答】Hearing thatyou're wondering whether you should invite a tutor to help ‎ you prepare for thecoming final examination，I'm shocked and I'll give you an exact'No'．【高分句型】（表达观点）‎ A tutor costshigh，usually 150 yuan or more per hour，which you may not be able to afford．【高分句型】Besides，having studied that detailed informationof tutor classes from my classmates，I find that most of the information issimilar to that of school's，which is even with little or no extendedmaterials，so it's absolutely no use if you listen to the teachers with fullattention in the school and review what is on your notebook carefully afterclass．【高分句型】What's more，a tutor may make you dependfully on him and lose your self﹣motivation on study，which isexactly the truth of study．【高分句型】Withoutit，you may never learn better．And that's why I say there's no need for you toinvite a home tutor．（理由）‎ ‎ When itcomes to preparing for the exam，I'd like to give you two suggestions．First，review the points which you're poor at．You will achieve twice the result withhalf the effort if reviewing the notes accompanied with several particularexercises．Second，check all the notes and make sure that you've captured all thedetails．【高分句型】（建议）‎ ‎ Try hard and I believe you can achieve agood score in the exam．（结尾﹣﹣﹣总结概括）‎ ‎【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型．‎ ‎　‎ ‎7．以下是三座城市在就业、娱乐、环境方面的满意度．假如你的家庭打算移居到其中的某座城市，请从你和家庭的情况考虑选择一座比较满意的城市，并简要谈谈选择这座城市的理由．‎ 提示：不必对图表中的数据做详细描写． ‎ ‎【分析】本文是图表作文，根据文章图表和所给提示信息写一篇短文，阐述你的家庭打算移居到其中的某座城市，考虑在就业、娱乐、环境等方面选择一座比较满意的城市并说明理由．‎ 写作要点：1．概述图表；2．选择城市B的理由；3．结尾点题．‎ 写作时时态以一般现在时为主．人称以第一和第三人称为主．‎ 重要短语：illustrate sth （解释某事），as follows（如下），according to（根据），in one's opinion（某人认为），plays a vital role in（起重要作用），affect sth （影响某物），as well （也），do some recreational activities （进行一些娱乐活动），such as （例如），in terms of（就…而言），meet our needs（同时），all in all（问题的答案），take sth into account（许诺某人某事），embrace the life（许诺某人某事）．‎ ‎【高分句型一】‎ ‎1．①what's important to my family is②that we can live in a city with a pleasant environment ③which not only plays a vital role in our physical fitness，but greatly affects our mental health as well．‎ ‎①此处是由连接代词"what"引导的主语从句，"what"在主语从句中作主语．‎ ‎②此处是由连接词"that"引导的表语从句，"that"在从句中起连接词的作用，无意义．‎ ‎③‎ 此处是由关系代词"which"引导的定语从句，"which"在定语从句中作主语，先行词为"environmen"，定语从句中由"not only…，but also…"结构连接两个谓语动词．‎ ‎【高分句型二】‎ ‎2．What's more，we can see that the employment in City B is not so bad from the chat，which is better than City C．‎ 此处是由关系代词"which"引导的非限制性定语从句，关系代词"which"在从句中作主语，指代前面整个主句的内容．‎ ‎【解答】This bar chart illustrates the satisfaction of employment、entertainment and environment in three cities．Among all the cities involved，according to the situation of my family，plan to move to City B．I have some reasons as follows．（概述图表）‎ Firstly，City B has the second best environment of all the three cities．In my opinion，what's important to my family is that we can live in a city with a pleasant environment which not only plays a vital role in our physical fitness，but greatly affects our mental health as well．【高分句型一】（选择城市B的理由一）‎ Secondly，there are three young members including me in my family，and we always do some recreational activities together，such as going shopping and doing some sports．In terms of entertainment，City B can meet our needs more than the other cities．（选择城市B的理由二）‎ What's more，we can see that the employment in City B is not so bad from the chat，which is better than City C．【高分句型二】My parents are both senior engineers and I have no worries about them．For me，I'm just a high school student，employment is not my priority．I know if I study hard form now on，I can find a good job without any doubt in the near future．（选择城市B的理由三）‎ All in all，after taking what my family need into account．City B is my first choice．I look forward to embracing the life of the new city．（结尾点题）‎ ‎【点评】‎ 表格类作文写作要注意：1）不同文体的格式，避免"填表式"表达.2）灵活变通，避免"硬译式"，表达表格中的汉语提示简洁凝练，概括性强，表达时切忌逐字逐句翻译，要做灵活调整或进行补充；较为抽象、复杂的汉语提示应善于变通转换．3）衔接，避免"单句式"表达，使全文语篇通顺连贯．‎ ‎　‎ ‎8．你班将召开一次主题班会，探讨高中生在成长过程中遇到的烦恼．请根据自己实际生活中遇到的学习、交友、代沟、同龄人攀比等现象进行思考，写一篇发言稿．文章需包括：‎ ‎1．