2016天津中考英语作文全攻略

2016天津中考英语作文全攻略

天津中考英语作文全攻略 近年来天津卷的书面表达，主要考查考生以下几种能力：观察能力、思维能力、运用能力以及写作能力。‎ ‎　　书面表达题是中考题型中考查学生综合语言输出能力的一个重要形式，学生的书面表达质量高与低，更多地取决于日常教学中学生语言知识的建构和语料积累。只有语料积累到一定的高度，才能产生相对完美的语言输出；同时也受书面表达题题目内容的限制，好的书面表达题取材应该源于学生的实际生活经历、贴近学生的实际生活、使学生有话可说、有内容要表达。学生丰富的语言积累与可表达的亲身经历为高质量的输出奠定了坚实的基础。2012年的书面表达是通过写感受的方式，描写班上两名同学的对比表现，最终写出自己的观点。写作的话题均来自学生的生活实际，学生审题的时候感觉轻松、亲切，可有效减轻学生考试时的心理焦虑。本题目立意新颖，贴近生活、符合课标，学生有话可写。学生在写文章时除写出所给信息，应尽量使用一些好的句式和语法现象，如：I don't think…；spend…in doing…；Although…；Because…；So…；too…to do…；同时，学生在写文章时会有些词汇的障碍，如：请教；表现良好；赛前腿受伤……。并且学生会遇到过去式的最大障碍。‎ ‎　　通过试卷推测，不少考生对文章结构、语言的整体把握、语言的准确性、连贯性方面还有待提高，是今后教师教学中的重点和难点。‎ 书面表达是天津中考英语每年的必考项，虽然只有15分的分值，但对于不同层次的学生而言，这15分是最能拉开差距的一项。纵览天津市近三年中考，从08年“庆祝母亲节”，到09年的“读好书，促成长”，再到10年的“为有烦恼的朋友写回信”，似乎每一年的考题都在尽可能的贴近学生的日常学习和生活。近三年的中考书面表达，都是以表格的形式给出相应的信息，要求考生通过对信息的理解和整合，写成自己的文章，这里考察考生如下能力：‎ ‎　　1.获取信息的能力。对于同一个表格，不同的孩子能够解读出的内容不尽相同，可放到考试中，每一个解读出的信息都是相应的给分点，因此读题审题很重要。大到整个题目意义，小到每一个细节，都是给分点，因此信息的获取一定要全面。‎ ‎　　2.整合信息的能力。获取了各种知识点后，考生是否能够将这些信息加以自己的理解，合理的整合到一起，是决定这篇作文成绩的关键因素。整合信息的过程中要注意：按照一定的顺序进行整理。例如08年的“庆祝母亲节”，需要考生按照事件发展的顺序，从时间、地点、人物，到事情的详细经过和结果，如果反其道而行之，一定是不可以的。再如09年的“读好书、促成长”，要按照活动的原因、目的、意义、经过、结果、自身感受的顺序行文，如果顺序颠倒，会显得很别扭。‎ ‎　　3.表达信息的能力。其实说白了，这就是要求考生按照符合与法规定的句子，把这些整合好的信息完整无误的表达出来，句子的结构是否齐全，同一个句子的表达是否可以借助复合句，文章的开头结尾是否呼应、是否点题等，都是决定这篇文章最后分数档的关键因素。想想看，如果在开头处没有直入主题，并且写了个有语法错误的句子，再加上书写不是很清楚，这篇作文的成绩大家就可想而知了。‎ ‎　　下面，我们逐一来看看近三年的考题以及范文，注意红体字部分的表达方式，在考试中，这些都是“闪光点”，是可以让我们获得高分的地方。‎ ‎　　先来看08年的考题 天津中考08年英语作文 ‎　　2008年中考作文及范文 书面表达（本大题共15分）‎ 假如你叫李华，5月11日母亲节那天 你为母亲做了很多有意义的事情。请你根据表格中所给信息，用英语写一篇日记。‎ 上午 你用零花钱给母亲买了些鲜花，放在花瓶内 下午 你去市场买菜，为全家人做了一顿简单可口的饭菜 完饭后 你送给母亲自己制作的贺卡，并祝她节日快乐；告诉母亲要多注意自己的健康，不要过度劳累；你还保证今后会帮助她做一些家务劳动；母亲感动得留下了眼泪 注意：1. 词数80—100 个左右 ‎ 2. 日记的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。‎ ‎ 3. 日记必须包括所有内容要点，但不要逐句翻译，可以假如适当细节和适当发挥，使其通顺、连贯。‎ 参考词汇：pocket money 零花钱 ‎ vase 花瓶 ‎ overwork 过度劳累 ‎ be moved to tears 感动得流泪 ‎11th May Sunday ‎ ‎ Today is Mother’s Day. I love mother so much that I’ve done many things for her. ‎ ‎ In the morning, I bought ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ Today is a special day, warm and meaningful. ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎11th May Sunday Rainy Today is Mother’s Day. I love Mother so much that I’ve done many things for her. ‎ In the morning I bought many flowers with pocket money and put them in the vase. In the afternoon I went to the market to buy vegetables and cooked a simple but delicious dinner for my family. After supper, I gave Mother the card that I made myself and said “Happy Mother’s Day” to her. Then I told her to pay more attention to her health and not to overwork. I also promised to help her do some housework from today on. Hearing the words, Mother was moved to tears. ‎ Today is a special day, warm and meaningful.‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎2009年天津中考英语作及范文 ‎ ‎ 假设你校即将开展“读好书，促成长”的活动。请你根据这次活 ‎ 动的主题，向全校同学发出倡议。请根据表格中所给信息，用英 ‎ 语写一篇倡议书。‎ 读书的意义 获取知识，增长见识，使人聪明，使人快乐，有助于学习，有助于成长 目前的状况 听音乐，看电视，上网等占去了学生大部分的读书时间 发出倡议 多读书，读好书 ‎ ‎ 注意：1. 词数：80~100个。‎ ‎ 2. 倡议书的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。‎ ‎ 3. 倡议书须包括所有内容要点，行文连贯，表达清楚，书写规范。‎ 参考词汇：gain knowledge 获取知识 ‎ open the mind 增长见识 My dear friends, ‎ Reading is very important in our life. __________________________________________ ‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________ ‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________ ‎ ‎_________________________________________ Let’s start reading now!‎ My dear friends, ‎ Reading is very important in our life. Reading has many advantages. Firstly, we can gain knowledge through reading. Secondly ,it can not only open our minds but also make us cleverer and happier. What’ more, We can study better and better if we read more books. Reading also helps us grow as a person. ‎ ‎（However, many activities such as listening to music, watching TV and going online take up much of our reading time. /It take up much reading time to listen to music,watch TV and go online.）We spend much time listening to music, watching TV and going online instead of reading books. What a pity! ( So here, I would like to suggest that everyone should read more books and read good books. / I would like to suggest everyone to read more books and read good books. / I would like to suggest reading more books and read good books. )The more good books we read, the smarter we are. Let’s start reading now!‎ ‎ ‎ 书面表达 (本大题共15分)‎ 假设你校即将开展“读好书，促成长”的活动。请你根据这次活 ‎ 动的主题，向全校同学发出倡议。请根据表格中所给信息，用英 ‎ 语写一篇倡议书。‎ 读书的意义 获取知识，增长见识，使人聪明，使人快乐，有助于学习，有助于成长 目前的状况 听音乐，看电视，上网等占去了学生大部分的读书时间 发出倡议 多读书，读好书 ‎ ‎ 注意：1. 词数：80~100个。‎ ‎ 2. 倡议书的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。‎ ‎ 3. 倡议书须包括所有内容要点，行文连贯，表达清楚，书写规范。‎ 参考词汇：gain knowledge 获取知识 ‎ open the mind 增长见识 My dear friends, ‎ Reading is very important in our life. __________________________________________ ‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________ ‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎2010‎ 假设你是某学生杂志社的编辑Diara，收到了读者Steve的一封来信，信中倾诉了他目前的烦恼。请根据提示内容，给Steve写一封回信。提示： ‎ 与人交流 课上参与小组讨论，表达自己的想法；课间和同学交谈 表达善意 主动问候同学；对同学友好；帮助同学 参加活动 积极参加班级活动（如：运动会、歌咏比赛等）‎ 参考词汇：小组讨论 group work 表达 express 要求：1. 词数：80 ~ 100个。‎ ‎ 2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。‎ ‎ 3. 