你在实际生活中遇到的至少两种烦恼及其简要介绍；‎ ‎2．你应对这些烦恼所采取的举措和建议．‎ ‎　Boys and girs，‎ We high school students do have some growing pains but we can get rid of them correctly and wisely．First，some of us are upset about their figures and looks．It's unnecessary and it's not impoatant at all．We needn't care about it．It is one's inner beauty that matters．（高分句型）Second，we sometimes seem to be misunderstood by our teachers，parents and classmates．Facing this，we can find a proper time to have a heart to heart talk with them，trying to remove the misunderstanding．（高分句型）Some of us have fewer friends．I think being openminded and friendly will do us good．Third，we work efficiently，full of determination．Last，some of us don't have much pocket money，so they feel unhappy．（说明原因）Isn't it strange？So long as we have some，that's enough．And we can learn to earn money!‎ That's all．Thank you．　．‎ ‎【分析】高分句型一：‎ It is one's inner beauty that matters．一个人的内在美是最重要的．‎ 高分句型二：‎ Facing this，we can find a proper time to have a heart to heart talk with them，trying to remove the misunderstanding．‎ 面对这些，我们能找到一个合适的时机和他们进行心灵的沟通，尽量的消除误会．‎ 句型一 该句是一个强调句，被强调部分为句子的主语．原句为：one's inner beauty matters．‎ 句型二 ①Facing this，此处使用了现在分词作状语，表主动 ‎②trying to remove the misunderstanding．此处使用了现在分词作伴随状语 ‎【解答】Boys and girs，‎ ‎ We high school students do have some growing pains but we can get rid of them correctly and wisely．First，some of us are upset about their figures and looks．It's unnecessary and it's not impoatant at all．We needn't care about it．It is one's inner beauty that matters．（高分句型）Second，we sometimes seem to be misunderstood by our teachers，parents and classmates．Facing this，we can find a proper time to have a heart to heart talk with them，trying to remove the misunderstanding．（高分句型）Some of us have fewer friends．I think being openminded and friendly will do us good．Third，we work efficiently，full of determination．Last，some of us don't have much pocket money，so they feel unhappy．（说明原因）Isn't it strange？So long as we have some，that's enough．And we can learn to earn money!‎ ‎ That's all．Thank you．‎ ‎【点评】本书面表达是一篇议论文，写作时应注意根据所提观点进行符合逻辑的论述．‎ ‎　‎ ‎9．Directions：Write an English composition in 120﹣150words according to the instructions given below in Chinese．‎ 假设你班班长打算在寒假组织一次班级活动，有三种方案：‎ 一、慈善义卖帮助家庭有困难的同学；‎ 二、聘请英语专家介绍有效的学习方法；‎ 三、组织一次班级新年派对．作为班级的一员，请你根据你的实际情况，在三项方案中选择其一，提出对该项活动的建议并谈谈理由．你的写作中必须包括：‎ 在三项方案中选择其一；‎ 对该方案提出建议；‎ 谈谈你提出建议的理由．‎ ‎　Recently，whathas become a heated topic of our class is that an important ‎ decision about thecoming winter festival event must be made among three different choices．Aftera careful consideration，the proposal to hold a New Year Party earns my favor．‎ Several suggestions about the partyare listed as follows．Firstly，a clear and absorbing theme must be settled．Only with a specific theme，such as Welcoming the New Ourselves or Changes inthe New Year，can we eventually work out the suitable activities anddecorations．Besides，a proper schedule and a name list arenecessary．In other words，when to hold the party and who will attend it aresure to make a big difference in its evolving purpose and，more importantly，the success．Last but not least，about the expense，any amount of money wespend shall be listed，through which we can better control the whole processand make full use of the resources we have．‎ From what has been mentioned above，if allthese suggestions can be carried out strictly，it is no surprise that our NewYear Party will leave a deep impression on everyone．　．‎ ‎【分析】本文是一篇提纲作文，根据所提供的材料，写一短文，就寒假组织的班级活动的三种方案中进行选择，提出建议并阐述理由．写作要点包括：1．选择哪一种班级活动方案；2．提出建议；3．阐述理由．写作时应以一般现在时为主．人称以第一人称和第三人称为主．重要短语：a heated topic （一个热门话题），as follows（如下），work out （解决），makea big difference （起作用，产生影响），make full use of （充分利用），carry out （实施，执行），leave a deep impression on everyone （给每个人留下深刻印象）．‎ ‎【解答】Recently，whathas become a heated topic of our class is that an important decision about thecoming winter festival event must be made among three different choices．Aftera careful consideration，the proposal to hold a New Year Party earns my favor．（选择组织班级新年派对）‎ ‎ Several suggestions about the partyare listed as follows．Firstly，a clear and absorbing theme must be settled．Only with a specific theme，such as Welcoming the New Ourselves or Changes inthe New Year，can we eventually work out the suitable ‎ activities anddecorations．【高分句型】Besides，a proper schedule and a name list are necessary．In other words，whento hold the party and who will attend it are sure to make a big difference inits evolving purpose and，more importantly，the success．【高分句型】Last but not least，about the expense，any amountof money we spend shall be listed，through which we can better control thewhole process and make the full use of the resources we have．【高分句型】（提出建议并陈述理由）‎ ‎ From what has been mentioned above，if allthese suggestions can be carried out strictly，it is no surprise that our NewYear Party will leave a deep impression on everyone．（结尾总结）‎ ‎【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点，并适当增加细节．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型．‎ ‎　‎ ‎10．假如你是某中学高三（1）班的学生李明，写一封信给学校图书馆负责老师，因为你校图书馆将选择招募课余学生图书管理员．信必须包括以下内容：‎ ‎•简要介绍个人特长 ‎•表达希望成为课余学生图书管理员的愿望 ‎•谈谈你作为课余学生图书管理员，对学校图书馆管理提出一些建议 注意：文中请勿提及真实学校 Dear Sir/Madam．‎ ‎【分析】本文是一篇提纲作文．根据所提供的材料信息，写一封信．写作要点包括：1．描述你在高中生活中遇到的最大挑战； 2．介绍你的应对措施及感悟．写作时时态以一般现在时为主，人称以第一和第二人称为主．重要短语：have great interest in （对…有兴趣），in hope of （希望），in one's opinion （某人看来），involve sth （牵连，卷入…），be exposed to （接触；暴露于；遭受），put something in order （使…有秩序），take notes of（记笔记），a big deal （重要事情），extend the efficiency （提高效率），due to （由于），act as（充当，作为…），broaden one's horizon （扩大眼界…），admit sb into（允许某人进入…），look forward ‎ to（期望…）．‎ ‎【高分句型】‎ ‎1．thus putting the messy books in good order as well as taking notes of the details in the library work is not a big deal for me．‎ 这里是动名词putting the messy books in good order as well as taking notes of the details in the library work作主语，句子的谓语动词是is，表语为not a big deal for me．主语中由as well as连接了两个并列的动名词．‎ ‎2．If accepted，I wonder if the number of school library can be increased．‎ 这里是if从句中的省略，可理解为If I am accepted，主句为I wonder if the number of school library can be increased，主句中是由if引导的宾语从句．‎ ‎【解答】Dear Sir/Madam，‎ ‎ I am Li Ming in Grade 3 Class 1．I'm writing to express that I have great interest in the position of an after﹣school librarian．I have prepared fully in hope of being accepted．（表达希望成为课余学生图书管里员的愿望）‎ ‎ In my opinion，this job involves patience and responsibility．Having been a member of the students union for two years，I have been exposed to various trivial things，thus putting the messy books in good order as well as taking notes of the details in the library work is not a big deal for me．【高分句型】Moreover，I know to the largest content what the real concept of team work is．Enough emphasis on collective benefits has always helped me extend the efficiency due to my experience in after﹣school activities．Thus I believe this experience will help me do better if I get this job．（介绍个人特长）‎ ‎ If accepted，I wonder if the number of school library can be increased．【高分句型】We know books act as a way to broaden our horizon，thus the more books we have，the more accesses to knowledge we can have．【高分句型】（对学校图书管里提出一些建议）‎ ‎ I will appreciate your kindness if you admit me into the after﹣school librarian group．I am looking forward to your reply．‎ Best regards Li Ming ‎【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型．‎ ‎　‎ ‎11．Directions：Writing an English composition in 120﹣150words according to the instructions given below in Chinese．‎ 请根据下面的图片，结合你个人的经历，谈谈你的想法．‎ ‎【分析】本篇书面表达属于图画类作文，根据提示信息请根据下面的图片，结合你个人的经历，谈谈你的想法，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，2、图画是文章的总体框架，要在图画的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．‎ ‎【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：stick out 突出；cut off切断；Indeed确实；based on 以…为根据；More importantly更重要的是；strive for为…而奋斗；‎ The image above embodies what is referred to as cooperation and win﹣win situation，the significance of which，from where I stand，cannot be overrated．（高分句型一）‎ Only then were we aware that the duties could have been allocated based on what each member exceled at．