要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当添加 ‎ 范文：‎ ‎ Dear Steve,‎ ‎ I’ve learned about your problems. I think you should be active in group work in class and be brave enough to express your ideas. Try to talk with your classmates at break. If you want to get on well with your classmates, don’t forget to say hello when you meet them. Being friendly and helpful is also very important. You need to take part in all kinds of class activities, such as sports meetings, football games and singing competitions. I’m sure you will soon be among friends.‎ ‎ Best wishes ‎ Diara ‎　　【训练方法】‎ ‎1.记。认真系统复习和背诵基础知识和优美的句子、句型。要使自己具有较强的写作能力，首先应该熟读和背诵一些句型和短文。许多同学写出来的语言根本不符合英语的语言习惯，相当一部分人有对照中文逐字翻译的不良习惯，不去理会中英文的差异。大量的背诵和阅读是提高写作能力的有效办法，同学们若有大量的现成语言积累在脑海里，自己写起文段来，就可以做到脱口而出，或是模仿、套用，甚至发挥。‎ ‎　　2.练。每练一篇书面表达题，都要真正学到一点东西，不可贪多而边学边忘。平时可以采用循序渐进、灵活多样的练习方式。从根据提示词写单句开始，到写单句，然后到写几句话，最后到写流利的文段。尽量尝试多种形式的写作，如短信、说明、通知、便条、明信片、看图写作、根据表格或记录写短文等。‎ ‎3.写。要进行实战写作。要求自己在15分钟内写出80个词的短文，并且质量高、内容全、形式正确。这样形成习惯，考试时就能得心应手。‎ ‎2011年 九、书面表达（本大题共15分）‎ 假如你是某中学的一名学生。6月3日，是星期五，在放学回家的公交车上，你所经历的一件事让你印象深刻。请你根据以下要点用英语写一篇日记。‎ 要点：‎ ‎1. 一位老爷爷和十来岁的孙子上了车，老人拿着书包和小提琴；‎ ‎2. 你给老人让座，老人的孙子却坐了下来，老人只得站在旁边；‎ ‎3. 孩子大声喊着向老人要水喝，并将空水瓶扔到车上；‎ ‎4. 你认为孩子应该尊敬、照顾老人，保持环境卫生。‎ 参考词汇：孙子grandson 空水瓶empty bottle 保持……干净keep…clean 要求：1. 词数：80~100个。‎ ‎2. 日记开头已给出，不计入总词数。‎ ‎3. 要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。‎ June 3, Friday Fine On my way home on the bus, I saw ‎ June 3, Friday Fine ‎ On my way home on the bus, I saw an old man get on the bus with his grandson who was about ten years old. The old man was carrying the boy’s bag and violin. So I decided to offer my seat to the old man, but to my surprise, the boy took the seat instead of his grandpa, leaving his grandpa standing by.‎ ‎ After a while, the boy shouted to his grandpa to ask for water. What surprised me more is that he dropped the empty bottle in the coach after drinking it.‎ ‎ His behavior made me angry. I think the boy should respect and take care of the old man. And it’s a duty for everybody to keep the environment clean.‎ ‎ ‎ ‎2012年天津市中考英语满分作文 天津市中考英语作文题目:‎ ‎ 假如你有两位同学——芳芳和明明,参加了上个星期二学校组织的英语演讲比赛,他们的不同表现使你深有感触.请你根据下列表格中的内容提示写一篇英文短文.‎ 芳芳 明明 我 1. 认为自己英语好,不需要努力;花费很多时间挑选比赛用的漂亮衣服.‎ 2. 因准备不足,太紧张,而 as没有完成演讲.‎ 1. 努力学习,向别人请教;赛前两天腿受伤,但不放弃.‎ 2. 在比赛中表现良好.‎ 应该向明明学习……‎ 参考词汇:英语演讲比赛 English Speech Contest 注意：1.词数：80——100个；because she didn’t prepare enough ‎2.短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；‎ 3. 要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。‎ Last Tuesday Fangfang and Mingming entered the English Speech Contest in our school. What they did made me think deeply.‎ Before the contest, Fangfang thought ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ Last Tuesday Fangfang and Mingming entered the English Speech Contest in our school. What they did made me think deeply.