（高分句型二）‎ True，it is that competing interests and conflicting desires prevail universally，but history has witnessed the long term joint effort between opposing sides，particularly political parties．（高分句型三）‎ ‎【解答】Held in four hands are four irregular shaped jigsaws，with some parts sticking out and some cut off．But when pieced together，they constitute a flawless and crackless square．The image above embodies what is referred to as cooperation and win﹣win situation，the significance of which，from where I stand，cannot be overrated．（高分句型一）‎ ‎　　Indeed，it is through working collaboratively that we can get a clear picture of our virtues and drawbacks．Once my learning group was assigned a presentation task covering three sections．We had planned to work on each section separately，but during the rehearsal phase problems like computer illiteracy，lack of fluency popped out．Only then were we aware that the duties could have been allocated based on what each member exceled at．（高分句型二）‎ ‎　　More importantly，it pays to put aside disputes and seek common development instead．True，it is that competing interests and conflicting desires prevail universally，but history has witnessed the long term joint effort between opposing sides，particularly political parties．（高分句型三）For instance，the Democrats have long been working in partnership with the Republicans，both committed to reviving US economy and striving for citizens'welfare．‎ ‎　　As social beings，we can hardly exist alone in society．United we stand，divided we fail．‎ ‎【点评】英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．‎ ‎　‎ ‎12．某英文网站正举办征文活动，题目是The Most Useful Skill I Have Ever Learned，请以此写一篇征文．你的文章比须包括：‎ ‎•这项技能是什么？你是通过什么方式学会的？‎ ‎•举例说明为什么你觉得它最有用．‎ ‎（注：文中不得出现真实的姓名及学校名称）‎ ‎　The Most Useful SkillI Have Ever Learned In my view，the Most Useful SkillI Have Ever Learned is first aid．First aid is the provision of initial limited care for an illness or injury．It is usually performed by a person to a sick or injured patient until medical treatment can be accessed．I learn some first aid skills in an activity held in our school．‎ I know the importance of the first aid due to an accident．One day，I saw an old woman was hit by a car on the way to school，but the car sped away．I came up and found that elderly people left leg injury，flow of blood．Remembering some first﹣aid knowledge，I took out my handkerchief，dressed wounds，and energetically hold the wound to stop blood flowing．When the doctor in the ambulance come to the spot，he spoke highly of what I did，saying if I hadn't done that，the old man would die because of blood flowing．So I think everybody should know some first aid in order to save othe people's lives．　．‎ ‎【分析】这是一篇介绍自己认为最有用的技能的作文．根据题目要求可知用第一人称，时态以一般现在时态和一般过去时态为主．内容包括：一介绍自己认为最有用的技能﹣﹣﹣急救；二举例说明为什么急救最有用．‎ 高分句型 ‎1．It is usually performed by a person to a sick or injured patient until medical treatment can be accessed．句子里状语从句until medical treatment can be accessed．表示"直到医疗救助能够被得到"．‎ 它通常是在医疗救助能够被得到之前，一个人对一个病人或者伤员做的救治．‎ ‎2．Remembering some first﹣aid knowledge，I took out my handkerchief，dressed wounds，and energetically hold the wound to stop blood flowing ‎ 句子里现在分词短语Remembering some first﹣aid knowledge，做原因状语，表示"因为记的一些急救知识"； took out my handkerchief表示"拿出手绢"，dressed wounds表示"盖住伤口"，energetically hold the wound表示"紧急摁住伤口"．‎ 因为记的一些急救知识，我拿出手绢，盖住伤口，紧急摁住伤口，阻止血液流失．‎ ‎【解答】The Most Useful Skill I Have Ever Learned ‎ In my view，the Most Useful Skill I Have Ever Learned is first aid．First aid is the provision of initial limited care for an illness or injury．It is usually performed by a person to a sick or injured patient until medical treatment can be accessed．【高分句型一】I learn some first aid skills in an activity held in our school．（介绍自己认为最有用的技能﹣﹣﹣急救）‎ ‎ I know the importance of the first aid due to an accident．One day，I saw an old woman was hit by a car on the way to school，but the car sped away．I came up and found that elderly people left leg injury，flow of blood．Remembering some first﹣aid knowledge，I took out my handkerchief，dressed wounds，and energetically hold the wound to stop blood flowing．【高分句型二】When the doctor in the ambulance come to the spot，he spoke highly of what I did，saying if I hadn't done that，the old man would die because of blood flowing．So I think everybody should know some first aid in order to save othe people's lives．（举例说明为什么急救最有用）‎ ‎【点评】考查提纲类作文．‎ 写作文时，一定要切题，抓住中心，紧扣要点．不要任意发挥，画蛇添足，也不要丢三落四，要点不全．通过对众多提示或图画、图表的观察和分析，获取与写作内容有关的主要信息，并按一定的逻辑顺序排列起来，找出最密切相关的要点，列出写作提纲．‎ ‎　‎ ‎13．假设你是李华，学校有四个社团正招募新人（如图所示），你希望加入其中一个．请你写一篇日记，谈谈你的想法．内容必须包括：‎ ‎•你希望加入的社团 ‎•选择该社团的原因 ‎•你可以为该社团做些什么 注意：请勿透露本人真实姓名和学校名称．‎ ‎【分析】高分句型一：‎ As far as l am concerned，l am eager to join Sports club because of the following reasons．‎ 就我而言，我想要加入体育俱乐部，有以下一些原因．‎ 高分句型二：‎ Secondly，the reason why l prefer Sports club is that doing sports is one of the most useful ways to have a relaxation after studying for a long period．‎ 其次，我之所以选择加入体育俱乐部的原因是体育锻炼是繁重的学习之余最好的放松方式之一．‎ 句型一 ①As far as l am concerned，此处使用到了重要的固定短语表达 ②l am eager to join Sports 该句中有一个固定的句型 be eager to do sth 渴望做某事 句型二 the reason why l prefer Sports club is that doing sports…①该部分复合句中包含有一个由why作引导词，the reason作先行词的定语从句，且why作原因状语 ②is 之后有一个表语从句，注意此处的引导词不能用 because ‎【解答】I am Li Hua．‎ ‎ As a senior high school student，joining a community that l am keen on after class has played a big role in my three﹣year study career．Recently，four communities including Science club，English theatre club，Eco club and sports club in my school are recruiting new members，which has attached many students'attentions．As far as l am concerned，l am eager to join Sports club because of the following reasons．（高分句型一）First ly，not only should we go to all lengths to study hard in order to ‎ acquire more and more knowledge，but we also should do exercises to strengthen physical fitness．Secondly，the reason why l prefer Sports club is that doing sports is one of the most useful ways to have a relaxation after studying for a long period．（高分句型二）Last but not least，doing sports can cultivate our team spirit so that we are aware that union is strength and know the importance of cooperation．All these reasons make me be absorbed in joining Sports club．If l am elected to be a member of Sports club，l will take active part in all activities．‎ ‎ What l can devote myself to the construction of the community is that l can convey the positive theories of sports to my friends and classmates and awaken them to the realization that joining Sports club is the best choice．l am fascinated by being a member of Sports club．‎ ‎【点评】本书面表达为提纲类，对考生的表述思路有一定的规定，在写作时要围绕给出的几点要求展开相应的表达，在允许的情况下，可适当的增减，以使文章表述准确无误．‎ ‎　‎ ‎14．如图反映了一种常见的现象：拖延症（procrastination）．请写一篇作文，内容包括：‎ ‎1．给procrastination下定义；‎ ‎2．用生活中的例子谈谈你对此现象的看法．‎ ‎【分析】‎ 这是一篇图画作文，让我们写一篇关于拖延症（procrastination）的作文，这需要我们发挥英语思维，将提供的信息用英语完整流畅的表达出来．写作需要用第三人称，时态主要是一般现在时，内容要点包括：给procrastination下定义；用生活中的例子谈谈你对此现象的看法．我们此篇作文分为两部分，第一部分为拖延症的定义．第二部分为作者结合生活实例发表对拖延症的看法．‎ 重点短语与句型：‎ mean doing 意味着做…‎ because of 因为 when it comes to 当谈到，提到 rely on依靠，依赖 ‎ 高分句型一：Although we've been constantly reminded that time and tide waits for no man，when it comes to the crux，we still procrastinate and complain so much．此句用了that引导宾语从句 高分句型二：And that is the reason why we are in a materialistic chase nowadays此句why引导定语从句，修饰 the reason．‎ ‎【解答】Procrastination means delaying huge and important deals on uncertain time because of out of understanding how we must do it（拖延症的定义）‎ I will do my homework tomorrow．That's a sentence many students will say at least once in their lifetime．Although we've been constantly reminded that time and tide waits for no man，when it comes to the crux，we still procrastinate and complain so much．（高分句型一）People are born to be lazy at times and the intrinsic motivation levels aren't high enough to warrant action．Thus，we rely on extrinsic motivation to help push us to complete the tasks we have on hand．And that is the reason why we are in a materialistic chase nowadays．（高分句型二）Because extrinsic motivation blinds our eyes to the intrinsic motivations that we should have．