‎ Before the contest, Fangfang thought that her English was very good and she didn’t need to work hard(needn’t work hard). So she spent a lot of time selecting beautiful clothes for attending the English Speech Contest. Meanwhile, Mingming studied hard and went to others for advice when meeting problems. Although his legs were hurt two days before the contest, he didn’t give up.‎ During the contest, because she was nervous and didn’t prepare well, Fangfang didn’t finish the speech. Mingming did well.‎ No pains, no gains. His hard work made a good result. We should learn from Mingming.‎ ‎ ‎ ‎2013年 假定上周六晚上，你们全家在一家饭店就餐。请你根据以下要点提示，用英语写一篇短文，描述事情发生的经过，并适当加以评论。‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ 要点提示：‎ ‎ (1)邻桌年轻人大声说笑、吸烟。‎ ‎ (2)你请他们不要那样做。‎ ‎ (3)他们不听，反而嘲笑你。‎ ‎ (4)你认为：○1他们在公共场所那样做是不对的。‎ ‎ ○2年轻人是天津的未来，应该……‎ ‎ 参考词汇：嘲笑 laugh at ‎ 要求：‎ ‎ (1)词数：80~100个。‎ ‎ (2)短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。‎ ‎ (3)要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。‎ ‎ Last Saturday evening，all my family had dinner in a restaurant________‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ Last Saturday evening, all my family had dinner in a restaurant. We were enjoying ourselves when something disturbing happened. A group of young people were sitting at the table nearby. While they were eating their food, they talked loudly and smoked cigarettes, making the restaurant full of noise and smoke. I tried to stop them doing so, but they refused to listen to me. Instead, they said it was none of my business and laughed at me. In fact, what they did upset me deeply, but I was proud of what I did. In my opinion, one should keep quite and not affect others ‎ when in public. It’s bad behavior to do that in the restaurant. What’s more, we should always watch our manners and pay attention to public morality, as young people are the future of Tianjin.‎ ‎ ‎ 假如你是某中学的一名学生。6月3日，是星期五，在放学回家的公交车上，你所经历的一件事让你印象深刻。请你根据以下要点用英语写一篇日记。‎ 要点：‎ ‎1. 一位老爷爷和十来岁的孙子上了车，老人拿着书包和小提琴；‎ ‎2. 你给老人让座，老人的孙子却坐了下来，老人只得站在旁边；‎ ‎3. 孩子大声喊着向老人要水喝，并将空水瓶扔到车上；‎ ‎4. 你认为孩子应该尊敬、照顾老人，保持环境卫生。‎ 参考词汇：孙子grandson 空水瓶empty bottle 保持……干净keep…clean 1. 要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ On my way home on the bus, I saw an old man get on with his grandson of about ten. He was carrying ‎ the boy's schoolbag and violin. I gave my seat to the old man at once. However, the boy sat down first. The old man had to stand nearby. After a while, the boy shouted to his grandpa for water and then dropped the empty bottle on the bus. ‎ ‎ When I saw this, I got very angry. I think the boy should not only respect and take care of the old man ‎ but also keep the environment clean.‎