（作者结合生活实例发表对拖延症的看法．）‎ ‎【点评】英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实 的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 ‎ 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．‎ ‎　‎ ‎15．最近，网络上针对学习有两种不同的观点，一种是"兴趣是最好的老师"，另一种是"兴趣不是最好的老师"．请你结合自己的体会，选择你支持的观点，表达自己的看法，并阐述理由．‎ 注意：作文中不得出现你本人的姓名、班级及学校等真实信息．‎ ‎【分析】首先要注意审题，把题目的意思看清楚．这个题目的意思是说网络上针对学习有两种不同的观点，一种是"兴趣是最好的老师"，另一种是"兴趣不是最好的老师"．首先，结合自己的体会在第一段里，大家要开门见山，清楚明确支持的观点，表达自己的看法，然后阐述理由，最后一段归纳总结，呼应或升华文章中心．‎ 亮点部分 ‎ It's well known to all that interest plays an important role in one's life．（高分句型）‎ ‎ I began to be crazy about English when I was a little girl．（高分句型）‎ A person who is interested in something will devote himself to it．（高分句型）‎ ‎【解答】It's well known to all that interest plays an important role in one's life．（高分句型）An old saying goes："Interest is the best teacher．"I quite agree with this idea．I began to be crazy about English when I was a little girl．（高分句型）I got interested in foreign cultures and customs in particular．To meet my curiosity，I read English stories everyday．It seems to be the best"meal"of a day．As a result，I make great progress in English learning．Interest is the key to success．A person who is interested in something will devote himself to it．（高分句型）Meanwhile，a big miracle will be made．‎ ‎【点评】英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧 ‎　‎ ‎16．现有一个中学生志愿者服务的网络平台，这是该平台上显示学生参与活动的流程图：‎ 请你据此写一篇短文，你的文章必须包括：‎ ‎•简要介绍参与活动的流程．‎ ‎•谈谈你对通过网络平台参与志愿者服务活动的看法．‎ ‎　If you want to take part in the activities arranged for voluteers，you can visit the network platform．Firstly，you should register here，filling in your personal information．And then，choose the name and place of the project you would like to join in．After that you can perform the voluteers'task you choose．The final work you should do is to upload your report to share what you get by doing the voluteer work．‎ Thanks to the network platform，every teenagercan participate in voluteer work more easily，which results in the popularity of the voluteer work in our society．　．‎ ‎【分析】这是一篇介绍一个中学生志愿者服务的网络平台的作文．根据题目要求可知用第二人称和一般现在时态．内容包括：一简要介绍参与活动的流程；二对通过网络平台参与志愿者服务活动的看法．‎ 高分句型：‎ ‎1．The final work you should do is to upload your report to share what you get by doing the voluteer work．句子里The final work 是主语；you should do是主语的定语从句；upload表示"上传"； what you get是宾语从句，表示"你所得到的"； by表示"通过"． ‎ 你应该做的最后的工作是上传你的报告，分享你在志愿者的工作中的所得．‎ ‎2．Thanks to the network platform，every teenager can participate in voluteer work more easily，which results in the popularity of the voluteer work in our society句子里Thanks to表示"幸亏，由于"；which引导非限制性定语从句，代指主句； results in 表示"导致，造成"．‎ 由于这个网络平台，每一个青少年能够更容易的参与志愿者的工作，这会使得志愿者的工作在我们的社会更加的流行．‎ ‎【解答】If you want to take part in the activities arranged for voluteers，you can visit the network platform．Firstly，you should register here，filling in your personal information．And then，choose the name and place of the project you would like to join in．After that you can perform the voluteers'task you choose．The final work you should do is to upload your report to share what you get by doing the voluteer work．【高分句型一】（简要介绍参与活动的流程）‎ ‎ Thanks to the network platform，every teenager can participate in voluteer work more easily，which results in the popularity of the voluteer work in our society．【高分句型二】（对通过网络平台参与志愿者服务活动的看法）‎ ‎【点评】考查图表类写作．‎ 高考作文的体裁有记叙文、应用文、说明 文和议论文，尤以应用文独占鳌头．今年 的高考书面表达处处体现了新课改对高考"体现英语教学的交际性、实用性和应用 性，提高考生的综合语言运用能力"的要 求．依然沿袭以往的风格，强调写作的目 的性和实用性．‎ ‎　‎ ‎17．学生会正在评选新一届学生会主席，假设你是该校的学生李青，有意参加竞选．写一份自荐材料，材料必须包括以下内容：‎ 简述个人信息及你所具备的竞选条件（能力、性格、爱好等）．‎ 如果当选，请你用具体事例阐述你将会为本校学生做些什么？‎ 注意：自荐材料中不得使用你所在学校和你的真实名字．‎ ‎【分析】本文是一篇提纲作文．根据所提供的材料信息，写一份自荐材料，参加学校新一届学生会主席的竞选．‎ 写作时人称以第一人称为主，时态以一般现在时和一般将来时为主．‎ 写作要点：1．简述个人信息和具备的竞选条件； 2．具体阐述将会为本校学生做些什么．‎ 重要短语：learn sth about…（了解关于某事），the extracurricular reading（课外阅读），frankly speaking （ 坦诚地说），first of all （首先），be burdened ‎ with（负重担…），form a habit of（形成做某事的习惯），take up （从事），limit sth （现在某事…），the amount of…（…的总量，总数），enjoy reading （享受阅读）．‎ ‎【高分句型】‎ ‎1．I've been in the Student Union for two years，serving as a key memberin the Publicity Department．‎ 此处是现在分词短语作伴随状语，主句为"I've been in the Student Union for two years"，主句的主语为"I"，与所给动词"serve"构成逻辑上的主动关系．‎ ‎2．In addition，I am fond of making friendly and takingnew challenges，which will facilitate my future role as a president．‎ 此处是由"which"引导的非限制性定语从句，关系代词"which"在从句中作主语，指代前面整个主句的内容．‎ ‎3．If given this position，I will do my utmost．‎ 此处是条件状语从句中的省略，可以理解为"If I am given this position"，主句为"I will do my utmost"．‎ ‎【解答】Dear Sir/Madam，‎ ‎ Iam a student named Li Qing from Grade 3 Class 1，writing this letter to campaign for the president of theStudent Union．【高分句型】（开头﹣引出话题）‎ ‎ From my point of view，I am the right oneyou want．I've been in the Student Union for two years，serving as a key memberin the Publicity Department．【高分句型】Moreover，I amoutgoing and capable of having effective talks with others．When in charge ofthe Publicity Department，I always helped the former president to organizelarge﹣scale activities．In addition，I am fond of making friendly and takingnew challenges，which will facilitate my future role as a president．【高分句型】（简述个人信息和具备的竞选条件）‎ ‎ If given this position，I will do myutmost．【高分句型】On one hand，I will hold moreinteresting and meaningful activities，such as culture festivals，singing competitions，debates and so forth，so as to enrich campus life．On the other hand，what Iwill do is to call for students to protect our campus environment，for I ‎ firmlybelieve that a pleasant environment is of vital importance to every student andteacher．【高分句型】（具体阐述将会为本校学生做些什么）‎ ‎ I willappreciate your kindness if you choose me as the new president．And your promptreply is warmly welcomed．【高分句型】（结尾）‎ ‎ Best regards ‎ Li Qing ‎【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型．‎ ‎　‎ ‎18．Directions：Write an English composition in 120﹣150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese．‎ 下面两幅图反映的是部分城乡孩子所面临的窘境．请就此图谈谈你的想法，你的文章应包括：‎ ‎●具体描述两幅图；‎ ‎●简要分析造成这两种现象的原因；‎ ‎●提出解决问题的建议．‎ ‎（注：请勿出现真实姓名和学校）‎ ‎【分析】高分句型一：‎ What he wishes is that he didn't go to school any more．他希望再不去学校上学．‎ 高分句型二：‎ What they face is the endless homework，which puts so much pressure on them that some students don't want to continue their studies．他们所面对的是无尽的作业，那些给他们带去了很大的压力以至于有些学生不想再继续他们的学业．‎ 句型一 ①What he wishes 该句是一个由what引导的主语从句，what在从句中充当宾语 ‎ ‎②that he didn't go to school any more 该句是一个由that引导的表语从句，that在句中只作引导词，不作句中成分 句型二 ①What they face is the endless homework 该句是一个由what引导的主语从句，what在从句中充当宾语 ‎②which puts so much pressure on them…该句是一个由which引导的非限制性定语从句，which在从句中作主语，替代先行词pressure ‎【解答】The two pictures show some problems in the present education system in China．A student is on his way home from school，a heavy bad of books on his ‎ back．What he wishes is that he didn't go to school any more．（高分句型一）In the second picture，a peasant boy，carrying a heavy bundle of rice straw，is out of breath under the great pressure．He hopes to attend school．‎ ‎ The children in cities can enjoy bright classroom and adequate facilities．What they face is the endless homework，which puts so much pressure on them that some students don't want to continue their studies．（高分句型二）However，in the countryside，especiall in some western parts，some children are forced to drop out because their parents cann't afford the tution．（分析原因）‎ ‎ As far as I am concerned，the students in the city should cherish the chance，trying their best to study．what's more，the government should take measures to ganrantee the study of the students in the countryside．In that way，all the children can receive equal education．（提出办法）‎ ‎【点评】本文是图画类写作，考生在写作前应仔细观察所给图画，再运用准确的、合适的语言结合实际将图片内容描述清楚．写作过程中切忌偏离主题，尽量做到图文搭配 ‎　‎ ‎19．Directions：Write an English composition in 120﹣150words according to the instructions．‎ 你是李华，为解决你所在的学校公益社团（public welfare society）的资金短缺问题，请给全校学生写一封募捐信，募集5000元善款．信中必须包括：‎ ‎1．向全校的捐款号召．‎ ‎2．你发起这一活动的理由．‎ ‎3．你准备怎样使用善款的计划．‎ ‎（文中不得出现考生姓名，学校等任何真实信息）‎ ‎【分析】本文是一篇提纲作文．根据所提供的材料信息，写一封募捐信，募集5000元善款．写作要点包括：1．向全校的捐款号召； 2．你发起这一活动的理由；3．你准备怎样使用善款的计划．‎ 写作时时态以一般现在时和一般将来时为主，人称以第一和第三人称为主．‎ 重要短语：in total （总计，总共），be faced with （面临），be short of ‎ （缺乏，短缺），lead to （导致…），be in need （需要），appeal to sb to do sth （呼吁某人做某事），raise money （筹集资金），have no access to（没有接近/进入…的机会），due to （由于），in addition （除…之外），cope with （处理…），spare no efforts （不遗余力），in advance（提前），look forward to（期望…）．‎ ‎【高分句型】‎ ‎1．①Faced with great difficulties currently，we are short of financial funds ②which directly lead to the inactiveness of the society．‎ ‎①这里是过去分词faced作状语，主句为we are short of financial funds ②which directly lead to the inactiveness of the society，主句的主语为we与所给的动词face存在逻辑上的被动关系，某人面临"be faced with sth"．‎ ‎②这里是由which引导的定语从句，which在定语从句中作主语，先行词是 financial funds．‎ ‎2．The money ①we raise here will mostly go to the remote mountainous areas ②to fund 3 children ③who have no access to school due to poverty．‎ ‎①这里是定语从句，先行词是the money，定语从句中主语为we，谓语动词为raise，缺少宾语，从句中省略了关系代词that/which．‎ ‎②这里是动词不定式作目的状语．‎ ‎③这里是who引导的定语从句，who在定语从句作主语，先行词是children．‎ ‎【解答】Dear students，‎ I'm writing to you for your donation to our public welfare society﹣﹣5，000 yuan intotal．‎ ‎ Faced with great difficulties currently，we are short of financial funds whichdirectly lead to the inactiveness of the society．【高分句型】Without the money，we can do nothing but imagine in our mind the help to thosewho are in need．Without the money，we can't be the one to give a helpful handto those who are in need．（发起这一活动的理由）So I'm here to appeal to all of you to get us out of the financialembarrassment．（向全校的捐款号召）‎ ‎ The money we raise here will mostly go to the remote mountainous areas to fund3 children who have no access to school due to poverty．【高分句型】We'llpay all the fees for the 3 children and get them all the study necessities suchas the text books and stationery．In addition，we will spare some cash to the 3children's family to help them cope with some financial barriers．（准备怎样使用善款）‎ ‎ We have the faith that we should spare no efforts to help the disadvantaged．【高分句型】Only with your help can we perform our plan．Thanks in advance and we are lookingforward to your help．（结尾）‎ Sincerelyyours，‎ Li Hua ‎【点评】写好提纲式作文的关键是认真审题和分析所给的提纲，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当．语言力求准确、简洁．根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料．同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性．最后必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等．‎ ‎　‎ ‎20．下面两幅图反映的是部分城乡孩子所面临的窘境．请就此图谈谈你的想法，你的文章应包括：‎ 具体描述两幅图；‎ 简要分析造成这两种现象的原因；‎ 提出解决问题的建议．‎ ‎（注：请勿出现真实姓名和学校）‎ ‎【分析】高分句型一：‎ What he wishes is that he didn't go to school any more．他希望再不去学校上学．‎ 高分句型二：‎ What they face is the endless homework，which puts so much pressure on them that some students don't want to continue their studies．他们所面对的是无尽的作业，那些给他们带去了很大的压力以至于有些学生不想再继续他们的学业．‎ 句型一 ①What he wishes 该句是一个由what引导的主语从句，what在从句中充当宾语 ‎ ‎②that he didn't go to school any more 该句是一个由that引导的表语从句，that在句中只作引导词，不作句中成分 句型二 ①What they face is the endless homework 该句是一个由what引导的主语从句，what在从句中充当宾语 ‎②which puts so much pressure on them…该句是一个由which引导的非限制性定语从句，which在从句中作主语，替代先行词pressure ‎【解答】The two pictures show some problems in the present education system in China．A student is on his way home from school，a heavy bad of books on his back．What he wishes is that he didn't go to school any more．（高分句型一）In the ‎ second picture，a peasant boy，carrying a heavy bundle of rice straw，is out of breath under the great pressure．He hopes to attend school．‎ ‎ The children in cities can enjoy bright classroom and adequate facilities．What they face is the endless homework，which puts so much pressure on them that some students don't want to continue their studies．（高分句型二）However，in the countryside，especiall in some western parts，some children are forced to drop out because their parents cann't afford the tution．（分析原因）‎ ‎ As far as I am concerned，the students in the city should cherish the chance，trying their best to study．what's more，the government should take measures to ganrantee the study of the students in the countryside．In that way，all the children can receive equal education．（提出办法）‎ ‎【点评】本文是图画类写作，考生在写作前应仔细观察所给图画，再运用准确的、合适的语言结合实际将图片内容描述清楚．写作过程中切忌偏离主题，尽量做到图文搭配．‎ ‎　‎